love ...

khidki ke darwaze
mein ugh aayi ek
phungi..
makhmali pattiyo
se susajjit..
kantavihin..
kamre ke bhitar hai
jhankti...chupke se..
har waqt tujhe dhundti
hai shayad..
tu jo chali gayi hai..
ubb ke ubbe huye
rishte ko dhote dhote..
thak ke mujhse..
wo Rishta jise diya
dhup khadh pani ..
par na panpa...
pata hai ye phugni...
bina dhup pani khadh ke
hai panpi...
phir bhi mujhe yaqeen
hai ek din ye phugni
teri tarah mujhe chor
jayegi..
ye phugni ek din awashya
murjhayegi !!

phugni -small plant

Awesome Rabzy senti kar diya mujhe

Very touchy rabzy..

Originally posted by: deepa17

Awesome Rabzy senti kar diya mujhe

thanks Deepali :)

Originally posted by: rrdsu

Very touchy rabzy..

first part reminded me of Nidhi,(as phugni) from initial epis..

yup heena so true...

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Bahut dard chupa hai Rabzy iss kavita mein.. Aapne ek dard ko naam diya hai..

Wo jo chod ke chali gayi.. aaj ye plant ussko dhoondta hai.. kal ye bhi murjhayega toh fir.. toh fir kaun rahega yahaan

Very emotional and sensitive poem..⭐️👏

I find its every heart's emotion.. every girl's true life story.. !!!

Kyun har phungi ko aakhir murjhana hi hota hai... kyun nahi wo poori zindagi hanste khelte bita deti... kya ye vidambna hai ya bhagya.. ?

very thoughtful words...

bawa so sweet of u ...thanks

Very beautiful poemRabzyji!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Very subtly it expresses the pain of the male protagonist whose lady-love has left him... Phugni is just a metaphor but the comparison is so meaningful... The relation that was treated with so much care to bloom, couldnt sustain then this little plant has budded w/o any care so how is it going to survive for long... Phugni reminded me of Title Nidhi in ktlk. Ur poem made me very senti senti indeed 😭 But happy to have got to read a lovely poem!! Really loved it!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Divya, very emotional and sad too. But beautiful poem that describes of a relationship that was nipped in the bud, not allowed to blossom.You have depicted the pain of loss so nicely.