Mehbeer TS : Forever Forever : Part 3 b) : Pg 11 : completed - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
FANTASTIC UPDATES NAINA.
LOVED CHATER 3 BOTH PARTS.
THEY R JUST AWESOME, FANTASIC, AND LOVELY UPDATES.
I REALLY LOVED THE ENDING. IT WAS SO HAPPY AND CUTE ONE.
FULL UPDATE WAS FULL OF ENTERTAINMENT AND OVERLOADED CUTENESS IN IT.
MEHER POV WAS AWESOME AND SHE KNEW THE WHOLE TRUTH
LOVED HOW ABEER ANSWERED BACK TO HIS FATHER.
CHAHAT IS REALLY A SHINING STAR OF STORY SO CUTE SHE IS AND HER TALKS R AMAZING.
BRUNO PART WAS SO AMAZING.
REALLY DEAR U WROTE THAT PART VERY BEAUTIFULLY.
THE PAIN WHICH A BABY SUFFERED IN ABSENCE OF HER MOTHER IS COMMENDABLE.
LOVES THE DECISION OF CUTE CHAHAT TO SEND BACK BRUNO AND FINALLY MEHER GOT RELIEF.
FINALLY ALL REALITY COMES IN FRONT OF MEHER.
LOVES MEHBEER CUTE FIGHT.
REALLY AFTER PAIN IF WE GET SO MUCH HAPPINESS WE CAN FORGET OUR PAINFUL YEARS VERY GOOD DESCRIBED BY U.
BAAP RE BAAP CHOTA ABEER AARAV WAS REALLY NAKREBAAJ. EARLIER CHAHAT WAS NOT LESS NOW AARAV TOO MOM BOY.
I REALLY LOVED THIS WHOLE STORY DEAR.
CONTINUE UR GOOD WORKS LIKE THIS.
TAKE CARE DEAR.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
This was amaazzing Nainaaa!!!😳😳
You portray all emotions so perfectly!!!!!!!❀️
just loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Awww That was cute...
I mean seriously Chahat is soo cute.
I imagined that she has cuteness of her Mother & Sweet like her Father.
Ohh what a perfect Combo
So Meher is aware of what happened in past 8 years but she didn't drag it too much unlike other wives.
Abeer ki Meher U know!!πŸ˜‰
Beautiful TS all parts where Amazing.
Thanks for sharing your beautiful creationsπŸ€—πŸ€—
Waiting for your Next. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Superb..FF dear..!!
I am new to forum and this is my first FF that i read here..
Amazing.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: ritvi23

Superb..FF dear..!!
I am new to forum and this is my first FF that i read here..
Amazing.. 😊



Welcome to the forum dear...!!!
And im glad u liked it... the first piece u read on mehbeer... special it is..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
the 1st mehbeer os I read.after accident meher recovered with partial amnesia.in a way it was a blessing.so she 4got d bitter past n mehbeer united easily.but abeer was guilty of hiding d truth 4 her mother's sake.they git married on their wedding anniversary n had a daughter chahat.mehbeer moments with chahat were so sweet.the way meher reacted 2 the truth was a surprise.she remembered d past,but didnt make a big fuss abt it thankfully.they had a son too aarav.thru chahat aarav fight u presented d issue which happens in every house.

this was so cute-
"I'm only yours mumma..." Abeer said in a baby like voice.
"Haaye mera beta... Aaja..."
And they hugged each other.

loved the last part u wrote-
Life was never a bed of roses, neither will it ever be. But it becomes worthwhile and easy when you have a loving family.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

the 1st mehbeer os I read.after accident meher recovered with partial amnesia.in a way it was a blessing.so she 4got d bitter past n mehbeer united easily.but abeer was guilty of hiding d truth 4 her mother's sake.they git married on their wedding anniversary n had a daughter chahat.mehbeer moments with chahat were so sweet.the way meher reacted 2 the truth was a surprise.she remembered d past,but didnt make a big fuss abt it thankfully.they had a son too aarav.thru chahat aarav fight u presented d issue which happens in every house.

this was so cute-

"I'm only yours mumma..." Abeer said in a baby like voice.
"Haaye mera beta... Aaja..."
And they hugged each other.

loved the last part u wrote-
Life was never a bed of roses, neither will it ever be. But it becomes worthwhile and easy when you have a loving family.



Thank you so much dear...!!!! I'm really glad that the first piece u read on mehbeer was worth it... πŸ˜ƒ And welcome to the forum buddy πŸ€— after days, I got a comment on my work that made be really happy... Thank u πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
can u write an os on abheer knowing abt meher being preg after their 2nd consummation n they have a kid?

Originally posted by: naina927



Thank you so much dear...!!!! I'm really glad that the first piece u read on mehbeer was worth it... πŸ˜ƒ And welcome to the forum buddy πŸ€— after days, I got a comment on my work that made be really happy... Thank u πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Jasmine i wish i could write it. Actually i cant imagine abeer as a father of a 7 yr old kid... But i promise u i will try to come up with it. And if im unable to in any case, please excuse me for that 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
wowiee!! this wz so sweet...family bonding...pure bliss for abeer...i hv a feeling that kuber must hv sent that parcel for meher in order to create rift btwn abeer & meher...kuber cn never change...really...thanx for d pm...this wz amazing...lookin frwrd 2 wat happens next... :)
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