Abbay mujhe laga tunay sirf prologue likh ke chod diya toh mai Twitter gayi tujhe gaali dene 🤣
Also this Vedant kaun hai bey yeh kahaan se taka isko nikaaal bey pehli fursat mein nikaaal !!!
Yeh Disu Fisu Vedant Wedant .. bhakkkk.
Better yet Shiva ke haathon iski dhulaai karwaade 😎
I love this❤️❤️. Raavi did t get the hint of the palmist initially but finally she understood the first one though she mis interpreted it. And it seems like Shiva always had a feeling for her. Jealous Shiva was a treat. And after their starring session, will Raavi understand the palmist meant Shiva?
And she was smart to run away saving the 3rd question for later. She can ask it when she has figured out the answer to the other two questions.
Looking forward to the next part to see how Shiva confronts her about the locket. If he does. Or will he give it to her as his nishani?
Thank you for tagging! Just read both parts in one go
I love Shiva's locket, so I loved the detailed on that here
ShiVi in college together ❤️
Dobi Raavi misunderstood about the locket 😆 and Shiva saw it! Waiting for more ❤️
Part 2
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Shiva's eyes widened as he saw his locket,which he never removed or say never let anyone touch was today, dangling in her neck; but there was something uncanny about this,he was undoubtedly irked, but the locket in her neck looked as if it belonged to her,it was meant for her, the dark brown colored rudraksha bead along with a gold plate covering and connecting it to thin gold chain which perfectly suited her gracious neck, her milky white skin...he was still staring her...he smiled and as if coming back out of his chain of thoughts, his mind cursed himself, he was supposed to be angry and not at all thoughtful & dreamy about her wearing his locket; and not just she was wearing the locket but when did she get the locket, Shiva never removed the locket, it was like his body part,always around his neck,swaying of rudraksha pendant had calmed him always,giving him hope,ideas, and peace. He wanted the locket back,as soon as possible but a question got stuck in his mind...what made that chipkali wear his locket, and how did she do it?; he tried to figure it out but all in vain, it was her who could've answered his questions but she won't do it, so he thought of something different.
While dancing Raavi got so lost in the moment that she didn't even realize that the locket was now clearly visible as it had popped up, and anyone could've noticed it.Finally when she was done with her practice she sat down on the cot, with her hands holding her head to calm down and her eyes noticed the locket popped out and hanging loosely,so she hid it again in a way no one noticed.Dhara insisted her to have dinner there and then Shiva would drop her home so she can be at Pandya Niwas as long as she wanted,she twirled and hugged Dhara, gleefully.She completed her dinner and helped Dhara to do chores.On the other hand, Shiva had been scrutinizing her every now and then, he kept looking at how fast her facial gestures changed with snaps of seconds,how chirpily did she spoke and that too with utter respect and kindness;maybe she wasn't as bad as Shiva had thought and had behaved with her since childhood, as in she was raised by that evil masi of her and still she was not like her.Shiva kept sighing and shrugging his mind on having thoughts like this but indeed his heart was agreeing and knew that it was truth, but as always concealing what he was meant to feel and react on.
Shiva was drowned in his thoughts and his journey of denying and accepting the facts & feelings, as someone patted his shoulders, he tilted his head backwards only to find her grinning and her face upside down visible to him.He looked at her eyes, the soft puffy cheeks,her little but perfect nose and her beautiful smile; he stared her for a second only to find her patting his shoulders again and saying, "Shiva chalnaaa...kaha kho gaya?", Shiva came out of his chain of thoughts and said, "Haan...chall"; she got shocked listening to this, he was behaving nicely to her, he did not cursed her or shooed her and agreed instantly, god knows what Dhara di made him eat today for telecasting this shocking behaviour, she walked after him bidding everyone goodbyes.
She came outside and a message notification popped up, she looked at him doing something with the bike sitting on both of his knees, she went there and asked him, "Kya hua bike ko?", to which he said in a eased out manner, "Pata nahi chalu nahi horahi aaj kuch achha nahi horaha hai, pata hai aaj kitna bada hadsa hua?",in a dramatic manner, to which Raavi got startled and asked him nervously, "huh...kya hua?", to which Shiva said in actorly manner, putting his hand on his forehead and said, "Mera locket kho gayaaaaa..." as if letting out fake sobs, Raavi got tensed on what to react so she said, "Koi baat nahi Shiva mil jaayega", Shiva stood up with a sigh, and added, "Lagta hai aaj chal ke hi jaana padega", Raavi found this a perfect opportunity to get rid of Shiva and said, "Haann toh koi baat nahi mai chali jaungi pass hi toh hai mera ghar haina...toh tu...tu rehne de mai chali jaungi" with a forced smile, and he knew she was saying this to runaway but he wanted to tease her a little more so he said, "Arre chipkali ese kese tu kya chahti hai bhabhi mujhe puri raat bahar khada rakhe..nahi nahi danda pandya se dhoye?Teri yeh saazish toh mei puri nahi hone dunga, mai bhi aaunga"..Raavi rolled her eyes and followed him, she was unsure of what to say and kept thinking of whether she should tell him the truth or keep the locket with herself, she was confused, and now she was in a die or die situation, she was neither able to lie nor was she able to tell the truth,she sighed as she walked.
Shiva was smiling to himself as he saw her tensed, but he was having a strange feeling, he was unable to decide what to do, it was a strange feeling, maybe an inner conflict, between his heart and head.On one side he could've straight away asked for it; it was his locket after all but he wasn't able to...why?,he thought to himself and he had no justification to it.There was a distilled silence in the atmosphere they had never been silent that too for such a long duration of 3 minutes;they had always bickered or argued or made fun of each other or teased each other, but there was a strangeness in the breeze today.Raavi wanted to break the ice so she nervously asked, "Shiva tu...tujhe kya lagta hai locket kho gaya hoga ya..ya kisine churaya hoga?", her fingertips were playing with her duppatta as she needed to vent out her nervousness; Shiva got what she was trying to say, she was trying to be in innocent note, so he casually replied, "Pata nahi liya hoga kisine chudail ne", she gripped her kurti tightly and gulped in fear.He decided to chaff her more so he said, "Ab mein andha toh nahi hu, mera locket agar kisi ke gale mein hai, toh mujhe dikh jaayega na! Pakka kisi chipkali ne kiya hai!" with a frowned face as if he had no idea whom he was referring to.She gulped on hearing this and replied scaredly, "Kya?Tujhe...tujhe kese pata? with raised brows; he replied as he controlled his laughter"Ab mera locket churane ke liye usko mere itne kareeb toh aana padega na."Raavi gasped, did he have a girlfriend, and that girl was close to him?Did this sada hua kaddu had a girlfriend, her eyes widened on hearing this, she shrugged herself and asked him,"Shiva tu.... Teri girlfriend hai?", to which Shiva laughed out and replied,"Kisne kaha girlfriend? Itni ladkiya toh chipakti hai mujhse", she sighed in relief and blurted out with a soft smile, "Shiva tu haste hue bohot alag lagta hai", Shiva stopped chuckling as he felt butterflies dancing in his stomache and skipping a beat, he looked at her as she was smiling at him and he unknowingly asked, "Kaisa?", and she replied, "pyaara".His heart again skipped a beat, his stomache had become a butterfly battleground now, and his cheeks reddened, he blushed.
She was horrified of what he just glanced, he blushed, yes, the Chattan Pandya blushed,she felt guilt boiling up in her as he was behaving so nicely with him, she said, "Shiva dekh, I'm sorry maine-" (tera locket churaya bolne waali hai, but Shiva stops her)he cuts her off and says"Tu kyu sorry bol rahi hai? Tu dekh, jisne bhi mera locket churaya na, usko somnath ke bahar fek dunga" as he tried to huff in anger,purposedly.She got scared and did not see the stone in her way and skipped a step which made her fall but Shiva held her hand and shoulder and stabled her, and asked, "tu thik hai?", to which she just nodded.As her home came he found a perfect way to give his best shot and said, "Waise chipkali, tu toh gale mein kuch nahi pehenti, ye kya hai?" (pointing toward the string)Raavi had no idea on what to reply and her nervousness along with guilt was boiling up, she bluted out in utter fear,"Woh.... Mai... Mangalsutra!" and closed her eyes, on hearing this Shiva laughs hysterically at her nonsense reason and says",Hein?! Tujh jaise daayan se kaun shaadi karega? Mai nahi manta, dikha kya hai ye?", to which she distanced herself as he came a little near and trying to protect she said"Achha ghar aagaya mai chalti hu, byee,Goodnight!" and runs away as if she was being chased by a monster.Shiva chuckled on this but his chain of thoughts pulled him into it again making him feel strange.
ayoo this chapter took a lot of time and idk whyy?its just coz im a lazy babyy,lol.I hope y'all like this!
Also Thank kaagaz for writing all the jokes here or else i wouldnt have updated lol and bearing a dramaqueen kandu janu after her update and calming me down,my sasta ram kapoor is best!❤️
sel`couth~when everything feels strange & different
Kaagaz is here.
Mazaa aagaya khud ke jokes padh ke 😂😂 I love how chattan pandya likes his chipkali and blushed for her.
I'm waiting for next part kyuki i know its gonna be dobi asf Raavi
Gah! I dunno how I missed reading this story before but I'm done now!
Pre-wedding ShiVi is my fav. And now we have a semi-lattoo Shiva toying with Dobi Raavi (who apparently is subconsciously substituting his locket for a mangalsutra). Oh! What am I to do with this girl!?! 😮
I'm glad she is not pining after Dev here. For some reason it's easier to see (ummmm...read) her flirt with a faceless guy. Which reminds me, who is Aditya?
Anyhoo! I so am looking forward to see what happens next!
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