KR OS:**Love Makes Life Beautiful**

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Hola Guys..

I came up with one horrible idea suddenly,so I thought of writing this OS...Hope u all will like it..


He climbed up the steps rushly to reach the ward..Arriving at the second floor, he looked around, wiping off the sweat from his face..At one side,He saw Vishnu,who stood,leaning against the wall with his folded arms.With His long strides,he neared him in a second..

K:vishnu..

V:Karthi..vanthutaya da??...vaada vaada...

K:Ra...Ra...En Rajiku eppadida iruku??

V:Theriyalada..doc parthukittu irukangada..

K:intha nerathula naan avakoda illama poitene..ellam en thapputhan..

V:hello machan..enna ithu??..ippadilam pesakudathu..be cool ma..

K:illada..enaku romba bayama iruku..rajiku onnum aagathula??

V:appadiye vaila potena,Rajikulam onum aagathu..ellam nallabadiya nadakumda..

K:Vishnu..naan vena..konjam velila poitu varava?..enaku udambu nadunguthuda...baby porantha udana enaku call pannuda..pls..

V:karthik...will u pls shut up??..tensionla enna pesanumnu theriyama pesikittu iruka nee...neethan ippo mukiyama inga irukanum..neeye bayantha eppadida??..Dhairiyama iruda..kadavul Rajiyayum,babyayum kai vitra maatarda..

Vishnu, by saying so,held his shoulders to pacify him..Suddenly one voice heard from inside the ward...It is the crying sound of Born Baby..

K(with surprising look):Vishnu...antha sound..

V:aamada machan..Baby poranthachu..Yahuuu!!!..Congrats da...

K was smiling happily n his eyes become pooled.. ..After some mins,doc comes with smiling face n spoke to K..

Doc:congrats Karthik..unaku oru azhagana Princess poranthuruka da.thaayum seiyum nalama irukanga...

K:enaku pen kuzhanthai??..ada..enaku kaiyum oodala..kaalum oodala doc...ippa naan enna pannuven..

Doc:santhosapadu karthik..nalla dance aadu...then normal ward ku shift panniruvom konja nerathula..appurom poi paarunga Rajiyayum,babyayum..ok??...enjoy ur day..

Saying so,Doc laughed broadly n moved away from there. He lifts vishnu n twirls him around without paying any heed to vishnu's shouts

V:dei..karthi...enna keezha irukuda..

K:mudiyathuda...evalavu santhosama news sollirukanga..konja neram sutharene..

V:nee suthuvada..aana naan athukulla thazha suthi faint aaiduvenda..

K:enaku atha pathi kavalai illa..hahahaha...

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After some mins..

K went into the room..There raji was lying like a sleeping queen on the bed..To her right side,His Princess was sleeping calmly in the Babybed.On seeing His Two Angels,His eyes become an ocean becoz of the formation of tears..He couldn't maintain it...the tears started to stream down from the cheeks continuously..Wiping his tears with his back palm,he moved forward to the bed..He sat in the stool that placed near the bed..To Him,His Wife is His First Baby..Smiling to himself,He gently caressed Raji's forehead..Feeling some touch,Raji slowly opened her eyes n smiled on seeing her Hubby..

K:Ennada??...ippa eppadi iruka??..

Without answering the question,R asked for his hand..K placed her hand on his n hold it tightly..

R:nee vanthutele...inime naan super fine than..

K pressed her hand with his after hearing those words..

K:sorry da...naan un pakkathula illama poiteneda intha samayathula..office meeting..athu..ithunu vanthuruchu...

R:yaaru sonna nee illainu?...en Idhayathula than nee 24 hrs um kudi irukaye...athu pothathu??

Hearing this emotional words,He couldn't wait more..He bent n kissed her cheeks n forehead repeatedly..

K:Unna maari oruthiya naan wife a adanchathuku naan enna puniyam senjeno??..I am really Very Blessed ,Raji..

R gave him a cute smile..

K:Seri..namma kutty Princess a thookitu varava inga??iru varen..

He took the Baby carefully n cradled her in his arms..Kissing her,He placed her near Raji..

K:paarthaya raji?..en princess a??..evalavu azhaga iruka paaru..enna maariye nose,enna maariye eyebrows evalavu adarthiya iruku paaren..

Then unna maari color,unna maari azhagu...ellame perfect a iruku namma princessku...

Raji's face beamed with delight..

R:Maama,Athaiku,Appuram Appakulam solliyachula..illai inime than...??...

K:poru..poru...ellarukum solliyachu...ellorum night vanthuruvanga...santhosam thana??

R nods her head..meanwhile,someone knocked the door by asking..

Naanga ulla varalama??

It was Vishnu...

K:vaangada...ungaluku illatha urimaiya??..

V entered the ward with laxmi who carries the small boy on her shoulders..

K:adade...Laxmi ,nee eppo vantha inga??

V:paarthaya laxmi..un Annanku nee inga vanthathukoda theiryala..athayum ippathan ketkararu..

L:Karthiku enga namma ninaipulam irukum vishnu antha nerathula??..haan?

V:athu correctthan..hehe

K:dei..dei..pothumda ...vita romba ootuveengale.

V:hehe..seri seri...ada anga paaru..paapa azhaga irukale..choo sweet...machan,Nee Appavaitada..athanala inime porupulla Appava irukanum ennai maathiri ...ok??

K:hahaha...serida..

L: congrats Raji...congrats Karthik..Paapa romba cute a iruka..

R:thanks laxmi...aama Arnav thoongitana??

L:atha en ketkara raji..enna inga nikka vidala..ore azhugai..athan velila poi vilayatu kaatalamnu konjam appadiye nadanthu ponen..appuram vilayatu kaati thoonga vechen..antha samayathula than karthik vanthurukan pola..paapavum poranthuruka..

Meantime,K's phone buzzed..

K : (attending the call)Yes...Karthikeyan here..

The news he got from the opposite person made him very happy..after finishing his convo,He hung up the call n turned towards Raji..

R:enna karthik?yaaru phonela??..romba santhosama iruka??

K:pinna irukatha??..wallmart project successful aairucham..raji..am very happy..

V:ada appadiya??...superda machan..ellam kuttypaapa vantha neram..

L:exactly...inime ellam nalla kaalam than kutty yala..

K:samathu kutty...en chellam..

V:samathu kuty seri...antha chellam ...athu yaarunu naan theirunchakalama??

K:ennathu??

R blushed

V:nadikaratha paaren...pothumda pothumda...inime nadipu edupadathuda machan..

nee rajiya paarthukitta vithatha paarthu naan evalavu aachariya paten theiryuma??

Avala kaila vechu thaanginada nee..

Oru oru workayum pakkathula irunthukitte panna vecha..

L:appuram saapudulam ooti,avaluku thazha pinni vittu..

V:Appo appo leave pottu avala kannum karuthuma paarthukittu..

K:pothumda ennai pugalnthathu..mudiyalada..

V:paarthaya laxmi..ivan alatikaratha??..kandipa solrenda..Laila -Majnu ,Romeo-Juliet ivanga varisaila aduthu unga rendu peroda name thanda historyla idam perum..paarthukitte iru..

K:Appa enga love avalavu strong n pure nu solra...ok..appo enga names kandipa varum historyla...but enna onnu,innum konjam naanga deep a love pannalamnu irukom...nalla deep a...enna raji??..am I right??

K winked at r..

R:Po..karthik..

V:inga paaruda Kaadhal scene a...semayala iruku..

All three laughed heartily including Raji..

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A few months later,

Karthik was returning home from his office in his stylish car with his haggard n tired looking face...After parking the car in his garage,He slowly stepped into the main hall of his home,which was wrapped with full of darkness.He switched on the light n gazed at the wall clock,which shows the time was 9.30 pm...He took a deep breath n climbed the stairs quickly,eager to reach his bedchamber.Suddenly,He stopped in front of his master bedroom n smiled contendly thinking about his life n his love..He wondered,how much drastic changes were brought by the those cuties in his life..It couldn't be expressed in words..The feeling was amazing..One should feel that n Yes,He felt that moments,which couldn't be erased anytime from his mind as well as from his heart..He grinned ,delighted at those memories..with His big grin,He gingerly opened the door of his bedroom n went in,by shutting the door soundlessly.he moved towards the bed n gazed at the site before him..that was a adorable one..His wife Raji was sleeping peacefully with her cheerful face,her face was glittering like a diamond..She is His Jaan,His Pyaar,,His Heart,His Life..With her,His life was filled with fun n beautiful atmosphere.He adored the way,raji was sleeping wearing his fav skyblue colour saree.Yet another pure n wonderful feeling was brought forth by the little one,who was placed right next to raji,a few inches away from her chest...Raji softly hugged her child,which clearly indicates the Mother's love n care..

Karthik looked at the infant,who was playing with the mother's saree lovingly.Her tiny hands were enfolded within the saree..

K's mv:Oh..Rajiya kutty elupi vitruva polaye settai panni..

Thinking so,He picked her up delicately by removing the Roll of saree ,that surrounds her tiny hands..After a sec,he left the room with his baby cuddled in his arms,without wanting to disturb His Raji's slumber..

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In Main hall..K sat on the couch with baby girl in his arms..

K:ennada thangam??..Kushi paapuku thookam varalaya??...Amma sareeya vechu vilayatikittu iruku paapa..Amma saree paapaku romba pidichuruka??..haan??

Hearing his questions,Kushi giggled,slapping his chest with her tiny legs..

K:Ada pokkiri...siripa paaru...en kane partum pola...kutty kaala vechu Appava adikaraya nee??...haan??..pattu kutty

Karthik kissed her chubby cheeks by saying so,Kushi giggled once again..

K:aamada chellam..Appaoda chellakutty nee..paapava Appa thoonga vaikava??

Appa paapa paatu paaduvenam..Kushi kutty samatha thoonganumam..enna okva??

Kushi continued giggling by agreeing to her Daddy's demands..suddenly,Karthik went on alert,sensing someother's presence coming from the Toys room,that stood adjacent to the drawing room..He peered at the direction where the sound of footsteps heard n become surprised..The owner of those footsteps was none other than Vishnu,who came towards the couch with Arnav in his arms..

K:Vishnu..nee

V:dei karthi...nee eppada vantha??..

K:ippathanda ..konja neram aathu..raji thookatha kedukama kushi ya konchalamenu inga vanthen ...athu seri..nee ennada panra intha nerathula??

V(by sitting near him):Atha enda ketkara??...officela sema work..seri konja neram rest edukalamnu seekarama thoonga ninachen..aana Laxmi athuku aapu vechuta..Arnav a konjam neram paarthuko...naan thoonga porennu sollitu thoonga poita,ivana enta kuduthutu..ivan ennadana thoonguvenangran..romba nerama mallu kattikittu iruken ivanoda

K:hahahaha...serida kochukatha..Ladies rendu perukum thookame illaida..moreover nammalukum porupu irukuda babies a paarthukarathuku..

V:porupu..parupunu nee vera kadaupa kilapathada...one hour a toys vechu vilayadikittu irunthan thoongama...ippa toys pidikalaiyam..appo thoongunu sonna...adam pidikaran..

K:kuazhanthaigalnale appadithanda..avangala care eduthukarathuke namaku oru thani skill venumda...athu enna theriyuma?...Porumai..atha konjam vazharthukoda..

V:ivalavu neram naan porumaiya irunthathe athisayamda..

Arnav interrupts

V:Appa...ennaku ethathu vilayadanum ippo..nee ethathu pannu...

Saying so,he shed tears..Vishnu rubbed his back n muttered soft words..

V:samathu paiyanla nee..ivalavu neram Bommai vechu vilayaditela,athanala ippo Appa pecha ketu nee samatha thoonganumam..

Arnav:mudiyathu..naan ketka maaten..

He contd his crying..k laughed brightly.

V:appo paapaku enna venumnu sollu..Appa seiyaren..

Arnav:kandipa seivaya?

V:aama da chellam..

Arnav:appo nee un thazhaiya en madi mela vechuko

V:ethukuda??

Again,he began to sob without giving an answer...not even wasting a second,vishnu made him to sit on couch n placed his head on his lap as he couldn't tolerate anymore his whimper..Arnav held the bunch of his curly hair n began to shook it,playfully with his bright eyes..

V:dei..dei..ennada panra??Appaku vazhikuthuda..dei..arnav..sonna keluda...Appavala mudiyalada..dei..

But Arnav didn't listen to his words.. K,who watching this comedy drama,burst into laughter..

Vishnu hurriedly got up from his lap,his hair were collapsed n he looked like a chimpanzee..Karthik laughed aloud..Arnav too laughed by clapping his hands..

Arnav:haiyaa..Nee ippathan paarkarathuku romba azhaga irukapa..

K:of course machan..aal semaya iruka...hahahaha

V's mv:adapaavigala... kootam kudi sirikarangale..avalavu kevalamava iruken??

Arnav:.intha game enaku romba pidichuruku..thirupiyum kunipa...un mandaiya pidichu aatanum..

V:ennalalam mudiyathu..namma vera vilaaytu vilaaydalam..

Arnav:mudiyathu...ithan venum enaku..

He shed big tears..

V:paarthayada karthi ivana..appadiye ivan Amma maariye pidivatham..

K threw him a big smile..

K:serida...ippa ivan azhugaiaya eppadi nirutha pora??

in order to divert arnav's mind,vishnu spoke..

V:ada arnav..nee kushi paapava paarkalaya??samatha larthik uncleta vilayadikittu iruku paaru..

Arnav,who was crying stopped his weeping n looked at kushi..

K:arnav..paapa unna maari azhaga iruku paaru..

Arnav:aama uncle..romba azhaga iruka...aama iva ennoda vialayduvala?

V:ohoo...

Arnav:appo ippaye ennaoda odi pidichu vilaaydanum..

V become tensed..

V:ava romba kuttyda..innum ava unnai maari vazharanum..appothan oodi vilayada mudiyum..

Arnav:mudiyathu..nee poi solra...

K:Appa solrathu unmai than arnav..

Arnav shouted by shaking his hands..

V:hmm..ithu seripattu varathu..karthi nee kushiya konchikittu iru..naan oru vazhi panren ivana...

Karthik nodded in agreement with a smile...V rose up with arnav in his arms.but arnav was very adamant in not coming up with him..

v:inga paaru arnav.nee ippo samatha thoongalena,unnai poochandita pidichu kuduthuruven..

arnvav:poochandiya??.

V:aama..setai panra paapasalam avan pidichutu poiduvanam..

Arnav:athalam illai..nee poi solra..

V began to walk..

V:unmaida..atho vaasala satham ketkuthu paaru...poochandi vanthutan pola..

He said in frightening tone,as if pretended before his son. Arnav blinked..but within a sec,

Arnav:Mudiyathu..naan thoonga maaten...

V:appona seri..iru poochandikitta kutitu poren unnai...avan unnai nalla bayam muruthuvan..polam vaa..

Arnav:haaa...maaten..maaten..naan vara maaten..

V:nee varalena enna,naan than thookitu porene unnai...pochandi... itho vanthutan arnav.nee angaye iru...naanga varom...

By moving n moving..V's voice become faded away..After V's departure,K adorably gazed at his Princess..

K:Arnav a paarthaya kushi??..romba settai panran..neeyum appadi pannuvaya??haan?

Kushi giggled by sucking her thumb..

K:ada pokkiri kutty..nee settai pannuvaya periyaval aana udana??...nee pannuda thangam..Appa un azhagana settaiyalam rasipen..

And for next 15 mins,Father n daughter enjoyed each other's company by playing with each other lovingly

K:kushi paapa ippa thoonga poralam...time aachula..thoongalama??

Karthik got up n by cuddling her close to his shoulders,started to walk to n fro,gently patting her back..very soon,kushi fell asleep in the warmth of her father's arms..

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After few yrs,

"Karthik!!..inga konjam vaayen...Karthik.."Raji called her hubby by preparing the breakfast in the kitchen..

But there was no response from the opposite side..

R:enga ponnan ivan??..karthik..enga ponna?

Now too,there was no sound..A few seconds later,raji felt something was crawling in her shoulders..rubbing her back,she contd her work..but after a min,raji become terrified as she sensed that skin was crawling more..She jumped in shock by letting out a loud cry n turned back..She doesnt even aware of what happened just few mins before..To her surprise, she was locked in one's strong muscular arms..that too firmly..she couldnt believe her eyes,as she become arrested in the arms of karthik,who had a naughty twinkle in his eyes..

R:karthik..neethana athu??

k:yes,My Honey..naan illamal veru yaaro??hahahaha

R:karthik...enna ithu vilayatu..naan bayanthe poiten theiryuma?

K:sorryda Honey...unaku konjam surprise kodukalamnu than ippadi pannen..inime no surprise...ellame direct than..enna okvaaa??

R:rombathan..seri ennai vidu mothalla..

K:yei..enna vialaydraya??..purushan aasaiya konja varan...ippadi muttukattai podraye..

R:athalam appauram ..kushi paapa ippa vanthuruva..avaluku breakfast kodukanum..

k:ava vara time aagum Honey...athu varaikum namma konjam vilayadalama??

Karthik gave him a naughty wink

R:karthi..nee vara vera romba kettu poita..

K:parava illai..appadiye irunthutu poren..hehehe..


R stared at him..but within a sec,she too laughed..K slowly release her from his arms

K:ennada...ivalavu verthu kotiruku?..romba veilai paarkthana evalavu vaati solrathu..

r:ada ithalam velaiya??..en chella purushanukum,en kutty thangathukum samachu podrathu evalavu sugam theiryuma, Enaku?..athuvum leave daysla than ippadi panna mudiyum

Without saying anything,he took his hanky from his pant pocket n wiped her sweatbeads off from her forehead n face..

R:karthik??

He bent n kissed her cheeks..

K:nee ippadi sonnathuku ithan ennoda gift..etho ennala ippo kuduka mudinchathu..

R: ithavida oru cute gift enga iruku My Darling??..enaku ithu romba pidichuruku..

K:Aana...ithavida innum superana gift onnu iruku...athu unaku romba romba pidikum..atha naan ippa unaku tharalamnu iruken...enna solra?

Karthik's tone turned into a husky one...R didnt even looked at him,as her cheeks turned into pinkish colour, after hearing his question..Karthik understood the situation n put a step forward..Now,He was standing,very close to her..Feeling his proximity,raji cant breathe properly..By hugging her,he bent towards her lips..One..Two...Three...

AMMAAA!!.."one honeysweet voice heard coming down from the stairs unexpectedly..

K Bit his lips in sigh n they both got distanced themselves from their hug hastenly..Raji couldnt maintained her laughter..at the same time,she worried for him too..A small girl in baby pink frock, came running towards them with her ponytails wavering in the air at both sides..

Kushi:Amma..Amma...Kushi paapa vanthuta..

Amma:nee than samathu kuttyache

Kushi:Appa...paapa correct timeku vanthuta paarunga..

He lifted her up in his arm n said

K:correcta wrong time ku vanthurukada chellam..

r signalled him to stop his nonsense talk...

Kushi:Appa...enna solra nee??

K:athu vanthu...nee seekarama drawing panni mudichuta pola?

Encircling his neck with both her arms ,Kushi said,

Kushi:aama Appa...periya yaanai onnu varanchen..appuram maram..veedu ellam varanchuten seekarama..but color pannanum innum...

K:oh..kushikutty yaanailam varanchala??..yemmadi...Appaku athalam varaya theiryathupa..

Kushi:appa naan sollitharenpa unaku..

K:sure da chellam

K joyfully throw her up in the air n catched her again..


R:kushi breakfast saapida varala ippa?

Kushi:oh..varene..

All seated at dining table..karthik placed kushi in his lap..raji began to fed her..

R:iniku paapaku enna food theriyuma??..kushikuttyku romba pidichathu..

Kushi:enaku pidichatha??ennathu athu??

R:Poori masal,appuram paapa pillaiyar chaturthi aniku saapitale.. Kozhukattai..athu than..

Kushi:haiyaa...kozhukattaiya??...jolly jolly...

K:aama...un chubby cheeks maathiri gundu gundunu irukume..athe than..

Kushi chuckled n ate her breakfast speedily as those were her fav..

Suddenly,

Kushi:Amma..Appaku kozhukattaiyum ,pooriyum??

Amma:Appa appurama saapdiuvaaru..mothalla kushi kuttyku than..

Kushi: Appavum saapidanum..enaku ootra maathiri Appakum nee ooti vidanum..

Karthik's face lit up with joy n his eyes danced merrily,looking at his wife.

K:haannn...en pullaiku purinchathukoda sila peruku puriyalai..ennatha solrathu??

He heaved a sigh..Raji smiled a bit n fed him too..

K:ada...enna rusi..enna rusi..un kai pattathu ellame sema rusithan po...

R(blushes)pothum..pothum..

Kushi:Appaku pothatuma..innum ooti vidu..

Hearing her words,,KR laughed loudly n relished the breakfast happily..

After taking a nap KR n Kushi spend their time by playing run n chase game,hide n seek game..

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In Night..

Time 9.00 pm..

Kushi:enaku iniku Appathan bedtime story sollanum..

K:enda..Amma nallathana solluva??

Kushi:nallathan solluvanga..aana neeyum nalla sollavele..athan..

R:un ponnu achu asal unnai maathiri than...ethirla irukavangala than pesachu samarthiyathale kowkarathu..

K:oh..malarum ninaivugalo??..hahahaha..

R (whispers by pinching his hand):enna pesanumnu illai kuzhanthai munnadi???

K:seri seri..kochukatheenga madam..sir vaaiya.inime vettiya thorakalai..

K to kushi:kushi kutty..vaada namma thoonga polam..

Kushi:ok..polam..appo Amma??

R:Ammaku konjam velai iruku..atha mudichutu varuvenam..athukulla kushi samatha thoongiruvalam Appava imsai pannama..

Kushi:seri ma..

R hugged n kissed her..

R:GN,da chellakutty..

Kushi:Love u ma..GN..

Kushi n Karthik went upstairs..raji headed to kitchen to finish her remaining work..

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After 20 mins..

Raji switched off the light n comes out of kitchen..To her surprise,Karthik was standing there near the stairs.

R:Karthik... nee inga??..kushi thoongitala??

K:kushikuttylam thoongiyachu samatha..

R:appo nee thoongama inga enna panra??

K:en Wife a paarkarathukaga vanthen...

Having said,He pulled her in his arms..

R:ethuku??

K:ethukuna...En wife a naan romba romba love panrenakum..

R:appadiya??..

K:aama...avala maathiri oru Ponna engayum paarka mudiyathu..theriyumo??

R smiled n hugged him closely..

K:raji..unaku nyabagam iruka,namma first meeting??

R:atha eppadi maraka mudiyum karthik??...namma love ku basement potathe intha meeting thana..

K:exactly..unnai share autola paarkum pothu,ennai suthi enna nadakuthune naan oru nimisham maranthuten..enna kannudi athu?...kovathula appadiye minichu..Naan appadiye flat aaiten..appuram officela paarthen paaru unnai...en heart padu speed a thudichuthu..enaku mooche mutiruchu..eppo nee en seatku pakkathula vanthayo,avlothan..Sir complete a flat aaiten..innum meezhalai athula irunthu..

He placed his cheek on her forehead after saying so..

R:po karthik..

K cupped her face in his palms..

K:Raji..unaku oru vishayam theiryuma??...antha shareautola paartha face innum appadiye iruku unaku...poga poga azhagu kudikitte poguthu di...eppidi ithalam??enna maayam seiyathai en kanne??

R:ellam en darling husbandnala than..avan ennai appadile thaangaran ennai oru kuraiyum varama..

K:really??..appo antha sweetana husbandku ethathu special a koduka kudatha??

R:aasaiya paaru...athalam mudiyathu..

K:hmm..appadiyaaa??

A naughty smile formed on karthik's face,and with one arm tucked under raji's neck and other arm tucked under raji's legs,he lifts her up by separating from the hug..Raji alarmed by this sudden act of her hubby,blushed..


R:yei..enna panra nee??

K:theiryala?? en chellatha thookaren..

R:ethuku??

K:hmm..avala oru idathuku kootitu poga poren..

R:enga karthi??

K:poolside ku than..

R:anga ethuku ippo??

K:vera ethuku?..konjam fresh air a feel panna than..then namma rendu perum konjam romantic a...

He didn't even complete the sentence..

R:athalam ippa venam..appurama...

K:en ippa enna vanthuchu??...moreover morning enaku kodukama vita onna vattiyum mothaluma unta irunthu vaangama vidratha illai..

R:u r crazy romantic,My Husband...

K:Of course,Baby..ippadi azhagana wife a enkuda irukum pothu,romance panama iruntha nalla irukuma sollu???..haan??

The way karthik questioned her made Raji to blush more n more n she buried her face in Karthik's chest...Having smiled at her actions, karthik proceeded towards the poolside carrying his LOVE,who makes his Life more beautiful..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Broo
Super surprise!!

Lovely OS

It was really cute and sweet moments

Raji and Karthi their relationship is probably everything that I would have wanted to see in the actual serial hahaha... the kutty khushi soo cute
The names of the children arnav and khushi made me think of the hindi serial characters loool but so cute both

Arnav stubborn like the original arnav hahaha khushi cute and bubbly like her hahaha sorry couldn't help but remember their characters hehehe

Back to the story

Vishnu was funny bless him he has a handful with his son and the way vishnu tried to calm him poochandi ROFL I was cracking up!! Too funny

Khushi is the eye of her parents so cute and adorable her antics such a lovable child listens to her parents without arguing too cute!!

KR their moments together was nice being understanding at the same time enjoying their time was nice to see.

Overall a nice OS thanks bro :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So sweet story bro.. Thanks for the story... Very very very nice... KR relationship... Friendship... Their children all superb... KR moments superb as usual... Very nice to see Karthik's love towards his princess the way he loves raji... All superb.. Thanks once again for this wonderfull OS πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice os bro thank you for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful OS... πŸ‘

Lovely narration...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb update bro.. nan indha mari OS a than ethirparthaen i.e karthik ,raji and their baby.. n u did it.. superb update.. arnav and vishnu vum super convo.. karthik avanoda princess oda konjitu erundhathu enaku rombo pudichurunthathu..
this update looks like the second part of ur previous OS..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow super surprise bro... Appo appo indha mathiri surprise kudukiringa...

Really fantastic update... Naamba serial la edhir parthadhellam unga story la katti irukkinga...

Raji ku girl baby... So cute... Karthik romba bayandhuttan... Baby porandhadhuku approm dhan avang uyir vandhuchu...

KR hospital scene...😳😳 Ada VL ku marriage agi oru payian irukkana? Superr...πŸ‘

Ada karthik office work lam mudichitu late ah varan.. Adhukulla rendu pappa vum thoongiyachu... Ana adhulla oru pappa mattum thoongama amma saree vechi vellayaditu irukku... πŸ˜³πŸ˜†Andha scene la unga narration dhan superr...β­οΈπŸ‘

Appa vum pappa amma va disturb pannama velliya poiyachu... Cuteee sirichikitte irukka...

Vishnu πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Paavam Arnavu kitta mattikittu muzhikiran...πŸ˜† Semma vaallu dhan Arnavu...

KR love kum romance kum eppavume kuraichale kedaiyadhu... πŸ˜‰

Ennaku romba pudicha scene Raji kushi ku ooti viduradhu dhan karthik kum serthu ooti viduradhu... Lovely scene...😳

Last scene perfect ending.. Happy ending dhan...

Cute Father... Cute Mother... Cute Daughter... Cute Family...😳

Thanks a lot for giving this cute OS Bro...








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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sema surprise nandhu πŸ˜›
Wow wow wow amazing OS πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Such a wonderful family πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nandhu how are you ? πŸ˜ƒ
Seri seri nee polambarathu inga varaikum kekuthu .. Commentsku varen .
First Thank you intha OS yen birthday aniku post panathaku πŸ€—
When I read this update first thought came to my mind this is how office story should be .. awesome tambi .
Karthik & Raji become parents to a cute little princess Kushi .
Oh Vishnu & Lakshmiku already prince poranthacha , Arnav. Hey intha pera is my fav character Arnav & Kushi ..
Raji emotionala pesi namalayum emotional akitha
R:yaaru sonna nee illainu?...en Idhayathula than nee 24 hrs um kudi irukaye...athu pothathu??
Karthik spending sometime with her princes while his queen taking rest .. feel something new .. nice Nandhu showing faher too have their special part in thier princess life .
Pavam Vishnu Arnava samalika mudiyile ..
Ipo princess getting older .. samathu kuttya iruka ..
Karthik & Raji still the same , recalling thier first meeting and all thier cute scene comes to mind . That was an awesome journey na .
Nandhu pesama neeye Office serialku story writera polam .
I love it very much .⭐️
Intha superb OS you write it in two days , namaba mudiyile but I appreciated your effort .
Ithule teriyuthu you are dissaticifyted with the ending of office. Bravo Nandhu πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks Guys for ur comments n likes..Enaku ithu pothum..am very very happy,

Lily sis..iniku kandipa inga mazhai kotta pothu..enna ivalavu seekrama comment panniteenga...athan...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Pinna antha ending evanuku pidikum?? officeku athalam oru ending a?...hero illama..proper climax illama.😑..enaku KR kutty babyoda irukanumnu aasai appave irunthuchu.athan en imaginationa OS a koduthuten.πŸ˜‰.

Edited by shiningstar77 - 9 years ago
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