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Posted: 13 years ago
SPOILER ALERT!

Heyy guys, so this is the complete spoiler. I'm sorry, but i decided not to do the garden scene, because frankly. it is just really long... Though, i will write a part of it, like the scene between khirad and ashar where she wakes him up in the middle of the night. :D So get happy for that

Khirad/Baseerat Conversation Scene - Ashar Overhears:

It had been almost a month and a half after there wedding. Ashar had come home late after meeting up with some friends, as he decided to meet up with his father in his room. His mother Fareeda was gone to a late-night party. As he began to walk towards his dads room, he heard a feminine voice. It was his wife khirad talking to His dad baseerat. He was stunned; all this time, he never heard his mute wife talk, while now she was. He stood at the door and listened.
Khirad- Injustice has been done with him Mamoo! What mom did with me and you did with Ashar, it wasn't right! Everyone has there own likes, and desires, there own goals, there own dreams. Getting some randomn girl from somewhere, and throwing her to a guy saying this is your wife, now you have to spend the rest of your life with her, that is no justice at all!
He had no idea what Baseerat and Khirad were conversing abt from before, however what his wife said now, he heard.
Ashar's thoughts:- (She knows how to talk? She can actually speak complete sentences with such confidence.) He stood outside the room and thought to himself in confusion.
Baseerat- I'm not talking about Ashar dear. I'm talking about you.
I think youre not happy with this marriage.
Ashar knew how much khirad meant to His father, which is why after listening to her reply it startled him. How can she say all that?
Khirad- I'm not happy with this marriage mamoo!
Ashar was shocked. It seemed as if she was blaming the whole reason of not being happy on Ashar. He felt like slapping her for saying such a thing in-front of his father.
Khirad- How can i be happy with this marriage mamoo? What momDid with me was wrong, and u listened to her so you're wrong too! What, is that necessary for me to stay in this house as your daughter-in-law? Couldn't i just have stayed as your daughter instead? You could have kept me without this too, since you are my mamoo.I don't like the fact that i was forcefully handed over to someone to be his wife; to be a part of his life. Do you know what batool khala used to say to mom and dad about me? That i have so many nakhre. She would call me ten times, and i would show up at her house once. I never went to someone's house uninvited, and today without even being wanted, i became a part of someone's life. It's insulting?! My self-esteem, my ego it's all been hurt. Your son's forcefully trying to continue this relationship onwards with me. He's trying to be happy, but i'm sorry it can't work. All this seems really wierd to me! My self-respect has been hurt!
Ashar knew that after the death of khirad's mom, she had become quite close to his father. He often saw them chatting in the study, or in baseerat's room. However, he had no idea, that khirad's mannerism while talking to his father could be so casual. A girl who he thought to be dumb, shy and quiet, could openly with so much confidence and ease share her feelings with his father like a friend. Her voice was so powerful, and sentences so complete.
Without investigating further to know what the conversation was about, he quietly walked away from there. Maybe his dad had just asked khirad a question like "are you happy with this marriage?" and that was her reply. He had forced his son to marry Khirad, and after that icident, he never spoke much to ashar. Maybe that's why he just decided to go on and ask khirad. Ashar entered his room.
(Ashar thinking to himself:-)
She really knows how to talk? All this time she didn't speak not because she was shy or didn't feel equal to me in standard, but because she thinks she's been forcefully handed to me as a responsibility? He analyzed his and khirad's marriage and there relationship so far, and realised that all this time it was his own fault that she thought this. He had purposely been ignoring her and keeping her out of his life. He just thought of her as a regular girl from a small town, who had gotten
Married to him. However, how can a girl with so much self-confidence, self-esteem, and self-respect be so ordinary? He always liked and preffered such people. All this time, she lived like a stranger in the room, not touching any objects, just because she never considered it her own, or her right, and this wasn't her fault it was his!
A while later, when khirad walked into the room, ashar was watcjing t.v quietly. Both of them didn't exchange any words. His eyes seemed as if they were set on the tv screen, howeverhe was just staring at her!

Anyy requests, lemme know people. I'll post the khirad/ashar scene right now and next spoiler on friday night, then saturday night.
Preferably, someone gimme the page number for the scenes if u can, cuz they're really hard to find!

Now, ENJOY! :))
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sana.B




Sidra, REQUEST FOR A VM ON KHISHER PLZ! On the song tum ho from rockstar. Can u do it?



hey Sana!

i am so backed up with req rite now and collabs and stuff i want to make myself so is it okay if you request someone else - plus i havent heard the song...but if you really want me to i can try =/

hope its okay if you request someone else...

oh and thanks for the spoiler - going to read it now! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sidra2007



hey Sana!

i am so backed up with req rite now and collabs and stuff i want to make myself so is it okay if you request someone else - plus i havent heard the song...but if you really want me to i can try =/

hope its okay if you request someone else...

oh and thanks for the spoiler - going to read it now! :D



Aww, tht's totally fine. I understand the whole collabs and requests stuff. Let's find someone else, hmm.. Lets see, SHIZA? pweez?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amna, When u come online, post the spoiler on pg.1 or add it to the title like spoiler on pg.40 so it's easier for ppl to read :) Thanks.
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Posted: 13 years ago
im sorry sana! Seriously i am! Just that i've already said yes to 2 many people and i am part of 2 collab groups - so it piles up...yea maybe asking shiza or amna...


and omg thank you for the spoiler! so asher thinks its him! ahhh i cant wait for the khisher scene! i am excited to read it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
SPOILER ALERT, KHIRAD/ASHER SCENE

At 12:00 at night, both Ashar and
Khirad laid in bed to sleep. Ashar still felt that Khirad wanted to say something to him but she wouldn't. A while later, he heard khirad's quiet voice calling him.
Khirad- Sune aap So gaye kya? (Listen did u sleep already?)
Ashar was sleeping facing the other side. After hearing Khirad's voice, he turned to khirad. She was already facing him. I wanted to say something to you. However, instead of looking in his eyes, her eyes were down. She would never look in his eyes. Even if ashar would try and make direct eye-contact with her, she would always look at objects set around her. Before this habit of hers would irritate ashar, however now he used to enjoy it.
Khirad- I lied to you in the afternoon. (She felt guilty over her words, looking down.)
When you were gone to the nursery in the afternoon, i saw those plants lying there. I thought u put them there by mistake. I don't even know the ABC's of gardening, so i didn't know that those plants had to be kept in the shade. By seeing your involvement, i thought of helping you out too. Seriously, i thought when u would come home today, u wud have to put those plants in a nice order in the sun, so i put them myself. I promise i didn't do it on purpose.
Khirad was so calmly relating her story to him, and he was just staring at her. He couldn't believe that all these hours such a small thing was bothering him, and he was thinking so many different crazy thing. By seeing him quiet, khirad stopped speaking too. She lowered her gaze, and then spoke again.
Khirad- I never lie you know! But at that time u were so angry that i didn't know what to say, so i just said that it was a servant.
Ashar- You were scared then? What about now? I could get angry right now too you know. He stared at her calmly. She was so
Innocance and sweet, tht he wanted to tease her by scaring her with his anger.
Khirad- I still am scared, but i can't sleep with a lie. Whether a lie is big or small, a lie is a lie. Baba used to say that lieing is only easy the first time, and then it becomes hard, while telling the truth is only hard the first time, and then always easy.
Ashar wasAmazed by khirad's nature. He just stared at this innocent girl who lay on the bed with him, with a small distance inbetween. From all his relatives, his friends, his family, no-one was so truthful, and so pure in nature like her. She was different and simple. In this society, people's whole life was built and depended on one lie, and she was being so honest with him. He felt wierd about himself; amazed at the fact that someone so great as khirad came into his life, when he could've never thought of marrying someone like that. Without even asking for someone as great as her, he got it!
Ashar pulled khirad closer to him. He took her in his arms, and then silently whispered into her ears.
Ashar- Tumhe patah hai khirad tum bauhat achi ho! Tumse zyada achi ladki maine apni poori zindagi main nahin dekhi. Tumhari yeh saadgi, yeh sachayi, anmol hai!
At first if ashar thought he began to accept this girl, to like her, well now it was different. Now he began to love her, not from today, but from a few days now, and the reasons weren't becuz of her innocence and pure nature. but becuz he felt she had been selected especially for him. Khirad was a reward for him for some good deed that he had done. No matter how modern a girl can get, honesty is the best virtue for someone. This is why, khirad was special. She was so honest that she wouldn't even look into her husband's eyes. Indeed she was special.
However, it wasn't only ashar who started liking her. Khirad began to love him too. She began taking interest in his likes and dislikes, and would watch him secretly; He knew this.
Yes it was true that khirad and him had gotten married by force, however now both of them had accepted each other whole-heartedly.
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Posted: 13 years ago
K guys, good-night! I hope ur all happy now. My arms dying for sure, lol. So, enjoy till friday night. :) andd where did meepha go with her spoiler?
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you so much again Sana!! about to read it now!!

soo excited 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was wonderful thanks😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG omg omg - such an amazing scene!! ahh soo cute!!


Thank you sooo much Sana!! and sweet asher/fawad dreams!!! and do post more spoilers whenever you get the chance :D
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