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Hi guys ... Ive made an os on mehbeer... Hope you guys enjoy it... Its a sad os..but with lots of flashbacks about the past... And if you did..please hit like and leave your feedback. i hope ive sent pms whoa sked to .. i hope they reached you .

Teri yaad

It was night... At abheers house...in the garden...at the bar which was there... Abheer was standing there ...and soon...nisaar came in...

N. What have tyou dobe to yourself abher... Just look at you... You have become an alcoholic after mehers death...

A. What else could have i done... My parents shifted to USA... Im here alone..with her...only her memories...

N. Abheer... Please..move on..

A. Shut up!! Move on!!!!how can i ever Move on... Hw???? Her ...memories are..the only reason that im alive...her love...her care

N. I...i... Dont know what to say...

And nisaar gets a call...and he leaves...

Abheer ... Sits on the bar chair...and with a glass in his hands... Reminices about his past ... His meher... He still remembers that day... When they went to south india for their honeymoon... That day when they were at those backwaters of kerala ... On a houseboat...meher went to the edge...

M. Abheer ...look... Its such a beautiful jungle...!!!!

A. Not more beauriful than you...

M. Abher... Realy...this is heaven...

And kabir leaned towards her...and kissed her cheek... And meher turned to face him...and cupped his face... And kissed him on his forehead... Kabir took her in an embrace...a very tight ...yet relaxing embrace.

At night... They were on the outside of the houseboat... They were sitting... And abheer was relaxing... With his eyes closed... While meher was running her fingers trough abheers hair... .. Abhwer had his arm on her wrapping her waist... And was resting his head on her shoulder... After a while...abheer opened his eyes and looked very deeply in mehers eyes

A. Meher...promise me...you wont ever leave me...

M. Yes... I promise you ill never leave you...

A. I cant live without you... I really.. Need you... In my life...

M. How can i live without you???? Huh. ... I just want to be with you...

And saying this he hugged her... She hugged him back ...and carresed his back.. ...

Abheer couldnt believe she wasnt with him...right now... He coulndt get why she left me...

M. I didnt leaveyou abheer...

He suddenly heard her voice he saw...he ssaw...she was standing beaide him...

A. Meher??!!!!

Some much holded tears fel of his eyes...His eyes ciuldnt believe what he saw . ... A slight smile was drawn on his face...

A.meher...meher... I knew that you couldnt leve me... I knew you were alive...

M. No abheer... Abheer... Please... Please ... .

And she took him for ahug... And kiased him on hus cheek... And carresed the back of hos neck...

A. Meher ...please ...

M. Abheer... Im with you... Always... Im in your songs... In your lyrics... In your heart... Please abheer... Today ... Youll prise me somerhing ... You will forget me... And if you could .. then please .. move on in life... please...

A.. I cant move on.. meher.. please don't make me promise something that I cant ever do ... I cant forget you I cant move on... meher..

M.. at least .. I can ask for a tiny little thing... I want to be your inspiration of you songs... only romantic happy songs...

A.. you will... meher... 'lease meher..listen tome meher,...

but she vanished from there... she wasn tthere... she was dead... but she will always remain in his heart... in all his songs.. ..love songs.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Literally I was crying whilst reading this
It's too emotional
Awesome job dear



Sorry but I hate tragic stories
I don't prefer reading tragic stories as I can't hold my emotions

Though I read it
Good job


Please write some happy ending types




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I will...actually... This idea came in my mind..and i thoight its quiye emotinal..i womt makeore any...im really sorry that u cried ...thanks for the apreaciation ...
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Originally posted by: heartbroken1

I will...actually... This idea came in my mind..and i thoight its quiye emotinal..i womt makeore any...im really sorry that u cried ...thanks for the apreaciation ...

Thank u so much
Waiting for your next work
Please write asap
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Originally posted by: zaya-firdose


Thank u so much
Waiting for your next work
Please write asap
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Yoire welcome... Ill write asap!!: ) snd sorry again...:)
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Don't be sorry
I loved it

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Wow that was really good, would love to read more from u
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Thanks a lot for the encouragement
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To much emotional !
But it's good ...
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Im sorry... I will make it happier next time... And thaks a lot to appreciate
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