SPOILER 1
So Asher is a lill attracted to Khirad but hasnt figured out his feelings yet.Khirid never talks to Ashar,like no complains,no talk,no requests nothing.So one day Ashar asks her that a friend has called her to a dinner.Can u come?Khirid hesitates but agrees.When shes brushing her hair to tie em,Asher says v r getting late,lets go and left.In reality he didnt want khirid to tie her hair.
On the way back,he;s like "music sunogi" Khirid said "aggar app ka mood hai tou lagale".Ashars dad and khirid were close soa shar had found out from baseerat that khirid loved ice cream.He stopped in front of an ice creeam parlour and is like "ice cream khao gi ya woh bhi mere mood pe depend kare ga"
she's like "strawberry"
Then khirid keeps looking here and there.
Asher feels like banging his head on the wall as she doesnt talks much
SPOILER 2
-Asher's thoughts in ITALIC
Khirid is talking to Baseerat in a chirpy and bubbly manner.They both are in the lounge.As soon as Asher enters,Khirid goes all silent.Baseerat says 'Asher chaaye piyo gey Khirid ke haath ki?' Asher didnt answer and Khirid went to the kitchen to make tea.
When she came back,She added sugar in baseerat's tea and passed it on to him.She took Asher's cup fromt he tray and placed it on the table rather than handing it to him.
'Y didnt she give it to me.I woudnt have killed her but she knows what i like and what i dont.She didnt add sugar in my tea.'
SPOILER 3
Ashar's thoughts in italic
Khirid is crying lying on the bed[Lights r off].Asher hears her sobs, and notices that Khirid is gettin up to go to the bathroom/Drawing room so that she can cry.He Gets up and asks her whats the matter.Khirid 'Ama ki yaad arahi hai' Asher puts his hand on her hand and says 'Ab tumhey hassi aye ya rona,Tum yeh kamra raat ko chorh ke nahi jao gi'
'She's so lonely.how come i never realise?'
SPOILER 4
Khirid and Asher have confessed their Love for each other,However Khirid was suffering from some kind of complex.The social circle of Baseerat,Fareeda and Asher was huge.Parties were part of their every day.Asher had noticed that Khirid remained very conscious while getting ready 4 the parties.Since when was it happening,he had no idea but he knew that Khirid had started to compare her self with modern and stylish girls and he wasnt liking it one bit.He didnt care if she wasnt a daughter of a rich industrialist,So what if she hadnt got educated from a famous institute.This wasnt anything bad.He wanted Khirid to remain as confident as before.He knew that the social circle he was part of contained many women who judged people through their status but he wanted his khirid to know that it didnt matter to him.Asher Wanted to talk to Khirid about this topic,He was looking for a chance when Khirid gave her a chance herself...
scene continues from spoiler 4.
SPOILER 5
After coming home from office,Asher was going through a very important file which he had received today from Dubai branch manager.He was in a serious mood.Khirid was also in the room and was going through her wardrobe to find something appropriate to wear for the party.'The green saari consists of more sophisticated work but black looks good in night functions' said Khirid.She only got a 'Hoon" back as Asher was too busy with the file.Khirid had 2 hangers in her hand which consist of green and black saari 'Ye black saari achi lagey gi na party mein'.She received a rushed 'haan' 'aap meri baat sun rahe hai na',Khirid asked.'Sun tou raha ho' 'Sun nahi rahe,but ur giving me the impression that ur listening.Put this file away and listen'.He was looking intently at her annoyance.'Mera saara dihaan aap ki taraf hai janaab.So u were saying..?'. He put the file away. 'I was saying that i shoudnt have married a workaholic'
Asher loved this casual style of Khirid.He had worked hard to gain it.He had made Khirid believe that he truly loved her.
scene continues from Spoiler 4 & 5
SPOILER 6
"khirid,itni budgumaani.I wasn't that lost.I know what's the issue.the question is what should my wife wear,black or green" he said teasingly.
"this is not something to make a joke about" She said pouting.
Asher came and stood next to her."Joke about such a serious matter," he said in an naughty manner.
"U aren't getting serious.I wanna look good in the party",she said seriously.
"In whose competetion?" he suddenly said putting an end to his jokes.Suddenly he realised this is the right moment for them to talk.He was afraid her fragile girl would take it to her heart and get hurrt,but he thought he should let it all out.He wanted to tell Khirid that whatsoever the reason of her complex,Whoever made her doubtful of her self was actually jealous of Khirid."Your a goof if u want to do ur comparison with those fazool girls.You are way better than all this.Ask me,you are the best.Your simplicity is ur best quality.you are what u are,u dont fake around"
SPOILER 7
He was in London for a business tour but how could he come back without doing some shopping for Khirid.When he had asked Khirid what should he get for him,like every eastern wife she had ended the talk by saying that i have everything,just come home safely.However Ashar didnt listen.He bought everything he could think of:Handbags,Sunglasses,Makeup kits,perfumes etc but the best of all gifts was the necklace.Her birthday was on its way and he wanted to give this to her on her special day.A white gold chain with a delicate diamond was just the perfect gift.The locket opened and allowed pictures to be fitted in.Asher naughtily kept 2 pictures of his very own face in the locket and closed it.
The next day of his coming back to home.it was Khirid's birthday.HE came and stood right beside Khirid along with the jewellery box."Khabar daar jo ankhein kholi" he threatened.He took out the necklace.
SPOILER 8[Continuation of 7]
"now open ur eyes"he said.Khirid was mesmerized by this sweet gesture of Ashar.Whiel observing the necklace in the mirror,she noticed the necklace opened aswell.She opened it and asked innocently "Why m i not in this?dono taraf apni pic kuon lagaye?"Asher replied "taakey tumharey aas paas har taraf mein he raho.Tum khud apney itney paas na raho jitney mein tumharey raho.Chaahe tou meri saalgirah per apni tasweero wala aisa he gift de dena"
He took her on a romantic dinner to celebrate her birthday.Khirid had worn his fav colour dress and left her hair open on his request. "kisi sianey ne sahi kaha hai ke Olives Khaaney aur pasand karney ke liye aap ko un ka taste develop karna parta hai",he said.He noticed the collected olives in Khirid's plate,smiled and transferred all the olives of he rplate to his very own plate.While he was doing this,khirid had drunk all of his juice while her juice was still lying next to her.When he saw his glass emty,usne khirid ko ghoor ke dekha,she just shrugged her shoulders and smiled.
While drinking coffee after dinner "how can u drink coffee without sugar?",she asked. "Apni apni aadat ki baat hai.Mumi tell me how i would refuse to drink milk with sugar in it when i was a child"
"Thats weird."
SPOILER 9
It was a weekend but Asher was busy in his Office work. "Acha,Do rupey,Pachaas paise?meaning 2.5*9500 that is.." He started calculating the profit of his shares while looking for the calculator.
'23750'.Out of shock,his mouth was open.Khirid had gone back to reading her magazine(man,doesn't she has anything better to do in her life).He was still calculating whereas she had already answered.True,His MBA from MIT was a total waste of time.Much smarter was the girl who he tought was a small town girl.After ending the call,his whole attention was on her.
"School mein 1 se 20 tak tables yaad karaye jaatey hai.Aap ko 2.5 ka table bhi yaad hai?" he said while giving a smile to her.
"Mein maths mein bohat achi thi.MErey humesha 100 marks aya karte the.Mere baba maths ke teacher the.Humesha maths woh mujhe parhatey the"(Her life coudnt be perfect,HEre i spend hours studying maths and still land on a C)
Her intelligence hadn't shocked him as much as this had.She TALKED,She spoke a complete sentence.(AWWW)
"tum kya parh rahi thi?" he asked
"Mein ne is saal BSC ki hai in Maths,physics,[i coudnt get the last subject]
"BSC?BSC kar chukki ho?" he was shocked again and she was shocked seeing his shocked face.[Too much of shock dose,sorry i didnt bother to think of a synonym for shock]
'Yes,why"
"Itni choti si lagti ho.Mujhe laga abhi 3rd year mein admission liya hoga"
"Mein bees saal ki hochuki ho" [Mahira doenst looks like 20]
"Bees saal ki,tab tou tum waqaye bohat bari ho chuki ho" he laughed a little which put Khirid in an akward situation.
"Aggar tumahara maths itna acha hai,tum ne aagey parhney ke baare mein bhi socha hoga".For the first time,Khirid was talking to him.He didnt want to end it so soon so he continued the talk.
"haan mera iraada yahi thi ke Maths mein masters karo gi.Baba ki bhi yahi khwaahish thi leken phir ami bemaar hogaye tou BSC finals mein lag raha tha mein fail hojao gi.Bilkul parh he nahi paaye thi" the sadness in her voice didnt go unnoticed by Ashar.Mayb she was missing her mother's sickness days,He thought.
"leken phir bhi tum achi tarreqe se paas hoye hogi,hena" he said confidently.
"haan,first division aye thi"
"tum apni studies dobara se shuroo kar lo.Ab jab admissions khuley,tou admission masters mein le lena"
Khirid looked at her with a shocked face.Noticing this,he said "Iss mein taajub ki kya baat hai?"
"Mein khush horahi ho"
"acha,pehle baar patta chala hai,Khushi ka izhaar itni hairaani se" (Asher is soo cute)He smiled,got up and fir the 1st time asked "Light off kardo ya tumhey magazine parhna hai?"
She nodded
Hareem's operation has been successful but she's under observation.
[SPOILER 10]
Hospital scene
Ashar got food packed from a near by fast food restaurant and quickly went back to the hospital.Khirid was still sitting where he left her but she was holding her head,as if she was in pain.He sat next to her and opened the packed box.
"tumhey bhook nahi lag rahi,tumhara khaana khaaney ko dil nahi cha raha leken sirf hareem ke liye khaa lo.Merey liye nahi,apne liyey hai,sirf Hareem ke liye" he said before he heard a no.
"yeh burger khao,Chaaye piyeo,sir dard ki goli khao aur thori dair so jao.Jab utho gi tou fresh hogi"
"leken hareem waha akeli"
"hareem ke paas mein jaraha ho.Jitni jaldi tum lait jao gi,mein utni jaldi chala jao ga."
The bite that Asher had forcefully pushed in her mouth,was being hurried hastilybeing chewed by Khirid after listening to Ashar's statement.She was eating without any argument from his hands.After she finished eating,he added sugar in the tea and gave it to her,she started drinking it quietly.She wasnt interested in the taste or colour of the teea.When Asher saw her drinking,he started eating a burger.
After she was done drinking,he got up,took a tablet from the nurse in the corridor and brought it to khirid "ye lo".He sat right besides her.
"aap hareem ke paas jaaye mein so rahi ho" she said.
"pehle tum sojao phir jao ga"
,Asher said this so that instead of staying awake forcefully,she sleeps.He brought a quilt from the nearby rack and covered her up.Again,he sat right next to her.
"sofey par he taangey seedhi kar ke lait jao.ziada nahi,bus do teen ghantey so jao"
He wanted to get up so that she could lie down but instead he used his hand and made Khirid rest on his shoulder.He started to stroke her hair so that she could fall in a peacefulsleep.She looked very weak,Exhausted and tired.^^credit goes to meepha *hugs* Edited by lonelyshadow - 13 years ago
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