Humsafar (Update on Pg 22) (Pms Sent)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Guys, I am writing this ff especially for someone special in my life. She has become my family now. She is one of the most wonderful people I have ever come across. She is my soul sister. I should stop praising her now otherwise she will get embarrassed and I don't want that and if I'll start appreciating her then u all have to forget my ff:lol as I can't stop myself from praising her.

She is my sweetheart. I am blessed to have u.Yes only mine sweetheart (winks). She is none other than Meri/Kamoshi (MSluvsSI). This ff is dedicated to u my darling. I hope u will like your surprise janu<3.

I am continuing it from the part where Khirad is thrown out of the house by her wicked mother-in-law and here it goes.

Wo humsafar thaa'. haaan
Wo humsafar thaa' haaan

Khirad walked lifelessly on the road in the darkness thinking about the happenings of the day. Suddenly her life has taken a drastic turn. The person she loved the most did not even believed her. It pinched her heart more but she was hopeful that her husband will try to contact her after reading the letter she left to their servant, Jamal.

Wo humsafar thaa magar us sey humnawai na thi'
Wo humsafar thaa magar us sey humnawai na thi'

K dhoop chhaon ka'
K dhoop chhaon ka alam raha, judaai na thi.
Wo
humsafar thaa magar us sey humnawai na thi'

Khirad thinking'.

Kya aap ko bhi apni khirad par yaaken nahi hai? Mian sirf aur sirf apki Khirad hun Asher. Maine sirf aapse sacha pyaar kiya hai. Please Asher jaldi ayen aur yeh khat parh kar mujhe lene a jaein. Mera apke siwa aur koi nahi hai Asher. Apke pyaar ki adaat hai apki nafrat nahi she paongi main aur wo bhi tab jab yeh sirf aur sirf ek galat fehmi hai.Apko apni Khirad pe yakeen karna hi hoga. Mohabbat bharose par tikyi hoti hai na to phir kijaye apni mohabbat par yakeen. Meri izzat yeun pairon tale rondh di gayi hai main is ruswai aur zilat ke saath kaise zinda rahun? Hamarae bache ko ek gali banne se bacha lein warna sab khatam ho jaye ga. Ab mujhe sirf apki mohabbat par hi yakeen hai.

Aye Mere Allah meri madad kar! Asher k dil mein phirse wohi jazbaat paida kar de mere Khuda!Unhein sahi aur galat ka fark bata de. Wo apni Khirad ki behgunahi ko tasleem kar lein. Unke liye hi to yeh Khirad zinda thi warna ami ke jane k baad to maine jene ki umeed hi chor di thi. Lekin phir Asher meri zindagi mein aye aur mujhe jene ki ek nayi wajah di lekin itni zilat k baad mein kyun zinda rahun kyun'..

She slipped on the road crying badly. But then after venting her emotions she stood up having some hope that he will understand her. Wiping her tears her thought process continues.

Nahi main aise himat nahi haar sakti. Itni mushkilein sahi hain ab main zinda rahun gi is k liye. Asher aur mera pyaar ki nishani k liye aur phir Asher bhiu to ayen gen a. INSHALLAH wo mujhe is tarah tanha nahi chor sakte itna pyaar jo karte hain mujhse.Ab main wapis jaon gi apne ghar apne Asher k ghar. Mian is nanhi si jaan ko mahrumiyon ka shikar nahi hone dun gi.

With this hope she decided to go back. She had just came a little way when thud!

This is it. I hope u will like your surprise sweetheart.

Yourz

Angel. 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Angel <3 <3πŸ€— It was really indeed a plesant surprise for me dear.. You always make me surpirse with ur antics n this one is really awesome <3 Humsafar was an Epic n my dearest serial which i enjy still watching every day <3 <3 FF on pak serials are very rare.. I am really exctied to read Humsfar FF.. n dat too by my Soul Sis.. I can't express my happiness dear <3 <3 I love you so much wala <3 <3 I know it will be lovely n adorable like my Angel <3
Firstly the banner <3 i loved it.. so soothing one its indeed like ur voice <3 u Are getting better n better in thisπŸ˜‰

Now coming to your story... the soulful song aww i love it so much <3 Nothing could be more magical dn this song na <3

I loved da scene u chossed from which u started n i would not mind to mention that when i had watched humsafar latestly on reaching this scene i imagined i story n u are heading towards dat one for sureπŸ˜† as i knw we think alike 😳 so m really exctied to read this story as its gona be rocking like my Angel...

I loved reading kirad s emotions n feelings...dam so heart breaking her condition is .. feling so much bad.. i loved da way u wrote dm seriously heart wrenching the way she is pleeding for Ashar comeback... the way she gets up courageous again after shattering badly just for on soul..their baby..her trust on Ashar s love... all the way she is trying to make her heart believe that everything wil be fine..the hope n faith she have on Allah is shown really beautifully i am loving it dear..every bit of it i loved reading n felt it dear... u wrote brillinatly no doubt..made me so emotinal 😭😭

I just can wait to read more n more ... u have to update soonish .. u stoped at really bad point..i just wana see now Ashar there for her <3 Cant wait to see how u wil bring them face to face... i really hope khirad n her baby will be fine na :(
Just Update SOOn !!
N now coming to ur chit chat wid which u bored others dear .. i m speechless after reading dm coz what i am feeling ryt now u cant imagine. ..so blessed n fortunate to have u angel in my life my soul sis <3 <3 I will give u a tight hug for this surprise when we will meet IA <3 <3 Love you dear <3 Huggss <3 πŸ€—
Edited by MSluvsSI - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MSluvsSI

Hey Angel <3 <3πŸ€— It was really indeed a plesant surprise for me dear.. You always make me surpirse with ur antics n this one is really awesome <3 Humsafar was an Epic n my dearest serial which i enjy still watching every day <3 <3 FF on pak serials are very rare.. I am really exctied to read Humsfar FF.. n dat too by my Soul Sis.. I can't express my happiness dear <3 <3 I love you so much wala <3 <3 I know it will be lovely n adorable like my Angel <3

Firstly the banner <3 i loved it.. so soothing one its indeed like ur voice <3 u Are getting better n better in thisπŸ˜‰

Now coming to your story... the soulful song aww i love it so much <3 Nothing could be more magical dn this song na <3

I loved da scene u chossed from which u started n i would not mind to mention that when i had watched humsafar latestly on reaching this scene i imagined i story n u are heading towards dat one for sureπŸ˜† as i knw we think alike 😳 so m really exctied to read this story as its gona be rocking like my Angel...

I loved reading kirad s emotions n feelings...dam so heart breaking her condition is .. feling so much bad.. i loved da way u wrote dm seriously heart wrenching the way she is pleeding for Ashar comeback... the way she gets up courageous again after shattering badly just for on soul..their baby..her trust on Ashar s love... all the way she is trying to make her heart believe that everything wil be fine..the hope n faith she have on Allah is shown really beautifully i am loving it dear..every bit of it i loved reading n felt it dear... u wrote brillinatly no doubt..made me so emotinal 😭😭

I just can wait to read more n more ... u have to update soonish .. u stoped at really bad point..i just wana see now Ashar there for her <3 Cant wait to see how u wil bring them face to face... i really hope khirad n her baby will be fine na :(
Just Update SOOn !!
N now coming to ur chit chat wid which u bored others dear .. i m speechless after reading dm coz what i am feeling ryt now u cant imagine. ..so blessed n fortunate to have u angel in my life my soul sis <3 <3 I will give u a tight hug for this surprise when we will meet IA <3 <3 Love you dear <3 Huggss <3 πŸ€—

πŸ€—πŸ€— Hey My Sweetheart<3<3. I am on seventh haven right now that u liked it.Embarrassed
When I told u that I will be writing a story on Hamsafar u wanted it badly and I know how much u love Humsafar<3<3 I love u tooo.❀️
Actually better tahn my voice. πŸ˜† I am getting better thankfully.
when u told me that u are listening to this song it clicked me to add a few lurics of it too. True nothing can be more magical than this song<3
We are actually soul sisters<3 I hope to fulfill ur expectations as they are very high.
Khirad is broken but she belives in Asher and his love. Let's wait and watch. cpz i will not tell u anything nowπŸ˜†
I am also in Humsafar world so I guess that's why it came out so well as u said.Embarrassed
I wanted to keep the suspence and mystery.πŸ˜‰ Don;t worry u 'll get a long update soon. That's ur angel's promise to u.
Oye no one is getting bored by my chit chat if someone is then he/she should not comment here otherwise.πŸ˜‘πŸ˜†
I can imagine ur excitement and happiness.I am in the same condition. πŸ˜† I am also very luck to have u Sweetheart.Embarrassed
Abhi to aik surprise hai many more are in line so just be ready.πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
Tight hug returns dear for coming into my life and making it worthy of it.Embarrassed
We will meet IA very soon. Can't wait to se my jaan<3πŸ€—πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: HSFA

πŸ€—πŸ€— Hey My Sweetheart<3<3. I am on seventh haven right now that u liked it.😳
When I told u that I will be writing a story on Hamsafar u wanted it badly and I know how much u love Humsafar<3<3 I love u tooo.❀️
Actually better tahn my voice. πŸ˜† I am getting better thankfully.
when u told me that u are listening to this song it clicked me to add a few lurics of it too. True nothing can be more magical than this song<3
We are actually soul sisters<3 I hope to fulfill ur expectations as they are very high.
Khirad is broken but she belives in Asher and his love. Let's wait and watch. cpz i will not tell u anything nowπŸ˜†
I am also in Humsafar world so I guess that's why it came out so well as u said.😳
I wanted to keep the suspence and mystery.πŸ˜‰ Don;t worry u 'll get a long update soon. That's ur angel's promise to u.
Oye no one is getting bored by my chit chat if someone is then he/she should not comment here otherwise.πŸ˜‘πŸ˜†
I can imagine ur excitement and happiness.I am in the same condition. πŸ˜† I am also very luck to have u Sweetheart.😳
Abhi to aik surprise hai many more are in line so just be ready.πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
Tight hug returns dear for coming into my life and making it worthy of it.😳
We will meet IA very soon. Can't wait to se my jaan<3πŸ€—πŸ€—


I knw sweetheart as i am like that πŸ˜‰ yah i was so excited to read ur story n u totally justified wid my wait n excitement... NOPe ur voice was magical more for me <3 <3 u knw we cant ge over it still 🀣 i Knw u wil do dear <3 best of luck <3 yah i hope this humsafar ff too rocks like da one did <3 i cant stop myself thinking whats next gona happen... just continue soon jaan <3
Darling Sweetheart aj k lea kafi hai itna surpirse πŸ˜‰
aww u made me emotional <3 <3 πŸ˜†
Ishq wala love dheer sara <3 <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update..But u left us on a cliffhanger..Eagerly waiting to know,what happened to Khirad..Plzz update soon..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice update Fatma...
Awesome...update soon..thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I WONDER,IS IT REALLY HUMSAFAR FICTION OR A MUTUAL APPRECIATION THREAD... BEAUTIFUL POST BY FATIπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜› N WONDERFUL COMMENTS BY MERI😳😳😳 !!!I LOVE ASHER(IT'S D NAME OF MY REAL BRO) N KHIRAD A LOT !!! FARHAT ISHTIAQ WAS AT HER BEST !!! N MY FATI'S WRITING SKILL IS REALLY AMAZINGGG !!!!😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pakpearl

I WONDER,IS IT REALLY HUMSAFAR FICTION OR A MUTUAL APPRECIATION THREAD... BEAUTIFUL POST BY FATIπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜› N WONDERFUL COMMENTS BY MERI😳😳😳 !!!I LOVE ASHER(IT'S D NAME OF MY REAL BRO) N KHIRAD A LOT !!! FARHAT ISHTIAQ WAS AT HER BEST !!! N MY FATI'S WRITING SKILL IS REALLY AMAZINGGG !!!!😊...


LOL Api i asked angel to put it in CC coz we cant help in replying na πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pakpearl

I WONDER,IS IT REALLY HUMSAFAR FICTION OR A MUTUAL APPRECIATION THREAD... BEAUTIFUL POST BY FATIπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜› N WONDERFUL COMMENTS BY MERI😳😳😳 !!!I LOVE ASHER(IT'S D NAME OF MY REAL BRO) N KHIRAD A LOT !!! FARHAT ISHTIAQ WAS AT HER BEST !!! N MY FATI'S WRITING SKILL IS REALLY AMAZINGGG !!!!😊...

Its really a Hunsafar FF Api.πŸ˜†
Awww. I am happy u liked it. Yeah she is my sweetheart.EmbarrassedπŸ˜† OK OK no more praising now.Embarrassed
Really? Aww. Asher and Khirad are very special.. Yeah she was. Epic Love story taht we still enjoy.⭐️
Api now u are making me embarassed.Embarrassed Love u a lot.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: HSFA

Its really a Hunsafar FF Api.πŸ˜†
Awww. I am happy u liked it. Yeah she is my sweetheart.πŸ˜³πŸ˜† OK OK no more praising now.😳
Really? Aww. Asher and Khirad are very special.. Yeah she was. Epic Love story taht we still enjoy.⭐️
Api now u are making me embarassed.😳 Love u a lot.

Fati,shabash!!! u r too good,Api,ur bro's name is Asher !!!!❀️ It's a beautiful name.is any khirad in his lifeπŸ˜†πŸ˜† meri,will u ever admire someone else(cutie pie shif😳)other than Angel😲.otherwise,I'll call u SATAN😑
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