THE LOCKET (1) - Page 114

Originally posted by: _Sanjana_

Read the prologue n Chp 1 n 2

I really feel for Maan there though i dont know the exact reason for his sadness but i could feel his pain there!

Dev seems to be a nice character as of now but will more to form an opinion about him and the gal he fell in love with, m already liking her as of now!
Coming to Dadi n her mentioning Geet was bit surprise but then something struck me and m really scared at that thought itself though i hope m wrong

She said Geet came into her life 2 years ago when Maan wasnt around as he was or he went to London for those 2 years so does that means Geet was the girl in Dev's arms in the prologue part? I so hope Not

And its really so tough to live a life when our parents die doesnt matter at what age we are cause we always need that hand or to look up to someone when we are alone or happy or want to share something special, so Maan n Dev losing their parents at such a young age must have been so difficult i feel for both the boys!

And loved Maan when he sacrificed his abroad studies for Dev n also for their Business as Dadimaa needed help too and side by side finished his college which must have been all the more difficult for him for juggling the two things!! And my eyes moist when i read the bond Maan shared with his Mom!! But i had a smile when Dadi recalled the fond memory of Maan playing the piano n his Mom n Dad waltzing around him!! Maan seems to be really close to his parents than Dev after reading Dadi's character!!

Okay will read next chapters tomorrow!!
Bookmarking the thread!!

Originally posted by: _Sanjana_

Read chap3 n OMG i loved Naintara, her dreaming HR was really nice but that dream turning into dreaming Dev got me more excited n happy too cause some of my confusion was cleared and woah who forced her for marriage n why i felt those dialogues were said by many characters n not just one?? And the Bus scene, that is so common in India but i loved it more cause it gave story a more realistic touch n then the way u wrote is was just amazing!! Loved how she answered back that aunty n that idiot man too who had the guts to question her after what he did! And hawww Naintara slapped her boss Dev at the first day of the office? I mean really? Her day had already started on such a bad note, getting late for her work n that bus scene n the big dhamaka slapping ur new Boss, it just got more worse, poor Naina or should say poor Dev?

Originally posted by: _Sanjana_

Yiippeee finally Geet's entry and i already love her cause i too have a habit of talking to myself though not like hers, in her mind she talks only to Maan where as i talk to many people!! But the way Geet does is cute and it made me go all awww!! So Geet only has Darji in her family and loved when she thought her as a village girl n Maan falling for some phirang in these 2 years!! And it seems like Maan never confessed about his feelings to Geet before going to London and so all this confusion n misunderstanding has taken its place now!! And loved that one scene from college Maan following Geet just to see whether she reach Hostel safely!!

And okay so Geet got to know about his feelings after reading the diary now n i some where knew she was the one who kept those yellow flowers but that time i was so confused that i couldnt voice it out but finally all the confusions are over, hopefully!! Here i also got to know that the fireworks wala story is of DevTara n Sweet wala is of Maaneet warna at first i was thinking the other way chalo no problem i m already loving this sweet wala love story of Maaneet but i hope they arent all chup chup baithne wale couple and they do interact too!! And loved Dev-Geet's friendship too n Devji's all cute names for Geetji!! So Geet n Naina are roommates hmmm nice i m liking how they all are connected already in some way!!

And here comes THE END to my confusion, so my guess was right though the my thinking behind that guess wasnt and m glad its just a misunderstanding as of now but i have no idea till when this misunderstanding is going to last?!! And jhalli Geet is already drooling over Maan n is eyeing him all chup chup ke, cute!!

And then the title of this story, THE LOCKET had also done its entry n m super excited to read further now!!

I wanna know Maaneet's age n the age difference too as Geet said she had just done her MBA!! See m again with a confusion!!

Originally posted by: Ramykrish

Ok,the story starts with Dev and NT,a different try .Liked the presentation of NT,A strong independent women.Btw I would like to mention I admire the command over your English not only in this but yourother SS's to.I think your FF will be a treat to read not only the story line but your presentation too😊