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Nittyyy!! When do we get an update?
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A/N: This part is straight from my heart. Just wanted to see some Asfi-Zubi in their own little world after tonights episode.
Ignore the mistakes my friends, thori senti hon aj

It was 1:00 am and most of the guests from the engagement party had left already; only close friends and family were left. Mr. & Mrs. Usman sat at a table reminiscing with old friends. Asfandyar was sitting and hanging out on the some of the couches and loungers with friends as well.

G: Asfi tum mujhe, Saim or Zubiya ko ghar le chalogey please. I am tired or woh dono to soo gaye. Mama ko maine bata diya hai wog log driver ke saath ajaye gey. Gati walked up to Asfandyar and told him.
A: Jee bhabi. Asfand said as she turned around and his eyes searched for his wife. He saw her sitting on one of the couches; her legs crossed one on top of another and her head resting on the couch headrest. Several strands of hair had escaped her lose bun and were blowing across her eyes. Her face was turned slightly to her left making her bare and slender neck visible in the sexiest way. He noticed Saim's head in her lap and his legs were stretched out on the couch. Zubiya's left hand was resting in Saim's hair. Asfand shook his head and smiled as he got up to take leave from his friends.
He went over to where Zubiya was sleeping and leaned over the couch head rest.
A: Zubiya utho let's go. He whispered softly in her ear.
Z: No!! Asfand please ap mujhe kabhi soney nahi detay. She whined in her sleepy voice and in a tone that he was very familiar with. His mind immediately went to several different times he had heard that line and that tone. He suppressed his laugh and leaned over her again.
A: Theek hai I have no problem carrying you to the car but I don't think you and all the people here will appreciate that too much. Her eyes shot open at that and she saw his face inches away from her. She looked down and saw her sari and Saim in her lap and put her head back on the headrest with a "Ughh I can't believe I feel a sleep".
A: I can believe it! Ab utho ghar chaltey hain. He carefully picked up Saim while she slowly got up.
G: Tum mera baby pakro main tumhara baby lekar aati hon. Gaiti said to Asfand laughingly as she reached out and held sleepy Zubiya's hand to make sure she does not trip over her sari.

Zubiya came into her bedroom and realized Asfand was gone in the washroom. She looked at his carry-on on the bed and opened it to take out his clothes, toiletries etc. She noticed a small box and opened it. It had 4 Kashmiri wooden bangles in it, 2 red and 2 bronze. The red ones had bronze flowers and stones on them and the bronze ones were hand-painted with different vines, motifs and patterns in green and dark pink.
A: I see you have found the bangles. She felt his fingers on her right ear as he took her earring off and whispered in her ear.
Z: Yeh maray liye hain?
A: Nahi Kamran ki ek behan hoti thi Bakhtawar, bahut piyari thi, yeh uskey liye hain. He said putting the earring in his track pant pocket. She elbowed him in the ribs with her right arm.
A: Ouch, he laughed and wrapped his arms around her waist.
Z: Safiya ayi thi? She asked fingering the bangles.
A: Yes, ghar ayi thi kehne lagi Zubiya baji or Gaiti bhabi meri cheezain letay hain. I told them you guy were not home so I bought these from her.
Z: Main pehan lon yeh? She turned her head to look at him. He shrugged his shoulders and smiled at her indulgently like you do with an excited child who asks repeatedly "what is it" as he unwraps his present.
He watched as Zubiya took off her kangans and handed them to him. He grabbed them and put them in his pocket too. He loved watching her, even if she was doing the most mundane things. He had seen her come alive right in front of his eyes. The shy, reserved, hesitant, unsure girl had made way for this beautiful girl with eyes full of spark and a smile that could light up a room. The love that him and his family gave her, the way his mother and bhabi looked after her and babied her; all of that had contributed to her opening up and blossoming. She was finally being taken care of, she lived with people that adored her and all of it showed. She had always been independent; which he loved, but now she just had this aura of self-confidence like she was sure now that there were people who loved and respected her and will always support her.
She carefully put the bangles on her right wrist and shook her wrist in front of his face. He hooked his index finger in one of the bangles and pulled.
Z: Tch! Toot jayegi Asfand. He let go and used his finger to trace the boat neck on the back of her blouse. Zubiya squirmed as his finger slowly went from her right shoulder to her left. He pushed her sari pallu on her left shoulder with his hand but it didn't move. Zubiya laughed.
Z: Nice try! Its pinned!
A: Ohh, I was wondering all evening how it was staying in place. She turned her head to look at him, stunned by his words. She noticed he was totally serious and she was caught by surprise for the umpteenth time at the stuff he noticed about her. He used the opportunity to hold her chin with his left hand and pulled her in for a kiss. Zubiya's eyes closed as she tried to imprint this moment in her mind. She thought there was something very erotic about the way he was kissing her right now -- his right arm around her waist holding her back to his chest, his left hand holding her chin while his head was bent over her turned head.
A: Sari kiska idea tha. He said as he picked her up and walked over to the bed.
Z: bhabi ka! She said as he put her down. His hands went to her other earring while she took the pin off her pallu...

Asfandyar's eyes opened up. He was feeling cold and pulled the blanket up -- that's when he realized he was not wearing a shirt.😆😉 He turned his head to his side and saw Zubiya's back clad in his t-shirt from earlier that night. She was turned to her left and her arms were stretched out in front of her; her black bangles and her new Kashmiri bangles on her wrists. He reached over to the bed side table and searched for the AC remote amongst her hair pins, jewellery and his glasses. He turned the temperature up on the AC and got up to walk over to his closet. He noticed her sari from earlier this evening on the floor and picked it up smiling, "she would kill me in the morning when she sees her stuff all over the room". He picked up her things and placed them on the chair by the window.
He came back to bed and saw that Zubiya was now lying on her back. Her head turned slightly to the left and her sensuous neck in full view; except this time it had a small red round welt like mark near the collar bone and a thin long and red rash like mark that started from her collar bone and extended past the crew neck of the tshirt. He rubbed the stubble on his chin and heard the rasp as he slid in bed next to her. He bent over and placed soft kisses on the marks on her neck
Z: Asfand main soo rahi hon. She moaned and turned to her left again. He chuckled and settled back on his pillow.
A: Dr. Haroon bata rahe thay unki ammi ayengi next week bhabi or mama and baba sey milney.
Z: hmmm that's good. Dr. Haroon and Gaiti will be so good for each other. I am going to miss Saim soo much. Can I visit them everyday. She mumbled as she turned again and snuggled into his shoulder and arm. Her left arm went across his chest and Asfand started running his fingers through her bangles as sleep overtook him.
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Posted: 7 years ago
This is so so beautiful. By far, you've been the best FF writer on Asfi. The characters in your story are so close to the actual drama and hence it feels so real!. Pls do continue and give us more post-marital scenes of this amazing pair!.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wowow. This was so beautifully written. I loved the way you showed their romance weaved in with so much feeling and emotion! Please do write more, I really look forward to it
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Posted: 7 years ago
You are an awesome writer
Beautifully written their feelings and romance
How asfi always tried to romance his lady love...seriously girl you are tremendous
You write that kind of stuff so gracefully without making it vulgar...
Write more on their love and romance...now these are the lifelines for asfiya's fan
Do write okkk
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Posted: 7 years ago
ehhh, this was beautiful, so full of their charms ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
Please continue to write. You write such brilliantly on Zubi and Asfand, incorporating her family, and going in to the future, where the two of them are happy. So glad to have come across your work.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful
Plsss thora jaldi update kiya karo na
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nitty,I read & re-read your FF again and again ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
You make Asfi the hottest and sweetest at the same time...uugghh...girl u have magic in your writing and I absolutely love it...your OS is one of the first I have read on Asfi and zubi and i can't appreciate it enough. They are really in character so that helps with the whole thing. Keep writing and thank u!

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