Kashi's Wait : A Poem

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hola peeps! Posting something here for the first time and it happens to be a poem on our lovely Kashibai and her Rao. The last few episodes made me want to write this. And lastly, i am Ramya.



Kashi's Wait

Oh sparrow from the skies above,
Do you have news of my love?
Oh dainty deer, while grazing past the grass,
Have you seen my lord gracefully pass?

Oh preconscious breeze of willful ways,
Is there anything you wanna tell me, just in case?
Dear mother earth i salute you in prayer and praise,
Bless me that i soon braze myself with his face.

I let the sunshine seep into my very soul,
Savouring the chirping birds on a prowl,
Hailing the humming bird that feeds on the fragrant flowers,
Awaiting his arrival every morning, turning my heart sweet from sour.

The golden lamp that spreads away it's light,
Signifying our bond and his glorious fights.
My yearning that multiplies by the day,
And i tirelessly wait and wait, for him to come and stay.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is a piece of gem...to say the least...๐Ÿ‘
Beautifully worded, that captures the innocent longing of a teenage wife for her indifferent husband...
I can go on n on...The rhythm is just brilliant...๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: amritat

This is a piece of gem...to say the least...๐Ÿ‘

Beautifully worded, that captures the innocent longing of a teenage wife for her indifferent husband...
I can go on n on...The rhythm is just brilliant...๐Ÿ‘


Amrita di, i hope you remember me.
Thank you so much! I just wanted to write something on Kashi and here i am. Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Elara--


Amrita di, i hope you remember me.
Thank you so much! I just wanted to write something on Kashi and here i am. Glad you liked it.

Yes I remember. You are Ramya from SPK forum...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully worded Ramya, wish the Rau-Kashi equation had been different!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: kahiliginger

Beautifully worded Ramya, wish the Rau-Kashi equation had been different!

Hey, thanks a lot! ๐Ÿ˜ณ I wish that too.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I love History Kashi ๐Ÿ˜ณ
ResWaโญ๏ธ
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Posted: 7 years ago
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BLEW ME AWAY WITH THE FIRST LINE <3

Rammy, you are truly amazing !! Its the first time reading a Kashi Baji poem on your part and its amazing !!!

Haye, how expressive and presentable !

Though it was short, it was crispy and sweet!!

You be the queen !
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved it so much chutki . ๐Ÿ‘ Beautiful words , rhythm and most importantly you captured the feelings so perfectly !
I'm shipping Bajirao and Kashibai already . ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Another beautiful piece of work Rammy๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘You have excellently penned down Kashibai's feelings in this poem.
She was truly a poetic character๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ‘
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