Ashlok new os-bathroom wala emotional romance

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Ashlok os-Bathroom wala emotional romance...




Ok very non-serious work by me...don't beat me after reading...just for fun...i know ur gutter minds demand more...but now u have to bear this one...and its emotional because i wrote most of the os's according to drama sequel or upcoming scenes ...



Because of some problem with her washroom shower...astha went to use shlok's washroom ...s
he checked the whole room... and when her mind was sure that shlok is no where in the room...
astha entered the washroom ...hang her towel on the stand and then she started removing her sari...thinking that ...Thank GOD ... khudoos is not here...


now she started unhooking her blouse...her back was facing washroom door...when suddenly the washroom door opened with a loud sound and she turned immediately and rushed to the nearby wall...with her back against the wall...

Astha:aap yahan kya kar rahen hain???...don't u have any manners???...

He was shlok standing at the door ...in his vest and pants...holding towel in his hand...

On astha's question his shocked expression changed into a smirk...

Shlok:yeh question tu mujhe tum se karna chahiye...mrs. astha shlok agnihotri...

The way shlok said...mrs. astha SHLOK agnihotri...it was like he is showing his right on her...

She was finding no words to handle the situation...her eyes were rolling here and there on the floor...only what she managed to say was...'shlok'...please go outside...I have to take bath as my shower has got some problem...

Shlok hanged his towel and locked the door...with a naughty smile on his face...

Astha seeing his action...got more nervous and shouted...what is this nonsense shlok??????...open the door...she took a step forward but with the thought that her blouse hook is half open she bounce back in the wall...dekhiye shlok...mujhe janey dijiye...

But shlok approached her slowly with a smirk on his face and placed his hands on the wall trapping astha between him and the wall ...

Shlok:arey kya astha...bath tu tumhein bhi lena hai aur mujhe bhi ... let's have our bath together...

Astha's heart beat paced a million times when she heard his shameless intention...Astha:how dare u???who r u to say this shameless thing to me...leave this washroom now...otherwise...

Shlok nahi tu kya karo gi...with his fingers he traced lines from crook of her neck to her chin ...making her to shiver...nahi tu ??...haan bolo kya karo gi...he removed his vest and hanged on the hook on one side...

Astha felt that she will die today...it was getting impossible for her to bear this torture anymore...'shlok jayiye yahan se...nahi tu... main aap ki jaan le loon gi...she almost shouted...


Shlok burst into laughter hearing this... .and said meri jaan lo gi...but meri jaan leney se pehley uss cockroach ki jaan tu le lo ...jo tumhari taraf aa raha hai...

Her eyes popped out on seeing the cockroach an inch away from her...she screamed ...coackroach...and hugged shlok tightly...pleading him...please mujhe bacha lijiye shlok...mujhe cockroaches se bohat darr lagta hai please kuch kariye na...

Shlok...main kuch karon ga tu tum meri jaan le lo gi na...he smiled...


Astha :mazaq mat kariye na shlok...please kuch kijiye...her rapid breathing against his bare chest was indicating that she will faint ...if shlok will not help him...

Shlok pressed cockroach under his footwear and kicked the cockroach in the water draining system...making her relax...

Shlok:aik cockroach se tu itna darti ho tu meri jaan kya lo gi...


Astha:now a bit relaxed again said confidently...iss cockroach ki nahi lekin aap ki jaan tu main zaroor le loon gi...but she stopped when she realized that his hands were on her bare back...and she was hugging him sooo tightly...she immediately break the hug...and was about to leave when shlok pulled her back...mrs. astha shlok agnihotri u cann't leave...bhool gayi we have to take bath together...he smiled...

Astha was getting frustrated at his tortures now...she shouted ...stop this nonsense...i m fed of ur tortures now... ...when u dont have answer for my question...when u cannot decide that u love me or hate me...then why all the time u play this game of romantic husband...what u want from me...my body or what... look i m standing here..right infront of me...u can do what u want as i have the label of mrs. shlok agnihotri in my life...


Hearing this big statement from her mouth ...he was shocked and angry...like his heart whispered that how can u think sooo low of me astha...i m your husband...

He became serious all of a sudden...and slowly he hooked her blouse completely and moved toward the washroom door without speaking a single word and was about to unlock the door when astha grasped his hand and made him to turn...

Shlok was totally confused on her action...

Astha stared him in anger and started hitting him on the chest ...

Astha:main aap se bohat ziada nafrat karti hoon...phir kyun hamesha aap kuch na kuch aisa kartey hain shlok ke main aap ko pyaar karney par majboor ho jati hoon ...akhir kyun...???she was crying now...but continuously hitting his chest...kyun nahi keh saktey aap ke aap mujhse pyaar kartey ho...ab boltey kyun nahi ???...kyun aisey chup hain... haan...kuch tu kahiye na ...meri bardhast ab khatam ho chuki hai shlok...astha hugged him tightly but her questions not ended...

Astha:main janti hoon aap bohat pyaar kartey ho mujhse shlok...phir kya cheez aap ko rhok rahi hai...she looked into his eyes for some response...

With sooo much pain in her eyes she said...nahi kahein gey na aap...aap ko koi farak nahi pardhta na...main mar bhi jaon tu ...

Shlok placed his hand on her mouth and hugged her tightly as it was difficult for him to see sooo much pain in her eyes...

Shlok :i love u astha...i love u sooo much ...and never speak about death again ok...i will not let anything happen to u...main tumhein khud se door kabhi nahi honey doonga...samjhi tum...tum sirf meri ho ...sirf meri...

Astha:say it once again shlok ...looking into my eyes...

Shlok:i love u astha...he said looking in her eyes...and wiped her tears...

A smile appeared on her face ...pehley nahi bol saktey they aap ...

Shlok:ab tu bhol diya na...

Astha:khadoos...akdu...kahin ke...saying this he hugged more tightly...

Shlok:ab tu koi problem nahi haina mrs.astha shlok agnihotri ko merey saath bath leney mein...

Astha blushed and asked...kahin aap ne i love u ...iss liye tu nahi bola ke aap merey saath???...


Shlok's smile changed into anger ...he said...this is second time u r hurting me so much astha by your words...how can u think so low of me...do you thing i ever tried to take advantage...if i want something like that...i can get it by hook or by crook...u know very well...he was moving towards her ...and she was moving backwards ...when astha slipped and in trying to avoid fall she hold shlok's hand and result... both landed in the bath tub ...astha on his top...

Astha:i know...u can never do this...the moment u hooked my blouse ...u proved that u cannot even think like that...but main sirf aap ki hi hoon shlok...she smiled and kissed his lips...her hands wrapped around his body... making him more aggressive and demanding ...

Shlok's hand moved towards her blouse hook...and he unhooked it slowly...saying that ab tu mrs. shlok agnihotri ko mr.shlok agnihotri se koi problem nahi...

Astha:agar mr. shlok agnihotri ko i love u kehney me aaj problem nahi hai tu mujhe bhi ...apney akdu ke saath bath leney mei koi problem nahi hai...she said locking her lips again with his...


And what happened next...

http://www.flowers-magzine.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/2-Roses.jpg

Arey wohi jo hona tha...mr. and mrs. shlok agnihotri ka hot hot bath...


but kaisey...

wo imagine kartey raho...

that how and where shlok gave her kisses???and did astha kissed her akdu in return???

who applied shampoo and soap to whom???

how they take bath in each others arms???

was it a bollywood style bath or hollywood style bath???

sooo lagey raho ashlokians...keep thinking...




Ok chalo bata deti hoon... what happened then...

After unhooking her blouse...he unhooked her bra...removed them...and ..caressed her back...pressing her more against his hard body...

Now shlok applied soap on her milky white body..also kissing her body...making her to gasp ...his touch was creating electric sparks through her body...

'Shlok'...she maoned...but his hands gently moved towards her navel...giving her more torture...

Astha hold his hand and bite his hand to stop his torture...and then she turned and started giving him love bites all over his hard body...

Then she applied shampoo and soap to his husband ...and soon their left over clothings were away from them...removing all barriers between them today...

After their hot bath ...shlok entered their room lifting astha in her arms... both were wrapping towels around them...

Shlok made her to sit infront of mirror...and kissed her shoulder...saying ...today i came to know u a tigress mrs. astha shlok agnihotri...she blushed...

But when shlok saw himself in mirror...he was shocked to see that much intense red marks on his chest ...throat and even his ears, face and lips...he spoke spontaneously...u r totally a beast astha..what have u done to me???..how will i face everyone now especially my baba ...and kavya???...

Astha giggled...and said kavya will think that her chachi beat his chachu today...

Shlok:kavya is not that stupid ...she knows that no one beats on lips atleast...




hope u will enjoy this...







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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok sweety first thing i simply adore ur all os
and the vn in which you use pics i love those.

now coming to this

awww
simply loved it
😳

please do try to elaborate each thing in person 😆

wow lovey dovey hotwa update
i wwish to read lot many os frm u

love u muah
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres


awesome meerab
loved it
emotional romance turned into hot hot bath😆
poor shlok how will he show his face😆
keep writing dear👏
Edited by niki795 - 12 years ago
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waiting impatiently thanks in advance
superb it was worth waiting love ashlok bathroom romance thanks for writing this os
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but when are you going to update
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Originally posted by: niki795



but when are you going to update

typing now di...will update in one hour...
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Originally posted by: meerab...

typing now di...will update in one hour...



1hr hogaya 😆
lol
take your time
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Originally posted by: niki795



1hr hogaya 😆
lol
take your time

sorry di making u wait...but thora sa aur time de do...actually guests coming and i m typing in breaks...😆...typing ...rushing here and there...totally confused...di if u r getting late...tu aap morning me read kar lena...don't spoil ur sleep time na dear😳🤗...reserve tu aap ne kar diya hai na...😛

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