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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well guyzz since its VALENTINE'S DAY...there should be something dedicated to our lovely and sexy couple😊😉😳...since my exams are going on the truly Valentine day waala OS wil b tomorrow...tlll then enjoy I hav written this in many versions hope u ol enjoy it..it doesn't involve the VAlentine theme...but had to dedicate something so be it this :p😆😆

TUM MILE...

There she laid besides him naked...after their Hot Suhaagraat...she blushed at the thought...how wild she had been yesterday...
She was looking as to how innocent he looked while he was sleeping...she smiled to her herself as she remembered their love story...
5 years back...


Aastha Kirloskar a bookworm, studious and the ranker of her batch...She was beautiful but never realised it...She had a huge crush on the dude of the college SHLOK AGNIHOTRI during her school times...He was her first and probably the last one because it had gradually turned into a deeper feeling than she had thought...During her school times she had tried and had been succesful in blocking her feelings towards him...only she knew how she controlled herself...coz she knew she can never be his since she hated his casanova nature and at the same time hated herself for falling such a guy...

But to her utter bad luck he had taken admission in the same college as hers and now it was becoming impossible for her to control her feelings...moreover she was very reserved, introvert and had only one friend witn whom.she used to.share her likes, dislikes, her emotions, feelings her DIARY...she never talked with him...but she knew his family very well as her father and his father were best friends...


There she goes again with her head bowed down in the books like an obedient child...He had been noticing her since his school days...They were in the same batch, he also knew tht she was a topper...he always had a liking towards her though he was with other girls he was never serious with them...but seeing her he always used to be in his dreamland...

After passing his tenth std only he knew how he had tried his level best to get her details and in which college was she going to take admission...and hence he enrolled himself in the same college...

In college too he .had maintained his Casanova image...he had noticed her seeing him sometimes but only a disgusting one...and therefore he never approached her coz she was the first girl AASTHA KIRLOSKAR who was making SHLOK AGNIHOTRI go bonkers...but he had always realized that she was beautiful not only in her appearance but also her inner beauty...

After finishing their graduation she had disappeared suddenly...
He felt as if someone had taken away his life...coz during their honor party he had decided to tell her his feelings...only he knew how nervous he was...but all his dreams were shattered when he came to know about her disappearance...

2 years later...

SHLOK AGNIHOTRI the most successful business tycoon of India had achieved everything in his life but failed to get the love of his life...
All that he wished was her AASTHA

His dad was forcing him to get married to his best friend's daughter...but he as usual was avoiding the topic...but this time he couldn't escape as he had made a promise to him tht atleast he would come to.meet tht grl with her...but he had made up his mind tht he would tell the grl tht he could not marry her...
Now he was sitting here in the living room probably waiting for the girl to serve.him tea...

His dad was busy chatting away with his friend about the business...
...and his mom was talking to the girl's mother... A gush of cold wind passed through him and he looked up the direction...he was shocked would be an understatement...

There she.came dressed in a beautiful anarkali of red colour...
They both were equally shocked looking at each other...he was mesmerized looking at her she has grown more beautiful than his imagination ...Finally his wait was over his wishes had come true..he silently thanked God...she came with the tray in her hand...she served all of them tea...when she reached to Shlok they had an eyelock which was disturbed by Jyoti's giggling...

Shlok looked away embarassed and Aastha's cheeks turned into crimson red...
Aastha quickly went inside her room there were no endings to her raging heartbeats...which said only one thing
Aastha TERE SABRA KA FAL TUJHE MIL GAYA...HE IS YOUR WOULD BE HUSBAND
And seeing this the elders knew tht they had taken a right decision and therefore the wedding arrangements were made soon...
Soon the wedding day arrived and the two souls were binded into a never ending relation...

She heard the sound of the door open...there she was sitting in her face covered with veil...her heart was raging faster the more he approached her...
He sat besides her on the bed and slowly uncovered her veil...only one word escaped his lips BEAUTIFUL...he started tracing her face with his fingers and when he reached her lips a soft moan escaped her lips...Shlok lost his control and pulled her into a soft kiss...she also responded him with equal passion...
He broke the kiss when he saw her getting breathless...

He confessed all his feelings for her which he had buried in his heart for past 5 years...she was shocked and had got tears in her eyes aftr hearing his confession...she also poured her heart out about her feelings...
Shlok- I love u Aastha...

Aastha - I love u too Shlok...

And then started their passionate, hot suhaagraat where two souls were united.
PRESENT...

Shlok stirred in his sleep when the rays of light fell on him...Aastha immediately drew the curtains and laid besides him to continued her observance...The thing she didnt notice was tht Shlok was pretending to sleep and was seeing her...
He opened his eyes shocking Aastha.
Aastha - aap..aap...u were awake...
She turned into crimson red...well u c if u will continue ur sweet activity of observing me then no would b able to save u...with tht he pulled her into another round of their lovemaking...
And they lived happily ever aftr...
ALL joota chappals allowed
Plz hit like and comment
Loads of love
Nazia😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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a very nice OS to read on valentines day:)
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Its a kind of sweet innocent happy and cute love story .simply superb. Thanks for pm. Please update your other ff.
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mindblowing os👏...

just too good❤️...

thanks for this lovely os
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...beautiful
thank u so much...for giving this valentines surprise 🤗
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haha aww sucha cuteee os loved it👏👏👏
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it is very simple but yet so beautiful
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very nice read for Valentines Day
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was fab
thnx for this wonderful OS
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Wow great OS... with sweet and simpLe story i love it😊

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