KR OS:First Baby of Mine

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hola Guys..

I could easily read ur voices, that r running in ur minds now.. I have some leisure time,so I thought of writing this OS..

Important Note:Dont worry..I will update my FF by next week..Until then,enjoy reading this OS..😆

.."Karthik..Karthik!!!"..Raji called his name,trying to wake him up from his deep sleep

But Karthik was still laying on the bed,covering his whole gym body with a blanket from tip to toe without even showing any movement..

"Thimira paaru..mani aaru aachu..innum thoongi valiyaran..ivana.."Murmering so,Raji leaned towards him

Pulling his blanket,She warned him,

"Karthik..U should wake up now,otherwise I will pour the chill water on ur face and u will get totally drenched..so,get up soon I say"

Failing to get any response now too ,she become vexed and pulled his blanket using all her power.Unfortunately, Instead of winning the game,she fell over him with a tug in a twinkling of an eye..

"Oh..What happened to me??..why am I over him,all of a sudden?.How its possible??..I am in the stage of winning and He didn't even woke up from his slumber,then..How??whether My hand lost its strength while doing so??" No..No..Not at all..I have experienced some touch in my hand..So its all the tricks of.."after coming to the conclusion by questioning herself,Raji turned to her left n her eyes got widened..

Her Captivating eyes caught the sight of Karthik's face very close to her n she could feel his proper breath.Her Lips was an inch distance from his,which make her to feel little nervous.

"Ivan thoongituthana irukan..appo eppadi naan ivan mela vilunthen??..unmaiyave nana than vilunthena? Thinking so,once again She looked at Karthi's face..

Within a second, she jumped in shock as Karthik's lips were curving lightly to one corner which clearly indicates His Mischevious act..

"U...Naughty...ellam un velaithana??..ennama thirtuthanam panra..unnai enna panren paaru.."said Raji in fury..

"What r u going to do, My Honey??Ans me fast..I am eagerly waiting for ur reply.."Karthik naughtily replied without opening his eyes.

"Wait n watch,My Husband.."Saying so,She tried to get up,but she cant as He was holding her hands.But She wasn't in the stage of giving up.

Karthik,after realizing,Raji's continuous attempts of raising up,caught hold of her waist by his strong arms tightly and stopped her from proceeding further..

Noticing His trick,Raji threw an unhappy glance at him..Even now,He gave back her a triumphant smile...

"What happened to ur super power,Honey??"asked Karthik teasingly

"Shut ur mouth,Karthik..first leave me soon"roared Raji

"No way.."said Karthik firmly..

"En chellamla..En thangamla..ennai vidu pls.."Raji Begged to him

"Athan mudiyathanu solrenla..konja neram appadiye iru..oru 5 mins.."said Karthik,his arms were very tight on her waist..

She couldn't oppose more n for some time,she remained in the same position,discerning his heartbeats


After few mins..

"Karthik..Athai vanthuraporanga..door open a iruku.."said Raji

"Appo door a close panna unaku problem illaila??"questioned Karthik with his boyish grin,His eyes still closed..

"Yei...pesaratha paaru.."Raji banged his chest..

"Nee evalavu adichalum naan thaanguvenma..Pondati kaiyala adi vaangurathukulam koduthu vechurukum.."said Karthik in a cool voice

"Athu eppadida..entha side ball potalum,sixer adikara??"Asked Raji

"Athan Un Karthik.."said Karthik proudly

"Rombathan..seri seri konjam seekarama ennai viden..kitchenla velai iruku.."Raji beseeched him

"Hmm..vidren..aana un Azhagana mugatha paartha appuram than viduven.."said Karthik

"Daily paarthukittu thana iruka..appuram enna?"asked Raji

"Daily kann mulikarapa paarkathunala than Ennoda ovavaru naalum super a iruku entha problems vanthalum.."said Karthik

"Aiyoo rombathan..seri..seri..seekarama paaru Karthik..Athai koopida poranga ivalavu nerama enna panrenu.."said Raji in a somber voice

"Koopita udane poiduvaya?Purushana maranthuduva..appadithana??"enquired Karthik

"Aiyoo Kadavule..sorry pa..very sorry..Unnai ennala maraka mudiyuma?..Nee kanna thoraka varaikum naan wait panren..but konjam fast a thorantha nalla irukum.."said Raji in a warm voice

"That's My SweetHeart..iru ippave kannai thirakaran.."Having said,Karthik slowly opened His eyes n looked at Raji's charming face..

"WOW!!!..Enna azhaga irukadi..chanceillai..devathaiya naan nerla paarthathu illainu romba naal varuthapatruken..aana un uruvathula,un azhagula naan devathaiya daily paarkara athirstatha naan adanchuruken..Love u My Pondati.."said Karthik,his voice became a husky,erotic whisper

Raji's face flushed with joy on hearing that confession..

"Enna Madam vetkapadreengalo??"He asked naughtily..

"athalam onnum illaiye.."

"Naanga nambitom."

"Nee nambarathalam irukatum..mothalla enna vidu..naan elunthurukanum..seekaram.."

"Hmm..konja neram Pondatiya konja mudiyala..athuku ethiri vera yaarum illai..Pondatiye than..ellam en neram.."said Karthik with a worried face..

Raji smiled a bit n said:"Pothum pulambinathu..ippo ennai vida poraya illaiya? ...time aachu..velai iruku.."

"Vidren..vittuthana aanum..illati nee ennai undu illainu pannira maata?.."asked Karthik

Karthik loosened his grip and Raji got up soonly ,adjusting her saree..

"Fraud..vara vara romba overa than pora..irukatum..irukatum..unnai appurama gavanichukaren.."said Raji raising a warning finger

"Appurama ethuku??ippaye konjam gavanikalame.."said Karthik with his dancing eyes

"Oh..appadiya?...gavanichuta pochu...enna pannanum?..sollu?"asked Raji,by sitting near him

Karthik got up n sat correctly..

"Onnu kuden"

"Enna??"

"Illa..onnu kudennu keten.."

"Onnu mattum pothuma??"asked Raji innocently,with her questioning eyes.

"Yei..illai illai..neraya kodukalam..enaku athula double ok.."karthik uttered with a utmost joy..

"Seri mothalla enga irunthu aarambikanum??"

"Inga irunthu.."Karthik showed his lips to Raji with his forefinger n winked at her

"Ok..appa nee kanna mudanum..appothan naan kodupen.."

"Really??..seri..Un ishtam than En ishtam.."Having said,Karthik quickly closed his eyes..

Raji moved near him n cuffed his lips with her palm lightly..Karthik opened his eyes hastily with a bewildered state..There seated Raji with a crafty smile on her lips

"Raji..enna ippadi emathara ennai?"

"Emathalaye..nee ketatha koduthen.."

"Naan kiss thana keten?"

"Appadiya??..but nee atha mention pannalaiye.."said Raji in amusement

"Mention panna than unaku theiryumakum??"

"Aama..nee onnu kodunu keta udana,adi than ketkarayonu ninachen..aana lesa than adichen..nalla adichurukumnla??asked Raji in a chukle tone..

"Raji!!!.."He shrieked

"Pinna??..innum brush pannave illai..athukulla kiss ketkuthamla kissu...mothalla poi brush pannitu,coffeeya kudi..mathathalam appuram paarthukalam..Kalankathalalaye imsai pannikittu"Raji ordered him

"Aana Raji..nee kodupenu aasaiya irunthen..pls onne onnu koduthutu poyen.."Karthik asked her humbly..

"I wont.."

"Mudiyathu???"

"Ya..I wont do it for sure.."

"Romba santhosam.."

"Enakum than"

"Aana Raji..brush pannitu vantha udana..kodupaya???haan??"asked Karthik by making a pout

Raji got up swiftly n with a wild gesture,exploded"iru oru naal illa oru naal un mandaiya udaikarena illaiya paaru.."

"Aiyoo..En pondatiku kovam vanthuruche...kovam vantha ulagam thaangathe...athanala naan essuuu ippo..."Having said Karthik scampered into the bathroom like a child..

Raji looked at the direction ,where He was running n smiled to herself.

"Vara vara imsai jaasthi aairuchu..kiss venumamla.."Thinking so,She neatly arranged the pillows n bed..


Within 15 mins,Karthik came from the bathroom ,dressed in a Blue colored T-shirt with a towel,covering his lower body ..

"Hi Honey..inga than irukaya?"Saying so,He came near Raji,who was busy arranging the clothes in wardrobe.

Raji turned towards him

"Inga than iruken..Nee mothalla poi coffeya kudi.."

"Athalam mudiyathu..Nee oru vaai sip pannitu kodu..naan kudikaren..."

"Athukuthana inga iruken ivalvu neram"said Raji,turning towards the wardrobe

"Oh..So sweet of u,My Honey.."Saying so,Karthik hugged her from behind..

"Aiyoo..enna karthik ithu??..iniku unaku enna aachu??..nallathana iruntha..mollai kulambi poirucha theedernu??"asked Raji ,puzzled

"Irukalam.."after uttering a word,He began to sing a song..

"Unnai paartha pinbu naan..

Naan naanaga illaiye.."

"Karthik..enna ippadi paatulam paadikittu..po karthik.."said Raji,looking down with a blushing face..

"Inga paaruda,En Raji vetka padra"Karthik burst into laughter

"Sirichathu pothum..nee mothala coffeya kudika vaa.."said Raji,after separating from their hug,Her face was still in reddish colour

She sipped the coffee n passed to him,signaling him to drink the remaining .

Karthik tasted that coffee n exclaimed"Adada..ivalavu suvaiya iruke..Un maayame maayam than."

"Hmm..unnai elupi,ready panrathukulla en paadu iruke..uff..."said Raji

"Romba salichukatheenga Madam..ithalam trial than.."said karthik n laughed aloud in amusement..

"Adada..vedhalam thirupi murunga maram eriruchu pola...innum inga irunthena,seri varathu..naan kilambaren..Nee poi exercise pannitu vaa..naan varen pa..ennala mudiyala.."Saying so Raji dashed out of the room

"Hey Raji...Raji..Nee enga ponalum,ingathanma varanum kadaiseeya..appo paarthukaren.."said Karthik with a gleaming smile

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At the dinning Hall


"Karthik varana, illaiya Raji?..time poikitte iruku.."asked K's mom looking at the wall clock

"itho ippa vanthuruvaaru ,Athai.."said Raji in a cheerful voice

After a sec, Karthik walked down the steps by wearing his tie around his neck. When His foot touched the floor,He rushed towards the table n took the apple from the basket..

"Dei..ithalam vayathuku pothumada?..oru naalu idliyathu saapitu poda.."said K's mom kindly

"Enaku athalam pidikathunu theriyumla..I love only fruits..athuvum breakfastku ithu than enaku venum.."uttered Karthik solidly

Raji interrupted..

"Enna ithu..Ammata ippadi pesareenga??..Amma unga nalathukagathana solranga.."

"Theriyum Raji..aana enna panrathu..ithuve enaku pazhakam aairuche.."

"Karthik..inimeyaathu konjam un habit a maathikoda..paaru unaku piriyamana rendu ladiesum varutha padranga.."saying so,K's dad chuckled a little

"Aiyoo aamala kudumbathu oli vilakugal varuthapada kudathe..naan kandipa konjam konjama en habit a mathikarenpa..dont worry.."Karthik said with a naughty glint..

After finished eating the apple ,Karthik said"Seri naan officeku kilambaren..parents.."

"Ok da..paarthu poituva..Nee Chairman postla irukanu konjam nyabagam vechuko.."Said K's mom,the pain in her voice was clearly shown

"Puriyuthu Mom..Naan En health a nalla paarthupen..naan ethuku..athan neengalam irukeengale..Neenga..Appa..appuram Raji..Raji pothumma..enna oru vazhi panniduva..avalukagave naan correct a saapidanum"karthik rolled his eyes mockingly..

"Paarthaya Saradha..namma magan pondatiku eppadi bayapadranu.."asked K's dad

"Neenga mattum eppadi irukeengalam??"replied K's mom in return with a serious face..

Other three laughed on hearing her statement..

"Athu ennavo unmaithan Saradha..naan surrender aaiten ma..ippa santhosama??"questioned K's dad

"Appa..ivalavu seekaram neenga out aaveenganu naan ethirpaarkalai.."said K

"Avar unmaiya eppayum othupaaruda.."said K's mom cooly..

KR smiled..

"Seri ma..appo naan kilambaren..meetinga iruku 10.00 clock..ellam seriya irukanu parkanum..Bye ma..Bye pa.."

"Paarthu poitu vaaada.."said K's parents in chorus..


Karthik proceeds towards the door ,followed by Raji..He stopped for a while n turned to her..

"Raji.naan kilambaren..nee konjam rest edu..paaru un mugamlam romba tired a iruku.."Saying so,he gently moves her hair strands,which was sticked to her forehead..

"Karthik..naan nallathana iruken..naan enga velai paakaen.?..etho konjam than...ellame Athai than panranga..ennai avanga paarthupaanga..Nee thevai illama kavalaipadama santhosama poitu va.."Said Raji comfortingly

"Seri da..Take care...bye..Honey."

He patted her rose cheeks n got into the car to reach His Company..

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Evening time

At 4.00 pm

In Karthikeyan and co Ltd..

Karthik was busy examining the files kept at his table..Meanwhile,His phone buzzed..He attends it..

"Hello,mom.."

"Karthik..nee..konjam seekrama veetu varayapa.?.pleaded K's mom

"Enna aachu ma??.."K asked confusingly

"Nee inga vaayen..solren..pls konjam seekarama vara paaru pa.."

K was startled for a moment n shouted"Hello...Mom.enna aachu??...Mom...irukeengala??..Hello.."

It seemed that K's mom hung up the call in the mid..K was perplexed n raised up from his chair..He ordered his manager to look after the office n rushed to the garage to took his car..

While driving,His mind was not in a normal mode and it was wavering by the terror thoughts.

"Amma ippadi sonna eppadi??..yaaruku enna aachu??..ethuku seekarama vara solranga??..enaku nenju vera adichukuthu..oruvela Rajiku ethathu??...aiyoo kadavule..irukathu..appadilam irukathu...ava nalla irupa..100 varusham"

Karthik after comforting himself with his positive thoughts concentrated in his driving as there was a heavy traffic that day

He reached the house as watchman opened the Main gate..After parking his car,He raced into the hall..There,everyone was in a worried state..K's Dad was sitting in a sofa,with his palm rubbing his forehead,K's mom stood leaning against tha wall..But there was no trace of Raji..Karthik observed all around but his eyes couldn't see Raji there..So ,He came to a firm decision,that something happened to Raji.He ran towards his Mom n enquired her..

"Mom..What happened??..anything serious??..nothing happened to Raji na??"

But K's mom remained silent..

"Amma..sollungama..pls.."K pleaded her..

"Illada..rajiku..."

"Rajiku...rajiku enna aachu??"karthik compelled her to continue..

"Illa...Unaku..."

"Amma...en porumaiya romba sothikareenga..pls tell me soon.."karthik need to know the ans in a second otherwise it seemed that his head would burst into pieces

"Nee..."

"Naan..enaku enna??..Amma konjam puriyumbadiyathan sollen.."He shook his mother by roaring aloud..

K's mom lift her head n saw karthik's face..It appeared as ashen-faced with sweat beads all over it..K's Mom smiled inwardly n told..

"Karthik..Nee...nee Appa aaga pora.."

"MOMMM!!!"exclaimed K

"Aamada Kanna..."

"Mom..neenga ..unmaiyathan solreengala??.Illai..."He asked suspiciously

"Karthi..karthi...unmai..unmai..Raji pregnant a irukada.."K's mom said with a shining eyes..

"Aamada Karthi..Naan Thatha aaga poren..enaku romba santhosama irukuda.."K's Dad interrupted

"Really??..Mom super news solliruka.athanala unaku ennoda instant gift."Karthik kissed his mom cheeks happily while saying so..

Then He jumped to his father n kissed his cheek too..

"Appa...ungalukum than..Happy??

"Aamada romba happy.."

"Oh..God...ithalam unmaiya??.Naan Naan...Appa..Appaaa aaga porena??..Enaku oru baby vara potha??..appuram Raji...seri raji engama??..aalaye kanom.."Karthik asked excitedly

"konjam thirumbi paaru.."said K's mom

K turned back n looked at Raji in awe,who was standing near the door,hiding her blushing face..Karthik put long strides n came hear her,his face lit up with impish glee..Raji,now hid her whole body behind the door..Karthik snactched her hand n made her to come outside..

"Raji..My Honey.."Saying so,He lifts her n twirls around ,thereby reaching the hall..

"Raji..enaku romba santhosama iruku..vaanathula parakara maathiri iruku..en santhosathuku ellaiye illai..I love u,di..I love u di..My sweet Pondati.."Karthik once again spinned around n raji caught hold of his shoulders for balance..

K's parents happiness knew no bounds on seeing these beautiful events

"Karthik..enna keezha eraki vidu.."chided Raji as if pretending before him

"Karthik..enna ithu chinna pullaithanam maathiri..avala keezha irukuda.."said K's mom

"maaten"Said K in a firm tone.

"Athai,Maama irukanga karthik..solratha kelu.."Raji whispered to him

"Avanga iruntha enna...naan en pondatiya thookitu iruken...vena Appavum Ammava thooki tu suthatum.."replied naughty Karthik in return

"Athana...naanum en pondatiya thooki sutharen..ivan mattum than pannuvanakum"K's Dad interrupted n got up from the sofa..

"Hello..enna ithu??..pasanga munnadi ippadi..chee..summa utkaarnga.."K's mom rebuked her hubby n blushed by closing her mouth with hand.

"Ada..Karthik..paarthyada..un Ammava ippa naan thooka kudatham..indirecta solra.."

"Indirect a?..eppadi pa??"

"Athanda..chinna vaysula azhaga slim a iruntha..ippa konjam weight potala..athan en kai romba vazhikumnu paarkara..illaiya Saradha??"Asked K's Dad in a mock timbre

"Ungala.."K's mom ran towards him n beat him with the pillow kept aside the sofa

"Aiyoo..purushana pottu adikarale..karthik..kaaputhuda.."Shouted K's dad..

"Appa..ithalam naanum experience pannirukenpa..athanala Enjoy the minute..naanga enga roomku porom..Inime..neengalachu..Ammavaachu..engala konjam freeya iruka vidunga..Bye.."

"Dei..karthik..pogathada".requested K's dad

"Avan pogatum..naan than irukene.."said K's mom ,repeatedly beating him with pillow..

Karthik slowly lowers Raji,held her hand,went upstairs without giving any ears to K's parents talk as he was wandering in his new world..

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After entering into the room,He locked the door n made Raji to sit on the bed.He too seated near her..Raji,who was looking more beautiful n radiant,didn't even looked up,fixing her eyes on the floor.

Karthik holds her beautiful face n kissed on her forehead..

Then He kissed her eyes one by one..

Then,He kissed her cheeks..

Then he plants kiss on her chin..

When He was about to kiss her lips,Raji stopped him by placing her forefinger on his lips n shook her head indicating NO...

"Raji.."Karthik called her name,which sounded lovely..

"mm.."

"Enna nee iniku thikkumukku aada vechuta.."

"mm.."

"Enna nee..vaaiya thoranthu pesa maatengra?...evalavu periya happy news ithu??..

Raji maintained silence

"enna paaru Raji.."

"mm...maaten.."

"Why?"

"Enaku vetkama iruku.."

"Yei..Raji.."

Suddenly Raji hugged karthik n Happy tears were rolling down her cheeks..Karthik gently caressed her back with his rough palms..

"Karthik..enaku enna solrathune theiryala..ithalam kanavanu koda iruku..namaku oru kuzhanthai..ketkave romba santhosama iruku.."said Raji excitingly

"Unmaithan Raji..Naan Appa aaga poren.nee Amma aaga pora..namaku oru kutty..solla solla sugarcane maathiri romba thithippa iruku.."

"Aama..intha tharunam enakulla aairam pookkala thoovara maathiri iruku.."

"Unmaithan..Naane ippa vaanthulala parakaren.."karthik replied back delightfully..

Karthik asked:"seri eppa ithalam nadanthuchu??"

"1 hr munnadi than...doctor a veetuku vara solli..confirm pannitanga Athai.."said Raji ,lowering her tone

"Aana Amma enna oru nimisham athira vechutanga..athula Appa,Neeyalam kutaniyo??"asked Karthik

"Summa oru surprisekaga than.."

"Hmm..athuku ippadiya..naan pathari poila oodi vanthen.."said K in a worried state..

"Sorry..."

"Cha..cha..sorrylam ethuku Raji??..neenga ellorum sonna newsala atha naan antha nimishame maranthuten.."

After broking from the hug,Karthik rests his head on Raji's lap n placed her hand in his chest..

"En heartbeat a unaraya Raji?..santhosathula vegama thudikuthu..."

"Aama..feel panren.."

"Enaku ippave unnai thookitu oodanum pola iruku Raji..aana Amma thooki suthinathuke thitranga.."complained Karthik in a childish way..

"Karthik..karthik...unna naan ennanu solrathu..choo sweet."Raji said with a smile..

"Sweet a ??..appo naan kalaila ketatha intha sweet Husbandku kodukalame..?"asked Karthik,his eyes dancing in merriment..

Raji slowly bent n gave a peck on his cheek..

"Oyi..ithu aavarathu illai..ithalam bongu.."

"Ithu koduthathe perusu..u know.."

"Hmm..correctthan..seri naan ippo vidren...but nee vatiyum mothaluma thirupi kodukanum..Mind it.."

"Atha appo paarthukalam,Mr,Handsome.."chuckled raji

Karthik hurridly got up from her lap n sat very close to her..

Now,He asked in curiousity

"Raji..enaku girl than pidichuruku..unnai maathiri oru kutty Angel vantha nalla irukumla??"

"Enaku boy than pidichurukupa..unnai maathiri oru Handsome hunk vantha supera irukum"she replied in return.

"Girl than.."

"Illai boy than.."

"Girl nu solrenla.."

"Karthik..baby boy a iruntha enna,girl a iruntha enna?..rendume nammaloda babies than..athanala enaku ethunalum ok than.."concluded Raji..

"adi paavi..konja neram itha vechu pesalamnu ninachen..nee ippadi kowthiteye...aana nee solrathum correctthan..kadavul namaku enna baby koduthalum aanathama ethupom .."

Raji smiled..

"Aama..ithu namma first baby la..athanala no fights.."

"Hmm..aana naan first baby title a innorutharku koduthutene.."said Karthik ,taking a long breath..

"Yaaru athu??karthik??..

Raji cast a suspicious glance at him

"Vera yaaru..Nee than athu.."said Karthik rolling his eyes

"Karthik!!!"exclaimed Raji in wonder..

"Aama Raji..namaku ethane baby poranthalum,enaku first baby nee than..Nee mattum than.."said Karthik cupping her face in his palms..

Raji's eyes become pooled..

"Enaku inimethana neraya porupu iruku..En first baby a paarthukanum.enna paarkara??..unnathan solren..Un activities athanayum inime naan watch pannuven..ellathayum paarthu gavanama pannanum nee.seriya??"

"seri.."Raji assured him

"En rendu babiesyayum naan en rendu kannukulla vechu paathukaapen Raji..athan en velaiye inime.."said karthik by placing a hand on her shoulder with loving tenderness

Suddenly,He pulled her into his arms n locked her in his embrace tightly..Raji buried her face on his chest like a cute kid n felt protective as his chest is the very comfortable zone for her next to her mother's lap

THE END

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Naan thaan first 😆
Yenna bro eppadi oru surprise


Simply super... i liked the entire concept something that i would have liked to happen in the serial happened here

the dialogues were apt.. my favourite is the same as lily sis's :) liked that one and thought it was apt too..

Karthi aww bad boy here but was nice to see his character in a different light

Good bonding between mother in law father in law and daughter in law...

KR care for each other a lot and was cute to see Karthi coming back home as soon as he received the call...

Very surprising bro thanks for this but same time do update your other stories... everyone is waiting your taking too long now...
Edited by Gayathri30 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Super surprise bro...

Nice OS... Indha mathir ellama serial la kattunga?😭

Ippdi unga OS padichi dhan manasa thethikka vendiyadha irukku...

Karthik always naughty 😆 KR scene cuteee 😳😳

Raji ya romba varunikkaran... Dialogue nalla eduthu viduran... 😆

"Unnai paartha pinbu naan..

Naan naanaga illaiye.."
Ennaku romba pudicha song...

Morning sapadamma iruntha enna agaradhu karthik? Enna mathiri irukka vendama...😆

KR ku baby... Happy... Raji blushing cuteee 😳😳 K's parents romba fun ah irukkanga... Andha aalvu neenga fun ezhudhi irukkinga...

Karthik ⭐️ Raji dhan first baby avanuku... Superrr ... Raji so lucky... Karthik also lucky to have her...

Totally thanks for giving this super duper OS bro...👏👏


Edited by Abinaabi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yena Natu , ipidi oru surprise . Friendship day special a 😆

Yengada nanga thithuduyummonu romba alert a than iruka . Good ..😆

Ok now coming to the story .. super story pa .. actually ipidi than nama KR storyline poirukunum but yena pana yelam director oda vithi ..

Karthik sariya naughty pola 😉.. all the KR scenes are so sweet.

Parda Karthik Raji kudicha coffeeya than kudipara ..

Such a happy family ..

Hey na kuda bayanduthen pa Rajiku yenomo achunu . Nala news than KRku kutty papa .. 🥳

I like this lines a lot . Apt for Karthik character ...

"Aama Raji..namaku ethane baby poranthalum,enaku first baby nee than..Nee mattum than.."said Karthik cupping her face in his palms..

And special mention on your different style of writing.. mostly English use pani irukinga pola .. nice try 👍🏼

Thanks Nandhu . Its a nice story pa .


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Super and romantic ur story... I love ur story so much...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Shiny, what a sweet surprise for us! And yes I was wondering about your 2 FFs also haha, you have left us waiting with them, hope you update those soon!

This OS was a nice sweet surprise from you. I liked the entire story, it was simple and nice to read. The Office director and writer need to read your story and they should feel bad for giving us a poor story in season 2. The way you captured the emotions and love between KR and then how K reacted when he found out R was pregnant - everything was shown well, I wish he had the chance to see it in the actual show.

I know you mentioned that this was an OS, but if you do a part two to this where we see more of R's pregnancy and how K handles everything would be nice. When he mentions that R is his first baby and now he needs to take care of her well, that was sooo sweet, I'm sure all the readers would like to see how he takes care of Raji in part two *wink wink*.

Thanks for the OS.
Edited by Smiles-20 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow sema surprise nandhu another story from u 👏👏👏
Wonderful story and totally a different line dat too started of directly as husband and wife itself superb great job 👏👏
Dint expect u wil write another story athuvum inthe madiri different line la kondu pore 😛
Ufff evolo periya story 😲 😆
K R convo superb 👍🏼 👏 😳
Dining Hall scene 👏 😃 ( inthe apple scene engeyo enaku keta madiri iruku) 😲 😆
Sema shock aiytan pole K padari odivanthutan veetuku R ku etho aiduchunu but he doesn't knw a surprise is waiting for him😆😆.. Wow! so R is pregnant now and a baby is gng to cum into der life soon dats choo chweet 😳
I really like dis story sooo much 😛 but last la nee pottathu dhan I dnt like u knw (The End) 😒
Nandhu ippo inthe OS a y dnt u change it to SS
Edited by Archana03 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Bro... What a surprise... 😃

First eh mindvoice ah catch panniteenga pola irukku ?? As much as I am happy to read this OS, seekiram matha stories aaiyum update pannunga... 😆

Now coming to the OS...

A really SWEET story... I had a small smile until the very end...

It is good to see Karthik for once as a happy-go person... 😃 I liked his jolly attitude... And Raji as usual is calm and shy...

Beginning to end, all were cute scenes between KR... First eh Karthik oda trick semma... 😛

Sir breakfast kku fruits dhaan saapiduvaara? Sari dhaan... 😆

Apparom how he got tensed when he got the phone call... And came for a surprise at home... Super bro... 😃

Karthik parents were really jolly, just like Karthik... Their comedy, adhuvum nalla irundhuchu...

Apparom last ah KR convo... It was definitely really sweet... Karthik vandhu Raji ah first baby nnu solradhu was so cute... 😛

It was a great OS bro... I enjoyed it a lot... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello nandhu,
long time no see...😆

after a long time i am reading ur story..

it was really refreshing ...

u know..what i liked more about ur writing ? it is that u r passing down ur bubbling charm to the readers through ur writing..i was having that grin on my face throughout till the end..which i would do only for the things that make me feel light at heart..as i told it was a light hearten OS..i felt like watching one fine episode of the entire story...

if i have to describe this OS in one word i would say "cute"
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shiny, nice OS...Love to read it...

Adhepdi sandaiyilladha KR ah ivvolo azhagga engalukku pidikiraa maadhiri story thareengha...

KR fight nalladhan irukkum but fight illadhadha ungha KR appadiye alllraangha- manasa thaan...

Thanks for the PM
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