Shivi TS: Rebound or True Love? (18+) Part 2 Pg 2

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"Dekh Shiva, Hum ladki dekhne jaa rahe hain, Jaise pehle ladkiyon ko rulaya hai, iss wali se thoda dhang se baat karna, warna iss baar Maa tujhe kaccha chaba jayengi. Aaj jiss ladki ko dekhne jaa rahe hain woh Maami ki rishtedaar hai, aur Maami ne khud se iss rishte ki pehel ki hai, kyunki unki ladki ko teri photo pasand aa gayi hai. To Maami ki aur humari izzat rakhne ke liye to humein tameez se pesh aana hi hoga...Tu samjha?" Dev tried to fix Shiva's hair as he straightened his blue shirt.

'Tameez, aur woh bhi mein? Huh, inn logon ko kya pata ki mere dil ka kya haal ho raha hai. Disha se breakup hue 6 mahine bhi nahi hue hain, aur yeh log lag gaye meri shaadi ke peeche. Jaise pehle ke ladkiyon ko mana kiya hai, Aaj wali ka bhi wahi haal hone wala hai. Zara sa blunt question to sambhalta inn Nazuk kaliyon se, chali hain Shiva Pandya se shaadi karne. Mein bhi dekhta hun kaise haan bolegi yeh ladki. Badi ucchal rahi hai mujhse milne ke liye. Asli Shiva se iski mulaqaat karani hi padegi.' Shiva thought in his mind, not giving any clue to his brother on what was going on his mind.

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"Are Suman ben, Jai Somnath, Kaise ho? Aur ye kya, Sirf aap log aaye ho, Gaumbi, Dhara aur pyaari Tara nahi aaye aapke saath?" Prafulla Maami asked Suman as she welcomed Suman, Dev, Rishita, Shiva and Krish to her house.

"Are Kagdi, Tara ki school ki chuttiyan hain na, isiliye Tino Hardik se saath Hrishikesh gaye hain, unke Pitaah ki barsi ke liye. Ek do din mein aa jayenge." Suman replied as she settled on the couch and started searching for Raavi, Prafulla's niece.

Prafulla caught her actions and smiled blissfully. "Are aa jayegi Raavi, pehle ye batao aap log kya loge. Aur khaas kar Rishita beta tu bol. Tujhe kuch chatpata ya kuch meetha khane ka mood ho raha hai?"

Rishita, who was 6 months pregnant just smiled gleefully at the mention of 'chatpata' and almost shrieked in excitement. "Haan Maami ji, mujhe achaar de dijiye na aapka wala. Bahut tasty lagta hai mujhe."

"Abhi layi.." Prafulla replied enthusiastically and dashed to the kitchen to get her some achaar. Rishita clapped her hands excitingly and feigned ignorance at the glare that was being directed at her by Suman.

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Shiva just rubbed his face in boredom, as he just wanted to be done with this ordeal as soon as he could. He faked smiles at his mother, showing very little signs of nervousness so that his mother won't catch his act, and he knew he succeeded as Suman didn't scrunch her eyebrows in suspicion.

As Prafulla distributed some snacks for them, he made sure he didn't look at her at all. Even though she was their Maami, but he never felt any relative-like connection with her. So he made sure to be out of her way even though she commented on his sense of humor sometimes.

"Are kagdi, Yeh Chai paani to hota rahega, Raavi ko to bula, Mera Shiva usse milne ke liye kitna betaab hai dekh." Suman lied as she tried to push Prafulla to bring Raavi.

Shiva just closed his eyes so as to stop the embarrassment. 'If only you knew Maa, I just want to reject her and get away with it. I don't want to meet her at all. But even if I do, I will make sure that she also cries so that she will reject me and I can get rid of this situation.' He cursed his luck so badly.

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Another half an hour passed, but still, there was no sign of Raavi coming out. Shiva tried to stifle his yawn as he pushed Krish's dropping head over his shoulder.

"Yaar kab aayengi Raavi Bhabhi? Mujhe to neend aa rahi hai.." Krish muttered as he rubbed his eyes. Shiva gritted his teeth as he heard how Krish refered to the girl as 'Bhabhi' even though he is yet to meet this stupid girl. "Bhabhi kisko bol raha hai tu Piddi? Ladki dekhi nahi hai abhi jo tu use Bhabhi bula raha hai abhi se."

"Are lekin tu unhe haan hi karega. Dekhna. Mera dil kehta hai." Krish chuckled. Dev's ears perked at this. "Chal lagi 100 100 ki? Main kehta hun ki iss baar bhi Shiva uss ladki ko rulayega."

"Haan Dev, lag gayi. Meri taraf se 100 ki Shiva haan bolega Raavi Bhabhi ko.." Krish stifled his laugh as Shiva glared at him hard.

"Isse pehle tum log bet lagao, meri taraf se bhi 100 laga lo, in dono mein se kuch nahi hua to mein tum logon ko 100 jute marunga. Fir mein yeh lihaaz nahi karunga ki kaun bada hai kaun chota. Theek hai na Rishita Bhabhi?" Shiva snapped at them and looked at Rishita for support.

Rishita just gave him a thumbs up and again got busy trying all the different cuisines which Prafulla had presented them with, and Suman was trying hard to be patient, but when she saw that Prafulla was in no mood to bring Raavi out, she snapped, "Agar yeh tere aao bhagat ki seema khatam ho gayi ho to ab Raavi ko bula de? Ya kaho to mein hi le aaun?"

Prafulla stood straight and looked apologetic, "Are nahi nahi Suman ben, mein leke aati hun na Raavi ko. Ab to taiyaar ho hi gayi hogi." She muttered the last sentence to herself, but Suman was too clever to understand it.

"Taiyaar ho hi gayi hogi ka kya matlab? Humare aane ki khabar sunke hi madam taiyaar hona start ki thi kya?" She exclaimed but Prafulla just dashed into a room.

"Bhagwaan jaane yeh Raavi maharani kab padharne ka kasht legi. Haaye itna time faltu ka waste ho gaya."

Shiva was about to agree, but he stopped as he could hear someone coming out of a room from the corner of his eyes. He turned towards that someone and was shocked the moment he locked eyes with the girl who stood in front of him.

Raavi, the name was not familiar for him, but he knew the face.

How do you ask? That's a long story....

And just like this, Shiva went into flashback....

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Amazing... please update the next part soon.

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Can't wait to knw how shiva knows raavi

Beautiful starting

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You better complete this 😤 and not disappear... so many ffs of you I want to read. Please update them too 😭😭😭

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The title is interesting, so Shivi share a past😳

Loved the first part.

Hope Krish wins the bet☺️

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Wow so interesting please continue soon. I chuckled at disha being Shiva's girlfriend lol. *waiting*

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When are you updating the next part. Its been a month since ur last update. Please update soon please 🙏❤️🙏❤️🙏❤️🙏🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🙏❤️🙏❤️🙏❤️🙏🥺🥺🥺🥺

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Part 2


'Pee loon tere neele neele nainon se shabnam

Pee loon tere geele geele hothon ki sargam

Pee loon hai peene ka mausam...'


"Ye kis mausam ki baat kar raha hai Rishi?", An annoyed shiva asked his friend as he tried to wipe the haldi off his cream-colored sherwani.


"Abe ye Aadarsh to kaafi naseeb wala hai yaar. Uski hone wali biwi to Sundar hai hi, uski saheliyan bhi kuch kam nahi hain. Manna padega Nisha ko, chunn chunn ke saheliyon ko bulaya apni shaadi mein! Haaye, kya mast aakhen thi uss ladki ki..."


Shiva pulled out 5-6 tissues and tried to remove the haldi. He and his friend Rishi had come to Dehra Dun to attend their best friend's wedding.


And just as he had finished his lunch and was about to head back to their best-friend's room Aadarsh who was frantically searching for them, some anonymous shadow had bumped itno him and the haldi plate which that shadow was carrying splattered over his sherwani. Before he could look up and knock some sense into that someon'e brain, he was alone.


Cursing hard as he could see a vsible stain forming on his sherwani. "Ek baar uss ladki ko milne de, usko aisa sabak sikhaunga ki yaad rakhegi kisse panga liya tha.." he blabbered, completely ignoring Rishi's nonsense.


"Tujhe kaise pata ki woh ladki hi thi?" Rishi questioned.


Shiva just shrugged, the faint citrus perfume had registered itself in the back of his mind. He could bet that it was a girl, just by the smell of the perfume.


He just chugged the tissues in the dustbin and dragged a dreamy looking Rishi into Aadarsh's room.


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"Accha tum dono Nisha ki friends se mile ki nahi? Are maine shayad tum logon ko formally introduce nahi karwaya na. Chal koi nahi. Abhi mein tum logon ko unse milwata hun." An overly excited Rishi jumped at Aadarsh's suggestion, while Shiva just sighed in exasperation as he groaned in response.


Another lot of girls will drool over his physique, trying to touch him 'inappropriately'. He was so done with this shit.


As Aadarsh dragged both Shiva and Rishi, Shiva's vision got blinded by a sharp light. He blocked his view with his palm as he tried to find the source of the light and was stunned as he saw a fair-skinned girl's back facing him, she was wearing a decent yellow colored lehenga, her blouse was backless and he could see the fair skin as she had adorned her long brown hair into a ponytail.


His hands itched to run them over her blemish-free skin. And as moments passed, he could feel himself nearing her. and within minutes he was standing just behind her.


And the citrus smell entered his nostrils as he came out of his daze, just when he heard Aadarsh's voice. "Are Nishu Baby, Apni friends aur mere friends ka introduction to karwao."


The 'citrus-smell' girl turned at this, and he was awestruck at the beauty in front of him. True to her personality, the girl looked exceptionally beautiful. Fat glasses sat on her nose, her nose had a long nose ring attached, her lips were painted bright red, and her earrings dangles again, blocking his vision. Shiva just closed his eyes and chuckled. Her earrings were the source of his vision getting blocked as they contained mirrors in them.


"Sure Baby, This is .." Nisha introduced them to her friends but Shiva was not interested. He just wanted to know about 'her'.

"And this is my child-hood friend Raavi" Nisha pointed at the 'girl' and smiled as she hugged 'the girl', Raavi as the name he got to know hugged her back.


Raavi...What a beautiful name.. Beautiful name for a beautiful girl I must say!

He tested the name on his mouth, and the next moment his eyes met her hazel ones. They held the stare for probably a minute as she gazed back at him, equally mesmerized.

"And girls, these are my friends, Rishi.." and he felt a pat on his shoulder, "and my shera, Shiva.."

He casted a flirty smile her way, without breaking eye contact, and saw her shudder and blush as she averted her eyes and looked down, trying to adjust her glasses. He was impressed by the natural color on her cheeks and felt his chest puff in response as he felt the power.

'To hell with all the girls, I just want to know her...talk to her...' he thought as he saw her walk away with her friends. Thankfully, Nisha's other friends only casted some suggestive glances his way, but he was too busy to acknowledge them.

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Shiva checked his watch. It was nearing 5 pm, which meant the Mehendi program had started.

He tried to search for 'Raavi' his dream girl as he had renamed her in his mind, but to no avail.

"Are Bhaiya, aise mat karo na, Yeh decoration wahan pe nahi, dusri jagah lagana hai. Aap utaro isko... " He heard an angelic voice shriek just a distance away and he smiled. Even though he had heard a meek 'Hi' he knew right away that he had found the one he was looking for.

True to his assumptions, there she stood, trying to make the decoration guy understand her instructions, all the while trying to make sure her hair is away from her wet-mehendi-filled hands.

He watched from a distance, as she continued to lecture the decorator, firing all the instructions all the while trying to balance her glasses on her nose too. Now she was wearing a green colored sharara, her hair was now open but the make-up stayed the same. As his eyes settled on her blood-red lips that moved with ease, he felt a sudden stirring in his body. Oh how he had the sudden urge to taste them, bite them so hard that he could have the pleasure to hear her melodic voice moan his name in response. He knew he just met this girl, but the attraction had started the moment he had smelled her.

He walked a bit more, but still away from her so that she would not know that we was standing, but he could still smell her amazing and addictive perfume. She struggled some more, and he couldn't resist anymore. He knew he had to make his presence known or else she would assume he was a stalker. Which he wasn't.


"Need help?" He asked, but it came out just like a whisper, which startled Raavi, that she turned around in haste, and her leg twisted, but our hero was there to protect her. His arms wrapped around her waist as he tried to prevent her from falling and spoiling her mehendi.


"Oh-God, You..you..sc..ar..ed m.ee" she whispered, trying to control her breathing as their noses touched.

"I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to scare you like that. Just saw you were struggling with the decorator guy" he stopped to look at the guy, but the guy was long gone, and they were alone in the room. He looked back at her and held his breath as he nibbled on his lips in nervousness "and thought I should help you out." He whispered, lost in her eyes.

She didn't say anything but just glanced back in his eyes. The silence between them was deafening, but none of them wanted to break it.

And before anyone could even imagine, he had pulled her to him and their lips had meshed together in a passionate lock. She kissed back, right away, trying to make sure her hands were away from his cream-colored sherwani as she tried to deepen the kiss. He got the clue and pulled her to a nearby wall and resumed the kiss, increasing the intensity just slightly, so that she doesn't feel overwhelmed.

He knew this was wrong, he had just met her a few hours back, and she was practically a stranger to him, a Beautiful Stranger to be honest. They were moving too fast, had practically jumped all the steps of attraction by 'getting to know each other', and had just kissed her out of the blue. This was so sudden, and he had anticipated her to push him away and slap him with her mehendi-filled hands without a care. But her responding back to him was a surprise and their kiss was giving him the jitters, his excitement knew no bounds knowing that she also felt the strong pull towards him.

He broke the kiss as he stepped back slightly and saw her glance at him with hooded eyes, her glasses had slid down her nose slightly. He just chuckled and pushed the glasses back with his index finger. But without retracting his finger back, his finger traveled down and settled on her swollen lips. The red in her lips was now smudged, hardly even there. His thumb replaced the finger as he pressed his thumb on the center of her lips, his mouth just inches away from hers.

He smirked as he saw her shudder in response. He moved his thumb, trying to trace down her lips as much as he could, his eyes focused on her lips in concentration. She moaned as the pressure made her squirm between him and the wall. Her breathing was coming in short pants as she opened her eyes and glanced at him. His eyes found her and they stared in hers, searching for a reaction.

He was desperate to know what would happen next, and by the way, she glanced back, he thought she was anticipating the same thing. So he tried to stop their desperation as he kissed the corner of her mouth where her lipstick was smudged, his lips lingering longer than required.

"Raavi...!!!" A shrill voice broke their trance as Shiva moved back, trying to run his hand over his mane, while Raavi quickly dashed in the other direction, out of the room.

His eyes just caught his reflection and he glanced at his lips in the mirror. He smiled as he removed the tissue which he had used to wipe out the haldi some more and rubbed his lips, so that the red lipstick would come off his lips. Once done, he tried to stuff the tissue back in his pocket, but unknown to his knowledge, it slipped out and fell down. He didn't notice and left the room too.

And he failed to notice a shadow lingering behind the curtains, who came out and picked the tissue, a triumphant smile on their lips.

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Shiva glanced at himself as he styled his hair and got ready for the Sangeet. Every now and then his eyes were settling on his lips and he just sighed in contentment, he felt happy that he had preserved his first kiss and gotten the experience with the most beautiful girl in the world.

As he came out, he heard some giggles coming out of the bride's room. As he walked closer, he couldn't see their faces, but knew right away, that one of the voices belonged to Raavi, his dream girl.

"Maine apni bet puri ki, Maine uss 'Sakht Launde' Shiva ko kiss karke dikha diya. Ab chalo nikalo sab log 100-100." Raavi's voice giggled and shrieked in excitement and more giggles followed.

He felt betrayed as he stood there in shock. Without another word, he just left from there, not letting anyone know that he had heard about the bet.

He was enraged as he felt so stupid, how could he be so foolish? How could he be such an idiot where he was attracted to such a mean girl?

Before he could ponder more on his thoughts, he was pulled into a room and the door was closed.

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Shiva came out of his flashback as he glanced at Raavi who sat in front of him with pleading eyes. And he was again reminded of that night.

A night, which he would never forget..for the rest of his life...

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love it!

So they were attracted to eachother from the start.

There must be someone else using Raavis voice or something.


She can’t be so mean

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Just love it- and its a lovely change from what's happening in the Show

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