ARSHI FF: Kabhi Jo Badal Barse (KJBB)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everyone I m gonna write a FF ... I m here from past 5 months and reading arshi's Many SS , OS and FF.. you all are great writer ... I know its very silly idea but it's roaming in my mind from past 3 days..so I decide to write it down... This is my first update and it's dedicate to my best friend and first friend of IF also my duffer GF😉😆 arshi_sush aka Shibani(shibu) my jhali princess (JULIET) so enjoy reading and really sorry for bored lecture 😆


Name of the story "KABHI JO BADAL BARSE"



TRAILOR

Samar: angel where are you going?? (he asked worriedly)
Khushi: yes bhai, I m going with Ayesha for shopping (she said with smile)
Samar: don't go today please I don't feel right (he said in concerned tone)
Khushi: nothing will happen with me bhai don't worry (she hugs his beloved brother and kiss on his checks)
Samar: ok take care yourself and come soon ok?
Khushi: ok mr. Samar (She teased him by calling him his name)

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Khushi: andhe ho kya..bloody nonsense
(are you blind)
Arnav: what the? Who the hell are you?
Khushi: rishta Mai tu hum tumhare baap lagte Han naam shanshaa
(in relation i'm your father and my name is shanshaa)
Arnav: stop blabbering bullshit
Khushi: you know tum kis se baat Kare ho India ke 5 top bussiness men Mai se ek ki beti Han hum
(you know who am i )
Arnav: or tum janti ho hum Koun han
(oh you know who i am)
Khushi: honge koi ... Lakin itne v strong nai hain Jo khushi sameer Gupta se panga lo
(whatever..but you are not that much strong to fight with khushi sameer gupta)
He is in shock and said " what the! whar are you saying? " (in mocked tone)


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Arnav: hey sweetheart see this is our wedding night and you are crying (evil smile appeared on his face)
Khushi: why are you doing all this with me,I don't know you I m sorry but it was a small thingthat doesnot mean you will give me this type of punishment please leave me,let me go to my brother.. he is waiting for me (her hands are ties with strand on chair and she was sobbing badly)

Samar: I will kill that bas***d arnav how dare he?
Khushi: bhai stop it..bhai stop..please don't make your hand dirty with his blood
Arnav: awhhh Samar you can respect your brother in law..you know now for all this your sister gonna pay (he said slyly)
Arnav start dragging khushi and khushi crying badly he throw her on bed...


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Anjali: what is all this bhai why are you hurting her? It's is not her mistake
Arnav: will talk about it soon choti not now please leave me alone for now
Anjali: Arnav bhai please don't do this with her she is so nice and innocent you know it very well,khushi is the best girl why you giving this punishment to her?
Arnav: I think you finished what you want to say now let me go (he ran away as far as he could)

Khushi saw her clothes on the floor and sobbing badly try to move but can't Arnav was on the top of her..he was heavilydrunk last night he forcefully make khushi his..he was so wild and leaves screatches on her body nd eat her like a hungry dog in half sleep state he was kissing her badly and she was crying and clutched the bed sheet for the suppport ...



End of the trailor

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CHARACTER SKETCH

GUPTA'S FAMILY

KHUSHI-bubly girl love her family very much khushi is very stubborn hot and sexy and attracting
Sanaya Irani
SAMAR-intelligent , smart and hearthrob men he is a playboy

SASHI-love her duaghter khushi very much he is father of khushi and Samar
Sanjay Batra
GARIMA-house wife mother of khushi and Samar and sweet understanding wife os sashi
Pyumori Mehta
RAIZADA FAMILY

ANJALLY-very sweet loving caring girl and innocent
Daljeet Bhanot
ARNAV-a angry men who loves her sister princess very much and he is a playboy a biggest playboy no one girl stands with him more than one night he is very loving caring brother if someone hurt his princess beloved sister anjally then he will become beast
Barun Sobti
guys in this story arnav and anjally parents are dead so thats means in raizada family is small only arnav and anjally for now

Tell me should I continue or not?😳
Howz it?😛
Hit tiny like button and before leaving ... Leaves your comments ...plzz😭😕
Thank you🤗

~~ALIZA~~

IMPORTANT NOTE-If you want future updates pm than buddy me (chamakchalloo)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haye mere romeoji a new story..
🥳congratulation and celebration🥳

app to pure k pure writer bangaye..me so happy for u ji..love u damn it..

prolouge sounds intresting ji..so arnav is a dark chatacter..🤢
(hey devimaiya hotwa ko app ne beast bana diya yanha..apke nicky mom ne kya kam paap karwa tha mujhse jo app ne v..abb hotwa ko gussa v karna padega..nahhiii..kitna paap karwayoge re mujh jese bholi bhali bache se)
so arnav is a ruthless arrogant business man who only loves her sister where as khushi is a bubbly girl...who loves her family alot where as
gupta family is enemy of arnav..dats why khushi ko arnav sata raha hai..he also forcefully married her nd also forcefully make her his..poor khushi..felt really bad for her..for her brother's deed arnav doing all this to an innocent soul...bt why??( here hotwa is heartless )
hope as the story progress arnav changes for good and repent for his horrible deed..😡😡
egarly waiting for chap1..
continue soonwa ji😃😃..till den hello hii bye bye

ps- aww..thanx romeoji for dedicate this first update to me..haye me blushing ji..chaliye my Akdu singh raizada app v thoda muskuralijiye..
love the banner ji.. nd also the charcter sketch..jst amazing👏👏..loved it

Edited by arshi_sush - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW NEW STORY FROM YOU CONGRATULATION



GOD BLESS YOU AND YOUR WORKS SISTER



NOW MY COMMENT



NICE CHARACTER SKETCH LOVED IT



IS IT DARK STORY?



OMG ARNAV SO ARROGANT WHAT HAPPEN TO HIM



POOR KUSHI WHAT HAPPEN SHE IS IN THIS PLACE



WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE UPDATE SOON





Edited by vijiasr08 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Didu😃
awesome start didu
so arnav hate khushi n gupats very much n i think the reason is anjali
khushi loved her brother n family very much
feeling very bad for khushi
she got punishment from arnav without her any fault
arnav is such a beast
1st he married khushi forcfully n now also make her his forcfully
so arnav n anjali had no one in their family
samer is caring brother
the charecter are good
continue soon di
Edited by arshirupa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good start...
lots of complications..
pm me when update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waah nice prologue but i'm a little confused
Please di clear the confusion soon 😊

Bst of luck for the new one👍🏼


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Edited by Krishika209 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start best of luk for new story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice dear
lovely prologue
pm me also
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was full action, emotion packed prologue.. looking forward to read more.. HAPPY WRITING 😃


do add me in your pm list.. thanks 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting prologue
Continue soon
pm me pls

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