MehBeer Collab SS || The Fault in our Stars || Chap 8 Pg26 - Page 9

Originally posted by: samKazam

You both did fantastic job !!!!!

1st that saree drape scene, beautifully written nd even i imagined Mehbeer on that...

2ndly when Abeer scolded tunnu, it immediately takes me to season 1 of BD...

3rd, i love when they look into each other's eyes...

Mehbeer in the most romantic city of the world, definitely something exceptional nd awesome is coming to our way through your pens so I'm very much excited for the next chap...

Please continue this it's a request...

You both are rocking!!!!

Fabulously portrayed, awesomely written, defined you two!!!

Wana see some love nd romance in Paris ;) :p

Keep it Up !!!!!

Finally U update it
Kabse wait kar rahi thi...
Aww I see "Pizza Girl" & "Abla Naari Abeer"😛 are just trying to mess everything because they they had been cheated by whom they used to "love"...
Update was Fantastic
Thanks For this long update
But seriously yaar I was waiting for this Update.
And that "saari drape" scene was beautifully written
Ohhh Meher is missing her "Jaanu" poor girl
Now you have managed every characters part so well that I always imagine that this things are playing in front of my eyes *Dreamer me*😛
And I m in love with Mr & Mrs. Kuber Malhotra.
Such a darling they are❤️
Awww They finally land to The city of Love
[I wish they rekindle their love]
but wait what is heppening
Their Physical Attraction is on heights🤣
You nailed it.
And you ended d chappy right there where I won't love to wait.


Their POVs are great
"My Jaanu" & "I m telling U my baby is unique piece"
Some facts that they are accepting that they belongs to eachother❤️

Jyada ho gaya nah😕

Originally posted by: .shivi396

Finally U update it
Kabse wait kar rahi thi...
Aww I see "Pizza Girl" & "Abla Naari Abeer"😛 are just trying to mess everything because they they had been cheated by whom they used to "love"...
Update was Fantastic
Thanks For this long update
But seriously yaar I was waiting for this Update.
And that "saari drape" scene was beautifully written
Ohhh Meher is missing her "Jaanu" poor girl
Now you have managed every characters part so well that I always imagine that this things are playing in front of my eyes *Dreamer me*😛
And I m in love with Mr & Mrs. Kuber Malhotra.
Such a darling they are❤️
Awww They finally land to The city of Love
[I wish they rekindle their love]
but wait what is heppening
Their Physical Attraction is on heights🤣
You nailed it.
And you ended d chappy right there where I won't love to wait.


Their POVs are great
"My Jaanu" & "I m telling U my baby is unique piece"
Some facts that they are accepting that they belongs to eachother❤️

Jyada ho gaya nah😕

wow amazing update

fab update

wonderful updte..
loved it..
continue soon..
thnks a lot 4 d pm...

If ever season 3 is made this would be a perfect story it has all the ingredients humour ,drama ,romance kindly continue 😊

Waiting for next chap ...

SUPERB UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY AWSOME AND NYC ONE.
FULL OF FUN WAS THERE AND I ENJOYED A LOT WHILE READING IT.
MEHER ANTICS WERE SO FUNNY.
REALLY SHE IS DRAMA QUEEN .
ABEER IS NOT LESS HER. THE SWEETNESS WHICH HE SHOWED AT HIS INLAWS HOUSE WAS AWESOME.
LOVED THE WAY HOW ABEER SUPPORTED MEHER AND SCOLDED TANNU. REALLY ABEER IS NYC GUY.
LOVE'S THEIR BEDROOM PART SO MUCH.
WOW MEHER IS BEEN EFFECTED BY ABEER CLOSENESS..
AWESOME THEY WENT TO PARIS.
NOW MORE FUN WILL BE THERE.
END WAS AWESOME WHERE ABEER GIFTED MEHER A LINGERIE. AN AAYEGA MAZZA.
WAITING FOR NEXT PART FOR MORE FUN.
UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😊

Originally posted by: sandhYA_123

SUPERB UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY AWSOME AND NYC ONE.
FULL OF FUN WAS THERE AND I ENJOYED A LOT WHILE READING IT.
MEHER ANTICS WERE SO FUNNY.
REALLY SHE IS DRAMA QUEEN .
ABEER IS NOT LESS HER. THE SWEETNESS WHICH HE SHOWED AT HIS INLAWS HOUSE WAS AWESOME.
LOVED THE WAY HOW ABEER SUPPORTED MEHER AND SCOLDED TANNU. REALLY ABEER IS NYC GUY.
LOVE'S THEIR BEDROOM PART SO MUCH.
WOW MEHER IS BEEN EFFECTED BY ABEER CLOSENESS..
AWESOME THEY WENT TO PARIS.
NOW MORE FUN WILL BE THERE.
END WAS AWESOME WHERE ABEER GIFTED MEHER A LINGERIE. AN AAYEGA MAZZA.
WAITING FOR NEXT PART FOR MORE FUN.
UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😊