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"Akka what happened ,why you are not happy ? Mihika asked her as Ishita was lost in her own thought

"i am happy see "Ishita smiled 

"Akka you can fool others but not me " Mihika hug her from back 

"Mihika Shagun said i will never be happy as i have snatch her daughter from her ,as i can't become mother " she said 

"Akka why you take her serious , you should be happy as you have a family now " she smiled 

"this family is not permanent" she said & free herself

"Akka why you said that? " she became confused 

" nothing" she moved away  but her mind was stuck with the conversion with Ramaoutside the court ,she shakes her head walk  out to living room where Raman & Ruhi was waiting for her 

"Jiju Akka is upset " Mihika whisper ,he look at her who was feeding Ruhi "she is very sensitive " she whisper 

" i think we should better go now " he stand

Ishita & Ruhi look at him 

"Papa can i take mitoo with me " she asked Raman "mama will be with me there , mitoo will be alone here" she cutely asked  

" ok " he said & shakes hand with Mr lyer & walk out 

"Ishita mama & mitoo will stay with me ya " she chipper & ran to her home , Ishita walked in "Ishita mama me & mitoo will stay in one room " she asked her dadi

"no beta you & mitoo will stay in one room & papa & mama in other " Dadi said 

"i can stay with Ruhi " she said at once, mrs Toshi showed her her eye ,Ishita made irritating face & walked to her bedroom quickly taken out her night dress from her suitcase, before she could go out Ruhi came in

"Pappi can i sleep with you today " she asked & climbed bed

"Ruhi how many times i asked you not to call me that ?" he said 

Ruhi naughtily smiled  "mami will you tell me story " she hug Ishita 

"yes sure " she picked her up in her arms , & sat on bed side 

"which story you want to hear ?" she asked her absent mindly 

"bear " Ruhi said & placed her head in Ishita lap 

"there was a princess " Ishita started 

"mama i said bear one " she said at once 

Raman look at them , Ishita was trying to cook up story but she was failing 

"aap udas ho " Ruhi asked her while cupie her face 

"no " she shakes her head but tear roll down her eyes 

"Daar ho raha hai " Ruhi placed her hand on her heart , Ishita shakes her head in yes 

"per kyun i am here with you " she placed her head on her heart  "mien kissie karo thek hojai ga " she without waiting kissed her cheek , she burst into tears 

Raman left his work & look at them "mama why are you crying ?" Ruhi asked her 

" you promise me you will never leave me " Ishita murmur 

"Ruhi Promise " Ruhi hug her 

"my everything is connected with you " she kissed worried  Ruhi 

Raman got what she met , he pour water in glass & pass it to Ruhi to give it to Ishita  

"mama " she gave her water , Ishita gulp it in one go as if she was very thirsty . 

"kisse mama " she kissed her cheek & hug her tight " i promise i will not leave you Ruhi promise " she hold her hand said Ishita kissed her hands "Papa " she pull Raman hand " Papa you too do Ruhi promise you willn't leave mama " she asked him Ishita tries to pull her hand but Raman clench it tightly in his "Ruhi promise will not leave you" he said & look at her they had eyelock , he knew his harsh word has hurt her ,his this Promise will sure heal her wound though it was very deep 


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Posted: 10 years ago
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my god wht an OS esp the ending part...u r such a gifted write Naddiya..LOVED this one too..πŸ‘
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awesome :))))))
tfs nads
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Fab OS!!!! Loved it!!! πŸ‘πŸΌ
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so cute loved itπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Amazing os dear i dont know what to do without ur amazing stories😊
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Awww It made me cry .. πŸ˜­
awsome OS Nads .. 


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Beautifully written ... Very-2 touching and emotional :)
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Naddiya you write sooo sooo well β­οΈ β­οΈ β­οΈ β­οΈ β­οΈ β­οΈ β­οΈ β­οΈ β­οΈ β­οΈ
That was such an emotional story...ruhi and ishita bonding is sooo unique and pure and you portrayed it soo beautifully as well πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
I totally looove the story,each and every bit of it πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
Thank you soo much πŸ€— πŸ€—..i cant resist to ask you to write mooore soonish😳 πŸ˜³
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Awww😳
tat was so lovely nadiya..😊😊 So emotional and touching..
i can picture each moment between ruhi and ishita..πŸ˜ƒ
love the way you bonded them and of course raman and ishita too😊😊😊
Extremely well writtenπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ..please continue to write more OS..😊😊