Huh? Boring? Kya? Aur yeh? ...I loved it sana....this was so sweet navya and maan ki story...I was waiting for it to be shown in the show...I know prayanshu main hai..but....for a good story side characters need to be strong and detailed...and developed properly....I am loving it 😍😍😍
Okay I know what to do now,
A little secret, I loved Navya's and Maan's track, I actually wanted a cute track for Riya and Armaan too
Thank you
Originally posted by: DiscoDhokla
Sana, This is beautiful!!
You write magic !
Special thanks for the hug sequence!!
Something that i have been waiting for a very long time but offcourse - we never got it😭
I can totally feel you, I really hope they start shooting for OTT platform again....
Thankyou so much
Blood oozing out of my 👂 listening your screaming 😂
DD wants hug ...hug...hug .
Thank you Sana . For fulfilling her wish
Your wish is my command ma'am ;)
And Sana ..I'm a slow reader . Completed 10 chapters...
Will take a week or so to catch up this chapter...
Vardhan track is really painful to watch or read from pranati's eyes😭
Take your time, no rush....
And Sana. I want you to express something on PB to support the trending tomorrow...
You write so well like it feels like we're watching the soap and not reading a FF..
Please I want this world to read your words so that it makes them to feel Pavitra Bhagya..
Could you write something and post it on Twitter
Or here... We're okk with anything.. just your words are important and we will make sure to tweet them if you don't have Twitter account and not interested in trending...
We do created accounts only out of love for PB.. so we feel proud to act like Messengers😃
Waiting to hear from you🤗
Of course, I would love to do that.
I don't have a twitter account cause last time I had, I was way too addicted to it.
But I promise to write it here first thing in the morning.
And thanks to you others for doing so much for the show. Your efforts are really appreciable.....
My letter to Ekta Ma'am
Ma'am I am very well aware that so many of PB fans have already shown the emotional connection with that show. Even I have the same connection. The show gave me a smile for 20 mins every day. Even when I was going through a bad phase, I didn't miss watching the show cause it gave me pure joy. But right now I want to state facts...
1) The show has Aneri Vajani, whose been a part of successful shows like Nisha aur uske cousins, Beyhadh and silsila badalte rishton ka.
2)You've got Kunal Jai Singh, whose been a part of Ishqbaaz, dil bole oberoi and again, silsila badalte rishton ka.
3) Both of them have worked together on another show so they already have a previous fan following. AND that show was on OTT platform too.
4)The most important part, you have Palki Malhotra as your producer whose success record is 100% up till now. Who is known to make most loved shows for youth. Like Dil Dosti Dance and Girls on top.
5) We all know that youngsters as well as adults are watching everything online now-a-days. So trust me, only half of them are watching Naagin 5 on actual TV
6) Kaisi yeh Yaariyan 3, silsila badalte rishton ka and Ek duje ke vaaste 2, all of them were shifted to OTT, but the producers didn't face any loss. Eventually these shows were telecasted on channel too. Power of the people!!
7) Lastly, Even after your no promotions and constant slot change, people are still fighting for it. You see the reality now?
I have always loved the show from day 1. The story had the funniest star cast which made me really happy. I was always curious to see what this story might turn out. But you just cut it like a piece of cake. I hope this message reaches you and you reconsider your decision.
Happy reading!
Episode 26
Pranati quietly sat down beside him on Archit's sofa and decided to ask what happened.
Pranati: Kya hua?
Rey: Navya ko jab bhi problem hoti hai woh sabse pehle maan ko call krti hai aur Maan kaise uski saari pareshaani khatam kr deta hai. Tujhe Jugnu ke time kitni problem hui hogi na? Main toh toh tere saath tha hi nhi.
Pranati: Hui toh thi, per woh past tha Reyansh, hum usse badal toh nhi sakte
Rey: I wish Pranati, I wish main badal sakta. Soch agar main tere saath hota toh sab kitna achha hota. Hum dono saath mein tera check up kraane jaate. First time ultrasound ki report mein jugnu ke haath aur pair dikhna, uski first heart beat, uski first kick, tera gubaare jaise mota hona. Maine sab miss kr diya.
Pranati(asking annoyingly): Tumhein mujhe mote hote hue dekhna tha?
Rey: Of course, I bet tu tab bhi bohot khubsurat lagti hogi
Pranati: Tum na bilkul pagal ho. (Holding his hand) waise main tumhe thoda bohot experience de sakti hoon
Rey: Kaise?
Pranati: Ek minute.
Pranati got up and moved towards Navya's room. She called Maan outside
Pranati: Maan tum ek minute bahar aa sakte ho
Maan: Kya baat hai Prabhi?
Pranati: Maan waise toh Archit ne mujhe Navya ka khayal rakhne ke liye hi bheja tha, per tum aa gaye ho tum hi ruk jao.
Maan(teasing): Kyun, aap aur bhai kahin ja rahe ho kya? Alone time chahiye?
Pranati(smiling sarcastically): Beta Maan, bhoolo mt main tumhari Prabhi hoon, tumhari taang khichne ki wajayein mere paas bhi kam nhi hai( indicating towards Navya). Tum chahte ho ki main khichu?
Maan(blushing): Nhi Prabhi.
Pranati: Good, toh main aur Reyansh ja rahein hai, achhi tarah se dhyaan rakhna Navya ka.
Maan: Ji
Maan nodded his head and Pranati started to leave when he called her. She turned her head towards him to hear what he was about to say
Maan: Welcome to the family...Bhabhi
Pranati gave him a million dollar smile and left. She asked Reyansh to come with her. Reyansh drove them to Pranati's house. She opened the main door to her house with her keys.
Rey: Tere mummy papa ghar nhi hain kya?
Pranati: Nhi, woh massi ke ghar puja hai toh woh log wahan gaye hai.
She lead him to her room and placed her bag on the bed. She opened her cupboard and pulled out the top drawer. She took out heavy file and gave it to Reyansh.
Rey: Ab tu mujhse padhai krwaygi kya?
Pranati: Jitna main tumhe padha sakti thi utna maine college mein padha diya tha, aur mujhe nhi lagta, ki tumhari aur padne ki capacity bhi hai
Rey: Itni badi file kyun pakdai hai mujhe?
Pranati: tum khoke toh dekho
Rey sat down with Pranati on bed and opened the file to see a big page with bold letters saying '1st month'. He turned to see, pictures of pregnancy tests and repots that confirmed pregnancy.
Pranati: First month mein kuchh zada toh nhi hai per second month se actual journey start hoti hai. (turning the page to the 2nd month heading and then to ultrasound report). Woh chhota sa spot dekh rahe ho, woh Jugnu hai.
Reyansh smiled looking at it. She continued narrating every event that happened during all the months of pregnancy.
She took out a little pendrive from the file and connected it to her laptop.
Pranati: Yeh suno
She played the audio file which contained the first heart beat of Jugnu that she ever heard. It brought tears in Reyansh's eyes.
Rey: Tune yeh sab kitne achhe se sambhaal ke rakha hai.
Pranati: Bas yahi toh yadein thi mere paas meri beti ki. Arrey abhi khatam nhi hua hai aage dekho.
He tuned pages for her and they were finally on 9th month. Where Reyansh found a picture of Pranati with a full grown baby in her stomach. Reyansh smirked and picked it up.
Rey: waise tu utni bhi achhi nhi lag rhi,
Pranati hit him hard on his arm. He started rubbing it where she hit him.
Rey: Mazak kr raha hoon yaar. Bohot cute lag rhi hai. Ek dum gol matol.
They both giggled.
Rey: Thankyou Pranati. Thankyou for all this. And sorry main tere saath nhi tha. Hota toh sara din tere aage peechhe ghumta rehta. Teri dawiyan, hot water bag aur food cravings. Main sabka khayal rakh leta.
Pranati: woh toh tum abhi bhi kr sakte ho...jaise abhi mera garma garam coffee peene ka mann kr raha hai
Rey(standing up and saluting): Yes Ma'am.
Reyansh saw a paper falling from the file. He bent down, picked it up and read what was written on it.
Rey: Abortion papers?
Pranati's smile faded listening to the words. She slowly took the paper from his hand and kept it inside the file. She arranged everything back in file and kept it back inside her drawer.
Pranati: ek baar ke liye main Jugnu ko abort krwane wali thi. Tum mujhe chhodkr chale gaye the. Maa ne bhi mujhe ghar se nikal diya tha. Mujhe laga agar main abort kr loongi toh sab pehle jaisa ho jayega. Almost pills bhi le li thi per mujhse nhi ho paya.
She placed her head on the closed cupboard, tightening her hands on the handles as a few tears left her eyes. She felt two arms wrapping around her from the back. Reyansh placed his head on her head
Rey: I'm sorry Prani, I'm so sorry.
Pranati felt a water drop on her shoulder. she realised that Reyansh was crying. Even after 9 years, she couldn't see him getting sad. She quckly wiped her tears and turned around to look at him.
Pranati: Per ab toh sab kuchh thhik hai na Reyansh? Tum main aur Jugnu saath hain. Sab kuchh sahi hai.
Reyansh wiped his tears and nodded.
Pranati: Ab tumhara emotional natak khatam ho gaya ho toh jaake coffee bnao. Mujhe zada wait krna pasand nhi hai
He laughed on her cute antics and They moved towards kitchen and made coffee for themselves.
Rey: Achha sun, kal Ganpati Visarjan hai. Tujhe ana hai okay?
Pranati: Reynash tumhein pta hai main nhi aa sakti.
Rey: Arre aise kaise nhi aa sakti, bilkul aa sakti hai, tujhe aana hi hai. Humne puja saath mein kri thi na toh Visarjan bhi saath mein hi kareinge.
Pranati: Reyansh dadi...
Rey: Yaar hum hamesha dadi se darte thodi na raheinge. Tu aa rahi hai bas. Abhi main late ho raha hoon, Jugnu ki training ka time ho gaya. Bye.
Pranati: Per Reyansh meri baat toh suno....
Before she could say anything more, she saw Reyansh running out of her door. She was really sad that she was gonna disappoint him tomorrow
Happy reading!
Episode 27
Rey: Jugnu feet ke side se kick krna hai, saamne se nhi. Chal firse try kr.
Jugnu backed away from the football and then ran and kicked it correctly this time. Reyansh caught it with his hands.
Rey: good, form thheek krne mein thoda time lagega aur tere pairon mein jaan daalni padegi. Kick itni strong honi chahiye ki jab football catch kroon toh mere haathon mein dard ho jaaye..
Jugnu: Okay.
Rey: Main waise tere liye ek gift laya hoon, tere room mein hai
Jugnu: Sachi?
Rey: Haan.
Jugnu excitedly ran inside upstairs. She saw a box wrapped up in a shimmery paper. She almost got a hold of it but Reyansh stopped her.
Rey(smiling sarcastically): Pehle hand wash
Jugnu made a face and walked to washroom. She nicely washed her hands and came to open her gift.
Jugs: Shoes!
Rey: Soccer Shoes. Specially football ke liye design krein hai. Kal se inhi shoes ke saath practice hogi.
Jugs(Hugging him): Thankyou papa. Mujhe yeh nai maa ko dikhana hai. Aapne kaha tha ki hum kal school ke baad jayeinge per dadi toh kal keh rhi thi Visarjan hai, toh hum nhi ja paayeinge na.
Rey: Baat toh sahi hai, toh kya hua, hum Nai maa ko yahan bula leinge
Jugs: Sach mein, woh aayeingi?
Rey: Of course aayeingi, main hoon na, tu chinta mt kr. Abhi tera khana ready, neeche jaake kha le aur sunn, dadi ke saamne pranati ki koi baat nhi krni okay?
Jugs: Okay.
They both went down to eat. Everyone settled down.
Dadi: Haaye ghar mein shaanti dekh rahe ho? Yeh sab uss Panauti ke jaane ki wajah se, bade time baad aaj dhang se khana khaayeinge.
Dadi was clearly drunk and happy while Reyansh was confused as to what to feel. Should he be angry on his dadi about the way she is talking about Pranati or to laugh on the fact that she is completely clueless about what is actually happening. Well he eventually decided to laugh but kept it lowkey.
Dadi: Reyansh puttar tune toh mujhe khush kr diya. Maine toh tujhe Jugnu ko pataane ke liye kaha tha, tune toh Pranati per hi Jadu kr diya. Tujhe meri taraf se 1 mahine ki chhuti. Ja trekking shrekking, zindagi ke mazze le. Oh Kesar, daaru khatam ho gai hai, mere kamre se aur la.
Nobody said a word on the dinning table that night. They just sat there eating while the head of the house was in her own world.
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Rey: Pranati kahan hai tu, abhi tak nhi aayi, puja start hone wali hai.
Reyansh was on a call with love of his life who was not even using the word yes while he was getting really restless with every second. He was in a white kurta payjama with a orange turban on his head
Pranati: Reyansh please samajhne ki koshish kro, sab bigad jayegaa...
Rey: Yaar main hoon na tere saath, kuchh hoga toh main sambhal loonga
Pranati: Per kuchh hone hi kyun dena? Puja hai, aaj ke din kuchh bhi galat nhi hona chahiye.
Rey: Abhi toh sirf yeh galat ho raha ki tu yahan nhi aa rhi. Main tere bina yeh puja nhi kroonga.
Pranati: Reyansh please zid mt kro
Rey: tujhe nhi ana na, mt aa. Main tujhse baat hi nhi karoonga. Bye
He cut the call angrily and joined everyone.
Riya(handling him the puja plate): Li jiye Rey bhaiya, puja shuru ki jiye.
Rey: Main kr leta Riya per Pranati nhi aa rhi aur uske bina....
Riya: Mujhe pta hai, Pranati didi ka message aaya tha mere paas. Unhone mujhe kaha ki main appko yeh bta doon ki woh hamesha aapke saath hai. Aur aap Jugnu ke saath puja kr lijiye, kyunki unka ek hissa hamesha unki beti mein rahega. Please kr lijiye na Rey bhaiya. Pranati di ko bohot achha lagega.
Rey smiled listening to Pranati's cute message. He slowly took the plate from Riya and called Jugnu. Jugnu was twinning her outfit with her dad. They both did the last puja of Lord Ganesha together while Riya was filming everything for Pranati to see.
Rey: GANPATI BAPPA!
Everyone: MORYA!
Maan and Armaan placed the statue of the idol on the decorated cart. The dhols started bursting as everyone started dancing. There was a huge crowd on streets today. And the Khurrana family joined this crowd. As the rest of the family and friends were dancing together, Rey was just walking with sadness in his eyes. He was really missing Pranati a lot.
"Aise muh latkake bappa ko vida kroge?"
He looked up and then sideways to see Pranati in a magenta saree wrapped up in a Maharastrian style. She was wearing a big nose ring and waist band with her hair tied in a bun. She was looking absolutely gorgeous in her traditional look.
Rey: TU AA GAY??
Pranati: Ab tum baat nhi krne ki dhamkiyan doge toh aana hi padega na
Rey: Aur dadi?
Pranati: Unka dhayan maine rakh liya hai,
She pointed towards dadi who was kept busy by Maan, Armaan and Riya. They were not letting her turn around to see Reyansh and Pranati. Pranati winked at Maan who replied with a thumbs up.
Rey: yes, yes, yes, yes, yes (He picked her up from her legs and rotated her around). I love you.
Pranati: Reyansh kya kr rahe ho neeche utaro mujhe, sab log dekh rahein hain.
Rey: I don't care, I love you.
Pranati: Achha achha I love you too, ab neeche utaro mujhe.
He put her down carefully.
Maan(running to them) : Rey bhai aapka romance ho gaya toh Visarjan continue krien.
Rey: Abbe tu yahan hai toh dadi ko kaun sambhaal raha hai?
Armaan: Dadi ne kaha ki unke ghutno mein dard ho raha tha toh woh driver ke saath ghar chali gayi.
Pranati: Toh tum log yahan kya kr rahe ho, tumhe toh jaake unki help krni chahiye thi na?
Rey: Arre kuchh dard ward nhi hua hai dadi ko. Daaru piye hue aadha ghanta ho gaya bas.
Armaan: Exactly...
Pranati let out a small laugh.
Maan: Chalo bhai
Reyansh slowly slipped his hands in Pranati's
Rey: Tu chal main aata hoon
Maan and Armaan gave each other a knowing look and went ahead and started dancing again.
Pranati: Kya hua Reyansh, chalo na, mujhe Jugnu se milna hai.
Rey: Pranati I love you, and I know maine tujhse kaha tha ki main tera hamesha saath doonga. Per Jugnu ke maamle mein nhi de sakta(He dramatically left her hand)
Pranati(worriedly): Kyun kya hua Jugnu ko?
Rey(overdramatically): Kya hua??? Arre pta bhi hai kitni naraz hai woh tujhse. Maine usse bohot samjhaya ki Maa hai woh teri, teri khushi ke liye tujhe chhodke gayi per woh sunne ko taiyar hi nhi hai.
Pranati got really worried while Rey was laughing inside.
Originally posted by: sanakhan240201
My letter to Ekta Ma'am
Ma'am I am very well aware that so many of PB fans have already shown the emotional connection with that show. Even I have the same connection. The show gave me a smile for 20 mins every day. Even when I was going through a bad phase, I didn't miss watching the show cause it gave me pure joy. But right now I want to state facts...
1) The show has Aneri Vajani, whose been a part of successful shows like Nisha aur uske cousins, Beyhadh and silsila badalte rishton ka.
2)You've got Kunal Jai Singh, whose been a part of Ishqbaaz, dil bole oberoi and again, silsila badalte rishton ka.
3) Both of them have worked together on another show so they already have a previous fan following. AND that show was on OTT platform too.
4)The most important part, you have Palki Malhotra as your producer whose success record is 100% up till now. Who is known to make most loved shows for youth. Like Dil Dosti Dance and Girls on top.
5) We all know that youngsters as well as adults are watching everything online now-a-days. So trust me, only half of them are watching Naagin 5 on actual TV
6) Kaisi yeh Yaariyan 3, silsila badalte rishton ka and Ek duje ke vaaste 2, all of them were shifted to OTT, but the producers didn't face any loss. Eventually these shows were telecasted on channel too. Power of the people!!
7) Lastly, Even after your no promotions and constant slot change, people are still fighting for it. You see the reality now?
I have always loved the show from day 1. The story had the funniest star cast which made me really happy. I was always curious to see what this story might turn out. But you just cut it like a piece of cake. I hope this message reaches you and you reconsider your decision.
We make sure this post gets posted in today's Trending😳
Thank you so much dear🤗
It feels like I'm reading my reasons or pains this PB left on us😭
You nailed it in expressing your opinion about show ending 👏
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