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Amazing prologue continue soon

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Originally posted by: .shivi396

This is Amazing Guys🤗
Love-Hate Saga.
Continue plz
Kya hua serial khatam ho raha hai.
I will be here #Forever.
I m not going to leave this Forum.
#Mehbeer_Forever


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Guys excited for next chapter...??????
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Chapter 2 : Mission Impossible

Meher's POV

Ahan...!!! Mansion n all... Impressive... Mr. Malhotra has a great taste... Only if I wanted to marry you abeer... Tsk tsk... I don't want to marry anyone... Not now... Ohh let's face it... I don't know if I ever will want to marry. I push my thoughts away and enter the mansion. Ringing the doorbell and within seconds it is opened by a servant of course. Uniform... Again plus 1 Mr. Malhotra. I enter only to be greeted by mom in law to be... Which she never will be... Haha... She looks at me - from head to toe and she is shocked. First step successful...!!! I mentally pat myself for the brilliant idea of wearing shorts and a crop top. Perfect attire for the perfect day. Visiting my in laws. Ohh I love it...!!!
"Arrey meher beta... Come come... Have a seat..." said aunty.
Ohh so she finally recovered from the shock. Oh god how I hope she doesn't like my dressing sense and starts giving me negative points... Way to go Meher Purohit.
"Thank you aunty... I hope I didn't disturb..." I said sweetly.
"No no... Not at all... You are gonna our family beta..."
Ohh... No no no...
I smile at her and a servant offers me a glass of water. I drink it and planning my next step in my mind.
"Aunty... Actually I was wondering if I could meet the interior designer..." I said.
"But meher... The interior is already done... Come I will show you abeer's room... You let me know if you want any addition or changes..." said Madhvi aunty.
"No aunty... I'm talking about the place where abeer n I will shift after marriage... We won't be living here you know... Plus I love the decor here..." I say... In a sugar coated tone.
"You won't be living here...?? What...??"
"Aunty abeer might have told you I guess... Its better he tells you about this... But being newly weds, we would surely like to have our own place and a lot of privacy... We have a lot of getting to know each other thing..." I say as it is nothing.
Its working...!!!! I can see it on her face... Aunty isn't liking it.
"Aunty is there a problem...??" I ask innocently.
"What would you like to have beta..???" she asks.
Ohh... So ignoring me... Very bad aunty...!!! Ha ha...
"Nothing... Where is abeer...?? He told me he wants me to chose the engagement ring... So..." I again say.
"He must come back any minute..." Aunty replies with a smile this time.
Mumma's boy... Is it...??
"Ohh look whose here...??"
I smirk on listening this... Yes yes... I know the owner of this voice.

Abeer's POV

"Ohh look whose here...??"
I say as I enter the house. What is she doing here...?? Planning or plotting...?? Or trying to be a star plus bahu..???
She turns around to her right and smiles at me.
S.M.I.LE. like really...?? Liar...
I look at her properly and my eyes widen in shock.
What is she wearing...?? Damn... She isn't supposed to look that hot n sexy... Stop it abeer...!!! Think... Focus... She wore this to your house in front of your mother. How sick...!!
"Abeer thank god you are here..." Mom say and I look at her with a smile on my face.
"All good mom..???" I ask examining mom's not so contended face.
"Actually I told your mom about us shifting out after marriage... Unintentionally... I thought you actually told them..." Meher interrupts.
Aaahh... Look at her face... Acting as if she is the most innocent person on earth... Innocence ka 'I' bhi nahi hai madam mein...
What...??? Shifting out...??? Ohhh... New plan...??
I got you Ms. Liar Pants.
I burst out laughing and they look at me as if I'm some joker. But mind it... I will be the sexiest n cutest joker ever... Blame my dashing looks and awesome genes..
"Mom she got you... Ha ha..." I tell mom.
The two women in front of me... Well they both are shocked... For different reasons of course.
"Abeer what are you saying...??" Mom asks me.

Meher's POV

"Abeer what are you saying...??" Aunty asks him.
I think this guy has gone mad... Why will someone laugh at such a situation...???
"Mom... Meher us kidding... She is too funny sometimes..." He says.
Huh...?? I'm funny..??? I'm offended... Well being funny isn't bad... Is it..??? Why do I feel he is mocking me...??? Jerk...
"What..??" I say unable to control myself.
"Cmon baby... Stop it now..." he tells me.
Baby... Baby my foot... I hate you malhotra...
"Mom she is not what she looks like... And she is exact opposite of it... You know she is a member of a NGO also... Aaj dimag khali hoga, toh she played a prank on you..." Abeer told his mom.
Aunty smiles with relief and hugs me. I hug her back, constantly glaring at this smartass.
"Abeer show her your room and I will some send some snacks upstairs..." Aunty said and walked away.
I look at abeer with a "you didn't win yet" look.
"I never thought you will stoop that low..." He sighs looking at me.
Ohh... Did I disappoint you Malhotra...?? Like I care.
"Now you are using my mom... Keep her away from your dirty games... We people have a class to maintain... And dare you play your cheap stunts on my family..."
Cheap..??? He called me cheap n unclassy... How dare he..?? How could he..??
"You call these cheap stunts...?? Look at yourself Abeer Malhotra... You are cheap... Absolutely no shame and self respect... Let me remind you that I... I rejected you 2 years back and you are still after me... Why..?? May be because you couldnt get anything out of that going around affair thing...?? Or is it Just because you couldn't take me to your bed that time...??? A chick rejected you... So are you feeling like a loser..?? Huh...?? Have some self-respect... Bhool gaye poore college ke saamne you made a fool out of yourself... I ditched you..." I tell him and laugh.
"Get out..." He yelled at me.
I walk out of that place feeling nothing.
All those memories coming back to me...

Abeer's POV

"You call these cheap stunts...?? Look at yourself Abeer Malhotra... You are cheap... Absolutely no shame and self respect... Let me remind you that I... I rejected you 2 years back and you are still after me... Why..?? May be because you couldnt get anything out of that going around affair thing...?? Or is it Just because you couldn't take me to your bed that time...??? A chick rejected you... So are you feeling like a loser..?? Huh...?? Have some self-respect... Bhool gaye poore college ke saamne you made a fool out of yourself... I ditched you..." She laughed.

Her words pierced my heart... Really bad this time. Like being stabbed by millions of daggers again and again. The girl I loved once thinks that I'm nothing but a womaniser... A Casanova who just wanted to get into her pants. Now she has another misconception that I am marrying her so that i could get her in my bed. Does she think i am that cheap...??? Or its just her dirty mind...?? Well..Let her think whatever she wants to... Who cares... She doesn't matter to me now.. She is nothing but a bloody bi*ch... She thinks the earth revolves around her and she is the only girl left on earth... I will teach you a lesson girl... You will get to know what i am... That too really soon.
"Get out..." I yell at her.
She leaves and I stare at the main door for as long as I can remember.
"I have not forgotten anything Meher... All those harsh memories are still alive. Still Alive... The wounds are still there... And you will have to pay for it..." I mutter and come to my bedroom upstairs.
I sit on the bed closing my eyes. Those memories running back to me. The wounds turning more deeper and painful.

FlashBack:

"Its not working anymore Abeer, i can't handle this anymore, i need a break from you..."
"Meher, baby.. Don't say that.. Tell me whats wrong...?? Have I done anything...?? I will mend everything... Just tell me..." I told her, not ready to let her go.
"It's not about you doing something, i just don't want to continue this any further.. Try to understand for god sake..."
"Meher Please.. I love you..."
I tell her and she walks away. As if she feels nothing. I don't know. Something is terribly wrong.

All was not well between me and Meher. I don't know why but she wanted to end our relationship of 4 months... Ok... A "not so serious" relationship... It started that way. And now comes the worst part, i didntt even know what was wrong. I did not hurt her in anyway... I was sure of it... Nor did we have a fight. But she had changed. Only if i had known her reasons and problem if any.

"Abeer Yaar.. Ye ladki Meher mujhe kuch theek nahi lagti, if she wants to break-up let her go" Appendix told me the same evening.
Appendix was my friend from school. I know him for like 10 years now.
"Oye.. Don't say anything about my Meher... She is one in a million" I told appendix, playfully hitting the back of his head.
"Abeer...(he sighed) I didn't plan to tell you this directly.. But kal raat maine use ek ladke sath dekha tha.. You know what i mean..."
"Shup up Appendix, koi friend hoga..." I clarified his misunderstanding.
Meher isn't the one to go behind me and cheat me. Okay... I get it.. This wasn't a serious relationship once, but now I love her... And I even tell her this every now and then.
"She almost kissed him..." he said and i punched him hard.
I just couldn't bear anyone saying anything about Meher. I trust her and cknow what she is really like... I know her the way no one does... But now I needed to show Appendix what the real meher is like and how much she loves me. I found her in the corridor walking towards the classroom, she was about to enter the class when i grabbed her hand and dragged her towards the cafeteria. She was confused but I was enjoying this. Few minutes and we will witness a moment which we will cherish for the rest of our life.
Everyone was watching us. Centre of attraction...!! Even better...
I went on my knees pulling out a ring i had specially bought for her.
"Ms Meher Purohit.. I love you more than my life. Will you go out with me..?? Will you be my girlfriend..??" i asked her with a cute smile.
She laughed. I thought she is surprised and hence gave such a reaction. Shockingly I was wrong. A guy slid his hands around her waist and pulled her close, making her giggle again.
"Baby, you never told me about this lover boy of yours..." he asked before kissing her cheek.
"Abeer.. what is all this..?? Don't make a fool of yourself... I already told you i am over you... And I am no more interested in you... But you probably didn't get it... So here meet my new boyfriend Arjun..." she said kissing him on cheek.

FlashBack Ends.

Such an idiot I was that time... Falling head over heels in love with her. Giving my heart to a girl who was heartless herself. I fell for her and thought she loves me for real. For her, I was just another addition in her already long "BoyFriend List". She insulted me in front of the entire college. To makje it worse, Cheated on me with that dumb guy. She fooled me so easily... Claps...!! And someone please throw rotten eggs and tomatoes at me... Because i gave her the power to play with me and my heart. If I hadn't let her in, she wouldn't have made fun of my love. She rejected me and broke my heart that mercilessly, that I don't believe in love anymore. I feel bitter and empty... Why..?? Because of that girl... I hate you meher purohit... I hate you so much ...
But baby you don't know what Abeer Malhotra is... Mera pyaar dekha tha na... Ab meri nafrat dekhna... Jo tumne kiya wohi tumhare saath hoga... Nafrat ka badla nafrat... Dhokhe ka badla dhokha... Dard diya tha... Ab dard hi milega... You insulted me in front of few hormonal driven crazy teenagers but I will insult you in front of the entire world... My game is that big...!! And the Grand finale be on our Wedding Day. It will be a memorable day for me... But for her... Well for her it will not be less than a doomsday... You tell me how about ditching your newly-wedd wifey on the Mandap..??? Marrying her and then ditching her right there... In front of the whole world... Sounds Cool... No..?? So that's the first and last step of Mission 'Destroy Meher'. Great Plan Abeer...!! You rock...!!!

Meher's PoV

Life is a strange thing i tell you. Unexpected. Unpredictable. And sometimes you just can't do anything. However hard you may try, some things are bound to happen.Hey do i sound like a bechari abla naari, hindi movie style...?? Don't even think that haan...?? Meher Purohit isn't the one who will cry over her destiny. She writes her own fortune. Well at this moment it is not about writing my fortune, it's about destroying someone else's. Haha... What a dialogue baby...!!! You are a superstar. Muahh. I self pat myself, looking into the mirror. You look hot Meher. Even in this bridal attire. Orange. Eeeww... I can't tell you how much i hate this colour. But that cheesy hubby-to-be, i tell you he knows black magic. My mom is under his spell completely. He told her about orange being his favourite colour, And guess what...??? Surprise Surprise... This heavy orange lehenga on this sweet li'l girl. Uff... Leave it. By the way, i did check my birth certificate. And to my surprise, she is my real mom. Lol.. ok lame joke.. I know..
I wonder what Abeer would be thinking about me... That i gave up...?? I got defeated..?? Not even in his dreams. He very well knows what is coming his way... I hope he does... I am gonna ruin you Malhotra...!!! You have messed up with a wrong girl. Just wait and watch. Get ready to be slayed. I will make your life hell. The sexy devil is coming to your house baby. Can't just wait. Damn Excited...!!!!

Abeer's POV

Just few hours, and my plan would be successful. I wonder what her reaction would be...??? I would love to see her cry. That's my personal choice though. I wouldn't mind something even worse. Ahh.. Abeer stop this habit of pre-analysing things. The real fun is when it's all unexpected.
I wonder how she would be looking in that orange lehenga and a smile comes to my face. Shit.. That was not a smile.. okay..?? Umm.. it was a smirk imagining her condition after my master plan comes out. Not a smile at all. Mind it. I sit in the mandap thinking all this. Then i take out my phone.

"Hey Baby
Dying to see you my hottie!
Come fast
Can't wait.
Love you
Lots of kisses.."

I message her. I really can't wait you see. And then the moment came. i saw her descending down the stairs. My heart skipped a beat. Beautiful. She looked like an angel. Nooo... Get a grip Abeer...!!! What are you thinking...?? Moron. Idiot. She is a devil in disguise. Focus. Focus.

Meher's POV.

"Hey Baby
Dying to see you my hottie!
Come fast
Can't wait.
Love you
Lots of kisses.. "

Lots of kisses..?? Die in hell you dirty-minded moron. Cheapo... I chose to ignore him n his sms. Well one thing is still bugging me. It's been a month since we got hooked but i still don't know, why the hell is he marrying me. Getting physical thing is okay, i mean, but he would get any girl for that.. he is hot after all, why would he marry me...!!! Is there any secret behind all this...?? Before i could stress my brain more, Some stupid giggling girls come to take me. Look at their faces...!!! Why the hell are they so happy...!!! Idiots. Whatever. It's time to go to Mr. Malhotra.

As i come down, my eyes search for him. There he was looking at me all mesmerised. Though i am not surprised. He can't resist my charm ofcourse. I smirk. Soon i am sitting besides him in the mandap. And then he intentionally touches the side of my waist. I shiver. And don't know why but it seemed he shivered too. But i can't really say. I give him dirty look and he winks. I roll my eyes and look to the other side.

Abeer's POV

They make her sit beside me. She was giving me weird looks and i thought of irritating her. Then then i remembered about my trump card. My touch .. Her weakness. Haha.. I slightly caress the side of her waist. God she shivered so bad. But. A chill ran down my body too..!!! Why...?? Am I doing the right thing...?? I don't know but suddenly i was afraid. For her. Does she deserve this..?? Is this too big a step..?? What will be her life after this...?? I shivered at this thought. And then she gave me that eye roll. Hell, i hate that so much...!! This attitude of hers..!!! You deserve this Meher.. You deserve this, i wink at her.
Soon we were done with the pheras. The overrated seven vows...!!! Rubbish...!! Why does this priest had to waste so much saying these stupid chants. However hard anyone try, this marriage is not going to last. Oh whatever... I put the mangalsutra around her neck. And now the final step. Sindoor.
I take out the ring, she once rejected. I wish she noticed. She did not. I took sindoor in the ring and filled her partition. Suddenly i felt sad. It was the time to let her go. Again...!!! Sigh...!! And then we were declared Man and Wife. It's time, i remind myself. To take my revenge. To insult her. To hurt her.
I was ready to walk off leaving her behind when Dad asked for everyone's attention.

"So ladies and Gentlemen, here's small gift for my Son and Daughter-in-law" he smiled.
"Abeer.. Meher.. beta idhar aao mere paas.." We go to him.
"Abeer hum jante hai tum kitna pyar karte ho Meher se, isliye maine aur Madhvi ne decide kiya hai ke aaj se hum apni saari property tumhari Meher ke naam karta hu" he said.
Everyone clapped. I choked. She almost giggled.
My plan backfired at me. I was numb, i couldn't move and kept looking at dad. Was i even his real son..?? well i need to check my birth certificate Asap.. Who does that with their own so...?? Why is mom smiling..?? Argghh... And there stood my so called wife... She was smiling at me. I knew she was mentally mocking me. I sighed. Wow Abeer Malhotra.. you are in deep shit now. You ruined your life once again, because of her. Slow claps for you Idiot...!!!


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Precap:

What is he doing...?? Why is he looking at me like that...?? Gandi nazar daal raha hai mujhe... Hai na..?? Wait... Why is he unbuttoning his sherwani...?? Its not hot over here ... Its December for god sake... What is he planning...?? Why is he coming towards me like that...?? My heart is hammering inside my chest... Why is he taking off his kurta..?? Ohh no... He really wants me now... Ohh god...!!! I can't breath...

SR ALERT!!!!!!😆

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So how it???
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Edited by ria54321 - 8 years ago
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Meher's lehenga

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Amazing updates
read both the parts together
loved it
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Originally posted by: heemasomani

Amazing updates

read both the parts together
loved it


Thank u heema...
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Abeer's POV "Meher is Devil in Disguise"🤣
I m loving d bold Avtar of Meher😛
WTH?I mean that FB😲😲
She rejected Abeer dat too infront of whole clg...Poor Abeer😭
So revenge game is ON.
Ohhh Appendix in d story.😛

Sooo His plan Backfired🤣
So now he have to live wid her🤣
Precap is Awesome😉

Amazing Update Ria & Naina👏
I know every update will "Blast" for me as You both are working Together🤣
Waiting For Next Update...
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Abeer's POV "Meher is Devil in Disguise


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Originally posted by: naina927



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Arre Update kar diya
Mobile se type kar rahi thi toh Galti se post reply kar diya...
Aur ho gaya "Satyanash"🤣
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