Janam (JNam, I want to call you that π π³ ),
So I went to link and started reading what you wrote, I was expecting something like, a one shot or something, but to my surprise there were plenty of short stories there or many one shots I would say. It is literally a MoNa heaven there. You can even open a new thread and post all of that there, cuz seriously, all MoNa fans should read it. And, I hope you have send it to EmNa too ? Cuz they will be super happy and will feel proud of playing characters that make people write such beautiful stuff on them.
And Janam, the thing I loved the most in your writing which made it worth reading are the DETAILS. Ufff, I looved reading the way you mentioned all the details about MoNa.. what were they doing, their feelings, their behaviours, the awkwardnes.. all these I wanted in the novel but didn't get anything.. and you just gave me that feeling of reading the novel of this show. So hats off to you π.
I loved the first MoNa confrontation on 'marry or not' question. It looked quite real. And you put them into character as well according to the situation.
Their letters, were so in-character, Imran-Ayna k letters per bhi you did so much mehnat haha.. like you actually knew how's they react. But Mohsin's letter was the most interesting one for obvious reasons. He CLEARLY should have done it too in the show.. cuz he is shown fond of reading so I suppose writing is his cup of tea too ? But well this was the reason I wanted to read stories on MoNa to get different POVs. Him mentioning about how Aina has become a part of life and his confusions in that letter to Nadia.. this whole scene was covered in his monologue, when he puts Nadia's pic down..
I loved that bit where he mentions about Aina's looks.. when comes giving him coffee, he notices her hands, wrists that are so delicate βΊοΈ * THIS IS WHY I LOVE DETAILS IN NOVEL CUZ THEY DON'T SHOW THIS WAY IN THE SHOW , YOU HAVE TO INTERPRETE THE SCENE ON YOUR OWN π *
Then that saree scene, ufff ! JANAM I LOVE YOU for writing it.. omgg I was imagining MoNa in that scene and was giggling like an idiot π. The way you picturized it, what a skilled writer you are, Bravo ! I can never forget this scene for obvious reasons βΊοΈ. He looks at her from the back, is so into her that he FEEELS everything. He had that ajeeb thing in his stomach, too π€£. Uff he was unable to resist her in saree. And there she goes like, Mohsin BHAI your tea .. bechara.. kitna bura laga hoga usey π. I liked the way you created that romantic mahol for this scene. Like Aaina singing an old song he used to love, no lighting but in kitchen only, saree, stomach thing .. hehehehehe all was apt !
This is all I have read till now .. will review the other half when I will finish reading π
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