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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Iptisha! I really hope I'm the first one to comment! :D

First off, the prologue seems very interesting! The way you made me relive their memories was amazing! Do update jaldi! :D

Secondly, thank you SO very much for accepting and loving my story in such a short span of time. I think I am as old in IF as you are! The words you said about me were very flattering and I am immensely thankful! It means a lot to me that you mentioned my name with such loved and incredible people! This forum, especially the Sadda Haq portal, is one of a kind and I am grateful to be here. Thank you so much again! Lots of love!

Waiting eagerly for your update!

PS. The username has now changed from ArushiKotecha to PrussianBlue B-) *-*

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TheAphrodite

@TheAphrodite

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

See That's what I mean , you write so well . I would love to read your characters and story , such an interesting prologue . Amazing .

Yes as you said we do think alike in a lot of aspects , thank you for the really generous comment it means a lot to me . Like would be an understatement . You literally made my day for another week :)

Pm me on the update , please I'd love to read it .

Honestly , ALL the people you've mentioned make this forum so addicting and interesting .

Iptisha , Aami tomake Khoob Bhalo Bhashi . ( O actually did try learning Bengali but that didn't quite work out )

Really nice prologue * do update soon *
And your posts , literally embody what I think and feel about Randhir -Sanyukta :D

- Nidhi :)

Edited by Sarunforeva - 12 years ago

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yatup

@yatup

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

Don't know why but i'm crying. The prologue, something very interesting is going to happen, Mr. Shinchan. Iptisha - always try to bring positivity to the forum with your post. I wish you bring positivity with your topics in the future too. New name for you, Ms. Optimist. Help needed - everybody is bashing Sanyukta's character. Please post something with positivity.

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sarunforeva
See That's what I mean , you write so well . I would love to read your characters and story , such an interesting prologue . Amazing .

Yes as you said we do think alike in a lot of aspects , thank you for the really generous comment it means a lot to me . Likes lot would be an understatement . You literally made my day for another week :)

Pm me on the update , please I'd live to read it .

Honestly , ALL the people you've mentioned make this forum so addicting and interesting .

Iptisha , Aami tomake Khoob Bhalo Bhashi . ( O actually did try learning Bengali but that didn't quite work out )

Really nice prologue * do update soon *

- Nidhi :)

Amio Tomae bhalo bashi!

It did work out...I will update soon...

Thanks a lot! Hope I will make it upro your expectations!

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

RES...
have my accounts paper on monday voards wala n tom in my tuts...and here i am helplessy wantin to read... hv to go on sweety bt u made my day... damn on of the best compliments... wil reply in detail... as for now... if i write and exculusive SS or nythn would be jzz because of u...!! Although i dont take myself to be a writer!!! 🤣 🤣

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Unres!!

uhh i had written such a beautiful comment and it got erased due to some stupid irritating error!!!

gwad now i start all over agen!!!

nyways haave i told u ur simple words means damn too much to me..!! can u bee nymore sweeter?? i am glad my OS had such a deep effect on u..!! i tend to make people cry literally as well as virtually so it wont be a surprise ...emotions kinda come naturally to me..as i am DQ (Drama Queen) 🤣

u asked me is love so Pure? well i really don know... if love even exists... i havent had a bad experience but never let myself fall in love...as i dont believe in it..!! :P so my ans is no i donno think so there is pure love in the real world..thats why like every other girl i turn to the TV to watch and love lovestories...!! i too wish for a Randhir...A Damon etc etc..but i know dey don exist!!!

uhh sorry i tend to talk a lot..so apart from my boring lecture... lemme get back to ur prologue..!!
ohmygodd!! I dint know u cn write so well!! gosh i love stories with a good flow and judging my the prologue i definately gonna love it..can wait..ur writting is so refreshing and beautifully!!
U have an amazing power over ur Language...!!! i usually hate checking PMs i am more of a scraps person but something made me open urs and i am glad i did..!!!

i would love to read more soonish..i hate waiting but as almost all hv exams i guess i will wait..!! like a good girl..!!! 🤣

thats it for now..as i donno wad i had written before but write soon...!!!

lastly thanku for this dedication it was wonderful to meet such a sweet person as u..!!! writting something for all ur frnds is such an adorable thing to do..!! ur frnds sure r damn lucky i must say!!!

regards

safrena!!

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@santiagosentyou

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

RESERVED.
Will unres on Monday after my exam :)

UNRES

Before I say anything,

Didn't you become my weakness, be it seldom but yes you were my weakness along with my strength. - This sentence simply stole my heart <3 It simply stood out from the rest and it is what defines these two. They simply can't ignore each other. They are each other's strengths when the compete and each other's weakness when they compete too. I love how you've put it in <3

And Shinchan <33 Oh how I love him <3

Sanyu's point of view is perfect and it is something which she WOULD say had there ever been a situation like this. That shows your understanding of the character :D

In the 'I miss' series, I really like how you've developed the whole enemies to friends thing.

Subtle hi sahi, you haven't mentioned love at all ;)

It makes me intrigued 😆

But oh well, I hope you're satisfied! :)

And now, go and unres fast xD

Edited by ARandKJFan - 12 years ago

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nampi
Don't know why but i'm crying. The prologue, something very interesting is going to happen, Mr. Shinchan. Iptisha - always try to bring positivity to the forum with your post. I wish you bring positivity with your topics in the future too. New name for you, Ms. Optimist. Help needed - everybody is bashing Sanyukta's character. Please post something with positivity.

Nako... Relax darling! Take a deep breath in and then out!

Now you think about the past few episodes... What are the cvs trying to do, showing negative randhir positive Sanyu and then vice versa... Just like magnets... Opposites attracting each other!!

And yes... Mr. Shinchan is the story! Hope you like it!

Cvs plan is to get ppl react and bash characters and then make the fans guilty of their impulsive conclusions...

I just hope they show randhir more coz Sanyu parth together are too dramatic... And path randhir is dynamic... And about sandhir I won't say anything at this time... It's all dilemma!

Btw why are you crying?...was the prologue that bad?

Edited by Iptisha - 12 years ago

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rabia297

@rabia297

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

superb ...osm plottinggg...
eager to read ahead...continue asap:)

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LoveYourself

@LoveYourself

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

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Amazing start. You have made me curious. Please continue soon. I want to know how it all started. And, I like shinchan. 😆 I can't like your prologue, coz as I said before, my "like" button never functions.