BROKEN MELODY....NEW OS (UPDATED)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hoping that u will like it...do comment, critisism welcomed!

Index:

CHAPTER 1: PG 1

CHAPTER 2: PG 2

Chapter 3: pg 5

CHAPTER 4: pg 8

CHAPTER 5:PG 9

CHAPTER 6:PG 10

Last chapter- 12


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CHAPTER !

Sanyukta agarwal, the best known and most famous female scientist in the world of mechanics, she was standing at the window she watched the fleecing clouds in the sky, yes everything was perfect in her life, she had a perfect job, got what she always wantedto do, her dad finally understood her love for machines and respected her wishes, but yet she felt a chunk missing, something was not right. Yes, her heart was missing.

As nostalgic memories floated in her mind's eye she was filled with different emotions, sadness, longing, love and anger...

She turned back the hour glass ruminating about the past...her beautiful past which had turned into a nightmare, which had left scars on her heart...

She remembered the first time they actually kissed, not the one which was filled with hatred, but the one which had passion and love in it. It was in their second year when Vardhan sir had sent them to a village on an assignment, they were partners for the job and in between those arguments, none knew when they had fallen in love. That blissful night , under the star filled sky, they had kissed. She could yet feel the taste of his lips on hers, yet feel the warmth of his embrace , yet feel the love radiating in their kiss. It lingered on her lips, this was one memory which managed to bring a smile to her lips even when her world scattered in front of her eyes... even when it felt as if her heart has been ripped out of her chest. A small smile graced her beautiful lips which was soon replaced by tears.

Then came the worst nightmare of all, the nightmare which had plunged her in the depths of grief--- she had no idea why he thought that she could such an act, it was obvious to the others that she did not do anything wrong , yet he did not believe her.

FLASHBACK

SANYUKTA was silently sitting in the library waiting for randhir, her boyfriend, her love, oh how she loved to say that.

She did not have to wait for long, soon she was greeted with his face, but there was something off, his eyes were seething in anger, those black eyes which had ones been filled with love was filled with nothing but pure rage and hatred. To say that she was scared would be an understatement.

He came closer, threw all her books to the floor and held her hands with an iron grip, which really hurt her, and spoke with each and every word laced with venom "How dare u???? I trusted u, loved u and what did u do?"

She couldn't say anything, stood mumb not knowing what she had done, " now don't you dare act innocent, u know what you have done, you were the only one who knew where my project was and you take advantage of that , today I find it all broken...WHY???? Even Vidushi saw you with my project, so this love was all an act to destroy me... and I thought that you really loved me, oh how wrong I was! I hate u sanyukta agarwal, don't ever come near me again"

With that he left , not listening to a word she had to say, that day she had actually shattered into pieces. Even after winning the competition , she did not take the prize to make randhir believe her but he did not...

END FLASHBACK

The wound in her heart opened again, and she let the grief engulf her, tears flowed mercilessly, and then she continued staring at the card in her card titled

" RANDHIR WEDS VIDUSHI."

How could he? How could he do this to her? He loved her or that's what he had said but he broke her heart. She could no longer be mended... she wanted to let him go, but how? Everytime she tried to forget him she was reminded of him even more... How? He had killed her, murdered her, yet she loved him, yet every breath of hers had his name written on it. Her heart yet beats only for HIM!!

"The body slows with mortal ache,

Yet my promise remains true at the closing of our days,

A tender touch that ends with a kiss,

Will awaken love in joyous ways ,

Our souls were one, if you must know,

And never shall be apart,

With splendid dawn your face aglow,

I reach for you and find my heart..."

This idea was for the valentine challenge , the challenge has not yet been approved by dev but I couldn't help but post it.

Plz leave ur comments.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz continue it... i love the concept...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Plz pm me..i'm new..n plz continue.it's awsm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u want to make all sandhir lover cry or what

kun aakhir kun huva mere sandhir ke saath aisa...


hey dear u have to clarify all these misunderstandings between sandhir soon


do update dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome concept
plss continue this one
loved it
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Plsss continue
I love this concept

Plsss pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Randhir weds Vidushi Bitch!!!!!! W*F

Just update it dammit. I can bear anyone else with him but not vidushi. Of course in the end its gonna b sandhir
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx to all of u!!!! i wanted it to be a sad os but i guess all ur plzzz will make me make this a ss.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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to every1: the next chapter will be up by tonight, but warning , i have my boards coming so wont be able 2 update very frquently.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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can u plz continue it??
its just freaking awesome
Loved every bit of it

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