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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was the wedding of ashar's buisness partner and he had to attend it because he was his best frnd too so he was going along with "his wife" and daughter.Feeling disgusted to ask her but he had to,he couldn't just take hareem along with him nor he could only go alone and he also didn't want people to know about his non-existing relation with his so-called wife.
He was ready and was about to wear his coat when the most sweetest voice rang in his ears..."BABAAA!!!!!"
"jee baba kii jaan." He held her in his arms and lovingly kissed her."Aap ready ho gay...dekhen mama ne hareem ko kab ka ready kr dia hai." "achaaa,,,,hmmm baba kii princess to aaj bohat pretty lag rahi hai...umaaahhh mera bacha...chalo baba bh ready hain.."
"Aap aese jain gay???" She frowned at him and he didn't knew what did she meant..He had dressed according to to the occasion and it wasn't too old fashioned that her mod scod daughter won't like it."Kyun jaan kya huwa..in kaproon mein kya kharabi hai?
"UFF HOO BABA!!! aap tai pehana bhool gay hain tai ke begair aap achay nahi lag rahe...he smiled at her at said in shame "wo hareem kya hai na baba ko tai bandhni nahi ati.." "ooo to koi baat nahi mama ko ati hai wo bandh den gi ab chalen late ho raha hai..."lekin beta ...rehne do na..." "bababaaa chalennn." she tried with full force to drag him towards the room where khirad was getting ready.After many years she had put on such a fancy dress with those elegant earrings and bangles...she was un recognizable...she seemed to be the same old khirad who once used to get ready like this just to please his husband...She was feeling difficulty in wearing her earring when hareem exclaimed from back.."mamaamaaa.." "jee beta kya huwa hai"the moment she turned back she was in a surprise to see ashar with hareem who often didn't come in her room and she frowned when she saw him holding a tie...She clearly understood that hareem would have insisted him to wear it and he as usual hadn't learnt to wear a tie.well it was her fault too she never made him wear the tie by himself and put it on him at any cost by herself but at that time it was bcoz she loved and today she was forced to do this for her daughter's sake,She knew ashar was doing the same just for hareem he was tolerating her just coz of hareem.he came forward and handed over the tie to khirad who felt soo close to him after a long,,,she could feel his warm breath,his essence made her remember the past.He himself was lost in her...he too was seeing her wife khirad who dresses like this after a long time,,her hair smelled the same,she even hadn't changed her prefume,her hair strands was disturbing her,he wanted to put them aside and touch her soft skin but he had to control,things weren't same,he knoe just couldn't touch her or feel her...The moment she put on the tie she immediately stepped back not wanting the closeness to increase not wanting to bear his breath.He was taken a back from his thoughts,he didn't why he wanted her to remain with him like that he wanted to never let her go..."dekha papa ab aap lag rahe hain na hareem ke handsome papa...aap ko pata hai aaj aap fawad khan se bh zaida handsome lag rahe hain.Ashar and khirad looked at each other and laughed a her dialogues.Soon they left for the wedding with a new feeling a hope of love...they both realised that they still loved each other.love that was hidden somewhere there,,,,,there deep in the heart but it was existing it was...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome work! 👏

Well conceptualized and beautifully written!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aj ap fawad khan se bhi ziadg handsome lag rahe hain- loved loved loved it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww **reads the OS sighs over the distant parted khisher and then in the end finally smiles** **claps for the writer and hugs too**
Hareem part was sho chweet n adorable
Loved the tie part
And khisher are lively lovely n outstanding as always
Keep writing :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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..aap ko pata hai aaj aap fawad khan se bh
zaida handsome lag rahe hain

@bold : loved this line 😆 btw awesome os...really beautiful 👍🏼 this reminds me khirad dressing up and ashar telling her u looks beautiful, before that coffee shop scene
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This one is my fav
aww i just absolutely love ashar and hareem and khirad offcourse
baba ki jaan was so cute
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww its adorable!:-)
I completely adore it.
Amazing!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww very sweet and lovely OS...loved the whole concept loved hareem's dialogues
Well done
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