OS: Paying the price - Page 9

Wow! This badass, volatile and fiery Anjali I like!

She has Shyam pupping around her, as in lieterally! Man! That is a personal Revenge on Shyam's charecter and was a total fun to read.

I wish our CV's had thought of something like this, while we were wondering iss pyaar ko kya naam doon? ;)

wow, amazingly convincing os, and u write with such a natural flow! at the kidnapping time i remember a lot of conjecture about it being akaash or his evil twin/brother dhruv but i love ur idea way more 😃 there was a lot of unexplored territory when it came to anjali and i like where u went this, very dark, maybe even evil criminal mastermind 😲 after all she is asr's sister, dimaagh to hoga hi and the way she blackmailed khushi to work at rm, hm ... 🤓 never thought i would ever feel sorry for shyam but i guess there's a first time for everything 😃 loved it!