MineilSS: Chal Ghar Chalein❤ - Page 5

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Khushi will you ever complete the stories ?

Originally posted by: Srj.bliss

Yeah and both the parts of hear my silence too..I could only read the epilog and I really can't shake of the feeling of craving to read it..it's torturing me that such a story is there but m unable to read it😩pls can u somehow recover or posy the parts somewhere else..

A huge huge huge...thank youuu for all the love❤❤❤❤it's the most underestimated driving force for writer...😂

Secondly, a MASSIVE sorry for the delay and disappointments....u may find all my stories over wattpad(not all chapters are present there but I shall be posting gradually)...

Originally posted by: A_Cosmic_Dust

first things first....

A huge huge huge...thank youuu for all the love❤❤❤❤it's the most underestimated driving force for writer...😂

Secondly, a MASSIVE sorry for the delay and disappointments....u may find all my stories over wattpad(not all chapters are present there but I shall be posting gradually)...

Can i know ur id on wattpad?and also hv u posted one or two stories there or will u just start to post?

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Complete this story😳

Konsi pehle likhun?

1)nightstand

2)HMS

3)ye wali

Originally posted by: A_Cosmic_Dust

...umm...this weekend

Konsi pehle likhun?

1)nightstand

2)HMS

3)ye wali

We want all stories to be completed 😈

Originally posted by: A_Cosmic_Dust

...umm...this weekend

Konsi pehle likhun?

1)nightstand

2)HMS

3)ye wali

Ye weekend ho sake tho theeno chahiye😃par agar ek tho..chal ghar chalein ya fir nightstand

Originally posted by: A_Cosmic_Dust

...umm...this weekend

Konsi pehle likhun?

1)nightstand

2)HMS

3)ye wali

Not just konsi ? You should update all

Originally posted by: A_Cosmic_Dust

...umm...this weekend

Konsi pehle likhun?

1)nightstand

2)HMS

3)ye wali

You just say 😈😳 But never update. It has been ages. Give us epilogue . Will try to be happy with it atleast💔

Weekend came

Now where is your update😈

CHAPTER-3

Minni's P.O.V

The sun was descending the sky. The view was peaceful but contrary could be seen inside the window.

‘Third floor second room is ICU’,I navigated as we moved through the corridor.I know Mrs. Oberoi's heart is sinking deeper every second looking at the painful condition of the patients as we pass by.

“It’s OK he’s alright” I empathized.But Seema could not help imagining the dreadful possibilities of what could have happened if Mini hadn't admitted Neil in the hospital at the right time.

Thank God Mini's wallet had accidentally slipped out of her purse last night in their house.God forbid if Mini had not found it amusing that Neil has yet not woken up otherwise maybe Seema might have left her son in a never ending slumber.

“thanks”she said finally in her fourth attempts. Earlier whenever she tried words came out of her throat and died in her mouth.

“It’s okay Mrs. Oberoi” I don’t really know what to say at such situations.

“It’s okay Mrs. Oberoi. Good things fall apart just for better things to happen.” I finally found some optimism.

“I don’t know if …..if… ….su…sui….suicide….” her incomplete words followed sobs and unheard guilt. I don’t know how to console her. Maybe no one does. Afterall how can any word could give relief to a mother whose son is dying before her. This thought of mine was soon proven wrong when the doctor called.

She looked at me. Her face was flushed with fear.A familiar fear. Fear of Losing someone. I know this horrible feeling. I go through this every single day. Or should I say Fear of losing someone I’ve already lost.

I know it sounds strange, actually foolish. But then moving on is tough. Holding on is tougher and not knowing what to do is the toughest of all. And this is the range where I lie. I love Kabir but with the same confidence I can’t say the same about him. Neil was right. Kabir has abandoned me and it’s not my fault. People have a habit of leaving. They have a habit of leaving and never looking back. Yet I cannot stopping blaming myself. Gosh! What a fcked up mess I am!

Nurse called us again.I reached for Mrs.Oberoi’s hand and blinked my eyes saying He’s alright.

We rushed to the doctor standing at the end of the corridor. For a second everything else became blur. The hustle and bustle of the hospital faded, atleast in our minds. All that I could hear was pounding heartbeat against my chest. Each thrust of beat praying for his life. In a single go, we rushed to him.

“He is out of danger!”, the doctor announced and our joy lost its boundaries.

The next spectrum of questions were pretty obvious. ‘How’s he?, Is he alright?, Can we meet him? ,When cod we take him home back? …”

Optimistically the answers were all positive. All these while, I could not stop thanking god for his mercy. I was on cloud nine. Happy and relieved, together for the first time in these months. Perhaps I’d forgotten how it feels like to be happy and grateful.

After a couple of hours Neil was shifted to normal ward. Mrs. Oberoi went inside his room. I sat down and waited with baited breath on the steel chair in the corridor biting my long curved nails in between. A strange guilt has seized my heart. I cannot stop thinking of the various possibilities that could have happen or would not happened if I had….I don’t know…talked to him or took him out. I wish I had not let him be alone on Anaya’s Birthday. But who knew he is so fragile or should I say broken.

After minutes Seema came out sobbing and suppressing her cries. I don’t know what they talked or did they even talk? …but whatever must have happened seems surely not pleasant.

Should I step inside? What would I say? I don’t know how to face him? Should I burst out at him for his stupidity? Or just hug him tightly and say that it’s okay and he is not alone. But do I even hold any of these rights? Ofcourse NO.

I stepped the assigned cabin. The room was lighted brightly. The wall were painted crystal white but loudly spoke several dark stories. I moved my head to Neil. He laid dead on the bed. His eyes closed and several translucent pipes and syringes were penetrating into his delicate skin. His mouth had an oxygen mask that monitored on another machine. Anyone could see his blood pressure was on the lower side. The sight was heartbreaking and mostly horrifying for a mother. Maybe that’s why Mrs. Oberoi must not have stayed. She just couldn’t.

I moved closer. And with each step I can feel his warm breath struggling to die admist a survive. Doctors said he is out of danger but I can’t see it or maybe I can beneath those biological tissues. God! How can be someone so lucky? How can you be this lucky Anaya? What good have you done to be loved even after death when I’m….An alien feeling crossed through my heart. I don’t know what it is. Jealousy?

I sat down on the tiny chair beside his bed with my fingers entwined. After a while he opened his eyes. Gosh! He has opened his eyes. Say something Neil. Speak to me. This daunting silence since last night would kill me now if don’t open your mouth.

Subconsciously I held his hand. They were cold. He looked at me . I guess he finally recognised me and slowly put his mask down. I didn’t leave his hand. I’ve never been this sensitive before. Caring for someone except Kabir has never been my thing.

But this guy….I don’t know why I desperately wanna see how he would look wearing a smile. If not happy then atleast sane enough to not gulp down an entire bottle of sleeping pills and land in ICU.

“How are you feeling ?” I asked and he simply nodded. What should I ask next or should I first free his hand. Such situations really sucks when all that you feel is helplessness.

"Happy birthday", he remembered. How can he forget. It's Anaya’s birthday too. But he wished me. Wait did he wished me? Or he is dreaming because of anesthesia.

"Happy birthday Minni", he repeated. This time with my name. Okay so he is not hallucinating but does it change the fact it is Anaya's Birthday too and probably the reason he is here. I don’t know what he is thinking or how should I respond.

“I am gonna call Seema Aunty”, I stood up. I was about to move when he held back hand. I stopped and looked back at him.

“Don’t”

“What?”, I asked with questioning eyes.

“I don’t want her to see me like this”. My anger that I had suppressed over the veil of empathy burst out.

“Oh please. She already has. Don’t like you care."

“Hey…ofcourse. She is my only family.” Yeah and yet didn’t think how would a mother survive seeing him like this.

“And so is for her I guess”, I said.

“This is not what you are thinking Minni” His eyes are a reflection of the pain that I carry.

“yeah. This is a failed suicide attempt. "

"Minni"

ou haven’t seen her condition Neil. She was not able to even pronounce this word properly and you commited it. Don’t you how it feels to lose your everything?How can you do this to her Neil? ”I know he heard my crying admidst my loud voice.

“this was not intended Minni. Trust me” His eyes said it all.

“but it did Neil” He is so complicated but I don’t know why want him to be happy may be because I couldn’t be.

“It was just…”he began

“just for temporary relief but in the process you went overboard” I finished.

“yeah and you know it.”

“That doesn’t make any sense”, my angry glare fixed on him.

“Atleast the marks on your wrist does.”

To be continued...