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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: jey3ram


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Thank you so much dear🤗


It feels like I'm reading my reasons or pains this PB left on us😭


You nailed it in expressing your opinion about show ending 👏

Thank YOU for putting so much efforts. You guys are awesome. I don't know if we will succeed or not but I can say for sure, PB crew now knows that we love them more than they thought....

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Episode 28


Pranati was really worried for Jugnu. Her mother threw her out once too and that was the worst phase of her life and she did the same to her daughter. But she was in delusion that she loves her father more, but now she knew that she loves her mother equally. Maybe she should be happy about that fact but she was sad, cause she couldn't understand her own daughter's feelings and she claims to be good mother.


Pranati: Woh sach mein bohot naraz hai?

Rey: haan, usne kamre ka sara saman todd diya. Keh rhi thi main nai maa ko apni shakal kabhi nhi dikhaungi.


Pranati: Main usse mna loongi, kahan hai woh?


Rey: Riya ke saath hogi, all the best!


Pranati worriedly went ahead to find Jugnu. It is shown that Rey finds Jugnu first and tells her that plan is in action. The whole time Pranati was trying to talk to Jugnu but she was not showing her face to her. With every second Pranati was getting sadder and sadder. Finally Pranati got a hold of her. She was facing her back towards pranati while Pranati sat down on her knees.


Pranati: Jugnu please mujhe maaf kr do. Maine jo bhi kiya tumhaare liye kiya. Mujhe nhi pta tha ki tum hurt ho jaogi. Tum na mujhe jo saza deni hai de do per aise gussa mt kro please.


Jugnu: Jo kahoongi woh karoge?


Pranati: Pakka


Jugnu: Toh pehle kaan pakadd ke uthhak baithhak kro.


Pranati: Jugnu yahan?


Jugnu: Haan yahin. Maafi chahiye ya nhi?


Pranati: Achha achha krti hoon,


She started doing sit ups holding her ears in the middle of the street.


Jugnu: Ab ek haath sarr per rakho aur ek haath pet per.


Pranati does the same


Jugnu: ab ek pair per khade ho jao


Pranati: Kr liya.


Jugnu: Ab ghoomte ghoomte sorry bolo.


Pranati started hopping on one feet and rotating. She kept saying sorry, looking like a complete joker. Suddenly she heard a bunch of laughters. She turned her head to see the rest of the family laughing at her. Jugnu broke her patience too and started laughing with them. Pranati got into a normal position embarrassingly. She saw Jugnu laughing finally showing her face and also started laughing with them. Jugnu gave her a tight hug.


Jugnu: Main aapse gussa nhi thi, per mujhe bohot bura laga jab aap mujhe chhodke chali gayi thi. Maine aapko bohot miss kra maa. Firse mt jana


Pranati: Kabhi nhi jaungi, I am sorry Jugnu


Jugnu: Koi baat nhi, Chalo ab dance krein.


She pulled her mother in front and started dancing. Everyone joined them and danced their hearts out. Pranati, Jugnu and Reyansh together did the Visarjan.


Jugnu: Bohot maza aya, main toh agle saal ka wait nhi kr sakti.


Maan: Arre Jugnu tu Khurrana hai, tujhe party krne ke liye agle saal ka wait nhi krna padega.


Pranati: Tum sab na meri bachi ko bigaado mt.


Jugnu(hugging her): Haan bigaado mt


Rey: Abe tune toh party badal li


Jugnu: Agar aapki party mein rahi na toh Nai maa fir chhodke chali jayengi


Armaan(teasing): Aur aisa toh Rey bhai bilkul nhi chahte, haina Rey bhai.


Both reyansh and Pranati looked at each other and blushed.


Pranati: Achha Jugnu main ab chalti hoon, kal main tumhe school se pick up kroongi okay?


Jugs: Haan, bye


She hugged her again and then left with Riya.


Armaan: Rey bhai chalein?


Maan: Rey bhai abhi thodi na aayeinge, subha se bhabhi ke wait kr rahein hain. Toh abhi long walk, alone time, romaa...


Rey: bilkul sahi, abhi teri biwi tujhe bhav nhi de rhi aur tujhmein propose krne ki himmat hi nhi hai toh tum log jealous hoge hi na. Chalo ab dafa ho


Armaan and Maan left embarrassing themselves. Reyansh held her hand and pulled her aside.


Pranati: Reyansh tum yeh kya kr rahe ho?


Rey: Arre tune suna nhi Maan ne kya kaha. Long walk, alone time, romaa...


Pranati kept her hand on his shoulder and pushed him away.


Pranati: Pehle long walk kr lein?


Rey: Okay.


She started walking ahead when Reyansh pulled a pin from her hair that opened her bun. Her straight hair fell perfectly on her shoulders. She turned around to look at Reyansh who was looking intently at her.


Rey: Perfect!


Pranati looked down to hide her smile. She turned around and started walking again. Reyansh caught up to her and started walking beside her.


Pranati: Yeh mt samajhna ki main tumse gussa nhi hoon


Rey: Ab maine kya kr diya?


Pranati: Pehle itni zid kri mujhe bulaane ki aur fir Jugnu ko mere uper prank krne ka idea bhi de diya. Tumhe kya laga mujhe pta nhi chalega?


Rey: Actually mujhe pta tha ki tujhe samajh aa jayega. Tu mujhe aur Jugnu, dono ko bohot achhi tarah jaanti hai.


Pranati(turning face away from him): hmm


Rey(Bumping his shoulder to hers): achha sorry...


Pranati: ek naya word seekh liya tumne aur tabse wahi bol rhe ho


Rey: Main isilye bolta hoon kyunki jab bhi tu mujhe maaf krti hai, hamesha woh Pranati special smile deti hai. Dekh dekh woh rhi..


He pointed at her face and she tried to control her smile but eventually gave in.


Pranati: Reyansh tumne aaj zid kri toh main aa gayi per aisa harr baar nhi chalega. Woh toh aaj dadi chali gayi toh sab thhik se ho gaya. Waise Jugnu ne ek baar bhi mujhse ghar chalne ke liye nhi kaha. Tumne usse sab bta diya kya?


Rey: Maine usse kaha tha ki tujhe wapus laane mein thoda time lagega, baaki woh khud samajh gayi. Kafi intelligent hai hamari beti.


Pranati: Mujhper gayi hai na.


Rey: Sirf dimag tujhper gaya hai. Kabhi usse football khelte hue dekh. Bohot jaldi bohot kuchh seekh gayi. Aur pranks toh tune dekh hi liye.


Pranati: Haan haan dekh liye. Aur baaki sab kaisa hai ghar mein?


Rey: Armaan ne Riya ko Navya ke baare mein bta diya, and obviously riya bohot hurt hui. Per usne uss baat ko Maan aur Navya ke beech mein nhi aane diya. Usne Maan ko permission de di.


Pranati: Main imagine bhi nhi kr sakti Riya ko kitna bura laga hoga


Rey: Galti meri hai yaar. I should have been a good example for my brothers. Armaan ne wahi toh kiya jo usne dekha. Aur tune toh aakhir tak koshish kri, per maine hi sab bigaad diya.


Pranati(like a kid): Yeh tum na apni galtiyan ginva ke bura banne ki koshish mt kro. Mujhe pta hai, tum sirf mujhe bacha rahe the. Agar meri wajah se shaadi tut jaati, toh dadi meri jaan le leti. Aur ek tarah se sahi bhi hua. Navya ko usse itna pyaar krne wala Maan mil gaya aur mujhe lagta hai Armaan bhi Riya ko like krne lag gaya hai.


Rey: Lagta toh mujhe bhi hai. Waise tu hamaare liye bohot lucky hai, Jab se tu aayi hai tabse hum Khurrana brothers ko commit krna seekh gaye


Pranati: thank you, per ab iss lucky charm ko jana padega, Maa wait kr rhin hogi.


Rey: achha chal pehle ghar chalte hain, main wahan se apni gaadi pick up krke tujhe drop kr deta hoon.


Pranati: Koi zaroorat nhi hai, main cab se aayi thi aur main cab se hi chali jaungi. Dadi ne dekha toh hum dono gaye. Tum ghar jao aur Jugnu ka khayal rakho.


Rey: Achha kamse kam cab toh main book kr sakta hoon na?


Pranati: Thhik hai.


Reyansh booked a cab for Pranati. The cab arrived and she said her bye before leaving.


Rey: Yeh dadi ki problem ka kuchh krna padega

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Episode 29


2 days later...


Two pair of legs are seen walking down on grass. The mysterious person pulls up his black hoodie as he switched on his mobile flashlight. He carefully looked here and there and opened the nearest window. He stopped in the middle to stop the eerie sound that the window was making. He somehow managed to get through the little space and entered the room. His eyes fell on the figure that was peacefully sleeping on the bed. His steps slowly advanced towards the figure.


"Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh"


He covered the mouth of the person.


"Abe kya kr rhi, marwayegi kya?"


The intruder reveals his face to be Reyansh's. He looked like he was scared to death.


Pranati(switching on the lights): Reyansh tum yahan kya kr rahe ho.


Rey: Tujhse milne aya tha yaar. Aur tu toh aise behave kr rhi jaise main pehle kabhi khidki se kudke aya hi nhi.


Pranati: woh college ke din the Reyansh. Ab tum insaano ki tarah darwaze se aa sakte ho.


Rey: Agar main darwaze se aata toh tere mummy papa meri jaan le lete aur main tera surprise kharab nhi krna chahta tha


Pranati: Konsa surprise?


He smiled and took out a box from behind. He opened it to reveal a small cupcake with strawberry frosting and rainbow sprinkles.


Pranati: Tumhe yaad tha?


Rey: Of course, so 5 (took out a candle), 4 (placed it on the cupcake), 3 (lit it up) 2, (forwarded it to her) 1....


Pranati smiled and blew up the candle.


Rey: Happy birthday Pranati.


Pranati: Thankyou.


She took the cupcake from his hand and fed it to him. He did the same to her.


Pranati: Tum uper aake baithh sakte ho.


Reyansh then realised that he was on the floor this whole time. He snickered and sat beside her on the bed. She slightly scooted towards him and hugged his arm. She placed her head on his shoulder.


Rey: Pta hai main hamesha tere liye cupcake hi kyun lata tha?


Pranati(sarcastically): Kyunki tumhe kisi ke liye bhi koi bhi effort daalne mein bohot problem hoti thi.


Rey(laughing): Correct, per pta hai main aaj kyun laya?


Pranati: kyunki tum jaante the, ki mujhe hamesha bohot saare cakes aur gifts milte the, per tumhara cupcake lana mera favourite part tha. Tumhe pta hai kyun?


Rey: Because that was something between us. Hum dono hamesha alag hi cheezein krte the na? Main tere birthday per cupcake laata tha aur tu mere birthday per..


Pranati: Boondi ke laddu. Jugnu ke birthday per koi teesri hi cheez sochni padegi.


Rey: Miss kr rhi hai usse?


Pranati: Haan, per woh so rhi hogi na.


Rey: hmm...but kal maine pura din plan kiya hua hai. Tu, main aur Jugnu, tera birthday saath mein mnaayeinge. Toh kal pura din free rakhio.


Pranati: Okay. Ab tum jao, Jugnu uthh gai aur tum uske saath nhi hue toh woh darr jayegi.


Rey: Woh shaitan, jisne dadi ko dara ke rakha hua hai, woh darr jayegi?


Pranati: Phir bhi jao. Kal subha milte hain.


Rey: Mmmhh.....jaane ka mann nhi hai.


Pranati: Nhi hai? (He shook his head) Mummy ko bulaaoon?


Rey: Nhi nhi nhi, jata hoon main .


He got up from the bed, hugged her and wished her again. He carefully jumped out of the window and started to leave when Pranati stopped him.


Pranati: Reyansh suno


Rey: jaldi bol


Pranati: Paas aao, kuchh batana hai


He moved his ear closer to her. Pranati smiled and kissed on his cheek. Reyansh almost jumped in shock.


Pranati: I love you. Bye


She suddenly closed her window. The corners of Reyansh's lips lifted up as he placed his hand on his right cheek where Pranati just kissed. It's weird how they are mature adults and parents of a 8 year old kid, but they still behave like hormonal teenagers. He slowly walked back to his car and drove to his home.

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Jugs: Maa maa maa


Next morning Jugnu started jumping on her mothers bed. Pranati woke up to too much noise.


Jugs: HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!


Pranati: Thank youuuu


They both hugged each other tightly. Pranati kissed her on forehead. Now Jugnu doesn't resist any kind love that is shown by her parents. She accepted both of them whole heartedly. She now knows the beauty of being loved and she trusts them enough to be vulnerable in front of them.


Pranati: Tum yahan kaise aayi?


Jugs: Maan chachu ne drop kiya. Aur papa ne strict instructions di hai ki aapko 10 baje ready rehna hai, hum sab bahar ja rahein hai.


Pranati: Mujhse zada toh tu mere birthday ke liye excited hai.


Jugs: Arre mujhe bhi dekhna hai log apne birthday per krte kya hai. Wahan anaath ashram mein toh kisi ko apna birthday pta hi nhi hota tha. Toh hum sabka birthday 1st January ko mnaate the aur uss din bas kaam se chhuti milti thi.


Pranati(felt bad but tried to cheer her up): Iss baar tujhe tera birthday bhi pta hai aur hum tera birthday bohot achhi tarah mnaayeinge.


Jugs: Per abhi toh aapka birthday hai na. Jao jaldi se ready ho jao.


Pranati: Achha okay meri maa.


Pranati got up and moved towards bathroom. She took a refreshing bath and came out. She did a little puja and went to her parents. She took their blessings and sat on the breakfast table where Jugnu was already hogging on food.


Jugs: Nani khana bohot achha hai. Ek aur parathha do na.


Pranati: Maa 2 le aao iske liye, kam na padd jaye.


She tickled Jugnu. Pranati and Jugnu had their breakfast together with their parents.


Jugs: Maa hum late ho rahein hain.


PM: Kahan jaa rahe tum dono?


Pranati: Maa woh main aaj Jugnu ko ghumane le jaa rhi hoon jaise aap mujhe leke jaaya krte the.


PM: Yeh toh bohot achha idea hai. Jao jao, per ghar time per aa jana.


Pranati: Ok maa bye.


Both Jugnu and Pranati walked out to see Reyansh leaning on his car. Jugnu said that she left her shoes in Pranati's room so she left to grab it. Pranati walked to him and folded her hands.


Pranati: Jacket bohot achhi lag rhi hai...kisne select kri?


Rey: Thi koi pagal, college mein marti thi mere uper. Ek baar le gaya usse shopping krne, toh mere peechhe padd gayi ki usse mujhe issi jacket mein dekhna toh maine bhi haan keh diya. Just as a favour you know.


Pranati: favour huh? (she slapped his arm). Aur main tumhaare peeche padi thi? Maine sirf shelf se nikal kr di thi aur tumne bina try kre khareed li.


Rey: Arre that's because I trust you yaar. Aur tujhe kitni baar main shopping leke gaya tha, tune na kabhi apne liye select kre, na mere liye. Pehli baar kuchh choose kra tha, toh maine zada socha hi nhi.


Pranati: Kitne ghante lagaye isse dhoondne mein?


Rey: Actually maine sambhal ke rakhi thi. For special occasions


Jugnu came running behind them.


Rey: Ready Ninja, chalein?


Jugnu excitedly said yes and sat on the back seat while Reyansh and Pranati took the front two. They put on their seat belts and drove off.

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Continue soon please.... It's awesome

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Thank you sana🤗🤗


We posted your posts as tweets man 😃


And we repeated in two trending


Now I'm becoming greedy...


Because of navratri, we postponed next Trending to this weekend


So we have time... I wish to read a beautiful scene analysis in your words😃


Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please


Choice is yours... Any prayansh scene is okk😳


Thanks in advance 😜

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: jey3ram

Thank you sana🤗🤗


We posted your posts as tweets man 😃


And we repeated in two trending


Now I'm becoming greedy...


Because of navratri, we postponed next Trending to this weekend


So we have time... I wish to read a beautiful scene analysis in your words😃


Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please


Choice is yours... Any prayansh scene is okk😳


Thanks in advance 😜

Well since you already said thanks, I have to do it😂


Pre warning: I'm not really good at it but I'll try my best.


I do have a scene in my mind, but if you want to suggest something, please go ahead.


Also, I'm really honoured that you posted my post as your tweets....

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Episode 30


Pranati: Hum jaa kahan rahein hai?

Rey: Patience! I promise tujhe achha lagega.


Reyansh drove for like 20 minutes making both Jugnu and Pranati impatient. Finally he stopped and Jugnu excitedy got out.


Jugs: Mandir? Hum yahan kyun aaye hain.


Rey: Kyun...


Pranati: Kyunki mani yahan hamesha aati thi (turned towards Reyansh)....Thank you.


Reyansh smiled and started walking towards the temple. Pranati was really impressed. There was a time when he never even looked towards a temple but today he is willingly going inside.


All three of them went inside and Prayed to god. Next Reyansh took them to a Gurdwara and then to a Dargah. Jugnu was really confused the all time but Pranati helped her out. She showed her how to pray and taught her about the importance of every ritual they did in all of those places. Lastly, he took her to St. Anne's church. When they came out, Pranati turned towards Reyansh.


Pranati: Thanks Reyansh. Pta nhi kabse main inn jagahon per nhi gayi. Waise aaj tumne bhi mere saath pray kiya, Kya manga?


Rey: Yahi, ki tu, main aur hamari famaily hamesha khush rahein.


She smiled remembering her own words years ago. That Reyansh and this Reyansh was so different, she thought.


Pranati: Tumhare muh se hamari family sunke achha laga.


Rey(smiling): Chal, next stop.


They all again sat in the car and Reyansh drove off.


Jugs: Ab hum kahan ja rahein hai?


Rey: Sabse special jagah


He stopped his car in front of the place which is closest to his heart. Pranati looked towards her right as a tear escaped her eye. Jugnu got out before her parents to see what was so special about this place. While Pranati turned towards him and looked intently in his eyes.


Rey: 9 saalon mein bohot baar aya hoon yahan, per aaj pehli baar khush hoon. Abhi tak yeh jagah sirf tere pyaar aur mere dhoke ki gawah thi, per ab main sab kuchh badalna chata hoon. Taaki aaj ke baad main jab bhi yahan aaon, sirf smile karoon.


Reyansh stepped out and moved towards Pranati's door. He slowly opened it for her and forwarded his hand.


Rey: Come on..


Pranati wiped the tear on her left cheek and slipped her hand in his. She got out of the car. Reyansh signaled Jugnu and the kid went back inside the car. She came back with a box with a ribbon bow over it.


Pranati confusedly took it from her and opened it. She found a three way lock inside it. Her eyebrows perked up as a smile crept through her face. Her eyes shifted to Reyansh who took out a red ribbon from his pocket. Three of them tied the ribbon on one of the branch on the tree and locked the lock. Reyansh took his key and opened his wallet to keep it safe. Pranati saw another key at the same place and Reyansh noticed the same. None of them said a word about it. They knew each other enough to know what was going on in each other's mind at that point.


Rey: Ek last stop, chalein?


Both of them nodded and got back into the car. It took them another 20 minutes to reach their last stop according to Reyansh. The whole time Pranati and Jugnu was predicting where they might be going.


Reyansh pressed the breaks in a rather strange place. It wasn't strange when you look at it, the only strange thing about it was that there was no praying place anywhere near it which broke the monotony of today's outing. There were big buildings in the middle of the city. This time both the females didn't question him and he was happy that they didn't. He lead them inside the building and up the stairs. They stopped in front of door on the third floor. The door was labeled as 302.


Pranati: Reyansh yeh kiska ghar hai?


Rey: Hamara


Her head shot towards him. the confusion that she had before was just multiplied by 1000. She was not even sure she heard that correct. While Reyansh was just smiling proudly.


Pranati: Hamara?


Rey: Hamara. Tera, mera aur Jugnu ka.


Pranati: Yeh kab? kaise?


Rey: Humme koi solution chahiye tha na, toh yeh raha solution. Aur main yeh tere mummy papa aur daadi se darr darr ke thak chuka tha.


Pranati: Per tum dadi se kya kahoge


Rey: Mujhe kya kehne hai? Dadi ne khud mujhe kaha. Tune court mein jo bhi kaha, dadi ko laga ki meri wajah se kaha hai. Woh mujhse itni impress ho gai ki unhone mujhe 1 mahine ki chhuti dedi.


Pranati: Aur Jugnu?


Rey: Ab Jugnu uss ghar mein nhi rahegi toh tu milne kisse aayegi? Aur agar Pranati Mishra uss ghar se tu dur rahegi toh Baljeet Kaur Khurrana bohot khush hogi. Toh kal se main aur Jugnu 1 mahine ke liye trip per jaa rahein hai. Tu chalegi?


The corners of Pranati's lips moved up as a few tears left her eyes. Her face screamed pure, unadulterated happiness.


Rey: Oye jitna rona dhona hai, abhi ro le. Hamare ghar ke andar ek bhi aansu nhi.


She wiped her tears and nodded her head like a five year old kid. Both of them took one hand of Jugnu as Reyansh opened the door with his key. As they opened the door, Pranati saw a clay tray in front of her. She was really happy that Reyansh put so much thought into this.


Rey: Ninja, first step ka sirf ek hi chance milega, toh ek dum dhyan se rakhio apna pair.


Jugnu laughed along with Pranati as all of them removed their respective footwear. They slowly placed their right feet on the clay tray to keep the first memory of their own house alive.


"Surprise!!!!"


Another wish of yours is granted by me. Hahah...just kidding. But I'm curious to know if you liked that Idea. Also please tell me if it is getting boring, I'll think of something else then.

Edited by sanakhan240201 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Sana!! You read out minds!!

Few of us discussing wishing tree scene with jugnu where we mentioned they should tie lock with 3 keys along with jugnu!

This is amazing!! You are the only source of providing happy PB now!! 😍😍

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Sana....you are a magician!!!! How did you know what we wanted????

This is exactly what we have been thinking for so long.......PB story continuing in PB style....without melodrama or OTT....just a natural progression of 3 different people becoming a family.....

Loved it so much!!!!! Cant Even tell you how much!!!!

Please do continue it......waiting for the next part!!!!!

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