~The Shadows of a Dark Past~ Ch-4 (26/2/14) updated

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Shweta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: fffan123
Please update next part soon.

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Shweta

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Shweta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri
simply brilliant
loved it

Originally posted by: mpuhan
nice update

Can't believe I'm getting comments immediately...

I didn't even proof read it properly ... Hope there were no mistakes 😉

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Jessie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Khushi comes to invite Nani and Arnav has to be so rude!

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zafi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Awesome Story.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved it.

Looks like Khushi's and Arnav's past is entwined.

I can't wait to read more.

Thanks.😃

Edited by zafi - 11 years ago

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Shweta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: jessjazz
Khushi comes to invite Nani and Arnav has to be so rude!

It takes time for Arnav to come to his senses 😆

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ranjanatripathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

So Khushi has already touched Arnav!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Am a little inquisitive about Shyam too...
Is he an upright officer that he claims to be...that his father was not...
Getting impatient about future events!!!!!!!!!!

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Abi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

nice update!

thx for the pm...

continue soon!

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Mini17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Finally I'm here! :D

A thriller from you.The story's already taken an interesting path. I'm all set for the thrilling journey.

Loved Khushi here. So happy and full of life. You just can't not laugh with her :D

Oh shyamu is a police officer! Please please please let him be a positive character who ultimately solves the case and become best of friends with Arnav :P

Coming to the murder part, my guess is Arnav committed that murder. No, he is not a criminal but a person suffering from split personality or something. He doesn't know what he is doing. He is already taking anti-depressants so there's a chance.

The past you write in between the present is nice. I liked that very much.. :)

Waiting for the next update.