PraYansh OS- |Adhura Kaam|

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is totally off track. Just an escape from all the current drama going on in the show for PraYansh fans. If not in the episodes just wanted them to be happy-happy atleast in my story😉



She was mad. Super Duper mad. Of course anybody would be if they see their husband like that with his ex. But it wasnt his fault. Mallika was lurking in his room when he came out of the shower & he was quite baffled to she her there. He asked he to leave and she only came closer and when pranati entered she saw them and stormed out of the room. Now how was this his mistake.

He knew very well that she was upset from the clinking of the vessels from the kitchen. It was not a good idea try talking to her now as he knew those "Barthans" would be flying right at him if he tried to do so. So he was sitting in the hall trying think of ways to cool his biwi.

A loud voice snapped him out of his thoughts. 'Bandarrr Papaaa!! ' Oh Jugs was back. She was sitting right besides him.

Jugnu - ' Kya tum bhi.. kitni der se awaz de rahi hoon.' She chirpped away.

Reyansh - 'Siyapaa ho gaya yaar!! Teri mummy mujhe uss Mallika ke sath dekh kar gusse mein hai. Iss ee pehle tum kuch kahu, mein ne kuch nahi kiya wo khud chali ayi thi.' He said preparing to listen to his daughter's lecture.

She slap her palm on her forehead in disbelif

Jugnu - 'Tum kuch kyu nahi karte. Pichli baar jab woh nayi maa ke khane ka burai kar rahi thi mein ne toh kaha tha ki uski sar pe hum dal fek dete hai.. par tum toh kuch karte nahi.'

He rolled his eyes at her antics.

He would have happily emptied the bowl on Mallika's head if not for his dadi. Even after his confrontation with dadi and finally marrying Paranti, Mallika still wouldnt let them be. She tried to create rift between them hoping he would come back to her. Though he wanted her out of this house there was nothing he could do or say. Their buisness was still running safe because of her dad and dadi didnt want to upset him.

But he couldnt say this to his daughter. Both Pranati and him had decided that no matter what they were going to keep Jugnu away from these internal matter.

Reyansh - 'Oi.. kuch bhi.. uss din mein ne hi uski bolthi band karaya tha.. yaad nahi kaise maine uski jali kheer ki story suna ke usse chup karaya tha.' He said proudly tapping her nose.

Jugnu - 'Latho ki bhooth batho se nahi manti. Dekha nahi kese wo wapas aa jathi hai. Usko kuch yesi sabhak sikhana padega ki wo iss ghar ki aur mud ke bhi na dheke! '

Reyansh - 'Uski bath badh mein dekenge.. mujhe yeh bata ki teri mummy ko ab kese manau? ' He asked hoping she would come up with somthing.

She lifted her hands up surrendering

Jugnu - 'Mujh se math puchoo.. Tum ne kaand kiya tho tum hi usse suljhao. Tum dono ke chakar mein padugi toh mein khud faas jaungi'

They head footsteps and immediately froze.

'Jugnu.. Tum se kaha hai na school se athe hi hath muh dhona hai. Jaldi jake fresh ho ke aao' Pranati said in her not so usual strict tone.

Jugnu knew it was not wise to argue or she would end up receiving what was actually in store for "bandhar papa". So she stood up not making a fuss and turned towards her dad giving him a pity look and walked straight to her room.

Pranati glared at him and returned to the kitchen.

He was surely going to die today but since it was bound to happen anyway he decided to go for it now. He took a deep breath and followed her.

She knew he was following her but dint bother to look back.

Ok.. so he knew she was a tough nut but he was not going to give up easily. He stepped in to the kitchen and saw her engrossed in cooking. He had to get her attention first.

'Hmm hmm' he cleared his throat hoping she would notice it. But not reaction. He tried again 'Pani millega?'

'Yeh lo pani Rehansh baba' The house help held a glass of water in front of him.

Reyansh took the glass with a gloomy face. Why did Tai have to do it? Now how was he going to draw her attention?

Idea!!

He turned his attention toward Tai

Reyansh - 'App ek baar jara ja ke Jugnu ko dekloge? Wo shayad nahane ke bahane mere kamre mein video game khel rehi hogi. Usse kehna ki agar vo jaldi fresh ho ke niche nahi ayi toh nayi maa usse dekhne aa jayegi.'

Tai - 'Ji baba ' saying so she left the kitchen.

Ohh great! Now he had to make Pranati respond.

Reyansh - 'Tum kitne kaam karti ho.. chalo mein tumhari madath karti hoon ' he picked up the knife and started cutting the vegetables placed on the counter. He was trying hard to get a reaction but she was ignoring him.

Reyansh - 'Acha mein ne tumhe bataya nahi na.. Jugnu ke school se phone aya tha. Wo kissi bache ke upar pani fek di aur dono ke bech jagda hua.' He paused and waited for her to respond. No responce.

Reyansh - 'Tum ajj ithna sara khana bana liya hai, toh chalo Archit ko dinner pe bula lete hai! ' He was sure she was going to be baffled hearing this. But no, no responce.

Ab kya karu.. he was absent mindedly looking at Pranati.

'Oh Shit...' he yelled and she looked at him startled. He was holding his finger in his hand and jumping up and down

She rushed towards him.

Pranati - 'Kya kar rahe ho tum Rey, ek kaam thik se nahi kar sakthe. Dhyan kaha tha tumhara? '

Reyansh - 'Tum pe!! Arre tumhari galthi hai tum agar mujhe ignore nahi kar rahi hoti toh mera dhyan nahi batakta ' He complained like a child and was not even looking at the cut.

Pranati - 'Bacho jaise behave karna bandh karo aur apna hath dikhao ' she demanded as she tried taking a closer look at the wound.

Reyansh - 'Ohh oww.. Nahi.. mujhe nahi dikhana.' He pulled back his hand.

Pranati - 'Chup. Do apna hath ' she removed the hand covering his finger. Rey closed his eyes not wanting to see it. Suddenly there was a chuckle and he open his eyes to know what was happening. She was giggling.

What? His mouth wide open in shock.

Reyansh - 'Pagal.. Tum has rahi ho? Meri hath kat gaya hai.. tumhe yeh mazak lag raha hai? '

She tried to control her laughter and said faking seriousness

Pranati - 'Jara dekho tho.. Kitni gahri choti hai.. sayad stitch lagana padega '

Reyansh - 'Kya? '

He quickly open his eyes to take a glance at his wound. It was just a small cut that wasnt even deep.

Pranati couldnt hold it any longer and burst out laughing.

Reyansh looked at her and felt content seeing her not angry any more. He slowly took a step forward and slid his hands around her waist. She realised that she had let her gaurd down but she wasnt yet ready to speak to him. She tried wriggling out of his hold

Pranati - 'Lunch ka time ho raha hai. Tum jao aur mujhe apna kaam karne do.'

He cupped her faced with one hand still holding her firmly with the other and said

Reyansh -'Yaar please sun lo meri bath.. Sachi mein mujhe nahi pata tha ki woh kamre mein hai. Jab mein nahane gayi thi tab toh tum kamre mein thi na. Jab nikla toh usse dekh ke mein bhi chok gayi thi! Usse jane ke liye bol rahi thi tabhi tum aagaye! '

Pranati -'Ha toh? Mein kaha kuch bol rahi hu? Tum chodo mujhe! '

She said pushing him.

He knew if he let her go this was not going to end any time soon and she would go back to ignoring him.

Reyansh -'Wahi toh problem hai. Tum mujhe dato, maro, gussa karo par chup math raho. Mein tumhe ese nahi dhek sakthi. Prani please kuch toh bolo.'

She couldnt hold it any longer

Pranati -'Mein kya bolu? Mujhe pata hai ki tumhari galti nahi hai aur fir bhi jab mein usse tumhare sath dekhti hu toh mein apna gussa control nahi kar sakti. Use bol ke bhi koi fayda nahi aur ghar se nikane ke liye bol bhi nahi sakthi kyu ki dadi ka orders hai. Ab iske liye tum pe gussa toh nahi kar sakhi mein. Toh chup reh ke apni gussa nikalne ki koshish karthi hu! '

He was so touched. She was silent not because she was angry at him but dint want him to feel bad. He was still getting used to this feeling. Until this women came to his life he had never felt truely loved. When he left her years back, he had not only lost his love but had also lost the only person who had genuinly cared for him. And after all that had happened between them, all the hurt & pain she had suffered only because of him, how could she still love him so selflessly. He blinked his eyes to keep his tears from falling.

Reyansh -'Pranati mein sach mein nahi janti ki mein ne yesa kya kiya, jo tum mujhe mil gayi! Nahi janti ke tumhare iss pyaar ke kabil ho bhi ya nahi! Par ek bath yaad rak, tumhari jaga, apne zindigi mein na mein ne kabhi kisi ko diya hai na kissi ko doongi. Mallika ya koi aur jithne bhi kosish kyu na kare.. wo kabhi tumhe mujh se door nahi kar sakti! Samji Mrs. Pranati Reyansh Khunana! '

And gave her is signature wink.

She couldnt be more happier. His words melted away all her anger. A tear tickled down her cheek.

He just couldnt watch this. Reyansh slowly kissed away her tear. Her breath hitched at the sudden proximity and closed her eyes. His touch could still make her loose her mind. She clutched his collor tight as a blush crept on those cheek. He couldnt take his eyes of her. He lifted her chin and neared closer.

They heard a loud thud and turned towards the door. Maan was just standing at the door with closed eyes shaking his head and bottle was lying on the floor.

'Shit.. Sorry!! ' They heard him say.

Pranati was turing to darker shade of red while Reyansh was cursing his stars.

Reyansh -'Yaar tera timing hamesha hi galath kyu hota hai! 1 min badh atha to tera kya jatha! '

Pranati rolled her eyes at Rey.

Maan was picking the bottle and when hear this. He knitted his brow and said

Maan- 'Bhai, tumhare time se anna toh impossible hai.. tum toh kabhi bhi, kahin bhi...'

'Kya kabhi bhi, kahin bhi chachu' Jugnu had just heard that when she came in.

All three looked at each other not knowing what to tell her.

Pranati tried hard to cover up.

Pranati -'Woh... Jugnu... Maan.. Mein.. Bandar papa..' But was clearly failing. Rey took up the conversation quickly.

Reyansh -'Kuch nahi ninja, wo toh Dominos ki tagline bol rahe ta.. 'Kabhi bhi, Kahien bhi'

Maan -'Haa.. Dominos ka tagline.. wahi toh hai '

Reyansh signaled him to not say anything more and make her ask further questions. Pranati sighed in relief.

Pranati -'5 min mein lunch tayar ho jayegi. Ab jao tum log. Mujhe kaam karne do '

Reyansh -'Are hum bhi madath karthe hai.. Jaldi ho jayega.'

Pranati -'Koi zarurath nahi! Bohot madath ho gaya.. Ab jao aur mujhe kaam karne do! '

Maan -'Ok Prabhi '

Jugnu and Maan walked out but Reyansh was still hovering around her. He wispered

Reyansh -'Mein wo kaam karoon jo humne adha chod diye tey?'

A smirk plastered on his face.

Pranati -'Acha! Woh kaam? '

She saw Tai walk in and got an idea!

She played with one of his shirt button with a shy smile.

Pranati -'Theek hai!

Tai app wo rehene dijiye! Rey sabzi katenge salad ke liye.

Aur dyan se katna. Iss baar kath wath math katana!'

Rey was dumbfounded. And now she smirked!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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So guys.. I havnt written in a long time. This is actually the second time im writting so there might be mistakes so please forgive me. Also my mother tounge is not hindi so they might be grammatically errors or things like that too. Please do leave your comments any also it wouls be nice if you could also give a small intro of ur self when commenting. Hope u like it😁

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Superb update.... Please continue it

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Glad u liked it.. This story is a One shot so will not have a next update. But thanks for commenting🤗 Means a lot!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing! 👏Do write more if you can.This amazing couple deserves some amazing fanfics.😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Man! This was soo good ❤️ I know where to come when I'm having my Prayansh feels ☺️


I loved it! You've written it so well. Took me to an alternate PB universe


Please write other one shots or FFs if you can!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: parboni

Amazing! 👏Do write more if you can.This amazing couple deserves some amazing fanfics.😃


Thanks for taking time to comment. I'll do try writting more, though its difficult to find time with assignment and college work🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Natashapaul

Man! This was soo good ❤️ I know where to come when I'm having my Prayansh feels ☺️


I loved it! You've written it so well. Took me to an alternate PB universe


Please write other one shots or FFs if you can!


Comments like these❤

When someone likes you write ups it just feels amazing.


Thanks for your lovely words. It's definitely a motivation to write more😊🙈

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I loved it....so dreamy....can actually picture the scene happening in serial....way into the future though.......please do write more...looking forward to reading other stories by you ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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yayy, this is so nice and sweet ya. I love Rey and Prani in this, Prani hei hi itni sweet yaar.. <3 Keep writing !

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