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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: .shivi396

I m loving Prologue👏
Too much excited for Chapter 1😉
Ria & Naina Together
oh god my Excitment level🤪🥳
Soo too many Surprices,Twist,Fun & Romance☺️
Ohh god me & my thoughts🤣🤣🤣


Thank u dear...!!!
Yeahhh...!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: jeharshu

I must say it was outstanding prologue di

Please update soon
Can't wait more to read
Nd thanks for the pm


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you...!!! @tv05 @rima4ever @coolhi1988 @Heatsha8176 @sanghita0000 @desire_nikki
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandhYA_123

MINDBLOWING PROLOGUE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY NYC CONCEPT.
LOVES THE MEHBEER VIEWS ON MARRIAGE.
NO BELIEVE ON MARRIAGE INSTITUTE.
IT WAS REALLY AWESOME.
SUPERB STARTING.
NOW WAITING FOR CHAPTER.
SO PLZ UPDATE IT SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😊 😊 😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chap 1
- Game is on

Meher's POV

Great... Amazing... Out of the world... Argghhh why did you have to act like a chicken Meher Purohit...??? Why...?? Only if you had the guts to explain it to your dearest mother, you won't be in this deep shit... Explaining my view on marriage wouldnt have been that difficult... Right...?? Nooo... It would have been way too difficult... My mother would think I have gone mad and should be married to a first man she finds... Ohh no... I will be trapped for life... Doing household chores, pleasing my in-laws and then my husband, he would then start treating me like some shit and I will have to accept it. I will be nothing more than a doormat... Ohh nooo...!!!! Not in this freaking lifetime...
I'm not getting married and that too not to any random guy my mother picks... No... I have to do something... Something that will not tarnish my goodie goodie girl image and at the same time pull me out of this trap. How I wish I never woke up this morning... Wondering why...?? Lemme tell you... Mom came in my room with my bed tea... My favourite part of the day but let's not distract... That's it...?? No... There is more to the story... She woke me up and dropped a bomb over me... I'm her daughter for god sake, not some uncooperative hostile neighbouring country. The guy she apparently likes is coming to see me with his family. I choked on the tea the moment I heard it. Coming to see me...?? What am I...?? A new animal in the zoo...?? Or a new piece of art in a museum...?? What am I...?? Somebody kill me now... Or else I will kill the audience that is coming to see me. Relax meher... Breathe in... Breathe out... Use your super cool and awesome brain baby... There is definitely a way out... Every problem has a solution, they say.
A saree... Yeah yeah... To add to the heavy weight of problems I already have on my sexy shoulders. Poor Meher Purohit...!!! Tsk tsk tak... Poor that guy... I thought and giggled. Maa looks at me and I know what she thinks... She thinks I'm pretty excited to see the guy. Yes mom... I am... I'm pretty excited... I will make him run away... Haha... It will be fun... Mom admires me and walks out of the room. I start pacing left and right thinking what to do exactly with the guy... So I will tell him some supposedly true facts about me and some demands. It will freak him out and he will refuse to marry me. Yes... Cool enough. Stop being happy Meher Purohit, its time for some revision... So here it goes.
"I drink and smoke..."
"I go to late night parties..."
"Have had 60 boyfriends..."
"I will not change my lifestyle..."
"I don't want to live with his parents..."
"And I will not have a baby for the next five years..."
I self pat myself for my brilliant plan and wait for the victims to arrive... They are here and mom calls me outside... Mission "Make the guy run" is on...!!!

Abeer's POV

I saw her coming with a tea tray. How unlike Meher Purohit... Saree...?? Oh she looked sexy as hell... By the way what's new. And then the most awaited moment, her eyes landed on me. She almost stumbled. I did a little happy dance in my mind. Oh those expressions of her, the moment she saw me. Priceless...!!! I can't even express how elated i felt that moment. They say 'Karma is a bitch'. She would know this too, soon enough. Life comes a full circle baby. And now it's payback time. Welcome to hell baby. You are going to be destroyed really soon. Life was always fun for you... right..?? Now let me show you what exactly fun is.. Abeer style... Just few days and see what your life would be. You will curse your life, you will cry.. much more than i have ever cried. For you.
She came towards me to serve tea. My hand touched with hers. She shivered. I coudn't just believe myself. Did i still affect her..??? Shut your stupid mind up, Abeer Malhotra. Stop thinking crap...!!
Focus! Focus! Mission 'destroy Meher...!!!' yes you can do it...!!! Go Malhotra...!!!!

Meher's POV

I can't believe my own freaking eyes. Is he the same guy...?? Of course he is... He is someone who shouldn't be named. Well I have to name him. Abeer Malhotra. The tea tray in my hand trembled and I almost stumbled when I found him, looking at me. What in the hell is he doing here...?? He wants to marry me... Why...?? After whatever happened... Why...???
Mom smiled at me and signaled me to offer them tea. I stood two steps away from him and my fingers brushed his, I shivered. Why...?? Meher get a hold on yourself... You aren't supposed to get affected by a mere touch of his... After whatever we guys ended two years back...
I thought the trouble was to end any minute but then when asked me to show abeer our garden. Garden..??? For god sake, what is there in a garden to show..??? Flowers...?? Or the Grass...??

Abeer's POV

She looks like she is the prey and I'm gonna eat her raw. Not that I would mind but she is utterly shocked... She even stuttered in front of my parents... We walk into the garden and she looks everywhere except me. Don't tell me she is nervous... Meher Purohit is nervous around guys... Eighth wonder of the world... History created...!!! Haha...
"So how have you been...??" I ask her casually.
"F.. Fine..."
Haha... She stuttered again.
I look around the garden this time and she finally says something.
"Did you hit your head...??" She asked.
"Huh...??"
"Don't you remember what happened between us...??" She asked.
"I do darling..."
Play and act safe Abeer... I remind myself.
She looks at me as if I'm some insane guy.
"I... I "
"Ohh I know... You drink, party and you smoke n stuff like that... I'm fine with it... I won't mind a wife like that..." I say and walk past her.
She is still standing there with her eyes popped out and mouth hung open.

Meher's POV

I follow him back inside and everyone smiles at me. What..??? Do I have anything on my face...?? Mom comes to me and hugs me. What is wrong guys...?? Mom looks at me and asks me if I like abeer. I'm quiet unable to react. My world is turning upside down. I'm feeling it dude...
Breaking news... Abeer Malhotra likes me... Yeyyy... What am I supposed to do...?? Do a happy dance...?? I look at the happy faces around and I'm the saddest person ever. I'm getting married to abeer... How I wish I could tell mom that I have a history with this so called to_be husband of mine. We have a HISTORY...
I'm getting engaged... Next week... And I can do nothing about it. How pathetic of me...!!! I can't get married like that... I just can't... I have to do something... Before the tornado hits me... Damage control time...!!!

Abeer's POV

I might not know her any longer but I know one thing. One thing that I couldn't forget even after two years... I hate her... I hate her for what she did to me... Love seemed like a beautiful thing to me... But now all I can say is that love is the biggest scam of all... And now that girl that has gotten the biggest shock of her life. She is definitely do something crazy... I can bet on that. What could be the next silliest and stupidest thing she will come up with... That's for me to find out really soon... I still trust her that much... And yes... Before I forget... Welcome to hell Meher Purohit...!!!

Abeer's POV

It's been an entire day since our engagement was fixed and not a single move from this girl... This is Strange. Meher Purohit was not someone who knew how to be patient... Patience was never one of her greatest virtues... Looks like she is planning something really big. Well who cares...!!! She cannot stop the storm thats gonna hit her life really soon...
Ting.Ting.
I checked my phone. 1 new message. From Meher Purohit. I smirk.

"Hey babyy
Lets meet tonight. Club silver lining.
Pick me up! I'll be waiting. 9p.m
XOXO
Your Baby"

LOL... So the plan is ready... huh...??

"Sure baby
will be there on time.
Don't be late.
love you"

I spent the rest of the evening thinking what is she upto...?? A new boyfriend...?? Or hooking me up with some random girl...?? Well, let's leave it. Let it be a surprise from her side... Why ruin my excitement... Game is on baby, bring out the worst in you.

Meher's POV.

"Sure baby
will be there on time.
Don't be late.
love you"

Love you..?? My foot... Be ready Malhotra. I am closing your chapter today. This time F.o.r.e.v.e.r.
I go towards my wardrobe and pick out the sexiest dress i have... I smirk... Black. You are so dead Malhotra...!!!

Abeer's POV

I stand infront of her building waiting for her. She comes down. I was drinking some water, and seeing her i choked. Little black dress. Red lipstick. High heels. HOT. Smoking hot... She comes closer to me and snaps her fingers infront of me. I come out of my reverie.
"What happened..??" she asks me with a smirk.
"Ahh.. nothing.. you look hot..."
You weren't supposed to say that silly...
"Tell me something new..." she replied.
This attitude. I hate it...
"Let's go and have fun..." she said tracing my face with her finger.
We reach the club and i hold her by her waist. I swear I felt her shiver for a second... Point noted. My touch. Her weakness. Great..!!!

Meher's POV.

You should have seen his face. He couldn't just get his eyes off me. He was completely mesmerised. Plan working Meher...!!! Kudos to you. This guy is gone today... Haha...
As we enter the club, he placed his hand at the small of my waist. A chill ran down my body and i dont even know why. Whatever... I overcome it within seconds and sigh thinking he must haven't even realised it...
He wasn't much of a drinker, i knew. So i ordered some strong drinks. I drank mine in one go. He sat there looking at me.
"Take this.. i don't like it..." he said offering his drink.
"Ahh.. no.. i am fine..." I tell him.
"Scared...??"
"Never..." I grab his drink and gulp down the content.

Abeer POV.

This girl is crazy i tell you. She can't handle alcohol. But just to show off, she'll do anything...!!! Anything means anything...!!! She will show me she is a drunkard which she isn't... I can never trust her, she ordered the drinks and I made her drink it in exchange... Just throw the "are you scared..??" card and you get her... I got her... She drank that whole glass. Poor baby... Within minutes she was drunk... Dragging me to the dance floor, dancing and attracting attention... Then I couldn't take men eye raping her, I led her out of the club... Time to go to home baby...

Meher's POV

I wake with a headache... My head spinning and throbbing with pain... Can it technically be called a headache...?? Ohh god i hate hangovers... I look around and sigh with relief as its my room. I hear the door knob being opened. Ready for drama, i alert myself. Sob.. Cry slowly... Mom enter with a sullen face with my bed tea. She sees me crying. And ignores. WTH...!!! She is leaving like that and she stops when i hold her hand.

"Maa.." i say sobbing hard this time. I could see concern in her eyes now... Its working...!!!
"Kya hua bacha..." she asks
"Maa.. Vo abeer... Vo.. Usne kal raat mere sath.. I mean, he tried to touch..."
"Meher..." she said sternly.
"Maa.. Vo acha ladka nahi hai.. He was trying to get close to me. When i asked him to stop, he got me drunk..." i tried sobbing harder this time.
"Shut-up Meher, If he hadn't brought you home yesterday, i don't know what would have happened.. Not a word against Abeer ever again.. Mind you..." she said and left.
Wow.. Well let me check my birth certificate to check if i am adopted... She didnt even believed me or listen my sob story... Why in the freaking hell...??? Argh... Abeer Malhotra you are in deep shit now... The game is on...!!!!

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Nidhi n I aren't sure whether to continue it or not as the show the ending tomorrow... The only thing that will keep us going will be your response... So the ball is in your court guys...!!!! Decide for us... 😳
Edited by naina927 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
This is sooo damn good I wish badtameez dil season 3 is like this
And please do continue 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Wow..!! a love-hate story...yippie..
I loved the dialogues..so much..plz continue it..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
pls Continue... love ur stories.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
This is so cool..plz do continue.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
This is Amazing Guys🤗
Love-Hate Saga.
Continue plz
Kya hua serial khatam ho raha hai.
I will be here #Forever.
I m not going to leave this Forum.
#Mehbeer_Forever
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