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oh wow this is really good, it is going to be a great story can't wait to read it please update it soon thank you

wow.. This seems to be a very intrsting.. Plz continue wid ur story.. I wanna read more abt this shlok..

nice concept cant wait to read it

Ok! Now this is very interesting. Word of confidence for you...my father-in-law is 21 older than my MIL. So just go ahead with story I don't think anybody would mind. Other than swati...please do continue...and update soon.

Awww...such a wonderful concept! really xcited to know where it heads to!

Really innovative thinking. Plz continue

Originally posted by: rbb1

oh wow this isreally good, it is goingto be agreat story can't wait to read it please update it soon thank you

Thanx a lot. Keeping my fingers crossed. Will upd. soon.

Originally posted by: avi_ashi

wow.. This seems to be a very intrsting.. Plz continue wid ur story.. I wanna read more abt this shlok..

he he.. Nd do pm,me dear.. Thanx for writing on ashlok.. Ll wait for nxt update.😳

Thanx a ton dear for loving the concept and shlokie too. Will upd. soon I was waiting to write on Ashlok finally posted today. Glad u loved it so much.

Originally posted by: banoo2012

nice concept cant wait to read it

Thanx a lot. Will upd. soon.

OMG this is entirley different concept and I love it... wait to read ur story..continoue soon