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Posted: 8 years ago
WOW!! fantastic update...loved it dear... sorry for late comment... I am not well
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update dear
i loved it very much
plzzz do continue soon
and thanks for the pm dear😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

loved it

Meher having to eat her words about the nightie
would've loved to see her face when that woman came to the door 😆
so she did have a reason for past
im thinking she did it as a defensive thing hurt them b4 they hurt me
or maybe she didn't believe in relationship ending good
one things for sure shes looking now to see the same feelings Abeer had for her in past
n even he cant stop the hope of having her back
I cant believe she played that trick on him
anything could've happened
what if she does it again but this time for real he wont believe
loved how she got jealous n possessive
felt sorry for her when that jerk said all that
but it made me think she might act the way that guy said as a defense mechanism
was nice to see Abeer comforting her
just hope Meher doesn't get all defensive n mean because of this
cant wait to see whats gonna happen next
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
simply superb...
dont hv enough words to describe d update...
way to go...
plz continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing finally abeer and meher growing close to each other .loved the way meher got jealous seeing him with the blonde.And abeer's fight with Nissar amazing!thanks for d pm !excited for the next part 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
SUPERB UPDATE NAINA.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY MINDBLOWING AND LOVELY UPDATE.
SOME PARTS R SO HEART TOUCHING
BRILLIANTLY WRITTEN WHOLE PART.
MEHER DIALOGUES R AWESOME AND SO FUNNY.
FULL OF FUN WAS THERE.
SO ABEER DIDN'T GIFT MEHER A RED LINGERIE.
IT WAS JUST A MISTAKE BUT SO MUCH FUN HAPPENED INBETWEEN THIS PROCESS. MEHER WAS SO AMAZING.
LOVES MEHBEER POSSESIVE SIDE FOR EACH OTHER.
WOW THEY KISSED.
LOVED HOW THEY SLEPT IN EACH OTHER ARMS.
BAR PART WAS AMAZING WHERE MEHER SHOWN HER POSSESIVENESS FOR ABEER AND DANCED WITH HIM. ONCE AGAIN A PASSIONATE KDSS.
LOVED THEIR LOVELY MOMENTS .
LAST PART WAS AWESOME WHERE ABEER TOOK SIDE OF MEHER SHOWN HIS UNKNOWN TOWARDS HER.
STORY IS TURNING VERY INTERESTING.
UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😛 😊 😊
Edited by sandhYA_123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .shivi396

What A starting Girl
"Red Sexy Nighty" poor Meher🤣
"Its better to have MIL and FIL around... I feel more safe..."Meher's POV is Hilarious-cum-Dangerous🤣
"The only way left with her is seduction... " They both are very Similar in their thoughts on Eachother.It is Simply Adorable

Haha Meher kissed Abeer before he kissed Her;I m so much in love with this Hot avatar of Meher😉
So That was MU about gift but Thank God that You have cleared it just on Time.
'but will he ever know why I did that... Why we ended up like this...?? Why something that we were starting to have that time, was crushed into pieces...?? Will he ever know...??
Will it ever make any difference...?? May be it will... Or may be not..."

This POV of Meher is having something Deep within it.Their Past is really something that I am eagerly wants to know.
Awww That Morning Scene & that FB are cutestAbeer having Girlie attitude towards love than Meher

What She was having Sarees & Suits in luggagePoor Girl;Trying to pretending Star plus bahu infront of her MIL & this is result of that very thing😆
Poor Abeer He still loves her;His heart doesn't want her in danger.But Meher in the Mood of Fun;& somewhere deep she wanted him affected by her text.She want him to tell that he Came there for her only. Ohhh no U made me cry😭

And that kiss in Pub was Hot😳
And U made Nissar Villain here😉Actually great Thought👍🏼
Abeer Punch Nissar for insulting his wife.

Than that last Part was Mesmerising.
I am unable to say about that scene.
It was incredibly Beautifully
He will Do anything To comefort Her.
That is called love Boy.Just Understand that U still loves Meher
That whole scene in last is Beautifully Written.

overall Update was Amazing.
U both Having Most Amazing Thinking Skills as well Writing skills.
This update was having everything;Fun,Love,Romance & Sadism

I m still in Tears.😭Just want them to realise & confess Their love;and yes clearing whole MUs between them.
I know this have to heppen but kya kare "Dil Hai Ki Maanta Nahi"😉
Waiting For Next Update...
Keep Writing
Stay Blessed

Name of This Chapter "Mine. Only Mine" is Just Perfect❤️


Thank you so much darling!
We are glad that you are loving the story so much!
Thanks a lot...😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: samKazam

This is by far the best chap...😉

Starting with the red nightie, the kiss started by meher nd ended by Abeer, meher finding comfort in his arms...😳
Moving towards Abeer getting mad over the text, meher getting jealous, owning him nd then a little love session in the club..😳
Hitting the guy, as no one can utter a word against her as he owns her...
Liked that meher didn't argue nd just silently surrendered herself to him nd he comforted her in the every way possible...
Loved, just loved this chap!!!!!
You guys did take time but Patience's virtue!!!
You did a fantastic, fabulous job...👏
Keep writing...
Keep rocking..
This was an awesome update nd waiting for the next chap...
I got a lot more than i expected so thank you both !!!!!


The Best Chapter!! Thats a huge compliment dear!!
Gives us even more motivation to write better every time..😳
Keep reading!! Nd thanks a lot❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: chemgirl

Awesome awesome update...full of tashan...i love this Abeer n Meher...they love each other yet they wont confess for fear of rejection...I am dying to know what happened years back...surely Meher didnt just ditch him cause she was bored...Nisaar was so rude..he called her a public property?? Abeer did the corect thing...women deserve to be respected.

Meher got all jealous seeing that blonde...so cute...but she shouldnt have scared Abeer...poor guy...he had to look for her in an unknown city...i love him. Par Abeer toh hai hi aisa...how not love him ❤️ 😉

Dialogues were rofl...the vichitra prani part waa so.funny
Thanks for the update...waiting for the next epi

I guess now a seesion of awkwardness will begin...then romance


Thank you so much dear!😊
Lets see what actuallt haPpened in past..
Just wait and see😆😆
Romance to forever hi rahega😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyfever

OK so first of all I'm in tears once again . By far the best chapter👏 both of them have that possessive side . And I think after this chapter Abeer should be called Meena Kumari🤣 , he was so worried for meher just like a typical husband . And I must say that the way you two are depicting meher's character is commendable . If I'm not wrong there is a lot more to the past which is really interesting. The last part where Abeer consoles meher stole my heart . They both can love each other , hate each other but can't deny the fact that they are soulmates . Brilliantly written by the terrific duo

PS: Plz update the next part as soon as possible, I want it like now only ( greedy me 😳)


Lol Meena Kumari😆😆 Bachara itna to loving and caring hai😆😆😆
Thank you so much dear.. n sorry for your tears😛


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