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Posted: 18 years ago
Pranjal wanted to call the doctor to see how Palak is doing. He hears the conversation between Manjot and the lawyer, which was one of her friends. She was explaining to her how Pranjal is behaving lately and how she thinks that the for Manjot has turned into love for Palak. Pranjal puts the receiver down and goes Manjot and slaps her. He says how cud u think like this. Manjot is crying saying you act that way that is makes me seem that im not important. Pranjal says if she ever thinks about leaving him again he will kill himself
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Posted: 18 years ago
Manjot is like wow. She says sorry to him and then he hugs her really tightly. He kisses her a lot, and Palak gets mad ad he** seeing this. She gets so mad that she feels like killing manjot and quickly grabs a vase, but then comes to sense. She goes to her room, and cries. But after a while she stops and says she'll get her revenge.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Pranjal hears Palak saying these words. I will take revenge from Manjot. To keep his wife safe, he and manjot go back to their house over night so no one knows. The next morning, Palak looks for Pranjal and is unable to find him. She tells the whole family. They dont even noe where they live.

Meanwhile this was going on, Manjot and Pranjal were in the plane on their way to Switzerland.
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Posted: 18 years ago
After some long time of thinking she comes up with an idea. She goes to her phone book and looks up the name " Yash" who was her old college friend. After finding his number she dials it. After a long time Yash finally picks up and was happy to hear Palak's voice. They talk for a long time about missing each other when Palak finally said she needed help with something. She told Yash the plan, after this Yash was totally shocked and asked Palak why she was doing this? Palak said for her love! She lost her love Daksh and now she doesn't want to lose Pranjal too. So Yash decides to help her. Palak thanx Yash and tells him to come at 4:30 in the evening the next day and puts the phone down and couldn't wait till tomorrow. She went to sleep while Mannu Di and Pranjal were sharing some private moments. The next day the whole family at the evening was enjoying a wonderful talk about how Mannu Di and Pranjal look as a couple while Mannu Di and Pranjal were looking at each other and blushing. Palak was waiting there thinking when Yash would come! After some time a tall and good looking man entered the Jagidhar house and yelled Mannu Di is a cheat. Pranjal was shocked and Mannu Di had no clue who he was and was going on, but there was a smile on Palak's face. Sushma goes up to Yash and asks what's all this about?? Yash says that Mannu Di and him were lovers from a young age! And when they were 24 they got married but after some while she left him and ran away, and then came here and made Pranjal fall in love with her and get married. Hearing this Pranjal got so mad that he goes up to Manjot and slaps her! She cries and runs up to her room. Pranjal calls the divorce office and says he wants divorce papers now. After waiting for a little while one officer comes with the divorce sheets. Pranjal grabs the sheet of him and signs it he goes up to Manjot and makes her sign it too. He hands it back to the officer. The next day they went up to court and after a few days Manjot and Pranjal were divorced. After the court justice Pranjal goes up to Mannu Di and tells her not to show her face again to him and when they go home he kicks her out of the house. Mannu Di having no clue what to do takes her suitcase and goes to her house. Pranjal goes upstairs and started to cry. Palak thanked Yash for everything and offered him $100 but he didn't accept it since they were college friends. After Yash left the house Palak goes upstairs to Pranjal's room where he was crying. Palak went inside but figured out that he was mad at her and decided to go out of there when Pranjal said you can come here. Palak sits down near Pranjal and confronts him. He was really angry at Manjot and kept on saying why he married a cheat like her. Palak understanding how he feels says it happens. Pranjal apologized to Palak for all the things he did to her and she said it was okay. Pranjal and Palak hugged for a long time when suddenly Pranjal realized that for the whole time when he loved Manjot he also loved Palak. What is he supposed to do now? After a long hug they seperate Palak was going to go when Pranjal finally opens his mouth and tells Palak he loves her. Palak couldn't believe it! Pranjal says that when I was married to Manjot I was in love with you. I still haven't forgotton you. i loved you from the beggining but you loved Daksh and I sacrificed it for you and started loving Manjot but this whole time I love you too. Palak runs and hugs Pranjal too and says that she loves him too. Suddenly Palak's evilness is all changed and she has become nice now.

Sorry Mannu Di had to make a twist
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Posted: 18 years ago
Back at Manjot's house, she is crying and asking god why he took her love away!! She cries all night. All of Sudden in the morning the door bell rang. Manjot opened it found Palak their, Palak started laughing and starting teasing her and explaining how her plan worked. She was saying everything but smart Manjot had dialed the number to Pranjal and Pranjal was listening at the other end. he was so shocked. Manjot replyed by saying good always wins doesnt matter how longs it takes and shuts the door. She put the hphone near her mouth and Pranjal said sorry to her. Pranjal said bye and he will meet her 2 nite at their fav hotel. When Palak comes back home, she notices that Pranjal is acting a bit werid. She tries to talk to him but he ignores and then comes the big slap. Pranjal and given the biggest slap to Palak.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Palak was so mad at Pranjal. Pranjal yelled at Palak and said that he heard everything. Palak was shocked and she decided that she could never get her love back. Pranjal goes to Mannu in the hotel. Mannu Di hugged Pranjal adn said that she was sorry but Pranjal just removed her hands off him.Manjot was shocked! Pranjal said that he knows that Palak has done the wrong thing but I still love her. Manjot was extremely shocked! Pranjal said that Manjot is not his wife anymore since they are divorced now and he tells her that he loves Palak now alot, Manjot was upset but understood his feelings and let him go back. At the house Palak was crying Pranjal came back home and went to Palak's room. Pranjal tried talking to her but she ignored him finally he said that he was sorry for what he did and that he only loves Palak and no one else. Now Palak was so happy and she hugged Pranjal. Palak decided from now on since she got her love back she is going to be nice from now on and she promised Pranjal
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhayVakil_1992

After some long time of thinking she comes up with an idea. She goes to her phone book and looks up the name " Yash" who was her old college friend. After finding his number she dials it. After a long time Yash finally picks up and was happy to hear Palak's voice. They talk for a long time about missing each other when Palak finally said she needed help with something.

She told Yash the plan, after this Yash was totally shocked and asked Palak why she was doing this? Palak said for her love! She lost her love Daksh and now she doesn't want to lose Pranjal too. So Yash decides to help her. Palak thanx Yash and tells him to come at 4:30 in the evening the next day and puts the phone down and couldn't wait till tomorrow. She went to sleep while Mannu Di and Pranjal were sharing some private moments.

The next day the whole family at the evening was enjoying a wonderful talk about how Mannu Di and Pranjal look as a couple while Mannu Di and Pranjal were looking at each other and blushing. Palak was waiting there thinking when Yash would come! After some time a tall and good looking man entered the Jagidhar house and yelled Mannu Di is a cheat. Pranjal was shocked and Mannu Di had no clue who he was and was going on, but there was a smile on Palak's face.

Sushma goes up to Yash and asks what's all this about?? Yash says that Mannu Di and him were lovers from a young age! And when they were 24 they got married but after some while she left him and ran away, and then came here and made Pranjal fall in love with her and get married. Hearing this Pranjal got so mad that he goes up to Manjot and slaps her! She cries and runs up to her room. Pranjal calls the divorce office and says he wants divorce papers now.

After waiting for a little while one officer comes with the divorce sheets. Pranjal grabs the sheet of him and signs it he goes up to Manjot and makes her sign it too. He hands it back to the officer. The next day they went up to court and after a few days Manjot and Pranjal were divorced. After the court justice Pranjal goes up to Mannu Di and tells her not to show her face again to him and when they go home he kicks her out of the house.

Mannu Di having no clue what to do takes her suitcase and goes to her house. Pranjal goes upstairs and started to cry. Palak thanked Yash for everything and offered him $100 but he didn't accept it since they were college friends. After Yash left the house Palak goes upstairs to Pranjal's room where he was crying. Palak went inside but figured out that he was mad at her and decided to go out of there when Pranjal said you can come here.

Palak sits down near Pranjal and confronts him. He was really angry at Manjot and kept on saying why he married a cheat like her. Palak understanding how he feels says it happens. Pranjal apologized to Palak for all the things he did to her and she said it was okay. Pranjal and Palak hugged for a long time when suddenly Pranjal realized that for the whole time when he loved Manjot he also loved Palak. What is he supposed to do now? After a long hug they seperate Palak was going to go when Pranjal finally opens his mouth and tells Palak he loves her.

Palak couldn't believe it! Pranjal says that when I was married to Manjot I was in love with you. I still haven't forgotton you. i loved you from the beggining but you loved Daksh and I sacrificed it for you and started loving Manjot but this whole time I love you too. Palak runs and hugs Pranjal too and says that she loves him too. Suddenly Palak's evilness is all changed and she has become nice now.

Sorry Mannu Di had to make a twist

sorry it was easier for me to read after i indented. hope u don't mind sneha😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Okay!! We will end that story or shall i say fan-fic by us there.

We will start another one.!!

Here is the picture:

*NEW CHARACTERS*

~ Pooja ~ Rahul ~ Shilpa(Rahul's fiance) ~ Jai (Rahul's Best Friend)

** You Can any New Character but let me know so i can add it to this list **

Start Writing😊

Edited by gk_09 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
okie you can kill manjot now...
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Posted: 18 years ago
sorry it was easier for me to read after i indented. hope u don't mind sneha

No Problem Pop Princess I don't mind 😊 By the way Mannu Di welcome back! We missed you 😊
Edited by AbhayVakil_1992 - 18 years ago
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