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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Q & A for Scars

Hello everybody!

First of all I would like to thank you all so much for giving so much love and many positive reviews to Scars. It was a story that had began with no knowledge of when or how it might be complete its journey. But here we are, with the epilogue posted and now having a Q & A session for it. 😆

Before I begin answering any personal questions, I'm going to clear up somethings. While I was talking to some readers, I found they had a lot of similar areas where they had been highly confused. So, I'll answer those first.

1. Kisne kisko maara? 🤔

This is one question that has come up a lot, so let me clear things up. 😆
Shyam has killed Miss Sharma. This is a fact. He was a suspect in the murder of the other girls, but since their main suspect had been murdered, that case is now labelled as unsolved.


2. Meher aur Abeer ne kya kiya? 🤓

Meher and Abeer are guilty of implicating Shyam in attacking Meher. They had set the whole thing up to get Shyam put in jail merely for a days. However, one thing led to the next and Shyam had become a suspect in a series of murders and charged with murdering Miss Sharma. They had no idea things would get this out of hand, but they still did not do anything to try to prevent certain things from happening. (I.e., warning Miss Sharma to be careful around Shyam as he had been physically violent with Meher in the past.)

3. Kya Bheede ne Shyam ko maara? 😳

Bheede was the last person to see Shyam alive, yes. However, there has been no definitive proof to implicate him to the murder. Remember, Shyam had been poisoned by the toxins that came from Angel Trumpets - a poisonous plant that has been found in Abeer's greenhouse. Thus, whether Bheede killed Shyam or it was someone else will be answered by the new investigation that will be conducted.

Also, think about this. If Abeer's greenhouse is able to grow so many poisonous and toxic plants, then why not someone else's? 😉


These were the three questions that had come up a lot and I apologize for any confusions it may have caused. During the break between Chapter 4 and Chapter 5, I had become lost as to where the progression of the story should be going. That's why Chapter 5 is considered to be the weakest Chapter while Chapter 6 had been an attempt to fix up the mess that had been created.

Regardless, if you have any other questions in regards to Scars, me or any other future work that I may be planning on, then please feel free to ask. If you don't feel comfortable asking here, then you can PM me as well. :)

Thank you all so much once again for the immense love and support you all have given to this story. 🤗


This is much required 😆 I am in my way to complete this , then I will catch up
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Because murder mystery FTW.

Prologue- Me likey what you did there. He picked up right when he jumped and him being able to hear the sound of the door being broken. Nice setup.

1- Aw, poor Abeer. And Nissar, loved how you kept the characterization constant there 😆

"physically, mentally, emotionally, spiritually, you name it" had me like 😆 nice black humor there. Abeer taught dance classes? And he sings. Marry me yaar. Ok back to the story. AWW Madhvi + Abeer, best mom-son pairing evah. Wait so Meher sneaks into Abeer's greenhouse to play mere nishaan? Or is it some psycho other woman? So many questions, abhi sir chakkar kha raha hai, can't wait to read on.

2- Wait killer? Is Meher dead? No she can't be dead she's the heroine 😆. Oooh I'm getting Ek villain vibes rn, this killer is creepy AF. Arjun, nice name, is he gonna be some major character? Goddamnit Nissar is it his wedding photo or the day he proposed or something? Use the ol' noggin here come on. Oh nvm, it was the opening of a restaurant. Ok ho kya raha hai, at first I thought Nissar went because something happened toMeher and he suspected Abeer but deep down knew there was no way Abeer did this. But now I'm confused, the police is looking for both of them?

3-to the end: Now I'm just gonna read lol and give my collective thoughts at the end. Writing each reaction is proving to be distracting 😆.

Oh wait so they are still in college. So no divorce vagera? So this is fully alternate universe. Acha, I see. Why do I have this gut feeling that greenhouse/weirdass plants are gonna play an important role. She's on the run? Ab kya hua! Is there a point jab hume kuch pata chalne laga tha? 😆

Also I swear if Nissar ends up being the murderer, I'll Jalebi torture you too 🤣

_____________Up until here was still me trying to make sense of what was going on_________________

Ok so a bit more into it, I can say I love the buddy-cop equation between Arjun and Sunil, I like the way you've set up the murder.

I see what you meant by being wary of Chapter 5, I literally was living the *sir ghoome chakar khai* life there. It's ok to get lost while writing, but (#Kriti-Ke-Gharelu-Nuske 😆) what I find works best for me is writing out a slightly detailed framework before I even begin writing the prologue, and as hard as it is, making it to the end and perfecting that framework before starting to write. Because once the framework's done and you've written out how you're going to execute each chapter, all that's left to do is write. And I feel it'd be especially helpful when writing a mystery, but then again you do you woman.

Wait. WHAT? Shyam's dead. But he's the murderer. Ab koi teesra murderer aa raha hai kya? 😡
Bheede? But that's so random.

WAIT WHAT. WHOOOAH. WAIT.


HOLY MOTHER OF WHAT.

MEHBEER PLANNED THIS WHOLE THING?!?

WHAT!?!?

*******Ok now that I'm slightly getting over that, I'll say I liked the epilogue. Gave me a Bang Bang/Ek Tha Tiger/f**k The Police kinda feel.

Overall Gur, this was a demanding but nice experience. Off to soothe my overheated brain with some ice-cream/SRK.

Thank you for writing this,

Kriti ❤️
Edited by IttiSiKriti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
who killed the girls?
what happens to MehBeer?
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved the ending <3
it was unexpected yet blissful
continue writing more
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Posted: 8 years ago
You wrote fantastic thriller !!!!👏
It kept my interest so well that i was dreaming about that after reading 5 chaps...😆
But nice ending nd i would say no perfect ending is always a perfect ending!!!😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
its very interesting frnd really...great job👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was brilliant. ..I read it in one go...very interesting and mysterious. .amazing
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