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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Avalanche.
Res For Chapter 3

God, you really update fast 🤣
Unres after a little while. Busy in some stuff, wanted to reserve a spot so I don't forget

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Jappi dedo meri japanah 🤗tussi great ho
Such a dedicated writer good job beta 😆

Absolutely amazing update ❤️
Like always, everything was described with details and perfection.
Enjoyed reading the update a lot!

Oh Arjun ❤️ my baby is so smart just like me 🤣
Sunil looks loyal and trustworthy 👍🏼

So, they faked the crime and ran away? - Abeer and Meher?

Like i said, I'm not the brightest of minds.

Or Nisaar is the murderer? 🤣

I really don't know, let's wait for more updates 😳

Thanks for the pm!
Cheers, baby! <3

Haha, believe me this is a first. Usually it take me forever to post something. 😆

Yeh lo 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

I had so much fun writing Sunil in Chapter 4. You're gonna love it. 😆

Haha, that's a real plot twist right there. 🤣🤣

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: aalu_29
I love this one! Great writing and story line! I look forward to more!

Thank you so much! Chapter 5 is being written right now. ^_^

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Read all four parts together... I'm loving it... It very engrossing... I can't wait for the next chappy... And this will be my first time reading something that has a mystery involved... I don't like mystery novels n all you see...but I'm liking it... You are a very talented writer... Good going...

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Fero

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Omg u r super fast just like 4g

Really interesting chapter

I thought I am reading sherlock holmes stories

Wowww sooo good

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Mahalakshmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

That was very very Intresting and thrilling i loved it

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Girl your fast and how.! 😆 I read second chapter and res'd to comment. when i came to edit the res there was the third chapter. now i came to comment on both together and here is the fourth chapter. 😆

I am commenting for all three without res-ing because is baar 5th chapter bhi aa jayega and i dont want to be that late 🤣

Damn i love the way you write. 👏 You are doing a great job. keeping the thrill...romance...the investigation...plus the humor all in equal proportions.

Basically this is how we are by the end of it trying to grasp all the information and trying to fit in the dots 🤣🤣

I am loving it 🤣 warna itne thriller and questions se my head would've started spinning if you made us wait for long 🤣

The inspiration for the cops is arjun and sunil from the star plus show arjun right? I can see ur a fan. 😆 Cops obsessed with finding the truth and justice are the coolest and most fun. plus with the banter and jibes hilarious 🤣

You answer questions with more questions 🤣 the more you reveal the more we are hooked thinking what why how 🤣 Thriller is definitely the genre that agrees with your writing 😆

The hotel scene you described...with the singing...dancing...and everything...was so beautiful...even in the serious situation imagining mehbeer that way was amazing :)

Abeer helped meher get over shy-ness. Awww so cute ❤️

Nisaar par mujhe shak hai 😡 and i dont trust her father either.

the locket...the photos...were they there by accident or were they clues...

😲

I knew from the start that meher was running... 😆 but from whom? dance teacher toh female hai 🤣 does she have the hots for meher? 🤣

it her father who saw them na...or nisaar...

And why did abeer not go with her right then 😲

and who are they hiding from?

another body :o hope its not meher?

mere savalo ka jawab do 🤣

the message passing thing was clever and cute...their co-ordination ❤️ 👏

update soon :) And no problem about the pm..i keep stalking your thread anyways 🤣 This is becoming my fav story on here. Just would like some more mehbeer moments maybe? maybe in the form of a flashback or something?

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neetha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Gurleen ma mystery woman *hugs*

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neetha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Gurleen ma mystery woman *hugs*

Must say this story is getting more n more interesting!! I mean abeer dint save meher? Y the hell are they communicating separately..? Aren't they together? Or may be they r running away from someone? Hmm meher dad is kinda weird n now wat a dead body *shock *

Ok this is amazing..i hav never loved mystery this much as m doin now..thanks to u ;)

Keep updating :D

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: naina927
Read all four parts together... I'm loving it... It very engrossing... I can't wait for the next chappy... And this will be my first time reading something that has a mystery involved... I don't like mystery novels n all you see...but I'm liking it... You are a very talented writer... Good going...

Aaww, thank you so much! I'm so glad that I was able to get you to like a new genre. :D

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: zaya-firdose
Omg u r super fast just like 4g
Really interesting chapter

I thought I am reading sherlock holmes stories

Wowww sooo good

Haha, thank you! 😆

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