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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
I'll Call u Lizzzy thn <3 !!
Oyeee im so waitin for Next weeeek Now !!!
hahahahha Ma OS is Still Stuck 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haha cool 😆

and OMG me too ... i am like waiting for thursday ever since thursday 🤣 does that even make any sense? 😕 **shrugs** who cares 🤣

and what? 😲 you wrote an OS .... gimme the link please 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤣 !! i do Write OS ! buh Nothin recently 🤣
last week i started an OS on Hamad Iman ! buh Not bother finishin it 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
what ? 😲 whyyyy? 😡 there goes my hope give me a sneak peak at least ... exclusively for me ... i know i am special 🤣

okay seriously ... you should post it you know ... a lotta peeps here would wanna read it 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lool this is wah i wrote so far ! 1
im not good wid OS or FF's 🤣
so bare it 🤣
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"Jabse Meine Apko dekha hai…Mera Ap Mera Apna Nahi Raha,Mere Pass who alfaz nahin jisse mein apne kefiyat ka izhar karoon… Yeh Meri aur mere dil ki majboori hai jo mein itni giri huwi arkat kar raha hoon…App tak apni dil ki baat pohchane ke liye." Those words were not letting her sleep, all she thought since she came back from Nikat's house, was these words…Hamad's confession! "Kya woh mazak kar rahe te? Kya who sach mein hamare bare mein kuch aise sochte hain? Yeh Kya Ho raha hai mujhe! Mein Yeh sab kya soch rahi hoon?!" she thought herself "Nahin! Yeh Theek Nahin hain! Who ek Bura Hadsa tha aur Mein Usske Bare mein aur nahin sochoongi!" she continued and tried hard to shut her eyes and not to think about him anymore! What was this? Is she falling for Hamad? Did these words affect her heart already? How will she help herself to avoid him?

On the other hand, Hamad who didn't even think twice before leaving his whole family! Why? For the girl who he possibly met twice or trice?

Nikat: "Hamad Bhai ye ap kya kar rahe ho apne apke saath!! Uss ladki ke peeche apne apko barbad kar rahe ho, jo apko badle mein kuch nahin desakti !..."

Hamad: Nikat! Kya usne tumhe khud kaha ke woh mere bare mein aise kuch mehsoos nahin karti?"

Nikat : "Nahin bhai… lekin won meri saheli hai !! use mein baut achi tarha janti hoon !! Iman ke liye uske Abba ki izzaaat hi sab kuch hai!! Aur aaj jo kuch bhi unke saath huwa, kya apko lagta hai ke Iman Kabhi bhi Apke bare mein aise soch sakti hai!?" [this left hamad speechless and lost in his thoughts, he is tryin to ignore whatever Nikat was tryin to tell him. All he taught was that he has to prove himself, iman and his family who think he is nothing widout his family money?]

Nikat: "BHAI!...BHAI!...App Iman Ke bare mein sochna chod dijiye!! Please! meri Ek hi saheli hai ! aur mein use nahin Ko sakti!! Mein apke koi madat nahin kar sakti! Please mujhe maaf kardijiye" [she requested him.]

Nikat's words were hurting him more thn anythin! Thinkin about what Nikat said about Iman were killin him! Those words were like tumor for him.

Hamad: "Nahin…Nahin…" he broke down; his eyes covered with tears were not ready to accept it "Nikat! Iman meri Zindagi banchooki hai! Mrin uske bagair nahin jee sakta! Woh ek nazar mein mujhe aise laga ke mujhe meri jahan mil gaya !..." he cried!

Hamad: "ek minute !" [he stood] nikat kya tumhe lagta hai ke mein unn ladko mein se hoon jo ladkiyon ko sirf istamal karte hain !... Nikat …" he cried "you knw !! you Know Nikat !! tumhe Pata hai ! mein unn mein se nahin hoon !! agar aise hota toh mein iman ke apna poora parivvar nahin chorta!! This is cuz I mean it !! I really to mean it" he plead!... He stops and looked at her "Ab Mein Khud Kuch Ban kar dikaonga !! Mein Maulvi Sab ko Yakeen dila doonga Ke Mein Unn mein se nahin hoon ! I can do anything for her!..." "ANYTHIN" he continued and started walking away.

Nikat: "Bhai ! ap itne raat ko kahan jayenge ! Please Hamad bhai ap yaheeen raiye !!" [Trying to stop him]

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Posted: 13 years ago
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whoa !! super like 😃 loved the opening too ... very effective

and you said you weren't good at this? LIAR !! 😛 i absolutely LOVED it girl !! no kidding

i for one am looking forward to what happens next ... please do write more 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
thnks Alot <3 !
wat do u want me to write next ? any suggestions ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yeah loads 😎 **rubs hands in anticipation** 🤣

here goes: make it totally different than what the show / book is, please do not let either of them die, basically - make it a happy ending 😳

i love your style of writing ... its simple and leaves a good impression ... well it did on me so...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
My OS is Sad Buh Wid a Happpy ending :D !!
so u'll like it (hope so ) ! n thnks for likin ma writtin !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
no no thank YOU for writing and posting it ... i really loved it 😳

yeah a little bit of sadness is okay .. we don't want a fairy tale now do we? owise the whole charm will be lost ... but yeah i'd prefer it more if the ending is sweet 😳 i m a sucker for happy endings and happily forever afters 😆
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