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Posted: 18 years ago
omg!!!..wat a part 😳 😳 😳 ..jai is soooo desperate (not dat i mind πŸ˜‰ )pleeez get these 2 married before smthin wrong happens πŸ˜† ....loved the part.jai is sooooooo naughty....dreamin bout him n her in a jacuzzi 😳 😳 ..hope his dream comes true soon πŸ˜‰ .want more jb romantic parts like it ..continue asap
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Posted: 18 years ago
Aww poor Rano, Bani tried to get her a lesser grade for not reading a book and watching the movie. Lol I would have so failed if it were not for movies sometimes.
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Posted: 18 years ago


Acha mugse bola gaya, i'll be arrested for arson, now wot bout u πŸ˜†
Kahin aag lage lag jaye,
kahin gagan gire gir jaye

ok the next line does not fit in.

hhhhmmmm JW sure wanted to join in, i am sumhow so sure of it, n then Bani too must hav wanted to join the jacuzzi, i am sure of that too but......
Ruk ja baby

rano n jai r so cute, n bani telling her to get less marks coz she dint read.......thank god my sis is not like that, main to kabhi paas hi nahin hoti.

Jai took her shopping, good man, but she not takin advantage of his being rich good girl. but he still goin ahead n buying her stuff, good man, but she not likin itgood girl.

ho gaya ya continue karoon πŸ˜†

and Jai finding a way to manao her, now that is smart way πŸ˜‰ mera JW very smart man.

sheena loved this update, ab next wala kab.......

Sam

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey sheena!

thanks for the PM!! 😊 i loved this update!! both jai and bani are suffering!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† (not that its a laughing matter πŸ˜† πŸ˜† )

soo cute.. they both finally said 'i love you' but then jai had to ruin it all with his speech afterwards... just live in the moment man!! duffer!

hahaha.. finally a fight!!! πŸ˜‰ rano explaining to him was soo cute!! im expecting lots more of these when they're married! πŸ˜† and now had he's found a new way to manao her πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰

great update!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow what an awesome part!!!! πŸ‘ Jai offering Bani a dip in the Jacuzzi πŸ˜ƒ haha Bani watching him as he shaves 😳 than the sponge part 😲 😍 too good! plz continue soon,




Maro πŸ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago

πŸ˜†

Originally posted by: joa123

me first πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜ƒ

-Yes sweety, you are the first!! πŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: smitra110

Loved it Sheena. Loved Bani sticking up for heraself. And the jacuzzi part was hot!! πŸ˜‰
Somali

-Somali, thanks dear, πŸ˜‰ Jacuzzi is hot tub, afterall! Sooo hoping this Bengali babu will give still competition to JW, although his dialogues seem to be a little over the top, what do you think?

Originally posted by: kinnu410

fantastic
continue soon
waiting for enxt parts

-Thanks Kinnu, how is college going buddy? Any more volunteer stuff going on?

Originally posted by: armana


Dear S,
I have to qualify as the biggest tech idiot on this forum: i never realsied that you ahd started a new thread till you sent me the link to part 20! πŸ˜‰

-Armana, don't worry about it, we are all functionally impaired in something or the other, mine is with spatial directions, I can't figure out which way is east and which way is west, thank got for the GPS gadgets that keep me on track, otherwise people were calling me a 'U-turn queen' and getting scared to sit in my car!! πŸ˜†

And thanks to the non-functioning internet connection i have (the connection is convinced i am not worth the fucntioning!) it's only today that i've managed to read from part 19 to 22.

-Thanks for reading Armana, We rewired the whole network last week in my house and I was getting so ansy about not being able to access the internet. I was desperate enough to go and ask my Srilankan neighbor to use their wireless 'IP' address....πŸ˜• Despo personified!! Of course, I gave the excuse of work related stuff..πŸ˜†


In a way it was awesome: like a glutton i finished one part and went on to the next without having to wait!

Oh, boy, i have missed a alot.
Bani in JW's bed?
....ummmm......aawww...... 😳
and what a lovely way to wake up! 😳 😳
But this JW: don't love me so you don't get disappointed? He richly deserves the fall he is heading for, i can't wait to watch it!

-Yeah, he does deserve a big fall, but there are so many JW supporters, they will come to his aid (no doubt) when he does take the fall..πŸ˜‰


And i love the way Bani sticks to her guns and her independence: you go girl!
-Yes, no one in today's age will like being told what to wear, what to do and how to live and which career to choose. I think there will be some fireworks soon, if not soon enough!

For the record i really like your Rano: it is the Rano we were promised in the first 6 months of ks, who then somehow got lost in all the scheming bloopers by the creatives. Good to have her here.

-She does play an important role in this FF, I do hope I don't screw up on the story line too much...but she is an integral part here.
And i love this R R Graves poem: been long a favourite of mine, sighed happily when i read it.

-I love reading and writing poetry, I was reading the Rubaiyat by O.K the other day, and some one borrowed it and now I don't know who did and I am mad that I let them take my book! I dislike it when people borrow books and don't return them...
Thanks sweetie, I love the ff!
Keep it up:
πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Love

-Thanks Armana, glad you like the FF
Armana
p.s. i think you are doing a wonderful job in depicting the slow, langorous unfurling of Bani's sexuality.

-PS: I think this FF is going a little overboard with the hotness factor and I had to rewrite it twice to take out stuff! πŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: swatinarang

sheena, dear really a great part and when ur jerk JW is gonna realize that he is in love with bani from head to toes.

dear part was really hot hotty, i think both billis and sam's brains are working overtime now a days working on hot hotty steamy parts. hope u r well after writing such a great part as now i am going out for fresh air.

please continue soon, cannot wait to know how he will mannonify her.

swati

-Swati dearest, my Sherni...yes, this billi is learning from S.S.T (Vegetable, Love and Monument!! LOL, figure that one out)

Swati you are the only one I want to really learn from, especially how to punish Pia madam!! Yaar, when are you updating your FF? What's Sujal upto these days, I heard somewhere Jr. RK is out of a job!!

Originally posted by: Nancy_89

Look who is here 😳 😳 😳 Sheena di I'm really sorry for not commenting for the past 2/3 parts.
Hope you understand (I'm already apologising for next week, Thursday, I'm going to have one important exam so might comment only after that, sorry).
Now back to your ff...

-Nancy dearest, don't worry too much, school, work, family, friends come first, never apologise for it! I am glad you like the FF enough to come and comment on it when you have time, I am blessed!

Wow what a conversation to have while you are on the airport😳 What was going on Jai's mind. Do men only think about that? Disgusting πŸ˜†...I think I should give some lessons to Jai on how to talk with your honewali biwi ☺️ ☺️

-Yeah, some men do have a one track mind! well, it's not so disgusting when you ara in love with the person who is doing the flirting...πŸ˜‰


Yeh kya? Rano pehle badla leti hai baad mein Ranveer ka khaial rakhti hai πŸ˜• πŸ˜† That was sweet of her 😊

-She better take care of him, she did put him in that state, poor guy!
What a nice way to say good morning and that too when she is in your his bed 😳

-Bani is too daring na?
What a dream that Jai had πŸ˜• πŸ˜† Bechari Bani sunkar toh blush karke margaiye πŸ˜† Pehle sharmati hai aur baad mein flirting mood mein hai 😳

-Woh toh hai, bahut confused!πŸ˜•
Jai you shouldn't control your honewali biwi, mujse kuch sikho 😳 πŸ˜† Koi baat nahin, Jai agar Bani kuch nahin chahti toh mein rakh leti hoon, I won't mind it πŸ˜‰

-Let's see how Nancy will deal with her JW,
Loved the way you write, all the details, the emotions and thanks to you I had a great time in Scotland, the Edinburgh Castle, Holly Rood Palace, Orkney Islands... Everything πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

-Thanks Nancy, glad you liked Scotland!

Originally posted by: rooj-i

Billi,
great part!!!
the kind of chicken you presented Jai with is just absolutely wonderful!!!

-Hey Rooj! How are you sweety? LOL, thanks hon!
I can't believe he is making an ass for himself...but the way he is behaving he deserves it!

-They are a pair, aren't they?
btw love the jacuzzi scene...Bani is truly a torture! πŸ˜†
anyways please continue soon
rooj

-She truly is a torture, πŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: bkeero

Hey Sheena.

I am so glad you updated and before you say anything I will definately make a post on Monday. πŸ˜†

-How did you know I was going to ask you that!! πŸ˜† Glad you answered my question!


I can only imagine how each one of them felt with her in the bed and him really wanting to get in. 😳 But its a good thing they had some control before things got out of hand. I was surprised to hear her say "I Love You." and equally surprised that he said it back. I am sure in the future one day, there will be time when he will say it and really deep down feel and mean it.

-LOL, yeah are barely in control, they seem to go out in flames whenever they are together. I think in her case, it was genuine, she said in her sleep, he on the other hand loves her but it is a different kind of love. I hope he does feel that deep down and mean it some day!


If the bed wasn't enough torture for him to watch her and now she has to look at him in the tub and plus sponge in down. Now that is torture both ways for two adults. 😳 Our little Bani is devil torturing the lion like that. lol. She escaped at the right time before he had her join in.

-LOL, is that some one speaking with experience, OK ! forget I asked! 😳 Remember, if he is the lion, she is the tigress! right now, a little too young and too shy, but who knows what will happen in the future!
So glad he took her shopping. I could understand where she is coming from and she is making a stand for herself but there is nothing wrong with him buying her gifts especially with the wedding coming up soon. He is a rich guy and she always knew that.

-Unfortunately, she just doesn't know how to accept gifts...
Great update. I loved it. Continue again when you have time.
Lots of Love

-Keero, thanks sweety!

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Hi Sheena! πŸ˜†
Finally you updated! πŸ˜ƒ

-yaar, I have to say, I am sorry about the update, the last two days, but as I always said, family comes first!! πŸ˜ƒ


It's fabulous and as usual made my morning πŸ˜‰
Liked your Bani and hoping that JW will realize his real love for her very soon πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜†

-Thanks honey, I do hope JW realizes he is in so much love with her very soon.
Jaccuzi part was kind of steamyπŸ˜‰

-Haila, that's what Jacuzzis and saunas are for! Heat and steam! πŸ˜†
Waiting for Sunday or should I say Monday morning that is April 23rd right? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜•

-If nothing urgent comes up the next day and a half! Yes, that's the plan!
Have a nice weekend!! πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜†

-you too, sweetie, thanks for the comments!

Originally posted by: kubare

Shoba darling,

It was a wondefrul part dearπŸ‘ and loved it.πŸ˜ƒ

-Hi Krishna, thanks sweety!

Loved the whole bedroom , jacuzzi scene.πŸ˜†

-glad you liked it!πŸ˜‰

And he not knowing what he did, hen they were shoping. Man Jai no woman likes to be told how to live her life.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

-I guess he is only used to bimbos as his girl friends..he is not used to real women, strong and independent!

And him and Rano, they are so cuteπŸ˜› and the making up😳.

-Isn't Rano a sweetheart! I love the way her character is being portrayed in the current KS, high time!

I so hope everything turns out good for these two , but then there is th twist which is supposed to be out soon.

-Some times life is full of twists, they have to be there otherwise too much sweet stuff makes people diabetic!!πŸ˜†

Cant wait to read the next part soon.πŸ˜ƒ

Love

Krishna

-Krishna, Thank you dear! love your comments!

Originally posted by: Vedo

Awesome part!!
πŸ‘
Hailaa! Loved the bedroom scene!! 😳 😳 😳

-Hi Vedo, thanks sweety!
Bani and her ego...good quality but it can be soo annoying at times!
Please continue soon.

-She does get a little over the top, doesn't she - no wonder people call her saint Bani and Amma! reminds me of my mom thougth, love her!

V.

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Awesome part.
loved it.
did bedroom and then bathroom got hot or what πŸ˜†....liked it.
plz cont. soon.

-Hi Ridhi,

How are you jaan? Yeah the bed and bath did get a little too hot, no wonder Bani ran away!πŸ˜†

Thanks for the comments!

Originally posted by: sxcdevil

that was a wicked update! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ loved the bedroom and bathroom scene and i agree it was gettign hot!

-too hot for Bani to handle, for sure!

as for bani lolz...im sure lyk the rest of us she hates to eb told what to do and jai just has to learn to cope with but then i also loved jais method of pacifying her..im sure it's hopefully alwasy going to work...hmm looks lyk jai has hsi whole future planned out...but he shuld remember to always expect the unexpected!

-My motto exactly, you plan for one thing, but god plans for some thing different! I am with you, no body should tell the other person what to do!

Originally posted by: sangerpu

italicmms 😊 [ ❀️ :*:] ilove u kasam say

-Hi there, welcome to the forum, looks like this is your first post, and I am honored that you chose to put your first comment here! Thanks!

Originally posted by: ag06

omg!!!..wat a part 😳 😳 😳 ..jai is soooo desperate (not dat i mind πŸ˜‰ )pleeez get these 2 married before smthin wrong happens πŸ˜† ....loved the part.jai is sooooooo naughty....dreamin bout him n her in a jacuzzi 😳 😳 ..hope his dream comes true soon πŸ˜‰ .want more jb romantic parts like it ..continue asap

-Hi Ananya, thanks sweety, the marriage is not in my hands sweety, it's all in the hands, and you know what that means, right? LOL, yes JW is naughty! I know you are probably one of the first JB despos...LOL!

Originally posted by: harshi21

Aww poor Rano, Bani tried to get her a lesser grade for not reading a book and watching the movie. Lol I would have so failed if it were not for movies sometimes.

-Hi Harshi, thanks for the comments, yes, I make my kid read everything and he complains about it! There is something about reading that makes your mind think and conjure up images and visualize scenery, fantasize about the characters which movies don't! I am biased because I am into reading!! πŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: sanam84



Acha mugse bola gaya, i'll be arrested for arson, now wot bout u πŸ˜†
Kahin aag lage lag jaye,
kahin gagan gire gir jaye

-Agar tum chahe tho, gagan ko bhi aag lagayenge, kyo darling, haven't used your siggy yet, did I?πŸ˜‰

ok the next line does not fit in.

hhhhmmmm JW sure wanted to join in, i am sumhow so sure of it, n then Bani too must hav wanted to join the jacuzzi, i am sure of that too but......
Ruk ja baby

-You are so right baby, now who wanted to join who?πŸ˜†

rano n jai r so cute, n bani telling her to get less marks coz she dint read.......thank god my sis is not like that, main to kabhi paas hi nahin hoti.

-LOL, you crack me up! My uncle who is a principal at a college caught my cuz (his nephew) cheating and apparently debarred him, so yes, there are people who are straight as arrows...
Jai took her shopping, good man, but she not takin advantage of his being rich good girl. but he still goin ahead n buying her stuff, good man, but she not likin itgood girl.

ho gaya ya continue karoon πŸ˜†

-Good girl, continue karona, I will be good and listen or read, good all around, right?πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

and Jai finding a way to manao her, now that is smart way πŸ˜‰ mera JW very smart man.

-I wonder how long that will last!!😳

sheena loved this update, ab next wala kab.......

-Soon, doll, soon!
Sam

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

hey sheena!

thanks for the PM!! 😊 i loved this update!! both jai and bani are suffering!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† (not that its a laughing matter πŸ˜† πŸ˜† )

-Yeah, poor guys, they are suffering and you are laughing at their expense!πŸ˜†
soo cute.. they both finally said 'i love you' but then jai had to ruin it all with his speech afterwards... just live in the moment man!! duffer!
-He sure is a duffer! 😑


hahaha.. finally a fight!!! πŸ˜‰ rano explaining to him was soo cute!! im expecting lots more of these when they're married! πŸ˜† and now had he's found a new way to manao her πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰

-this sali is coming to good use, the other sali, I kept her out of the FF so far, because I knew the belans were going to come if I include her in the FF. Everybody seems to like this new way of manaoing her!

great update!!

-Thanks Tanu!

Originally posted by: mb101

wow what an awesome part!!!! πŸ‘ Jai offering Bani a dip in the Jacuzzi πŸ˜ƒ haha Bani watching him as he shaves 😳 than the sponge part 😲 😍 too good! plz continue soon,


-Hi Maro, thanks jaan - shave and sponge - I wonder why I am thinking of a hospital right now? πŸ˜† I know, but I am not telling....

Maro πŸ˜›

-Thank you sweety!!

Edited by Sheena_Row - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Taz234

Saving my spot sweety 😊 ...back with usual lambi comments!! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

-Jaan, thanks for your comments, you make my day!

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Posted: 18 years ago
that was awesome sheena1
so the jacuzzi scene was something else huh?
hehe
so bani gave him teh silent treatment for buy all those things
and he knew exactly how to make up
hehe
please continue soon
i want my next update
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sheena

that was just beautiful,fabalously written.loved bani confession and how Jai tries to makes his feelings clear to her.The Jaccuzi part was just hot with a capital H.too good.Bani is so cute,she is virgo like me.really sweet convo between Jai and Rano.simply superb.looking forward to the next part,cant wait. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Lovely part Sheena, very well written please continue soon!

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