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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sidsk

Wow! Guys! I am floored by all your comments...honestly! I never expected to get such an amazing response from you all.. Thank you, thank you so much! All of you made my day.πŸ€—

Actually, I wasnt planning to write anything further...kuch socha hi nahi tha. But when I read your comments and saw so many people asking for it, the next part automatically formed in my head and I had to write it down before I lost all those ideas.πŸ˜†

So! Please accept my apologies for the delay in replying to all of you immediately ...I will do so in a few hours.

GIVE US THE SECOND PART SOON!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: sidsk

Wow! Guys! I am floored by all your comments...honestly! I never expected to get such an amazing response from you all.. Thank you, thank you so much! All of you made my day.πŸ€—

Actually, I wasnt planning to write anything further...kuch socha hi nahi tha. But when I read your comments and saw so many people asking for it, the next part automatically formed in my head and I had to write it down before I lost all those ideas.πŸ˜†

So! Please accept my apologies for the delay in replying to all of you immediately ...I will do so in a few hours.

awww
yes pleasee do itπŸ€ͺi will be checking this in every 30 mints till i get new update

we got our own writer πŸ€—mashaALLAH se

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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: sidsk

Wow! Guys! I am floored by all your comments...honestly! I never expected to get such an amazing response from you all.. Thank you, thank you so much! All of you made my day.πŸ€—

Actually, I wasnt planning to write anything further...kuch socha hi nahi tha. But when I read your comments and saw so many people asking for it, the next part automatically formed in my head and I had to write it down before I lost all those ideas.πŸ˜†

So! Please accept my apologies for the delay in replying to all of you immediately ...I will do so in a few hours.



Waiting. Looking forward to Zubiya's admitting her feelings and the grand coming together
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Am I the only one thinking what would have happened if one of the staff walked in on them? πŸ˜†
Particularly Dr.Handle it carefully or even the administrator 🀣

On a serious note...this was written so beautifully. This is exactly how I expect Asfi to react
Edited by Alizba63 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Alizba63

Am I the only one thinking what would have happened if one of the staff walked in on them? πŸ˜†

Particularly Dr.Handle it carefully or even the administrator 🀣

On a serious note...this was written so beautifully. This is exactly how I expect Asfi to react


πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜› ahhaha I was also thinking about it all the time when I was reading, this OS is written so well that it feels like you are watching it , like a drama.

I mean imagine Asfi doing all this in the break room? that is something, but yes if any one can do it , its only Asfi.. πŸ˜‰
Edited by fanraya - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: fanraya


πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜› ahhaha I was also thinking about it all the time when I was reading, this OS is written so well that it feels like you are watching it , like a drama.

I mean imagine Asfi doing all this in the break room? that is something, but yes if any one can do it , its only Asfi.. πŸ˜‰


Me too! Asfi is no longer as puritanical as he was with the OT technician and sister Rizwana!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanFrangirl


Me too! Asfi is no longer as puritanical as he was with the OT technician and sister Rizwana!

I know right? Khulam Khulla pyar Karenge hum dono, Es duniyase nahi darnge hum dono..πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: fanraya


πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜› ahhaha I was also thinking about it all the time when I was reading, this OS is written so well that it feels like you are watching it , like a drama.

I mean imagine Asfi doing all this in the break room? that is something, but yes if any one can do it , its only Asfi.. πŸ˜‰


I too am wondering if this falls within Asfi's definition of staff doing gossip and chit-chat? If dr Haroun's silly flower made him blow a fuse, then here, DrAsfi needs to fire himself and Zubiya and ask Admn to clear their dues!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanFrangirl


I too am wondering if this falls within Asfi's definition of staff doing gossip and chit-chat? If dr Haroun's silly flower made him blow a fuse, then here, DrAsfi needs to fire himself and Zubiya and ask Admn to clear their dues!

Omg, yes absolutely, I mean for this behavior he has to fire himself and Zubi πŸ˜‰

Btw do you remember Asfi jealousy scene, I throughly enjoyed it, Asfi looked so lovely being Jealous ☺️ , uff the way he was throwing tantrums, like a kid πŸ˜† the other doctor was totally clueless and loved the way he changed his behavior when our dear Dr Sharoz came in.. Ahad totally nailed that scene.. He was little embarrassed with himself when Dr Sharoz said he does not agree with him.. it was such an amazing scene...
Edited by fanraya - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
That was so amazing to read
Almost wish such moments could be portrayed on the show
But alas it's so lovely to read them
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