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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ReadLo


I thought I might as well involve the whole Mishra family.

The mother would have to be there. We know how scared she is of society, so she has her importance in what happens next.

Who knows... Chetna will end up with Archit...lol...😆

Besides, Chetna is Pranati's little or big sister?

I will make you live through my words as long as I have strength. 🤗


If Chit doesn't get Prani, I get Chit 😆

I'm calling dibs on my boy rn ❤️🤣


Also, Chetna is the youngest.

Edited by Natashapaul - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: ReadLo


It takes time to develop the characters.

We haven't really been able to see things, so I tell myself that I'm going to try to bring Rey's malaise to life right now.

I didn't want to write in the first person because I knew if I did it it would hurt.

Rey is too complex as a character, so I preferred to do it in narrative, which makes it easier to see him from an external point of view, it's easier to manage.


Whatever you're doing, you're doing it really well. And I trust you with this, as much we all trust PB creatives with their story ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Natashapaul


If Chit doesn't get Prani, I get Chit 😆

I'm calling dibs on my boy rn ❤️🤣


Also, Chetna is the youngest.


One Sec..One Sec....i thought NatChit was over.....where did this came from???smiley37smiley37smiley37smiley37smiley37

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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: vswarup


One Sec..One Sec....i thought NatChit was over.....where did this came from???smiley37smiley37smiley37smiley37smiley37


Let's just say that I had a Rey under the wishing tree moment with ReadLo 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Natashapaul


Let's just say that I had a Rey under the wishing tree moment with ReadLo 😆


Nats so basically you are giving us the permission to make NatChit official smiley37smiley37smiley37

now just wait Co-Cap!!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Asyalover

Hey, sorry if am hurting your feelings with my nosiness but I really liked reading this fanfic. I have never done any correction to anyone's fiction and this is the first time I am doing this cause you have written well except some major mistakes with 'him/her/his'. Hence, I couldn't resist amending these mistakes as well as some grammar because it was really throwing me off the grid while trying to read and imaging the scenes with her/his. So, here are the changes I made with bold, italics and underlined. ps. it's much easier to understand it now if you read it below.


At the beginning, if you read my message, I did say that I don't read it again, but in the end, yes, I always make mistakes.

And my native language is French, English is very secondary 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Natashapaul


If Chit doesn't get Prani, I get Chit 😆

I'm calling dibs on my boy rn ❤️🤣


Also, Chetna is the youngest.


I leave you Archit with pleasure lol

He's going to die a bachelor, repeating "Pranati" with his last breath.🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: vswarup


Nats so basically you are giving us the permission to make NatChit official smiley37smiley37smiley37

now just wait Co-Cap!!!!


Our ship is still sailing, don't cha forget that 😆


@Cynthia, sorry for spamming your FF thread with irrelevant stuff!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Natashapaul


Let's just say that I had a Rey under the wishing tree moment with ReadLo 😆


You're a couple of crazy girls 🤣

Nat and V, pagal 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: ReadLo


I leave you Archit with pleasure lol

He's going to die a bachelor, repeating "Pranati" with his last breath.🤣


So you're gonna let your favourite girl on this forum a.k.a. Natasha die repeating 'Chit' until her last breath?


Really Readlo? 😆

Edited by Natashapaul - 4 years ago
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