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Posted: 6 years ago

Chapter 16 - Bittersweet Part I


AN: HAPPY NEW YEAR Everyone!!! I hope this new year i.e., 2018 will bring new blessings for everyone as 2017 year did for me in the form of my beautiful baby-niece. This is for you people. I hope I make justice to every character; every scene and that you won't be disappointed in any form.

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Zubiya stared at herself as she sat in front of the mirror. Donned up in an olive green-colored sharara with orange-red-pink border and a red dupatta lined with golden tassels over her head she looked like a perfect to-be bride. Well, she is a to-be bride.

Today is her haldi ceremony.

She is finally about to get married to Asfand.

After 5 years.

She really couldn't believe that 5 years have already passed since they had admitted their feelings to each other. She hadn't expected Asfand to have patience for 5 years no less 6 months. She deeply admired Asfand's decision to wait for another couple years till she finished her House Job even though he had finished his course. His maturity even though frustrating at times was heavily required by them to reach this point in their lives.

She sighed heavily as she thought about him. Her soon-to-husband. It brought a huge smile on her face. Just to think that they were finally about to get married and become one made her feel so many feelings. Excitement; Elation; Frustration; Thankful; Peaceful. She didn't think any bride could be more excited and frustrated to get married as her.

Zubiya chuckled softly as she remembered Aunty being adamant and excited to have a small ceremony in their house for their engagement before Asfand left for the U.S. to make their relationship seem more official. Which made her very happy because the sooner she could call herself Asfand's fianc and wear his ring on her finger she'll be less likely to consider it a dream... and more a reality.

He had been a constant support for her without whom she didn't think she could fight with her demons and come this far in her life today. Her heart panged with ache to even think of the time in which Asfand didn't even exist in her life. It's just.. incomprehensible to think of her life which didn't consist of Asfand.

Even during the days he had spent abroad for his course during their somewhat-courtship ( which is what they termed their relationship during these 5 years as ) they had facetimed each other regularly every night (for her) and morning (for him). He would at times send sweet messages and surprise her with his heart-felt words making her feel either teary or shy with slightly reddened cheeks. No matter how busy he was he would always let her know of his activities. Even though she couldn't put her feelings into words and send it to him, she would always let him know of her own activities tagging along with the line starting with - ' You would've surely... ' letting him know that she missed him and wished that he was here.

Close to her.

Next to her.

With her.

She had cried numerous nights missing his presence tremendously. Specially their long-night talks. Even though they FaceTimed and texted each other everyday... it wasn't enough. She missed his physical presence. When she would return home after finishing her classes she would expect him to sit beside aunty or uncle having lunch or just simply sitting spending time with them. She would miss their once-in-a-while evening walks in the garden.

But she consoled herself. Because the end result of their struggle would be something really magical. Their union. In every meaning.

After Asfand returned, they had finally come to a conclusion that waiting for a couple of more years wouldn't be hard for them. In fact, it seemed almost as a cake-walk for them because they had already surpassed the long-distance wait.

Asfand worked in a hospital for almost a year after which he finally decided to open a public-oriented hospital. Mama - Mami and Daniyal bhai happy with his decision and proud of him had given their encouragement along with their blessings.

As the hospital was being prepared, they received another good news. Gaiti bhabi and Daniyal bhai were expecting their first child. Soon, the house filled up with baby items, cots, everything required by a baby. Daniyal bhai who had finally won the case for which he had almost spent two years behind it and seek justice for Noori had decided to take a break from the office till the baby was almost a year old. Which had been a great relief for everyone because seeing Daniyal bhai working so closely with the dangerous people had been really frightening. But the justice seekers had finally received got their justice and the villains have finally received what they deserved - jail time for their entire lives.

Zubiya, finally done with her medical college had started on her house job. Asfand had suggested her to finish her house job within 8 months and then work in a hospital for almost 6 months before joining his hospital. So that she can truly gain the experience of working under different environment instead of working under a known person.

As Zubiya and Asfand got busy in their work, they had hardly time for spending with each other. The only free time they got after their work they spent sleeping. Days passed with no communication between each other, they realized they were getting frustrated. It wasn't the same case when Asfand was in the U.S as Zubiya had only her classes to worry about and could swing about his working schedules to FaceTime. But now, with her own hectic working schedules mixed with Asfand's it was getting really frustrating.

Finally, one day as Zubiya sat on the bench in the back garden slightly pouting Gaiti waddled slowly to her and sat beside her leaning heavily on the arm of the bench.

Gaiti panted slightly as she rested her hands on her 6-month pregnant belly and slightly raised her eyebrows at Zubiya.

Zubiya finally asked, "What?"

"Why are you pouting?" Gaiti inclined her head towards her.

"What- I'm not pouting! I think another effect of pregnancy is the lack of eyesight." Zubiya huffed as she looked forward with a frown and unconsciously her lips pouted out.

"Alright, you're not pouting. You're missing him, aren't you?" Gaiti asked her softly.

Zubiya, about to deny once again finally sighed heavily and looked down as she slightly nodded her head.

"Oh, Zubi! Talk to him.. discuss it with him... You both can't just go like this without any conversation for the next 6 months can you?! Are you going to talk on the day of my baby shower which is next month? Will you even recognize yourselves then?" Gaiti asked sarcastically.

"I just don't know! We don't even get a minute to sit together let alone talk. When I'm free he's busy and when he's free I am busy! What do we do?!" Zubiya wailed as threw her hands up in frustration.

"Talk. Decide on a time you both are suitable with when you can meet outside or just FaceTime each other. This is what marriage looks like, honey. Compromise is what it's all about." Gaiti said calmly.

"But I'm scared that he'll get angry if I call him during work.." Zubiya mumbled softly.

"Scared?! Are you nuts? He's going to be your husband in a year and you are scared to call him during work?! Zubiya, if you let it go like this you're going to feel like strangers by the time you see each other in my baby shower! Wait. I have a solution." Gaiti bhabi took out her phone from her sling bag which she always kept along with her and dialed Asfand's number.

"Gaiti, what are you doing?! He must be busy right now!" Zubiya yelled as she tried to reach for Gaiti's phone but Asfand had already picked the call. She could clearly hear his voice which seemed tired. She was hearing to his almost after a week.

"Bhabi?"

"Yes, devar ji. Zubiya wanted to discuss something with you but is scared for some reason. Why don't you- ouch!- talk?" Gaiti yelped while speaking as Zubiya pinched her hard on her arm.

"Zubiya? Bhabi, you okay?" They could hear Asfand's panicked voice.

"No-no! I'm perfectly fine. Just came in contact with an ungrateful insect." Gaiti said as she glared slightly at Zubiya while Zubiya hid her face in her hands in embarrassment.

"Zubi- please talk with him. I think I need the washroom. Hasn't it been a long time since I visited last? And then, I need to wake Daniyal as well. Men! Getting off from work doesn't mean he gets to sleep till late while I wake up this early!" Gaiti grumbled as she slowly got up from the bench after handing Zubiya her phone and waddled back towards the house.

Zubiya took a deep breath as she finally raised the phone to her ear and whispered his name, "Asfand."

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PS: Okay. So hey there! Long time no see. I skipped ahead a bit along the timeline. I hope you'll like it! Please like, comment and share if you liked it!

Love! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Edited by DeewaniMastaani - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Happy new year!!
Nice update.
Loved it.
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Posted: 6 years ago
A lovely update! I can't wait for their marriage functions!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wow!! Your word are magical
I read all the chapters and I love all of them.your writing is just perfect... and plz don't think that no one is interested in the story, many people does...
Hope you will continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wow wow wow. You always bring me to a state of speechless awe. Your writing, your dedication, your passion. It's truly inspiring. Again, I read a couple of chapters in a go and I can't explain how much I enjoyed them. Absolutely love this part in the stort! They're finally getting married, uh, what a feeling to finally see Zubiya as a bride! Also, I absolutely love the beginning and ending notes that you put in your stories, they make us feel so much warmth.
Can't wait for more! Very very eager to see the shaadi-shuda side of Asfiya.
Lots of love to you
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Originally posted by: Cheesybites

Wow wow wow. You always bring me to a state of speechless awe. Your writing, your dedication, your passion. It's truly inspiring. Again, I read a couple of chapters in a go and I can't explain how much I enjoyed them. Absolutely love this part in the stort! They're finally getting married, uh, what a feeling to finally see Zubiya as a bride! Also, I absolutely love the beginning and ending notes that you put in your stories, they make us feel so much warmth.

Can't wait for more! Very very eager to see the shaadi-shuda side of Asfiya.
Lots of love to you


Uff! Your comments make my day! Thank you so much for this huge review. I look up to your comments as they encourage me to write more well. Well, I'm looking forward your story as well! 😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
Chapter 17 - Bittersweet II

A/N: Here I am! Here I am! Back with a new chapter!

So, let's get ahead then!

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"Zubiya- are you alright?" Asfand asked Zubiya. He was getting wondering what could be the reason that she would fear to discuss with him.
He couldn't even contemplate that she would ever fear him. God, please no. He would never be that type of husband that a wife would fear. Never.
"Asfand." He heard Zubiya choke out almost in tears.
"Zubiya, get ready - I'm coming. I'll pick you up in 15 minutes." Asfand said in the phone and ended the call.
Asfand quickly found one of his colleague and informed him that he was signing out for the day and would make-up the rest of the shift on another day.
As he walked out of the hospital and towards his car he realized what a fool he had been.
He had let silence seep between him and Zubiya. He had been so busy in his duty and after seeing her busy as well he had thought it was best for her to let her rest instead of spending time with her. He had presumed without considering what she might want. And she wasn't the type of person to take the first action. She must have thought that he would mind if she were to call him during his duty hours.
Damnit. He needs to sit down and discuss with her about this topic thoroughly. Before he had never required to share his duty schedules with anyone. Not even his mother. But now Zubiya, who was his fianc, and is going to become his wife in a year deserved to know. He needed to let her in and share everything with her. Or else how would he expect her to do the same with him?
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As Asfand pressed down on his horn, Zubiya came opened the main gate and stepped out with a tiffin box held between her hands.
Letting Gaiti bhabi into his plan was a good idea. She must have suggested Zubiya to pack some food for themselves. He hadn't realized how hungry he was in the hurry but seeing the tiffin box he felt his stomach grumble with hunger.
"Assalamulaikum." Zubiya wished as she entered the car and finally looked at him after closing the door.
"Walaikum-Assalam. How are you? Thanks for bringing some food... I didn't realize I was hungry until now."
"I'm good. Gaiti bhabi suggested that you might not have had lunch so I should make something for you." Zubiya said, smiling slightly at him.
"So, what did you prepare for me?" Asfand asked as he started up the car and started driving.
"In the short time that you had allowed I was unable to prepare anything other than some mac and cheese. I haven't even tasted it so I haven't got any idea how it has turned out to be." Zubiya said, shrugging her shoulders.
"It's prepared by you. I'm sure it will be good." Asfand said as gave her a wide smile.
"Yeah, sure.." Zubiya mumbled as she looked forward. "So, where are we going?"
"You haven't visited the Rawal Lake have you? We are just heading over there for a visit."
"Okay.." Zubiya said softly as she glanced back at Asfand, who seemed a bit nervous.
After a few minutes of silence, Asfand cleared his throat loudly as he glanced at Zubiya nervously.
"So, why don't I taste the food you prepared? It's an another one hour drive. I don't think I can survive another hour without having anything. Did you have your lunch by the way?" Asfand asked her.
Zubiya nodded her as she opened the box and forwarded it to him.
Asfand tilted his head towards the box without removing his eyes off the road as he said, "Feed it to me. My hands are kind of busy right now."
Zubiya sighed softly as she took the fork in her hand and piling some macaroni on it carefully lifted it to his mouth which was already open awaiting it's food. As Asfand closed his mouth around the fork and started chewing, he blinked numerously for a couple minutes, before he slowly nodded his head and hummed.
"Mmm... It's- it's really good." Asfand said as he gave her a smile.
Zubiya looked at him closely, sensing a weird behavior in him.
"So, you want more?" Zubiya asked, and noticed Asfand's eyes bulge slightly before he shook his head almost in panic.
"Um.. no. I mean- I just wanted to taste it.. I'll eat it once we reach the lake." Asfand planted a smile on his face as he glanced back at Zubiya.
Zubiya slightly narrowed her eyes at him and pointed out, "But you just said that you were hungry right now and wouldn't be able survive an hour without having anything..."
"Did I just say that? Well.. um.. it's alright. I think I can survive." Asfand said as he laughed nervously.
"Okay... Let me give it a try since you just mentioned it's very good." Zubiya stated as she looked at him closely.
"What- no! I mean- " Asfand exclaimed as glanced at Zubiya with a panic-stricken look on his face. But Zubiya had already taken a bite of the macaroni. She chewed at the food slowly before grabbing for the tissue box in front her, taking out a couple tissues before she spat out the macaroni with a grimace on her face.
"Eugh! Yuck! How did you even eat this?! There is so much oil and vinegar in this!" Zubiya cried out as she looked at him with an outrageous expression on her face.
"I- I just didn't want to hurt your feelings. I already disappointed you." Asfand said quietly.
Zubiya's expression softened as she smiled at him teasingly. "So you were ready to deal with getting an upset stomach instead of telling it to my face that my cooking is bad?"
"Yeah-Yeah, I guess.." Asfand mumbled without looking at her.
Zubiya shook her head softly as she closed the tiffin box and kept it away. She smiled softly to herself as she thought - I'm lucky...
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After they reached the lake they walked silently for a few minutes before they found a restaurant with a beautiful view and finally decided to sit and have something.
Finishing their lunch during which they talked about everything and nothing without approaching the topic that they were supposed to talk about; they just simply sat at their table for a few minutes taking in the beautiful site in front of them.
"Take a walk with me?" Asfand finally asked Zubiya, who nodded her head and both started making their towards the pathway.
Lost in their thoughts they finally found a bench and took a seat.
"Zubiya.. I'm really sorry." Asfand finally spoke up.
"I'm sorry, too." Zubiya mumbled as she looked down while fingering her ring with her thumb.
"Why are you apologizing? It's my fault that I didn't inform you my about my shift hours and everything..." Asfand said, as he looked at her quizzically.
"I didn't ask you. I should have - but I think I'm still not familiar with this new relation even though we have been engaged for 5 years. But I'm still unsure on many aspects - if I'm supposed to do this or not.. it feels as if I'm clueless here!" Zubiya said, her hands clenched tight in frustration.
Asfand put a hand on both of hers and unclenched them.
"I feel the same sometimes. So I think we are on the same boat. You don't have to feel alone here. We need to open up to each other more. Share everything. Not only because we are about to become husband and wife. But also because we are best friends. A team. And unity makes one stronger." Asfand said, smiling at her softly.
Zubiya calmed down at his words and mostly his touch. She felt at peace now because she has finally let everything off her chest. And it made her really uncomfortable not sharing anything with Asfand.
She laid her head on his shoulder as Asfand held her shoulders. And they both enjoyed some alone time to themselves before heading back to their home.
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Finally done with dealing with their 'Problem #1' after they began their relationship everything went well for a while.
The next problem arose just a few days before Gaiti bhabi went into labor.
Zubiya, finally done with her evening shift waited for her car outside the hospital. She shivered slightly against the cold breeze as she watched the rain pouring from the sky.
She smiled as she breathed in the musty smell that came from the wet mud. Sighing heavily, her heart hoped Asfand would come to pick her up and they would spend some time in this beautiful weather despite knowing he was currently at home, sleeping.
"Zubiya! Are you still waiting for your car?" A voice interrupted her thoughts. She turned to see Afzal, the hot-shot new doctor who had recently joined their hospital walking towards her. Even though, he was really good-looking he was actually quite humble. Really sincere to his work and his wife. Yes. It came as a quite surprise that he was already married, have been for more than 7 years and has a little 2-year old daughter; in the process breaking a few hearts. Being shy, he had hardly made any friends among his colleague. But he had felt a quiet kinship to her (probably because she herself didn't have any friends) and they had once or twice shared a few conversations among each other.
"Yes. I think it's stuck in jam." Zubiya replied, letting out a heavy sigh.
"Come with me. I'll drop you at your house. It's already getting late and I don't feel comfortable leaving you here alone." Afzal suggested.
Zubiya, unsure what to do hesitated.
"Ok. If you are feeling uncomfortable why don't you inform your mamu and let me talk with him?" Afzal said, as he could clearly read her hesitation on her face.
After informing her mamu about the situation and letting Afzal talk with him, she finally agreed.
As she bid goodbye to Afzal after stepping out of his car and finally walked into the house, she failed to notice a familiar pair of eyes on her.
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PS: Okay. I hope you'll like today's chapter. If you did then don't forget to Like, Comment and Share! It means a lot.
Love!
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Posted: 6 years ago
THIS WAS SO GOOD! FINALLY THEY TALKED ABOUT THEIR PROBLEM EASILY.
EHHH! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!
BRING ON A POSSESSIVE ASFANDYAR (hopefully) ! 😉
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Wow!! Lovely update.. Plz update soon.. waiting eagerly!!
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Awesome update!!
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