'A DREAM COME TRUE' Sandhir ff *PART 16 UPDATED* #1

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VeiledWords

@VeiledWords

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Tanya

@TashaForever

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Posted: 12 years ago

yay!! Im d first to comment. Arpita dii!! This is so awesome. Amazing plot. Love the way you have written. And I cnnot express my gratitude to you, in words. I ve been bored to hell and ur story thankfully has reduced my boredom. Pls continue.:)

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow wow wow

i m so happy that u started new story...awesome na

but i think so this one is after college one...

but seriously thoda emotional type hai..

poor randhir...

lekin sanyu she is such sweetheart...so cute...

hey dear why dont u give a face to her...

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Piyu

@100littledevils

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Appy! Iam glad u r back with another story! welcome back! 🤗

Already 1st part on FB! Its too good! Damn reading the latest part why do i feel sanyukta is no more 😭!! Felt bad for randhir. And OMG Shanaya is soo cute man! 😳 Excited for flasblask parts! Your stories are always amazing to read! ⭐️

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hema

@froots93

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing yaar!!!!!!

diff from other ff's!!!!u came up with a new concept😊 that's cool😃

cmg to the story the convo between randhir and his daughter that was so cute😳😃

what happened to sanyu???😕

she is dead or wat???😕

update next asap n thanks for the pm

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sakshi

@LostInFantasy

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

it was just awesome...

update nxt part soon... :)

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rabia297

@rabia297

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

yipeee em really happy dat uh r back wid a new ff rockingg grl...it wass fab...osmmm superbbb
things to b mention...

the revelation..that sanyu was actually his 6 year daughter...superblyy done

fo a moment i concluded sanyukta is dead...bt i think not...i dunno if em right..bt when.randhir said" "Because some people can't even love
their own children. How can I trust
others?"...i thought she might hav left them...fo some reasons...
bt em getting confused olso when he said i fullfilled ur dream today...i dunno whether she is dead or left them...ur nxt part wud surely clear my doubts...

this part had somehow left mee emotional...
updt nxt part soon...thnx fo pm:)
kudos to ur new ff...keep rockingg gal..!!

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Arpitaa, if you were aiming to make your readers feel hurt by reading your story, then you have most definitely succeeded with me. I can feel my heart grow weaker by the moment. Why is Sanyukta not around? :'(

You've begun you're story incredibly and I hope this one receives as much love as Love In The Air because you deserve it and more! Do update soon and thank you for the pm :D

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ash2611

@ash2611

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

Beautifuly written! Fab concpt! I just loved the way u portrayed each relationship..
Randhir sanyukta, Randhir shanaya, randhir n his mom... brilliant!
Shanaya is sooo cute! Wheres sanyukta? Update sooon!!! Waiting eagerly!!! 😊