*Rantara story-HULCHUL* (updated part 6 @pg 41):P - Page 5

Originally posted by: Capucine

Suchita,

Sweetheart, what have u made?

Just can say than i ... Loved it! its so funny and cute

Kiret and Hina shld have blackmailed you before

It's really good

I liked the character sketch and everyting else

Please continue

Thanks for the PM

🤗❤️

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

OMG...FINALLY SUCHI started writing a story...😊
Yaaayy...I'm so happyyy 😃
The character Sketch was very impressive 😳
Finally Buntiya got promoted as being DM's husband 😆 😆 😆
Loved Rantara's chuha fight 😆
On the whole,It was a mindblowing update for me.. 👏
I'm so proud of you Suchi 👏 👏 👏
Now I can't wait to read more..
Pls do update soon.
Loads of love and wishes...Mwah 🤗

Originally posted by: hayakhan5

Suchi yeh jo bhi hai mast hai...
Hahahhhahhaah...Loved ur idea.....
buntiya naik hahaha...
ur post ka hero... daya mai ka love of life...
Satya an rukku...
great pair...
hahahahah its amazing when i read she keeps hockey stick...
sahib toh gaya...
rasika ka intro was mast...
Raghu is funny...
and antara is still antara...
Tooo goooddd...
U were amazing...
thanx for the pm...
Update soon and pm me...

Originally posted by: ifians

suchi yaar this is height man...😆

i don't know what to comment i sm laughing like hell... and rolling on my bed...🤣

okk okk let me take a breath...😆

it was just tooo goooddd👏👏👏

never read so much funny story for so long.. it actually made my day,,,⭐️

sorry for being late i was out of town...

love dm's punjabi and buntiya ji...😆

sattu and ruku too funny.,.

and raghu... uske dialouges ne to hasa hasa ke pet dard kar diya...🤣

aur ye MAN1 nd MAN2... sorry to say but they were my fav in this chapter...😆

it's a gr8 story yaar thx for sharing it with us..

sorry for being late i was outside town...😆

Originally posted by: .Muskhaan.

Oye... Abh yeh kya kar rahi hai tu... Story likh rahi hai... plz yaar... aakhir hum kab tak bardaash karenge yeh sab uh... pehle tumhara crazy posts aur abh story... ohhh god... forum wasiyon ko koi bachao...🤣

Okayyy fine... jokes apart,,,, sach kahu toh, ua update is really awesummm... Especially that character sketch... i enjoyed it yaar...

U r different leve... teri brain ko museum main rakhna chahiye... Hatzzzoff tsuchi...👏

Waiting fo ua next update...😉

Originally posted by: amfi123

loved it

antara and raghus love hate talk -loved it

continue soon

Originally posted by: Smaggy

suchi...😆 😆 😆 😆

yr tu inte bade wali nautanki nikle haa.😆

hi yedi...haan yr is baar to too much hogaya🤣

...suchi,,,i started to laugh from the title i read,

thank u so much..randomly topic bheje mein aagaya..🤣

i laughed more and more when i read character sketches,😉 😉 ..

thanks fr loving CS..it means alot to me😃..bt aisa kya likh dala apun ne...jo tu itna hasreli hai...haan🤣

and when i started to read actual update, i was not able to read properly yr..😲.i was laughing like full too pagal..😆 😆

🥳

arey babare!!!!!😲.aisa bhi hosakta hai kisi ke saath?...😆

u r super se be superrr writer..🤣...😉 😉

hayee yedi...main to marjawa gud khake🤢..inne badiaya comments de dale re...😆...sab tumlogon ne bnaya hai...😆

precap bhi assa ke mujhe weha bhi hanse aa gye...🤣

oh...usmein bhi😆...mention not yr...😃

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

@sush...u r right dear..😉

@megha..not becoz of me its becoz of ur lovely nature..😊