Originally posted by: beauty14
Really interesting start.👍🏼Hmm...I'm intrigued! I wonder what the problem is, and why Meher is so upset.Do update soon! You've gotten me all curious, I want the next chapter already!😆Please do add me on the PM list! :D
Originally posted by: mistofshadows
Update update update.
Please yaar. I want to read.
Originally posted by: IttiSiKriti
Quick question before I start reading, is this inspired by the pakistani show Humsafar by any chance? (Just wanted a heads up 'cause really don't like irritating saasu-maas lol) no way...
Comments on Chapter 1:Wait not inspired by that show (I think from what I've read). Positive sign # 1! Its original 😉It's so cute how they'r'e nervous, you captured that bang on! Junior Abeer or junior Meher. Aww!! Thank you 😊Wait what? heh? Why is Meher reacting like that? Kuch toh baat hai, warna this is totally out of character for Meher. Kuch toh gadbad hai.. What can the twist be? Has she been told she'd be due for risky pregnancies in the future, you know how some women in their first trip to the OBGYN are told that becoming a mother for them is risky either for them or the baby? If that's the case why doesn't Abheer know of this? You have to share these things with each other before marriage. So much to know and only one chapter, ayy missy--update soon!! So much to tell... I just realised after reading it...50 likes!?! Dude, yeh multiple likes nahi karne dete warna 50 toh kab ke ho gaye hote lol! Koi nahi... Chalk I'm updating
Arre I don't think this forum even has 50 people judging by the activity. Lol no, just kidding (please no tamataars and sandals unless they are black and glittery). Maybe I should start an andolan so we get to see the next chapter ASAP. No no... Don't start an andolan... I'm updatingMy bakwass aside, really liked it! :) n I liked ur bakwaas...Comments on Teaser:Oh god, ab Abheer ka accident to nai hoga na? (Ekta has forever scarred me lol) nope...Wait nahi, cause they're talking in the second part? Accident cancel. "Like what you see?" *raises eyebrows* Why do I suspect things are about to get spicy? Lolz, continue soon! CertainlyLiked the effort you put into it! Waiting patiently. Thanks again...!!!Love,Kriti
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