Originally posted by: latha_555
just a little confused, in the first chapter seems like aastha and shlock do not know each other and in the second chapter shlock says he loved her and there is a sentence about cat and mouse game?
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Originally posted by: latha_555
just a little confused, in the first chapter seems like aastha and shlock do not know each other and in the second chapter shlock says he loved her and there is a sentence about cat and mouse game?
Really can't wait to see how you explore cancer their emotions
Originally posted by: latha_555
do continue, very nice update...glad everything is out in the open, loved the way shlock heard the conversation and said he wants to marry her regardless...:)
Thanks for pm, nice update, looks like we will need some back story unless u r going the show's way of creating riddles over riddles😊
"Ok theek hai lekin meri bhi ek shart Hai, I have a condition"
"Astha I accept your every condition" shlok answered as if he was desperate.
"I get to meet my ai baba whenever I want"
"Ofcourse kyun nahin, Aur kuch?"
"No-I"
"Um.Mr kriloskar If you don't mind can I take your daughter out with me"
So now Mr. Shlok agnihotri wants to go on a date with me?
"Haan beta why not, now she's soon to be your wife"my dad said making me blush.
As we left the house I still couldn't believe that he loved me all this time I thought he's a monster or a khadoos.
"Astha, where are you lost jaan?"
Jaan?
"Shlok I want to ask you something how did you even fell in love with me. I mean we used to fight each other since childhood remember"
"Astha I know you must find it weird but I've liked you ever since the first I saw you. You were completely different from those other girls at my office who would throw themselves at me any time. Your personality, your discipline you're respect and you're kindness towards other was what Attracted me towards you" I looked at him in awe, his words made me melt.
"Let's go and eat ice cream"
"Omg shlok I love ice-cream and especially ch--"
"I know chocolate with nuts" he gave me a small smile before answering.
"By the way shlok what if I say I Don't like you" I joked as I looked into his eyes. Seriousness took all over his aura.
"Then I'd probably die without you astha, I can't live without you. Remember that party we went to for my Delhi business trip and that guy Rahul, When you were dancing with him I could feel my blood boil. Astha I can't imagine my life without you . You bring all the colours into life"
"I'm sorry shlok I didn't know I meant that much to you"
"Promise me aastha no matter what happens you'll never leave me. EVER" he requested as he cupped my face gently removing strands of my hair at the side.
"I---"
"Please astha"
"I promise" he surprised me as he attacked me into hug I hugged him in no time.
"Shlok let's go now, Its going to be night time soon anyways."
"But aastha I'm going to miss you"
"It's fine you can see me tomorrow"
"Wait,"
"What?" I asked as I looked at him he wiped something off the side of my lips.
"Astha you always eat like a child"
"Yeah atleast I eat good stuff not like you Mr everyday-aloo-agnihotri."
He laughed whole heartedly making my heart skip a beat. I never realized how much affect he had on me. I gave him a small smile as he recollected him self.
"Bye"
"Bye" I waved bye to him as I entered my house.
"So how is ms asthu?"
"Nothing aji, I'm going to sleep feeling tired"
"Acha theek hai good night besides it's 11:00 both you're parents already slept"
I changed and hugged my pillow as I layed on my bed thinking of shloks beautiful words and amazing confession to me who would have known that aloo eater agnihotri would like me. His smile is so beautiful. I didn't even realize. Darkness took over me as I slept I felt a knock.
"Who's there, aji I'm trying to sleep"
"It's me"I heard a male whisper.
"Aaa bhooot"
"Shhh it's me shlok"
"Oh acha I thought you were, SHLOK WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE WHAT IF MY PARENTS SAW YOU---"
"Astha open the window first I'm freezing"
"Aap bhi naa, I was so sleepy and you should it's not right for you"
"Too bad tonight I'm sleeping with you" he answered as he layed comfortably on my bed.
"No shlok please go home it's 12:00 and I want to go to sleep"
"Haan toh Maine konsa Roka hai tumhe, I never stopped from going to sleep"
"Shlok you're crazy"
"Crazy for you" with that I accepted his stubbornness and we went to sleep together with my head on his chest and his arms around my waist. It felt like a heavenly bliss.
AN: so here's a long update for the people who requested, still super tired from work yesterday got tons of homework urgh,,btw guys I had an idea idk coz ive never really seen someone doing this before i was wondering if instead doing a shlok and astha ff can i do an avinash and shrenu ff? :/ may sound weird but lemme know or else I'll just leave that thought aside:P
so hope you guys enjoyed it. I got a lot of questions asked about "tragedic ending" or "astha dying" nope she will not unless you guys want a sad ending😕 then there's no swati in my story also so no need to worry about that. It's just a short simple love romantic story (: any questions regarding this story feel free to ask :P
thanks for the love again ashlokians
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-Ravneet😳
Nice update thank you, I love reading FFs so I'll read FFs you write on anyone lol