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Posted: 7 years ago
Read it just one go this is superb .. ur writing skills are way too amazing .. and I just love that you added bold side as well hayeee ... Totally loving it and please do PM me for the next update .. eagerly waiting for the next update ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
I love your one shots! They are beautiful, in character and so realistic!
More, please!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Pm me for the next update pleasee
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you everyone
Having YKS withdrawals but was a little disappointed to see strong brave independent Zubiya jump. Would have been better if she confronted her brother or ran off and told everything to Asfi when he found her.
They could've hugged and done their thing in the valley 😛 then we would have more time dedicated to their marriage and post marriage scenes chalo khair hai hazaron khwahishen aisee...
But these are FI's characters and unki jo marzi likhen I have always been ok with that. That's why we have ffs.
Will try to come up with something, of course with a disclaimer that no copyright infringement is intended
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wonder how I missed your last update, wow, you made me so happy sat morning, absolutely beautiful update, what feelings it is heart warming to read your updates, I always enjoy them a lot, we will never get to see Asfi Zubi s life after marriage so it's so lovely to read your story, love your Asfi and Zubia, I can not wait for the next part, please do update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: nittygritty1

Thank you everyone
Having YKS withdrawals but was a little disappointed to see strong brave independent Zubiya jump. Would have been better if she confronted her brother or ran off and told everything to Asfi when he found her.
They could've hugged and done their thing in the valley 😛 then we would have more time dedicated to their marriage and post marriage scenes chalo khair hai hazaron khwahishen aisee...
But these are FI's characters and unki jo marzi likhen I have always been ok with that. That's why we have ffs.
Will try to come up with something, of course with a disclaimer that no copyright infringement is intended


Why not write what you mentioned? AU of the series?
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Posted: 7 years ago
Natasha, what do you write girl!
I have read all the parts in one go...
And tbh, I am totally hooked...
please bring on more updates asap...
I can't wait it seems... 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
A/N: This ended up being ho-hum and boring and not much happened so sorry but I swear I have a story in mind here just stayyy with meee LOL
Also BIG TIME APOLOGIES to all the doctors and people who work in the healthcare field because I make up gibberish and my own rules for the purpose of my one-shots and I understand that it is probably not the way things work in a real hospital so maafi please and ignore and enjoy the story.
Love all of your feedback, please continue to give...

7:45am
Zubiya walked into Asfand's office and sat down. She had been on night shift and was tired after working for more than 12 hours. Dr. Hira and Dr. Haroon had arrived a couple of hours ago but the hospital was so busy that Zubiya did not get a chance to leaveshe texted the driver as she made her way to Asfand's office and was finally taking a break. The workload at the hospital had increased and the staffs were busy all day, which was obviously a good thing since it meant that the locals were utilizing the hospital's services for their healthcare needs. However what it also meant that they were now extremely short-staffed and all of the doctors were over-worked. They had just hired 5 more doctors; 3 girls and 2 guys, and they were supposed to start today. The new hires were all young guys and girls who had completed their house job and had 1-1.5 years of experience. Due to the unique location and clientele of this hospital, the new doctors were all supposed to shadow and train under one of the existing doctors to understand their roles and get an understanding of the challenges, processes and the doctor-patient relationship here. Zubiya was glad that they were getting additional staff members and was actually excited to train someone for the first time in her career. Asfandyar walked in as Zubiya was lost in her thoughts.
A: Hey you! Good tum yahan ho I was about to call you. Chalo let me drop you home. Zubiya nearly jumped out of her chair, startled by him walking into the room all of a sudden. Asfand laughed and shook his head.
A: Tum kab tak aisey mujhe dekh kar shock hoti raho gi. Zubiya didn't say anything and just stared at him blinking her eyes slowly.
A: I know I look good this morning Masha-Allah bolo and stop staring. Zubiya almost broke into a smile at that. She said Masha-Allah in her head because he DID look extra handsome in the crisp white Banana Republic shirt and his navy classic Dockers but she couldn't tell him that of course.
Z: Insan kabhi knock kar key yah softly bhi andar aasakta hai ap har jaga yeh Changez Khan ki tarha unannounced hamla kyon kartey hain? Zubiya said as she got up and stood in front of him with her hands on her hips.
A: Shayad yeh mera office hai and if I am not wrong, you were sleeping on the job.
Z: I was thinking, NOT sleeping. Besides, I have been here since 5pm yesterday, not all of us had the privilege of sleeping in a warm comfy bed last night. She said as she stepped closer and wrapped her arms around his waist and rested her head on his chest.
A: That bed is never warm or comfy without you. He said as he wrapped his arms around her and pulled her closer. They stayed like that for a few minutes. He could feel Zubiya's body relaxing and her breathing become soft and rhythmic.
A: Issey pehlay tum so jao, let me drop you home.
Z: Hmm, Khan baba nahi aye? Main unkey sath chali jaongi, don't your new trainees arrive soon?
A: No they don't start till 9, I have time I can take you home and then come back. I have hardly seen you the last few days. He said and kissed the top of her head that was still resting on his chest. Asfand gently extracted himself from her and moved forward to pick up her things. They walked out together towards the parking lot.
8:10am In the car

A: Are you working tonight as well?
Z: Nahi tonight I am off. Then back on day shifts tomorrow.
A: Good, I am going to assign one of the girls to you. She can work with me today then tomorrow she will be with you.
Z: Do you have a trainee as well?
A: No the last time I had one, I ended up marrying her. She had me hook, line and sinker, so No! none for me this time. He said as he looked at her sideways. She looked at him and smiled.
A: Dr. Shahab and Dr. Haroon will have the 2 guys and you, Dr. Hira and Dr. Zeba will have each of the girls. The hospital was new and everyone here was still adjusting that's why I trained you myself but going forward I think it is a good leadership opportunity for the rest of the doctors to be involved in the training process. Main to waisey bhi itna busy hon, I have got so much going on, there is so much I want to do for this place. I need all of you to help me and support me through this.
Zubiya just said a "hmm and closed her eyes. She loved that he could flirt with her one minute and switch to talking about the hospital the next. They had built an easy camaraderie, a relationship with open communication and trust. They were comfortable and content with each other. She admired his passion for his hospital and understood when his attention was completely occupied by hospital related stuff. He felt like she had simplified his life, everything was easy with her around. She made life happier. He could be facing the biggest challenges in his professional life or be worried about something related to his parents or bhabi and all she had to do was be around him and be herself and he could literally feel the stress easing away from his mind and body. Her presence, her touch, her smiles made his world.
A: Kuch khao gi? Chai paratha?
Z: Nahi I want my bed.
A: Ghar jakar kuch kha kar soo jana please. Koi ulta seedha sochney ki or kaam karney ki zarorat nahi hai.
Z: Dr. Asfandyar, kash aap key pass koi nayi lines hoti. Zubiya said smiling with her eyes still closed.
A: Oh I have lots of new stuff but you have been on nights. Zubiya laughed at his quick and witty response.
Z: Ap kab ayengey ghar? She asked as she saw him pull up towards the driveway.
A: Not sure.
Z: Aap thora jaldi aye ga please
A: Aap itney pyar sey bolein gi to main ja hi nahi sakon ga. He parked the car and turned his head to look at her.
Z: To phir mat jaye. She reached out and traced his jaw with the back of her fingers. He sucked in his breath audibly as he watched her face amazed
A: Zubiya...
Z: Asfand...she smiled a big glorious smile.
A: Hate to do this to you right now but get some rest. He reached and held her hand that was on his jaw, entwined their fingers and brought her hand to his lips for a quick kiss.
A: I will see you in the evening.
Asfand got out and picked up her stuff from the back, she took her things from him and said "Thank you for the ride and for blowing me off" as she started walking towards the house. He just chuckled and shook his head as he went back into the car.

Next day9:10am
A: Yesterday was spent mostly on getting you introduced to everyone and completing your orientation. Today the real work will begin. It will be exhausting and exhilarating. Remember to observe and absorb, ask questions, pay attention. Don't forget to take breaks. Always put your patients first but find a balance to ensure you are taking care of your mind and body. This is a tough place to work at so remember to rely on your peers and supervisors. There are many clinical skills that we can teach you here but your own resilience and willingness to learn will be keys to your success here.
Asfand was speaking to the new team members on their second day. Dr. Haroon, Dr. Shahab and Dr. Zeba were already here attending the quick morning huddle.
Dr. Hira walked in, she was a petite sweet looking girl who was one of the few local doctors here. She belonged to a nearby village and was the only woman in her village who completed post-secondary education. She was polite, hard working and dedicated. Zubiya was good friends with her
Dr Hira: Assalamalikum
A: Walekumsalam, Zubiya kahan hai?
Dr. Hi: Sir woh OPD main hai, busy with an older female patient. Aney wali hogi.
A: Okay, all of you met your supervisors yesterday, Dr. Sabeena sirf apki Dr. Zubiya say introduction baki hai.
Sabeena was one of the new girls who came from a rich well to do family in Lahore and had joined the hospital on a whim. She was smart and had made a good impression during her interview. She was staring at Asfand when he addressed her
S: Yeh kal white shirt main jitna acha lag raha the ussey phi acha is black shirt main lag raha hai. This new job is about to change my life in more than one ways She thought wickedly in her head while checking out Dr. Asfandyar.
Just then Zubiya walked in wearing a lemon yellow kurta with a white shalwar and purple dupatta.
Z: My apologies everyone for being late.
A: No problem, let's get started with our day everyone. Zubiya this is Dr. Sabeena who will be shadowing with you. Dr. Sabeena yeh Dr. Zubiya hain, she usually works in OPD and ER but she is currently in the process of obtaining her FCPS designation in OB-GYN so she spends a lot of time working with women. I recall you saying that this is a speciality you are interested in as well so this should be a good learning opportunity for you.
Zubiya smiled and extended a hand towards Sabeena.
Z: Welcome to our hospital Dr. Sabeena. Ap ko yahan per kaam karkey bahut kuch learn karney ko mile ga, we are all here to help and support you.
Sabeena shook her hand with a "thanks".
S: Yeh sab desi behen jees main kahan agayi main upar sey Dr. Asfandyar ko chor kar mujhe iss key saath kaam karna parey ga. Sabeena thought to herself but didn't let it show on her face. "Chalo at least mera koi competition nahi hain yahan, I will stand out so he won't be able to ignore me" She assured herself confidently before following Zubiya out the door to begin her day.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: DarkPhoenix93


Why not write what you mentioned? AU of the series?


Good idea! one day may be!
abhi post marriage scenes occupy my mind and heart...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wow so beautiful, I can not wait to read the next part.
By the way I was 😆 at this line..he DID look extra handsome in the crisp white Banana Republic shirt and his navy classic Dockers but she couldn't tell him that of course.
I just shopped today in BR😉 hehe ..Anyway please do continue soon.
Edited by fanraya - 6 years ago
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