Kachhe Dhage Maaneet,Arshi,Virman SS Last part pg39

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Kachhe dhage(1 to 4 parts) Written by Ambishika


character sketch




ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA::::::::

age(25)

studies fashion design in new yor..

stay with virmaan and khushi..

khushi fiancee.

loved a girl called music...

admires maan..

business man ..

owner and partner of ar group...


MAAN singh khurana.

(age 26)


a bussiness man...

love his dadi ma and hios younger sister khuhsi

he is rude and agrogent..but only in office...

dadi ma jsut want him to get engaged




KHUSHI KUMARI KHURANA

(age 25)

stays in new york..

love arnav alot...

she knows abt music but has never seen her...loves her family..




wants to be independant..

doent want maan to pay for her extra expensis rather than her fees..

but after many attrpmts arnav makes her take money frm me...


GEET HANDA


a bubbly girl..

loves her beeji..

goes to delhi for her work...


MANVI CHOUDHARY



bubbly..

loves virat...

khhusi best frnd...


VIRAT VADHERA



he is hot dude...

love playing guitar...

arnav best frnd..

met music ones...

loves manvi..trying to prpose manvi but always something happens


ANJALI RAIZADA

arnav sis


DADI MA

khhusoi and maan dadi


BEEJI

geet dadi


SWAMINI BUA




virat bua


MANORMA MAMI


ADI

PINKY
AMAN

LAVANYA


Part 1



in new york ...




A boy man is standing in middel of his university...

Fb




g: plzzz u know u shud actually try white i love that colour...

Why cant u be little more funfull

cant we watch a movie

how can u survie without sugar




8oy: i miss music ...




A girl running towards him and taps his shoulder




girl: arnav wht are u doing u know na that i finding u in whole uni...why u keep a ph when u can reply or receive my calls ...

Are u trying to ignore me?




Arnav places a hand on the girls shoulder




arnav: khushi calm down wht happened i was in class so ph was on silent




khushi: are u alright




arnav: why u asking that tum batao hua kya hai ?




Khushi: virat and manvi fighting...




Arnav: and u are telling me now chal jaldi varna ek dusre ka khoon kardenge...




Khushi: i cant see they fight and at end khud hi ek dusre ko manayeinge...




Arnav : thats love...u now me and music...




Khushi face get down...




Arnav stops that word the word music only

and looks at khushi with a sorry expression




khushi gives a small smile and say

khushi: u still love her only na...




Arnav: u know khushi i only loved her

khushi : i know it and i completly undestand..phele pyaar 1 love




and she turns and statr moving but arnav holds her hand...




Khushi: its ok arnav i said i understand...




Arnav brings khushi closer and cups her face




arnav: u know wht khushi i might not love u that much u love me ,might not how i loved her..

But one thing i am sure how much i care about u i dont care abt anyone else not even her..

And that the reason i am spending my whole life with u




tears comes in khushi eyes..

And she hugs arnav..

Khushi: i love u arnav and i wont leave u ever...




Arnav : i know it...

But agr we wont stop virman they will kill each other and ek dusre ki yaad main tadpeinge..




A smile escaped khushi face




khushi: come lets go,...




It class room




manvi: how cud u do this partner u changed ur partner




virat : listen u are overrewacting




manvi: main overreact... U trying to ditch me...

And manvi throws a glass of water on




virat: manvi ki bachi how cud u




but arnav and khushi comes




khushi holds viratd hand and arnav hold manvi with her waist,,,




manvi: arnie leave me i will not leave this ditcher




arnav: ditcher virat wht u did now




virat : arnav dude u are beleaving her




manvoi: wht are u trying to say i lied ...

Khushi he changed his partner




arnav : what ?c




khushi leaves virat hand and goes near manvi

khushi : virat how cud u ...




Virat : khushi i just changed my partner only for this project...




Arnav leaves manvi

arnav : manvi




manvi: dont manvi me and arnav dont dare also support ur this ditcher frnd...




Virat : ditcher ..armav tell her dont dare she call me that varna i will call her bandaria...




Manvi: shut up virat...




And she leaves...




Virat: manvi..

Arnav: ab dekh kya raha hai go calm her down...




Virat: baby :...and goes to manvi..




Arnav: these two also na...

Khushi: acha listen we have to go to india...




Arnav: why ?




Khushi: maan bhai sagai ho rahi hai...




Arnav: finally i thought he will get engaged after are marriage only...

Whos the lucky girl????




Khushi: geet geet handa...

.



Part 2

in delhi:




dadi: maan beta kahan ho tum

where are u?




Maan: dadi ma u know i have a busy meetin i am in office only




dadi: maan u will never change u know na today handa family is comming and i tought that u will go and pick them up




maan:dadi ma they are ur guests and why are they comming i have never heard abt any handas frm when u know them.




Dadi: i just know them and its my oder go and receive them i will send u all details ok




maan: can i ever say no to u

and dadi ask khushi also has she reached her this months pocket money..




Dadi: maan u know na she is ur younger sister

she has that ego not to take money frm her brother ...

She is soo stubburn...




Maan: but abt expenses




dadi: dont worry arnav is there ok.




Maan: i know it .she atlast choose a right guy.




Dadi: hmmm accha dont forgett to pick hthem ok




maan: jii dadi ma




dadi calls khushi




dadi: hello khushi beta how are u?




Manvi: arre dadi ma manvi here khushi is just talking to arnav so her ph is with me




dadi: achha beta keep the ph on speaker i want to talk to all 4 of u




manvi: ji dadi ma




manvi: guys dadi ka phn hai




khushi: dadi ma




dadi: kushi how are u beta

khushi: fine dadi ma




arnav: namaste dadi ma




dadi ma: arrey arnav beta how are u..is evrything fine..

How is anjali bitiya.

Arnav: evryone is fine dadi...

Virat: hey dm how are u..

Dadi: fine beta..baccon pack ur bags u


Dadi: bacchon pack ur bags come fast to india ...




Khushi: why dadi ma bhai ki engement kal hi hai kya??




Dadi: arre nahi ur bro dont even know abt it




arnav: wht maan bhai doent even know abt his own engement .




Dadi: yaa i have called the girls family and then i will declare his engement soon...




Khushi:wow this wud be fun..




Manvi: yaa even more than arnav and khushi engagement...




Dadi: soo u guys come soon and dont tell maan...




Virat: offcourse we are comming today only and reach tom...




Dadi: come soon beta...

And dont worry arnav i have informed ur mami also they all will come at party only...


part 3


In india

adi : maan sir dadi called me to remind u that u have to go to bus stand to receive few guests.

Maan: thnxx adi for reminding.

And maan leaves frm office

he goes to bus stand but doent find anyone...




He sees a girl sitting on bench alone




maan: shayad yehi hai

he goes to her

maan: miss handa?




Girl: jii aap?




Maan: dadi ma asked me to pick u.

Mrs khurana


girl: why are u late?

And why are u paid if u come late to pick me up




maan: paid?

Girl: vase i am geet




maan: geeet




geet: not geeet it just geet

maan: ji but where is ur luggage and other family memeber




geet: woh kya hai.i came here for job.

Biji she was commming with me but she had some pain in her joints.

U know wht i always tell she shud rest but she never listens to me

bla bla bla


maan: ooh god someone stop this chatter box.

She can give compitition to both manvi and khushi




geet: accha have u come in car na.these autowala were asking so high money na..

In hosiarpur i new evryone so nobody used to ask money frm me..




They both were going suddenly geet sees a boy in jaket with his back towards her




geet stops

maan: car is that side

but she goes more close to that guy

and place a hand on his shoulder

the guy turns




geet: sorry i thought u are someone elese




guy: no prob

maan: wht happemned




geet: nothing chale varna ur boss will get angry



in car

khushi: vase i heard that ur boss is quite rude

maan: rude who told u that.?

Geet: dadi ma she told me that he veryrude..

Arogent and doent like excuses...

Dhust danav




maan: wht dust danav?

Geet:

hmmm that person wo has such bad quality will be a a rakshas only na that why ...




Maan: hmmm


part 4


Part 3




new york.




Arhi and virmaan apartment




virat: arnav dude packing complete




khushi: do u think that ...it has been 2 hours frm and ur frnd has still not decided what he shud take or not..

And i will pack his clothes..




Manvi: comeon khushi he is ur fiancee




arnav: correct mannu she doent even remember that also




virat: partner ur packing is done???




Manvi: kyun virat if its not done then u will do it ...




Virat: arre why are u hypervating???




Manvi: virat 1 speak english 1 and its 4 years frm when we are living in new york




virat: yaar arnav whts her problem




arnav: dont drag me in this ok.




Manvi: bczz i hate him




khushi: wht???

Mavi: yes i hate him




arnav: one hour baad u will say i love him




virat: thats my charm...




Manvi: wht,

virat: accha listen na now even maan bhai is geyting eneged so when will our turn come



manvi blushes




arnav : khushi i think we shud leave them alone




mavi: noo..i mean i am sill angry

khushi: guys pack soon we need to reach by tom ok...




Arnav: india ...

And goes outside...




Virat: i go and check on him...




Manvi puts hand on khushi shoulder.




Khushi: india always remind him abt music na.




Manvi: i know it has been full 3 years frm there break up




khushi: have virat ever shown u her pic?

Manvi: no virat deleted all her pics he dint want any memory of music.

Khushi: i really cant understand why she left arnav.

He loved her so much.




Manvi: it was in destiny there relation was week ..




Khushi: destiny ..i just always pry frm devi mayiyya that arnav ever never meet music again.




Manvi it took so much time it took one whole year for me to build our relationship..

For 3 months

he was that depression ...




Manvi: khushi dont take tension arnav will always be yuor ur relation ship is not weak ...




Khushi: i always pray that




after sometimes..


Khushi sleeping...

Arnav comes and kisses her forehead..

Arnav: thnxx for being in my life..

And goes frm there

and looks at the sky...

Arnav:hope u get wht u want music..


in New york...




Virat was siyting and playing his guitar




manvi comes to him

virat: wht happened abhi tak naraz ho?




Manvi: no it not that u know i cant be angry frm u for more than hour




virat: manvi u look upset wht happened




manvi: virat today the fear i saw on khushi face the fear when arnav said india..

The fear that music might just come back...




Virat: manvi u know arnav wont leave khushi...

Manvi: i know ..virat have u ever seen her




virat: hmmm..she was just like khushi...

Like devi maiyaa she beleived her babaji

she was pure hrearted indian




manvi: virat will u ever leave me..




Virat: manvi wht happened why are asking this..u know i will not leave u for next 7 births also.




Manvi: i know my last birth bad deeds..




Virat : accha bad deed..




And he runs after her

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Kachhe dhage Part 5

This is Ambishika's concept.Since she is too busy to continue it I decided to continue it.She gave me the summary of each part.I just wrote the script based on her summary.





Arnav-Khushi and Virat-Manvi entered the plane.
Manvi:Cool...
Virat:Yes cool.
Manvi smiled:I knew you would like this flight.
Her eyes fell his face.She was stunned to see his eyes falling on the air hostess.
V:So hot.
Manvi was really irritated.
The air hostess to Virat:Tea or coffee?
V:When some one beautiful like you stands before me why should I need tea and coffee?Looking at you is like drinking a nice tea and coffee.
The air hostess blushed .
Manvi could not bear it.
Virat knew that it would make Manvi jealous.He giggled without her knowledge while she burned with anger.
The air hostess pured tea into the glass and went away.
Manvi:I was telling that this flight is cool.But you said cool meaning the air hostess' looks.You are sick.
Virat smiled simply.


M:See...after happening this much also you are smiling.You are sick ViratThe air hostess served them food packets.Khushi opened the packet for Arnav and arranged everything for him.
K:Eat Arnav.You must be really hungry.Right?
He looked at her.
He thought:Khushi is so caring.She loves me a lot.Still I am stuck up in my past.
A:Khushi...you also eat.You also may be hungry.Right?
K:We both will eat together...not only today.Till the end of our life.That's my wish.
They shared a cute eye lock.
Rabba ve...
They ate together.
K:Arnav...I can't wait for Maan bhai's engagement.I am so excited.
Arnav smiled.
K:How will Bhai react when he comes to know of his surprise engagement.That will be really thrilling.
Arn:Right.Maan bhai will be stunned.
They laughed.

Arnav remembered how Maan reacted when he and Khushi decided to get married.
FB
Maan:Arnav...I am happy that Khushi chose you.She will be a best wife.No doubt.
Arnav:I know Maan bhai.It's Khushi who healed my wounds.
M:Arnav...promise me that you will take care of my chotti.
Arnav became very emotional.He knew that it would not be easy for him to forget his past completely and love Khushi deeply.But he sincerely wished to make Khushi happy.
Arnav held Maan's hand:Trust me Maan bhai.Your chotti will be happy in my arms.
M:I need only that much from you.
Maan hugged Arnav.
Present...
Arnav remembered a girl in white salwar suit running in Punjab.
Khushi called him:Arnav!
Suddenly he awoke from his dream.
K:What are you thinking?
Arn:Nothing.
Maan and Geet reached the office.
Geet was quite nervous.
She thought:No idea how the Boss will react.As far as I heard he is a Dusht Danav.
She was walking lost in fearful thoughts.She did not see Maan coming that way.So they bumped into each other slipping her leg.She lost her balance and fell in Maan's arms. Maan held her.



Their eyes got stuck up to each others.
Mahi...Mahi...
She moved away from him.
G:Dusht danav.You have no eyes?Can't you see me walking?
Maan got angry:You called me Dusht Danav?You were careless in walking and you are blaming me?
G:I was careless?How did I be careless?You are at fault.
M:No..you.
G:No.
Adi and Pinky felt weird seeing Geet arguing with Maan.
P:Adi Air.Things are going out of our hands.We need to stop them.
Ad:Yes.You are right.
Adi and Pinky went to them.
P:Geet!
Adi and Pinky pulled her back.
P:Geet...calm down.
G:How can you ask me to calm down?Look at this man's attitude.He behaves as if he is my Boss.
Adi:You don't know who our Boss is.He is our Boss Geet.He is Maan sir.
Geet was shocked.
She looked at Maan in fear.Maan smirked and walked off.
G:Hey Babaji...How will I face him now?
P:You should have been careful Geet.
Geet was nervousEdited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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