ariya ff:mohabbat ki dastak❤️!!!updated ch-12 pg-25

Page

sarthikarathore

@sarthikarathore

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

hey guys!this my first os,hope u will lyk it.n before starting i wud lyk to thank two most horrible creations of god.😉..jst kidding😆 ...my two sweet sisters😊who encouraged me to write.

PART-1

kehte hai zindagi k liye pyaar bahut zaruri hta h,magar hr koi khushnaseeb nhi hta...srf kuch logo ko khuda ki yh rehmat milti h!

ETF OFFICE:-

Shree,Riya n Chotu r alone in d office..there bosses hadn't cm yet.

the trio r indulged in thre usual chit chat!

chotu-yaar!ek gud news h!

shree-kya chotu bta na?

ri-ha chotu bol na kya bat h?

chotu(blushingly)-woh...woh...mai..woh mai...

shree-kya chotu bakri ki tarah mai mai kr rha h bol na kya baat h?

ri-ha chotu aur tjhe dekhker aisa kyu lgta h ki tu blush kr rha h??

chotu-woh baat darasal yeh h ki...mai apni 11:30 wali ko propose krna chahta hu!

shree-kya baat h chotu👏

ri-so finally u r gng to propose hr.congrats...waise teri 11:30 wali ka nam bhi ya fir kuch pta hi ni tjhe?

chotu-naam h na(blushes)...bahut pyara nam h...MUSKAAN😳

Ri-wah chotu! kya nam h.bht sweet h bilkul teri tarah.aur shree tera kya plan h?

shree-kaise plan?

ri-dnt tell me shree ki tjhe is bar bhi yaad ni h!!!VALENTINES DAY!!!

shree-oh no!mai to bhul hi gya tha:(

suddenly a voice comes from behind-KYA KHA TUMNE????specky sen i'll not leave u!!!😡😡😡

shree's pov-beta ab to tu gya!ye liza chodegi ni tujhe...pichli bar bhi bhul gya tha aur is bar bhi ab to tu gya!

n shree tried to explain hr but no use.she wanted to hit him n thy started running in d office...liza was chasing him n agn n agn she was saying sry bt no benefit!😆N while running shree hit smone...who had jst entrd into the cnference rum..n it was none other than our hot dashing cop-the great ACP ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE!!!!!!😡

scroll down for more...

Edited by sarthikarathore - 11 years ago

Quote

Frequent Posters

sarthikarathore

@sarthikarathore

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

Arjun-ye ho kya rha h yaha par????ETF ka office h koi baccho ka playground ni jha is trh se bhag rhe ho!!now evryone get back to wrk!!

saying so he walkd into his cabin leaving a sad riya behind.

riya was sad wen she realised thatboth of his friends have there soulmates wid them n wil be clebrating the valentine wid them...but wat abt her?

shree noticed this said-ri...

but ri spoke in btw-shree,aisa kyu hta h ki jise hum chahte h use hum pa ni skte?kyu aksar mohabbat ki dastan adhuri reh jati h?

shree was amused by riya's wrd but he knew vry well that riya luved arjun frm d bottom of d heart.

shree-ri...hta h kbhi kbhi,bt dnt wry i m sure arjun ko bht jld tere pyaar ka ehsaas ho jaega n fir tu hi khegi ki ye mohabbat bhi kya cheej banayi h khuda ne🥱!

suddenly then rathore enters n undrstud wat wud hv happened.rathore knew his little sis vry wel.yes,riya was rathore's little sister,who luved a guy beyond the limits !!

rathore-team!

everyone except riya-gud mrng sir!

rathore's heart sink on seeing his little princess in such a miserable state.shree intrpreted d situation n tuk chotu n liza wid him,he knew that they need to give sm space to them.

rathore-riya...(but no response)he agn called riya!n then he shuk hr n she cm bck to hr senses n started crying .

rathore on seeing his princess lyk this hugged her to cmfrt her.he knew tht there was sm inner turmoil in her n she had put on a mask of a happy go lucky girl frm past few days!

riya(while crying)-kyu bhai?kyu ???y me????kyu mujhe hi aise insaan se pyaar hua jo shayd smjhna hi ni chahta mere pyar koo!!!

rathore-riya...u knw na rawte kaisa h?use thoda waqt do shayad woh samjh jaye ki tum usse kitna pyaar krti ho?tb tk k liye pls khud ko smbhalo...mai tumhe is tarah ni dekh skta...i cnt see u crying!plsss ri fr me stop crying😭!

riya smhw cntrls her n cmposes hrself.all she cud manage to say is-mai intezar krungi bhai!i wil w8 fr him to chnge n accept me!!!!n wh mjhe neglect ni kr skte..itni asani se to bilkul ni!!

rathore -ha riya he cnt neglect u n tum ho hi itni pyari ki kisi ka bhi dil tumpr aa jaye pr ye janab thode tede h,thoda waqt to lgega...

they both get up n again hugged each other,riya felt peace in his brother's embrace.aftral he was the only prsm jo use smjhta tha.

and someone was seeing all this frm his cabin's window !(n we all knw that who is he?)

"naajane kyu log aksar us insaan ko intezzar krwate h jo unse sacchi mohabbat krta h!!magar kya kasoor h unka,mohabbat ka matlab hi shayad intezaar hta h!!!"

tbc...

excuse for errors

hpe u will lyk it...

waiting fr ur reviews

index:

ch-1---pg 1

ch-2---pg-3

ch-3---pg5

ch-4---pg-7

ch5----pg-9

ch-6---pg-11

ch-7---pg-14

ch-8---pg-16

ch-9---pg-18

ch-10--pg-22

ch-11--pg-24

ch-12--pg-25

Edited by sarthikarathore - 11 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Wow...
Awesome update.
Loved it a lot...
Continue sooonish... :)
thnks for the pm...

Quote

sheenshreesen

@sheenshreesen

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

Ek din mein ek jhatka hi kaafi hota h par tum ho ki jhatke par jhatke diye ja rahe ho phele usne shreya shaurya sparsh aur ab tu muskaan chotu's 11:30 wali by the way story concept was awesome update soon nd send me pm...luv u

Quote

kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

kya yaar rula diya tune to...

wo last wala sher...mujhe kuch samaj nahi aaya

lekin 4 times padhane ke baad feelings dil tak pahochi...nice one

waise planning to write further or not

my suggestion is do write more

Quote

Kiya

@Kiyaa-Rhapsody

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

loved it, it was an awesome read xx

Quote

Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

It was awesome and nice start dear.
Just loved it.
Do continue soon.
And please pm me

Quote

devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome start. ...

Wow so both shreetu have their partners for v days...

n riya feeling sad coz arjun doesn't even acknowledge her love...

Sam rii scenes were nice...

Continue soon

Quote

kriti22

@kriti22

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful start
Riya tears hurting
Waitng for next part

Quote

riyaarjunrawte

@riyaarjunrawte

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

Wah wah!...kya baat hai shehenshah!...
Aap toh humse bhi ek no. Aage nikle...
Sabse pehle toh TWO MOST HORRIBLE CREATIONS!..
n moreover...chotu ki 11:30 wali..MUSKAAN
par chalo Koi baat Nahi...the story name and conceptwas awesome!
Do continue it soon...n pm me as well...
Luv u jaanu...u r d best sis in this world! 😊