IshRa FF:Saaya- Shadows of Love CH 1 pg 3

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hi everyone here is a new FF: Saaya-Shadows of Love
This FF of mine I had done way back on armaan n bharti from bhasker bharti I tweaked the story line n. Cs to make it fit YHM 
Please do comment i worked really hard on it hope u all like it n press like to be on pm list .


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Character sketch

The Iyer's :Before leap yr 2008

Bala Iyer : 24 yrs old    Mr. softy he is such a sweetheart  his values have made him a gentalman wether it's elders or women he is very respectful to them. Adorable n cute any girl who  meets him wants  to be with him but he only likes his sister best friend Simmi  which is also his best friend Raman's Sister  but hasn't confessed his love yet' even though he has  style and attiude  of the boy next door he literally is the boy next door...the Bhallas  live right across from them. He isba wonderful son and over protective loving brother he is willing to anything for his family and is very close to his little sisters  Ishita and Mihika  and his best friend Raman

Bala Iyer : 30yrs old   After leap yr 2014  He is not the  Mr. Softy he once was 6 yrs back he  has put up a wall of aggressiveness  and arrogance to outsiders and his Wife Simmi ...only loving and caring to his parents n sisters. For them he is the same old Bala but to the world he comes off a bit aloof n proud. Yet  one who once  was respectful  to   All now is  only Respectful to ones who deserve it . He will treat you the same  way you treat him n his family .  You are good to them he will be to  if you even be the slightest    Disrespectful or rude then he will give it back 10 folds.  
To his parents n the world living a happy married life perfect husband n loving father  but alone in the bedroom with simmi it's a whole 180 degrees  they are practically like strangers  . He is and is always worrying about Ishu  after all she been  has through  the past 6 yrs and is very proud of how she has Handel her self and her life and has only one goal.. goal to ruin the guy who ruined his sister life Aka his saala and enemy Raman Kumar hand els family business onnthe side  Works  at Times of India   as Chief Editor.

Ishita Iyer before leap 2008   : Young  innocent  shy 19 yr old girl lives in her Dream world' Believes everything is how it looks in books and movies , Believes in true love and Waiting for her Prince Aladdin to come on a magic Carpet and show her a whole new world, She is very Dependent on her Family espcaily her big bro Bala  who always pampers her, is very close with her Unna( Bro) her baby sister Mihika and best  Friend Simmi  .Is a good Daughter is willing  to do any for them has a soft  corner for Raman .

 Ishita Iyer After leap yr 2014  Young  successful 25 yr Confident, Strong ,Independent girl Basicaly the Woman Of Today, has learned  the ways of the  world the hard way and Realizes   what they say and shown in movies and books is just a bunch of !@#$%&* and Belives there is no such thing as True love 'has lost all fate in love  thanks to Raman Kumar Bhalla  . Has her own  event/Wedding  planning business  at a young age of 25 haon made a huge name in her career that big names  come to her wether it be from Flim industry or political parties .
 Even  more close to her bro, lil sis   Mihika    And best friend / Bhabi simmi she doesnt blame her for what happend  feels she should get punished for what her Raman bhaiya did . These  3 where the only ones who came through  when she need them'not on talking terms with her Uppa (father) or Bhallas . other than Her unna Bala and sister Mihika she  only lives for her life. Her attiude is just like in the real YHM  Ishu ,fun loving care free yetvwhwn needed knows how to give tit for tat and won't take anything hands down not a weak helpless woman by any means  . Lives life on her terms does what she wants to do , doesn't give a damn what the world thinks is a strict straight forward business woman.

Mihika iyer before leap:  17 yrs old youngest of 3 siblings  who is a total opposite of both her sister n bro she gives it how it is doesn't sugar coat a thing ... Very blunt says what she feels then thinks after saying it.   she is the stereotypical tom boy who hates to wear dresses and has a little bit of a punk feel  to her ... A total gundi  is one of the boys ... Not afraid to even beat guys up if needed ... she is the laughter track of the house who loves her sister and bhaiya     but most of all loves to annoy her Amma with her tomboy behavior.carefree and fun loving .

Mihika Iyer 23yrs old  with in the past 6 yrs many things have changed and Mihika is one of them .. She took a whole 180 degree turn she is no more the tomboy she once was. Now she is a sizzling B.I.T.C.H   aka BEAUTIFUL  INDIVIDUAL THAT CREATS HELL. She is hot and happening and knows it. She uses her looks and. Charm to get her way around things .  She has one goal and that is to  beat the living Hell out of that !@#$%&* Raman Kumar Bhalla and send him to jail and make him cry tears of  blood. After ll he did to her Akka . She knows her Akka is too nice to give payback to Bhallas for  what happend and really doesn't want anything to do with them .  So she has decided she will get revenge on her behalf and knows not one but 2 of the Bhalla brothers like her a lot . She works as a Managing Director for a matching making Company  called Rishta.com  so that innocent girls won't fall in love it the kaminey in the world .  Loves her bhaiya n Akka very much hates her bhabi Simmi ... hates her uppa ( dad )  for what he   did to ishita because of  him n mr. Bhalla  her Akka  went to Hell and Back'Supports her Akka in everyway Possible 


Mr.Iyer before leap: A loving caring father and husband a successful Rich business man        beause of pride and flaunting of success n wealth   he ruined ishitas   life .childhood friends with op bhalla

Mr.Iyer  After leap yr 2014 Very Proud of ishita and how she has turned around her life  and became successful even after all shes gone through ' dispointed in Mihika on how she has become  doesn't approve of her ways  and cant forgive himself for what he did to ishu . Still the how he was  di  of the family . Has nothing to do with his childhood friend mr. Bhalla

Mrs. Iyer before the leap:loving caring wonderful mother n wife has only one dream to get all her kids settle  down wants her ishu to get the best boy ever and wants a good bahu for the house.is willing to do anything for her kids

 Mrs.Iyer after leap: she is Still the same loving mother she was but as a wife is more aloof . Very upset t her husband for what he did. Hates the Bhallas . Proud of ishu, disappointed in Mihika  and her ways , feels for Simmi lucky have her as the bahu upset with how Bala behaves with Simmi .


Ruhi Ishita Iyer  Ishita's  5yr old Daughter 'she is her life that's why Isitha always says  I live for my life only' She loves  her mama very much and knows that she never leaves any stone unturned for her ' even though she doesn't say anything she wishes her papa was with them but her  Bala  Mamu  gives her  the love she miss



The Bhalla's
OP Bhalla  before leap: Mr. Iyers childhood friend and Ramans and simmi's  dad . He is a sucessful business man has a company export import business   funny very s jolly  guy who is very happy to have His best friend living across from him . They are as close as family for him. Loves his family and Raman is his pride knows he is immature but knows he will never disappoint him

OP Bhalla after leap:  not the jolly happy go lucky man he was is quite.reason being he lost his childhood friend due to his one mistake    and disappointed in  Raman  he has no face to show the Iyers . No longer accepts Raman as his son he has only two sons Mihir and Romi and a daughter Simmi who is baring the brunt of his sons mistakes. Never wants to see Raman again won't allow him in his  house.

Toshi Bhalla before leap:  happy go lucky jolly typical punjabi filmy mother.
Cute loving caring mother and wife. Spoils the apple of her eye Raman and always covers up his mistakes . 

Toshi Bhalla after leap : shows her bubblyness  her jolly attitude but it's all now just a show. Feels she some where failed as a mother she was wrong in spoiling Raman if she hadn't and slapped him for his mistakes instead . He wouldn't have let them down. Misses her son Raman though. Cares for Ishita and wants to meet her once again to apologies for what Raman did. 


Simmi Bhalla before leap: 20 yrs old hot and happening she is a fire cracker typical punjabi kuri ...actually a punjabi sherni ..  Ishita's  Partner in crime 'Best Friends yeah right more like sisters but She is very greatful to god that they are not cause she has a major crush on Bala  but doesn't know if  he likes her very close to her Bro Raman  and her friend Mihika ..

  Simmi Bhalla Iyer  After leap  2014. .. 26 yrs old    is  a  house  
wife and mother  married to the love of her life Bala. For the past 6 yrs . Was happly married for about 6 months till her brother ruined it for her.   Is a loving caring bahu who is more like a daughter then  a daughter in law , a wonderful mother to  her son  Yuvraj . To the world and family he is a dotting husband who pampers n showers his wife with lots of love and affection her old Bala, but  behind close doors in the bedroom is the opposite not a minute or chance Bala leaves to insult, mock, or sting her where it hurts. They are strangers in a room She sleeps on far right n he on far left n  yuvraj in the middle of them to Bala she is just a woman he can't stand . Desipite being right across from her  Mayaka she is not allowed to meet them . Bala made her choose between them . Hates getting punished for her brothers sins still has a small  ray of hope  that she will get back her old  Bala .. 
  Has  a lot more love and respect for Ishita after all that's happened to her at such a young age is always there  for her and loves Ruhi to the core. Hates how Mihika treats her.

Mihir Bhalla before  Leap:  21  Mr. Nice , loving caring easy going guy.. who lives  and enjoys every moment of life his cute flirty one liners will make any girl  be on cloud nine  cute mischief smile is a killer lol he respects all girls and is a true gentlemen very close to his sister Simmi and bro Raman can't stand his younger bro Romi  and secretly has a crush on Mihika .
 

Mihir Bhalla  After  Leap 2014 : 27 yrs old   exactly the same he was 6 yrs back still secretly in love with Mihika  successful  In his career he to works at ristha.com  ..doesn't at all approve r support what Raman did but misses him ... Upset at him for treating a girl like that n acting like a coward . Because of him he knows he has no chance in getting the girl he loves.

Romi Bhalla before leap: 19 yrs punjabi Munda flirt , playboy, the phrase bachna eh hasseno fits him perfectly. Hates college loves to party ... But is a sweet caring guy he try's to show he is a kamina but in real he is a sweet gentalman  has a huge crush on Mihika ...loves his Raman bhai can't stand Mihir .

Romi Bhalla after leap 25 yrs old mature , responsible carefree , respectful
Turned himself around doesn't want disappoint his parents . Wants to prove to all he is no less than Mihir ...flirty , caring n sweet no more a player ... Is a successful photographer .

Raman khumar Bhalla before leap: 24 yrs old just   out of college has huge ambitions, wants to be successful and powerful ...has a dream to be in top  guns in society wants to open his own company. Best friends with Bala ,He  is a male chauvinist who considers women as  objects of pleasure
 arrogant , tough   and edgy  man, who believes in taking risk and going for what he wants by hook or crook, looks he is gifted with , believes life is a game and has to be the best player doesn't mind playing with ppl or their emotions. A win at all cost type of guy.  heartthrob of all the girls in the building and college, flirt , charming sweet talker. Sees Ishita  as a shortcut to success .

Raman Kumar Bhalla after leap : 30 yrs old burdened with guilt regretting his sins he is a changed man due to karma and knocks in life he is not the same Raman he was . All though on the work front  he is tough, edgy , and ruthless .after much struggle in the cooperate world after finally getting success he feels its all meaningless ... No one to share it with very loney.. Misses his family wants to o back but with what face. Realized his love for Ishita but it's too late .. Is a workaholic since he has no one to go home to... Doesn't know where Ishita is or how she is or anything about her or her life. 

 Ashok Mehra 30 yrs  : Ishita's friend and coworker been there for her when she needed a shoulder cry on helped her become who she is today loves Ruhi as his own basically is a unofficial husband a father to them.  

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