Mehbeer SS 'For All eternity'(chapter-2 updated pg-5)

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||FOR ALL ETERNITY||



CHARACTERS SKETCH-

Abeer Malhotra- A mischievous,hot, most popular boy and lead singer of the college band. The only son of famous industrialist Kuber molhotra. Every girl drools over his charm but he isn't interested in them because he is waiting for his someone special till then filrting with girls is ok for him. He is good friend for all his friends with whom he always use to enjoy,bunking classes etc. But but but... the problem with him is that he can't control his anger at the time..but loves his loved ones.
Meher Purohit-Epitome of beauty with brain who belongs to a very well known family,loves her mom and dance.She can do anything for her mom.she is an open minded girl but knows her limit.she is headstrong yet sensitive and emotional but practical. And doesn't believe in pyar-mohbbat.
Mayank Sharma- childhood friend of abeer and his best buddy. He is rich,hot,fun loving and abeer's partner in every crime . His favourite past time is teasing Nupur( his girlfriend)
Nupur Agrawal- She is a modern,hot,frank girl. Loves mayank with all her heart but hates when he filrts other girls...;->
shasha- mutual friend of abeer,Mayank and Nupur,Naughty,pretty and fun loving but very conscious about her looks everytime,loves filrting with hot boys..around..:-*

PART-1
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4542811&TPN=3

PART-2
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4542811&TPN=5
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Prologue ...
Abeer's POV
Oo come on mahn! How can these girls flate on every boy at first meeting only because of his looks . Okay I know I am too hot to handle ;) but still can't they see I was with some other girl yesterday or before? Why don't they mind ? Even if I don't show much interest in them but that doesn't mean , I'm not straight, lol...I am dude . the fact is that I'm waiting for my dream girl , who will love only me and will be only mine . She will be beautiful inside out , not like other girls . I know it's quite filmy but that's the definition of love for me . sometimes I wander when will she come , when will my 'Awargi' stop .but let memake this clear the day she comes dare not any guy even eye her . This friend of mine (Mayank) calls me a playboy who remains single in attempt to make every girl feel like she belongs to me . Well maybe he is right but only until that dreamgirl of mine comes , not after that :-P
Meher's POV
People say a person has seven faces , nonsense, I don't believe in it here I can't even handle two then how do u expect a human to manage seven . My world revolves around two things , nah! , not my Bf or pink nailpaint it's my mamma and dance . Unfortunately both of them are each other's enemies . Mamma is a sweetheart but she believes that girls aren't suppose to dance or wear any revealing clothes but I understand her after all it's not at all easy for a single mother to raise two children specially a girl in this society .I also wear skirts and crop tops but of course not in my mamma's presence Maybe god's quite impressed with me that's why I've got a scholarship for pune's biggest college S.C.O.P.E and hey hey hey Ive got a solution too as the dearest princi has already given me the college's dance team's secretary. Bhopal to pune let's see how this journey goes. So S.C.O.P.E beware the Storm's on its way ...

So guys this is a collaboration between Ritvi and me aka Priya aka telefever . This is our first fan fiction so please excuse us if we made any mistakes . Do let us know who all are interested and of course do comment ;-)
Edited by tellyfever - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's really interesting.Is Mayank and Nupur any chance interested by Mayank and Nupur from Miley jab hum tum??
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shwadhin

It's really interesting.Is Mayank and Nupur any chance interested by Mayank and Nupur from Miley jab hum tum??

thank you so much.hehehe you caught us dear ;) .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tellyfever

thank you so much.hehehe you caught us dear ;) .

😆...nice one, plz continue 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it as i always wanted to see our Mehbeer in the college nd how did they end up loving each other nd being together despite of having so different personalities nd minds...
Would love to read it, a little request, (please don't mind it) if u can keep it a little close to bd like involving the scenes we have seen in title song but they were not shown with the stories behind...
Go on nd I'm sure everyone will love it...
Keep writing nd rocking...
Best of luck
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: samKazam

Loved it as i always wanted to see our Mehbeer in the college nd how did they end up loving each other nd being together despite of having so different personalities nd minds...

Would love to read it, a little request, (please don't mind it) if u can keep it a little close to bd like involving the scenes we have seen in title song but they were not shown with the stories behind...
Go on nd I'm sure everyone will love it...
Keep writing nd rocking...
Best of luck

Thanks , it means a lot 😆. And don't worry we'll not disappoint u .Stay tuned
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: samKazam

<font color="#9900cc" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Loved it as i always wanted to see our Mehbeer in the college nd how did they end up loving each other nd being together despite of having so different personalities nd minds...</font>

<font color="#9900cc" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Would love to read it, a little request, (please don't mind it) if u can keep it a little close to bd like involving the scenes we have seen in title song but they were not shown with the stories behind...</font>
<font color="#9900cc" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Go on nd I'm sure everyone will love it...</font>
<font color="#9900cc" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Keep writing nd rocking...</font>
<font color="#9900cc" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Best of luck</font>



thank you so much...dear!! And also thanks for your suggestion we will surely try to add the scenes of BD tittle song...keep reading.
Edited by ritvi23 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ritvi its so beautiful...abeer as always charismatic and sadu meher...but she loves dance...interesting...do update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: chemgirl

Ritvi its so beautiful...abeer as always charismatic and sadu meher...but she loves dance...interesting...do update soon

Tysm dear 😃 stay tuned
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