Asfand Zubi-New OS page 24 - Page 10

Hi! these are pretty amazing one shots. Very eagerly waiting for the next one.

Hello Hello. I m waiting for the update.

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Wow what a gem I discovered today. Loved the writing. Leaves you wanting for more. You are some writer, lady! Please write some more . Makes the intezaar easier.

Originally posted by: --HiNa--

omgg

i loved it

this is wht i wanted

omg

too good

please write more got os

u should be writer

Originally posted by: .Anya.

Dekha hina kitne ludo matches khele asfiya ne is thread me😉

I want more updates.

🤣🤣

Thanks for all the feedback and reviving this thread
I just read a few other one shots and they are all amazing and PG
SOOO I wasn't sure ke yeh ziada romantic or "adult" ho gaya hai shayad
Lovely to see lots of people writing on post marriage asfiya which in my opinion will be glorious or at least in my head it is
Hoping to write something soon, bus is nokri ka kiya karon

Originally posted by: nittygritty1

Thanks for all the feedback and reviving this thread
I just read a few other one shots and they are all amazing and PG
SOOO I wasn't sure ke yeh ziada romantic or "adult" ho gaya hai shayad
Lovely to see lots of people writing on post marriage asfiya which in my opinion will be glorious or at least in my head it is
Hoping to write something soon, bus is nokri ka kiya karon

Originally posted by: SanFrangirl

I know so many OS are fabulous. And so is yours too, because you are actually writing the future beyond what is there on the screen. We all know the screen will stop at a fairly early point of time in their relationship. So thanks for giving us a window how their lives would be. I mean Dr Asfi wouldnt just be her boss and Dr Zubiya wouldnt always be the docile junior. As to the adult interpretation, while the romance can be infantilized, no way can a marriage be "non-adult".

I completely loved your interpretations. Please do write more.

Well Said! I agree with you @Sanfrangirl,

@nittygritty, You are writing something that is completely different and doing a great job, please do continue, its nice to see so many people are creative here, it's not easy to write any type of story. It is really amazing the way you have written about their married life, It is really lovely. I am totally looking forward to your next part.. Please keep writing.. ❤️

Yes!!! As much as I love the fact that he loves Zubiya's personality I don't think he's completely shareef each time he is looking at her. Some of those stares are of a manly man checking out a woman he desires lol he's definitely attracted to her physically and FI and her actors have done a good job of showing it on tv in the most modest way possible
Shadi ke baad I don't think ke woh lambey lambey dialogues marey ga about wanting to protect her and blah blah
He will SHOW her she is his and he's always there for her in his own way, like most husbands do